SEHAN/SAHIL OS-MOHABBAT-ZINDAGI KI BADI SACCHAI OR TAKAAT

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hi guys,i m sumi.its my 1st os.so pl ignore mistakes & gv me feedback.gd/bad al type of cmnts r accepted.
in my stry sulaiman said all truth to ahil.sahil,rehan saw tanvir shot rehan.its after seher's breakdown-
both sisters r crying in each other's arms.sudenly ahil cal sanam & say cm 2 hospital as rehan is alive.he is taken to O.T.sanam-seher ahil ka phn tha,rehan k saanse chal raha ha,wo hospital me ha,operation chal raha ha.main jaa rahi hu.tu chalegi?seher-nehi,pehele main bappa k mandir jaaungi.
sanam reach hospital.all r praying..sanam-allahmia!aj tak meri behen ko mohobbat nehi mili,bachpan me apne pariwar se alag ho gayi,aisi zindagi jine pe majbur ho gayi jo uske tha hi nehi,zindafi me pehli bar usne kisise pyar kia jisne use uski sari kamio k sath apnaya.seher itna strong nehi ha jitna wo dikhati ha,agar rehan ko kuch hua to wo tut jaygi.pl meri behen ki khusi uski mohabbat use lota dijia..ahil-bachpan se leke aj tak rehan ne mujhe samjha ha,har mor pe mera sath dia mera dost mera vai banke,mere vai ko mujhe lota dijia allah,mera jaan bachane k liya usne apna jaan dao pe lagaya,agar use kuch hua to i cnt forgive myslf,pl sv him.seher(bappa's mandir-maine to unhe apke pas islia veja taki unka journey safe ho,wo jo chahte ha unhe mile,to ye sab kaise hua,apne kuch kia q nehi,bachpan me mere pariwar ko mujhse dur kia,ab rehan ko mujhse dur q kar rahe ha?agar sacche man se maine apko mana ha to ap une bacha lijiye.wo meri takat ha,meri hasi,khusi,meri zindagi ha.agar unhe kuch hua to main nehi reh paungi.ekbat apko batati hu agar rehan ko kuchvi hua to main dobara zindagi me kavi apke samne sar nehi jhukaungi ye wada ha sunehri ka..
artr 5hr.Dr say operation was succesful,aftr smtime he gain conscious.u cn meet him bt dnt talk 2 much,he is very weak.
at hospital rehan's room-ahil-kaisa lag raha ha thik ho?kya zarurat thi hero banne ki?
rehan jst smile.his one hand bandaged,tie up with shoulder,some wires r connected to his body.sanam also thr.suddenly seher cm thr,she is sweating,breathing heavily.she jst hug rehan &crying continiously.rehan hug her bk with one hand,calm her down.rehan-sunehri main thik hu,rona bandh kao warna tumari tabbiyat kharab ho jayegi,shant ho jao pl,jab tak tumara pyar mere sath ha mujhe kuch nehi ho sakta..ab chup ho jao.after continious crying seher started crying seher started coughing..sanam gv her water ay-shant ho jao seher,rehan pehle se behtar ha.thn sasehan saw ahil's xprsn.sanam-ahil ye meri behen ha-seher ahmad khan.rehan or ye ek dusre se pyar karte ha.waise to apko ye baat aise nehi pata chalna tha par..& thy narrrated whole stry of sehan lv,breakup,razia's deal,swap,dilshad's cnfesn,tanvir's real identity,nawab-khan family's muder truth all..seher-sanam kavi apko chorke nehi gayi.wo apse bohot pyar karti ha,galati meri ha,meri wajah seap dono me darar aya.kehte ha hum jisse pyar karte ha uski sari galatiyon ko maf karte ha,rehan ne vi wohi kia mujhe apnake,sanam ne vi 20sal pehele bichri hui behen ko gale laga lia.par main janti hu main apka vi gunahgar hu.ap chahe to mujhe saza dijia.meri behen ko nehi..rehan-ab bohot hua,ab begam sahiba ki sachai sabke samne zarur ayegi.sanam-par kaise,sulaiman chacha kovi kisine mar dia.seher-sanam yad ha tune kaha tha kohinur party me bato bato me tanvir ne khud uski sachai kahi thi ki,rehan k pas party ka cctv photage to hoga & hamare ddaji ko marne k lia tanvir k against jail records vi hoga.or ammi abbu ki mauth ki sachai me khud uske mu se bulwaungi...ahil brokedown-sat on floor&crying.ahil-why ammi??kyun??bas ekbar kehke to dekhti apko kya chiya dunia ki sari daulat apko lake deta,ap kehti apna jaan vi de deta,fir ye dhoka q?sabjuch jante hua apne mujhe mere atit tale dabaye rakha..mere mohabbat mere sanam ko mujhse dur kia..wo girgirati rahi par maine uski ek nehi suni..use insult kia,.uske varose ko toda..sanam(cupping his face)-sshh..samvalia ahil,,galati apke nehi ha,ap bohot ache ha,ap to bas ek ache bete ka farz niva rahe the.apne mujhpe gussa kia iska dukh nehi