AsYa TS: The Architect and The Corporate Golden Girl [Complete]

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#161

That was such a sweet story
It took me a while to get used to zoya
But asad was too cute

And I loved that you ended it with them together with kids and all

Overall great job! Thanks .

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BurstingBubble

@BurstingBubble

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#162

This one surely is one of the best Two shots I've read on this forum!

U write sooo brilliantly👏 Gosh ! this TS was so dreamy and perfect And Asad is more than perfect😳

The notes were so beautifully written😳

Zoe is really a strong woman ! She really had to bear a lot in her life😒

... and today when he held our daughter, Zara Ahmed Khan, in his arms for the first time and looked at her with a look of awe and love. She was the second luckiest girl in the world, I being the first. He looked at me sitting on the hospital bed and smiled the widest I'd ever seen him smile. And that moment, right there was perfect. Awww

And Zara.. Practicing.. ooops.. Pwacticing Pick up lines😆 Sooo adorable😳

Enjoyed reading this TS a lottt

Lots of love...

Edited by BurstingBubble - 11 years ago

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Antara123

@Antara123

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

One year old story and I just read it. I pity myself HARD. I miss out on such delightful work... Amazing brother. Too good babe. Awesome stuff.

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Anamadya

@Anamadya

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

This is one of my fav story on asya in this forum 😊
I hav even lost count of how many times i have read it..it is that good..
u r an amazing writer👍🏼

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canoodle

@canoodle

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Oh wow Anjali! This is by far the best fanfic I've ever read, it's better than most books I read to. It was so touching, and so well written. I am truly obsessed with your writing, I cannot believe that i didn't discover this story sooner. You really need to consider writing professionally.

-Meera