SaAz TS - The Broken Angel

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi everyone! I'm completely new to this forum! I recently started watching this show and I fell in love! I've always been a Harshad fan but I don't have the Sony channel so never really came across the show.Anyways, this is my stupid attempt to write something about SaAz, I don't know if I should continue it or not or if it even has much potential as perhaps an SS ? Let me know what you all think😃
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Arzoo cradled the bundle of divinity in her arms. Big, bright eyes looked up to her as if asking who she was. Arzoo chuckled a bit and made gurggling noises at her 2 day old son.

***


He had given her a reason to live after her life ended.


After Zeenat and Kurti Apa successfully removed her from the corridors of Niyamat.


After Sahir Azeem Chaudhary refused to listen to her pleas.


After she attempted suicide by trying to drown herself.


After her Allah had not only revoked her suicide attempt but given her a new life within.


Contrary to any other woman, Arzoo felt nothing but pain at the news of her pregnancy. How would she bring up a fatherless child in this cruel world? She knew the pain of being without a father and there was no way she could even put her enemy through that. Going to her maternal home was absolutely out of question! She couldn't let her mother carry the burden of a married daughter at home. Myrah, Zara, and Dadi's responsibilities were enough to overpower her already frail mother.


So she did what the heartless world taught her do, she wiped her tears, picked herself up and found herself a job at AR Designs, Saiyara's biggest rival, of course they could not be more happier to have their rival company's employee work for them. Within 6 months of working, she raised herself to become their most renowned designer in the company. Being 8 months pregnant and sketching out every show stopper's outfit was something only Arzoo Nausheen Khan was capable of.


Losing all contact with her in-laws, and even her own family. Arzoo felt extremely alone, she owned perhaps one of the biggest houses in the neighborhood, but yet had no one to fill the emptiness in her life. She dealt with everything herself, from having to stay up late due to stomach pains or waking up earlier than normal due to pregnancy sickness to being the only woman unaccompanied by her husband at her yoga class. Allah knows, she stopped herself repeatedly from attempting to call Sahir when she received her sonography pictures. Allah knows how she concealed her pregnancy from him when she wanted nothing more than to have a family with the man she loved so dearly. But everytime she picked up that phone, all that she remembered was his betrayal. The day he learned Zeenat regained consciousness

he left her and ran to Zeenat with open arms. She was just his mistress after all, wasn't she?


In her final month of pregnancy she stayed at home most of the time, except when she was rushed to the hospital after her maid found her unconscious in the morning. That same morning she awoke to the calm hospital setting and to the cry of a beautiful baby boy.

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"Allah knows I love you more than my life. I will never let anything ever harm you. Your ammi will always be here as both your mother and father."


She kissed her son on his forehead and lay him down in his cradle where he slept serenely with nothing to worry about.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was beautiful but u made sahir villain 😭
But in all it was awesome why don't u continue it and make sahir hero like give god knows what reason for his betrayal? Pls pls I mean that's choice just pleading :p
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovesick23

That was beautiful but u made sahir villain 😭

But in all it was awesome why don't u continue it and make sahir hero like give god knows what reason for his betrayal? Pls pls I mean that's choice just pleading :p

Thank you😃
Who said Sahir was the villain? We are yet to see his side of the story😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey...I liked it...interesting concept...but u shud show some solid reason for Sahir's behaviour towards aarzoo as I dnt wnt sahir to be villian wala hero...it shud b a misunderstanding not betrayal.
so u shud continue it!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow awesome and amazing ...I love it ... your story is very interesting and it contains a lot of emotion...
also your written is beautiful ... looked forward to read more from you ...pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MannuLovesMaan

hey...I liked it...interesting concept...but u shud show some solid reason for Sahir's behaviour towards aarzoo as I dnt wnt sahir to be villian wala hero...it shud b a misunderstanding not betrayal.
so u shud continue it!!


Thank you !
I assure you Sahir is no villain wala hero.
Can't reveal much of the story even though I want to say more😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sara7iris

wow awesome and amazing ...I love it ... your story is very interesting and it contains a lot of emotion...
also your written is beautiful ... looked forward to read more from you ...pls update soon

Thank you! You're so sweet 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ikhlass

Sad for Arzoo 😭


Hopefully that will change😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey that was amazing start, please continue soon as I want to know sahir's side of story and aarzoo's reaction when she meets sahir. what is the name of their baby by the way????
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ur sig...

Cont it plz 😳

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