ha,mujhe taklif islia hui ki apne mere pyar pe ungli uthai,hamare pyar pe varosa nehi kia..ahil-main janti hu sanam main tumare mafi k layek nehi hu,main to apne apko maf nehi kar sakta,par ek akhribar mujhe moka do,mere dil,zindagi,har saans pe tumara naam ha,main apne pyar se se tumhe dia hue har ghao ko mitana chahta hu.apne apko tumare kabil banana chahta hu,.sanam-par kya sab thik ho sakta ha,ab apke zindagi me koi aur vi ha..suddenly seher spoke-1min ahil,aplog usdin dargah k badle hotel kaise pohoche,aur waha hua kya?ahil-gari kharab hone par hume waha rukna para,aprox11am hum waha pohoche,rum me mujhe office se phn aya bt ammi se mere shirt pe juice gi gaya,main chng karke rum me araha tha fir kya hua mujhe yad nehi.hosh aya to nayi sanam waha thi.seher-sanam ne apko 11:20am phn kia to tanvir ne use hotel bulaya taki wo apko neyi sanam k sath dekh sake matlab..rehan-matlab unhone woho kia jo dodin pehele tumare or ahil vai k sath kia.thn rehan said ahil hw sase xchng thr place,spoil tanvir's plan.ahil was shcked.sanam-matlab ahil ne koi bewafai nehi ki & sahil hug each othr.seeing thm sehan also hug each othr.rehan-finaly sare MU khatam.seher-so am i forgiven??ahil-yes,galati sabse hota ha,mujhse vi hua.par sanam kehti ha hume hamari galati ko maanke usse kuch sikhna chahiye or age barna chahiya..all four of thm spent smtime togethr.
at IM-tanvir dnt knw rehan is alive.she was crying.thn seher cm thr&drag tanvir forcefuly to hall.sanam2 was seeing all ths& smirking.seher-maar dala na tune mere rehan ko.pehele mere ammi abbu ko alag karna chaha,mere pure khandan ko mara,mere behen ko ahil se dur kia ab rehan ko mujhse.kaisi aurat ha tu ahil ko bachpan se dhoka dia,apne bete rehan kovi mar dala?tanvir-rehan tere wajah se mara ha,tune use mandir veja tha na &pushed her,sanam cought seher.tanvir-mene kia sabkuch.nawab ko-tere khandan ko maine mara par tum dono bach gaye or mere raste me agaye.par ab tum dono vi maroge.isi gharme jaha tumara pariwar mara..tanvir point gun at seher&sanam2 at sanam.sanam-sanam pagal ho gayi ho kar kya rahe ho?sanam2-ha,ahil ji sirf hamare hain.kisiko bichme ane nehi denge.pehle sulaiman ko mara.ab tumari bari.sase shckd.sanam2,tanvir point gun at sase stnding oposite each othr,sase stuck between thm.in tht time rehan,ahil cm thr with police.tanvir-rehan,mera beta??rehan-ji nehi main sunehri k fiance hu,sanam ka best frnd or ahil vai ka chota vai.ahil-ekbar kehke to dekhti,sanam ko mujhse dur karne ki kya zarurat thi?police cm 2wards thm..seeing tht sanam2-ruk jao warna ye janse jaygi.& thn sanam2.tanvir fire at same time.bt b4 the bullets hit sase,ahil pushed sanam,rehan pushed seher & roll down on floor.so the bullets hit tanvir or sanam2.both were killd by each othr.police took thr body,sahil-sehan sat thr huging each othr.
after 2days asya's graveyard-14th feb-
sase sat in4nt asya's grave,place flowers.seher-happy valentines day ammi abbu,sanam-sathme shadi ka salgirah mubarakho.ahil,rehan also cm thr,sat beside thm.ahil hold sanam's hand & rehan hold seher's.sase r surprised.rehan-aj humvi apse mine aye ha.ahil-or ye kehne aye ha ki jo hua so hua ab hum ek dusre ka sath kavi nehi chorenge,hamesa inka dhyan rakhenge.rehan-bas ap hamesa apna dua humlogo pe banaye rakhna.thn four of thm togethr say-MOHABBAT HA HAMARE ZINDAGI KI SABSE BADI TAKAT AUR SACHAI.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I don't know why cvs r not visiting this forum? We can write better & logical stories than them. Coming to update it was fabulous. I wish in show too they showed something like this. They showed him getting bullet shot in the area which is far away from his heart. I can't believe just like that rehan died. Poor guy didn't get chance to get admitted in hospital too. As seher asked she sent him to her bappa only to give him blessings & safety. She had only trusted & loved bappa for 20yrs of her life. Then y did bappa do this? So how cvs proved that there is no power for love & god.
Edited by Az07 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks😊
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Originally posted by: Az07

