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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Dauntless_Diva

OMG

this came as a shocker!!!!!!
but RD will win her back😊


update soon

want to see more of them...amazing couple😊


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Posted: 10 years ago

" TOO GOOD TO SHARE " - PART 10 :


Rd went back to his business... he had become a ruthless nd shrewd businessman nd did not attach himself to any1 not evn karan... he lived a lonely life... nevertheless the search for sanyukta was still going on but in vain...

he didnt know where she was how she was nd he tried to distract himself by getting involved in his work...


After 1 yr 6 months...


Kanpur


L: sanyukta sanyukta beta...


S:aai aunty...


Yeh lijiye aapki chai chini ek chamach or dudh bilkul nahi


L:sirf tujhe pata hai beta ki mujhe kya pasand hai ...in logon ko toh meri koi chinta hi nahi hai...


S:aisa nahi hai aunty mein hun naa mujhe toh rakha hi aapki care karne ke liye hai...


L:jaa aaram karle subah se kaam karke thak gayi hogi


S:nahi nahi mein theek hun aur aapne dawayi khayi nahi na kya aap bhi mere bina aapka kya hoga


L:kyun tu mujhe chod kar chali jayegi kya..


S:kabhi nahi...ab aap so jao mein aati hun...


A:rd sir rd sir actually voh mrs khanna had missed 2 days of office owing to her child's sickness dats y


R:fire her


A:but sir


R:I said fire her or ur fired


A:sorry sir...


Rd sat on his chair nd pulled out a pic from his drawer it was sanyukta nd his pic...


R:luk at wat u hv done sanyu dekho mujhe wat have I become so ruthless...plz cum back sanyu I need u plz come back kahan ho tum...


Kanpur


L:sanyu rajnath ka phone aaya tha koi contract hai isliye voh dono mumbai jaa rahe hain aur voh nahi chahte ki mein yahan rahin toh tu samaan pack karde ek hafte ke liye humein jaana hai


Sanyu froze all memories came in front of her eyes...


S:aunty aap chale jao mera vahan kya kaam

L:re mera khayal kaun rakhega nahi tujhe toh aana hi hoga...

S:theek hai mein apna aur aapka samaan bandh leti hun...

Next day

Mumbai. ...

Dat lady nd sanyu reached the hotel room..
She was reading a newspaper but was unable too

L:sanyu beta zara aaj ki khabar padhna kuch padhne mein nahi aa raha...

S:ji...
Nd ahe read the headlines a tear dropped from her eye...

L:kya hua padh na

S:randhir singh shekhawat the owner of shekhawat group of companies has taken over two major companies in mumbai...

L:acha chod yeh sab yeh le kuch paise aaj shaam kuch party hai yahan hotel mein toh hum vahan chalenge jaakar naye kapde le le

S:nahi kya zarurat hai...

L:beta tu kya bol rahi hai nahi jaa lekar aa...

S:theek hai(she gave a helpless luk)

Shekhawat grup of comp.

A:sir today evening dere iz a business party nd u r

invited...

R:cancel it...

A:sir but humare kanpur ke clients aa rahe hain.. so we hv to go dere for a deal...

R:f9 but sirf deal ke liye...

A:yes sir...

In the evening...

Sanyu nd dat aunty reached the party... sanyu was luking simple yet beautiful she had worn an off white salwar kameez with golden border with red bangles and a red bindi...nd big jhumkas...

Rd went to the same party...

L:sanyu beta plz mere loye juice le aana

s:jee

The meeting was over nd rd went to the counter to hv a drink...

Sanyu went to the counter...

S:excuse me one orange juice...
Rd heard her voice nd tried to register...he turned but dere was no1 dere...

R: m I just imagining yaa voh sanyu hi thi he luked around but cid not see her ...

R: shayad mein zyada hi soch raha hun... pata nahi sanyu tum kahan ho pur mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki tum aas paas ho...

S: yeh lo aunty aapka juice...

L:aaja beth mere paas aaj toh bohot sundar dikh rahi hai ekdum pari jesi tera pati tph behosh ho jata...she realised wat she spoke.. maaf karna beta budha gayi hun na toh mooh se aisehi kuch bhi..

S:re koi baat nahi aap kyun sorry bologe chalta hai...

Aunty mein bathroom jakar aati hun...
She went nd was adjusting her bangles on the way...wen she banged into sum1...

R:luk where u walk lady he spoke in anger while lifting the files wen he luked up...

The world around them froze...

Rd luked at her from top to bottom...nd pulled her in a bone crushing hug...

Sanyu was shocked to see him she wanted to hig him but did not...

He held her tight in his arms as if to prevent her from going anywhere..

R:kahan chali gayi thi haan ek galti ki itni badi saza sanyu...

He cupped her face tears were flowing from both dere eyes...

He cupped her face nd luked into her eyes wich were deeply lined with kohl...

S:kese ho

R:jesa dikh raha hun bejaan...

S:ummm...she sighed.. toh congratulations( she gulped) padha meine 1 saal mein 5 companies takeover kar li. ..

R:usse kya hotah hai akela tha aur hoon deserve jo karta hun log toh ek letter likhkar sab khatam karke chale jaate hain peeche mudkar dekhte bhi nahi ki jise cjoda hai uski kya halat hui hai( she luked away)


S:bohot dukh hota bai naa jab koi apna chod deta hai toh but usse zyada dukh hota hai agar koi apna dhokha de toh...


Again a tear escaped hos eyes nd he wiped it...


