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Chandy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: AlbusDumbeldore
interesting character sketch.
Randhir a gangster😕.Baddie Randhir😊
Please update soonish

Thank yu so much :)

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Chandy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Angel__Tamanna

Ur always welcome
update kab degi??
Meri tarah lazy mat banna updates dene mein 😆

main tumse/apse adhik lazy hoon 🤣

Edited by .chandu.parsh. - 10 years ago

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Kritika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

awesome... conti soon.. and do pm me whenever you update...

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Chandy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: --Kritika--
awesome... conti soon.. and do pm me whenever you update...

Thank yu so much :)

Sure.. I'll pm u :)

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Chandy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: paramfan
Next chapter update karo.plz

i have spl classes for next two days.. Will update then 😳

Sorry for the inconvenience

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Chandy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: asmitashusan
nice

thank u so much 😳

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Chandy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Hello all.. Thanks for your wonderful response.. I'm here with the first part of my story...
~*Buried In Darkness*~

PART 1
{A/N: plz note the place and the date of the story }

December 24th, 2009 Juhu, Mumbai, Maharashtra, 5.30 am

The roads were deserted and the streets were dark... No sound was heard except the cries of the hounds and the sound of the owls making the streets haunted ! The weather was vigorous with drizzles and thunder Its seemed as though something unpleasant was going to take place.. A sudden bullet sound shook the streets, gave a stop to the sounds of the cries! And slowly the morning light crept in..

He wrapped himself with the navy blue hoodie and dugged his pocket to place his gun after killing one of the richest brats of India! He shot a bullet up in the air , frightening the morning errand of the birds and people and voiced out "Don't dare to mess with Randhir Singh Shekhawat "... He gave a million dollar smirk and left the place with his soul mate "Parth Kashyap " in his glamorous black Audi...

Jaipur, Rajasthan, 6.00 am

The downpour of the rain had stopped after wetting the roads of the city... The roads were crowded and busy with continuous honking of the trucks and people were jostling roughly... Buyers selling their items and the kids playing in the streets... It was a busy day in jaipur... A calm ancestral house was situated at jaipur with a family living in peace

"Oye.. Yoyo! Kya kar rahe ho tum...bukkhad " Anju pulled the ears of Yoyo who was stealing the pakodas made by Anju for her daughter...

Hearing to the fake angry tone of her mother, a beautiful girl of her early twenties stepped out of her room and tip - toed to the kitchen...
She was wearing a chrome yellow coloured anarkali with her hair pulled for a fish braid.. A stoned bindi on the middle of her forhead... She was a typical Indian beauty who was having the capacity to flaunt the guys! But she never cared or boasted about her beauty... She was fun loving and caring... Her face clearly depicts her innocence...

"Happy birthday Sanyuktha Aggarwal "yoyo hugged her...

She had a chocolate box in her hand and pulled yoyo out on their house.. She and her group of friends consisting of Yoyo, kaustuki, jiggy and Vidushi ran out in the streets actually for a get together!

Juhu 9am

He was happily driving his Audi with Parth on his left to the juhu beach to have some peace of mind from his heavy stress.. He chose to take a break...!

"Umm... Parth " Randhir started a conversation
"Yes.. "
"Hamare list mein kaun baki hai "he asked having a sip of his drink
"Mr.mittal and... And... "Parth's voice broke
"Mr.Mittal is like a speck of dust to me" Randhir laughed. "And who is the next...? "

Parth stared at him...His handsome face bore a laughter which was quite unnatural for him..his life was filled with worries and made him a crude man.. He doesn't want his Randhir to lose his laughter, his life but he had no other option except to read the name in the list

"Its... Its... K..ki " parth stammered
"Arey parth...! Tera Randhir___is not afraid of anyone except you... Got it? " he smirked

He was a pure human being only with his parth.. Parth was like his elder brother and he is the only one who has the right to scold him or question the great Randhir Singh Shekhawat... And fortunately or unfortunately, only parth knew him in and out, his true self but no one... He is a deadly human to the eyes of people... His anger, the only thing parth hate in him, that makes him an animal!

"Parth.. Kahan kho gaye ho? " Randhir shook him "i asked u who is the next "

"Its.. K...ki...kish...KISHORE AGGARWAL "Parth stammered and was afraid of the animal inside him...
He applied sudden brakes and threw his drink... His eyes became red, burning with rage, with fire, with anger... Anger was at its peak but a devilish smile adorned his face

"The time has come.. Yeah! The time for me to play a game... THE GAME STARTS " He smirked and drove to the beach...

To be continued

Precap: Sandhir clash ;)

Thanks for reading.. Pls click the like button and drop a comment with ur appreciation, criticism and predictions
Love Chandu

Edited by .chandu.parsh. - 10 years ago

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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Resd
Seems lyk m d 1st 🤣

Unress
haillla reee
dekho sabhi woz the first 😆
hehe
Ab mere first ane ki khushi mein sab cmnt padhne wale sada adda party ko vote karna 25th ko .. Jo bhi ye cmnt padhega,wo like press karke apni vote pakki karwado mere ko 😆

Coming on update

Its was awsm chandu
Randhir & Parth soulmates 🤣
pata nahi kyun par hasi arhi h mujhe may b aj k epi ki vajah se
Intresting ,very intresting
kaffi mystrious story hai

waise sangat ka asar ho hi jata hai*raising my night suit's tshirt's coller*
hehehe

awsssmmm update
Update asap
Thank u nhi bolungi pm k liye
kyunki agar tu pm nahi karti toh teri band bajti 😆
Just joking
mind mat karna ,kahin nxt tym mujhe pta chle k mujhe pm kiya hi nhi aur nxt se bhi nxt part post kardia[=)))
Now enough of my bak bak
going to sleep

p.s.- its the longest cmnt ever written by me
hassshhh .. Thak gyi😆

Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago

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Heavenly_Dreams

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

resss ...makkhan...:*..unress ...makkhan
.
hamara makkhan ka ff ...wah re makkhan...
awesome storyline ...wah re makkhan...
beautifully penned ..wah re makkhan...
hamaara pyaara makkhan ...
bus abb jldi se update de dena re makkhan...
...
loads of love ...
doodh
:*

Edited by holysoul - 10 years ago