I don't know why cvs r not visiting this forum? We can write better & logical stories than them. Coming to update it was fabulous. I wish in show too they showed something like this. They showed him getting bullet shot in the area which is far away from his heart. I can't believe just like that rehan died. Poor guy didn't get chance to get admitted in hospital too. As seher asked she sent him to her bappa only to give him blessings & safety. She had only trusted & loved bappa for 20yrs of her life. Then y did bappa do this? So how cvs proved that there is no power for love & god.

thnks😊.btw i miss ur updts.i m a silent reader& read all of ur ss.whn will u writing those sehan ss?& i read smwhe is tht true shahzad z holi party me araha ha?sirf holi or bk qh?rehan k hamshakal banke vi aya thn i hv no prob.i jst wnt survir/sahil,suzad/sehan bk..😳
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Originally posted by: SONU2408

thnks😊.btw i miss ur updts.i m a silent reader& read all of ur ss.whn will u writing those sehan ss?& i read smwhe is tht true shahzad z holi party me araha ha?sirf holi or bk qh?rehan k hamshakal banke vi aya thn i hv no prob.i jst wnt survir/sahil,suzad/sehan bk..😳


I guess it will be for zee tvs holi event.
I will update soon dear
Can't write ATM as I am too upset with this show
First asya now sehan. They gave me heart breaks twice
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07


I guess it will be for zee tvs holi event.
I will update soon dear
Can't write ATM as I am too upset with this show
First asya now sehan. They gave me heart breaks twice

i jst chck.zoya6 updt tht article tht says shahzad will b bk as new personality.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07


I guess it will be for zee tvs holi event.
I will update soon dear
Can't write ATM as I am too upset with this show
First asya now sehan. They gave me heart breaks twice

i jst chck.kisi post me @zoya6 updt tht article tht saya shahzad will b bk as new personality,the casts r busy with new makeover.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update dear! 👍🏼

I wish that this happened in the story. But the damn CVs...😡

Loved how you included AsYa too in the last part.

Do write more and please pm me if possible.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nyc os
cvs should implement this ideas

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