S:karan bhai aur priya di kese hain


R:theek honge 4 months se unse baat nahi hui...meinakela rehta hun...Aur tum kesi ho...


S:theek hun


R:shaadi karli??( he didnt know y he asked dis question but it broke her completely)


S:nahi


R:kyun(he was very happy)


S:mujhe jaana hai take care. ...


He held her wrist nd took her to a room in the hotel. ..


S:rd chodo mujhe I said leave me. ..He left her


R:chod toh tum mujhe chuki ho sanyukta dedh saal pehle...


S:luk rd


R:wat luk sanyukta din raat isi liye laga rehta hun ki ek faint hope hai ki kisi din tum mil jaogi aur aakar mijhe hug kar logi ...

I hv suffered alot sanyukta alot. ..pagalon ki tarah dhundhta rehta hun tumhe...


Sanyu had tears in her eyes again...


R:acha chodo yeh sab kya logi. ..


S:kuch nahi


R:coffee


S:no thnx. ..


R:vese tum in kapdon mein pehle se bhi zyada gorgeous lagti ho...


Sanyu suddenly remembered aunty...


S:thnq rd nice to meet you I really need to go sum1 iz waiting for me bye nd she almost ran out though he tried to stop her...

Rd went behind sanyu to see where she was going...
Sanyu went to aunty..


S:sorry voh der hogayi


A:neta tu roo rahi thi kya...


S:n..nahi toh


A:jhooth mat bol bata kya hua hai


S:sachme kuch nahi...


Rd was luking at dem while hiding behind the pillar. ...


S:dekh li ma party ab room mein chalte hain...


Rd asked for her room no.


He paid sum money nd got d duplicate key to her room...


Night 2 am...


Rd ti toed inside her room md saw dat old lady in deep sleep he was luking around for sanyu when he heard a sound from the washroom nd hid behind the curtains...
She came out wearing a white salwar kurta... she went nd sat on the couch...nd took out a pic from her bag...it was Rd's pic...


He saw dat nd was very happy...


S:kyun aaye ho tum vapas rd kyun kya chahte ho tum ...
She took the frame nd held it close to her chest nd fell asleep...


Rd went besides her nd tried to remove the frame so dat she cud sleep properly...but she was holding it tightly...he smiled nd slightly poked her head..


R:meri photo tak toh chod nahi sakti aur mujhe chod kar chali gayi...he picked her up in his arms nd placed her on the bed. ...


He pecked her forehead nd den her lips...


R:I love u sanyu gudnite


He was leaving wen he heard her murmur something. ..he went closer to her...


S:I love u 2 nd its early morning not night...


Rd chuckled ...


R:kahan chali gayi thi idiot ... tumhe koi idea bhi hai ki mein tumhare bina kaise jee raha tha...ek tarah se I died the day u left me...a tear fell from his eyes on sanyus face nd she got up with a jerk...


S:rd tum tum yahan yahan kaise aaye...


R:listn sanyu plz mujhe maaf kardo m sorry I beg of u plz mere sath ghar chalo plz sanyukta. ...he bent down on his knees in front of her...


Plz mujhe maaf kardo I promise I will keep u happy sanyukta I promise plz plz forgive me I luv u...
Sanyu held his shoulders nd made him stand...


S:kya kar rahe ho rd dekho plz yeh sab mat karo... luk rd I left u because we dont hv trust or mutual understanding between us nd dere iz no use of this relationship luk rd evn I luv u pur I also understand that mein tumhare liye sirf ek difficult challenge thi aur tum mujhe paane ke liye mujhe marne ke liye bhi tayyar the those 3 months rd dey were lyk hell for me

I lost my parents my innocence my smile everything den I fell in luv with u but u broke me again badi mushkil se meine khud ko sambhala hai so now its over ... aur ab mein akeli nahi hun mere paas aunty hain nd she needs me mein unhe akela nahi chod sakti...


R:evn I need u goddammit. ..agar tum mere paas nahi aayi toh tumhari yeh aunty inhe toh mein...(his eyes were red) wen he got a tight slap on his face...


S:kya haan kya karoge mere har pyar ko toh cheen liya tumne u didnt evn leave shiksha di nd ab inhe ...mr shekhawat u r a sick man tum pyaar toh kya kisi bhi emotion ke layak nahi ho itna gir jaoge I never thought ..u r a murderer a cheap sick nd egoistic man a brute...


His eyes were red in anger he raised his hand to slap her wen his love for her overpowered his senses nd he left the room...


Sanyu sat down on her knees nd started crying.


S:badal gaye ho tum rd sab badal gaya hai...

To be continue...

Edited by purnima209 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
resss
unresss
finally sanyu mili ..
awesome update de
Edited by holysoul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update👏
Finally sandhir meet😊
I think rd will win sanyu's heart soon😉
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally after ages u updated
God u kept us wtng for so long


The update was awsme
I so loved it


Rd has become so heartless
He was searching for sanyu like maniacs


Finally sanyu mil gi
Rd again felt that his heart stdt beating


Bt he had hurtled sanyu a lot
It will not be easy to get her back

Sandhir in pain
They both love each other a lot

Bt what rd did was wrong

Cnt wait for next
Update soon


Love
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsome part. Thanx for the update. Finally sanyu mil gai yeah.
Edited by gudia11 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg nahi...
Yar patch up kro do unka
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update...
Randhir deseved it...

continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome please give next part jaldi ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally they met!
No doubt rd changed.

looking forward to see how Sanyu comes back to Rd s life.

Continue soon

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