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Posted: 10 years ago

sure dear sry for late reply
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Originally posted by: ishq2051

Awww...

In the end when sanyu said I love u too I thought sab thik ho gaya,...but ye toh aur complex ho gaya re...
Update sooon


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Originally posted by: sudipto-69

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Originally posted by: Rocking_Angel

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Originally posted by: coolishparul

update na???

moi waiting


SRY FOR LATE
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TOO GOOD TO SHARE - PART 11:

Next morning sanyu woke up nd her eyes were still red as she had been crying all night nd was lying dere only on the floor...

She got up nd went directly to the washroom...
She came out after a while nd went to see aunty but surprisingly she was not dere on the bed nd she luked all around but cud not find her...
Den she noticed a few drops of blood close to the bed...


Nd only one name came in her mind...rd


S:shit meine rd se kal jo kuch bhi kaha kahin uski vajah se usne aunty ke saath kuch nahi...I hv 2 get her back shit...
Without changing she ran to his office in d same clothes she was wearing she did not trust him at all...


On the other hand rd was very irritated at her ...
R: sanyukta tum mere bare mein aisa kaose soch sakti ho u hate me soo much mujhe murderer kaha tha na ab mein tumhe batata hun.. kal toh meine apne aap ko rok liya tha kyunki mein kabhi tumpur haath nahi utha sakta...
He was sitting in his office his eyes still red in anger...
Wen suddenly he heard noises from outside...


He called the security...
Se:sahab voh koi ladki aayi hai cheekh chilla rahi hai aur aapse milna chahti hain...
R:send her in...
She came in nd he was still very angry at her but she was crying red eyes red face in her nightclothes. ...
R:wat now ab kya chahiye tumhe(coldly)
He was sitting on his chair...
She literally ran to him nd sat down on her knees nd joined her hands...
Rd was too shocked by dis action of hers but he didnt know how to react or wat to do..


S:rd plz m sorry meine tumse kal jo kuch bhi kaha plz m sorry rd m very sorry tum apna saara gussa mujhpur nikal do pur plz plz aunty ko chod do unhe kuch mat karo mein mein tumhare saath ghar bhi aajaungi but olz aunty ko zinda chod do plz plz rd(she was crying very badly) she bent down nd kept her head on his shoes ...
Rd shuddered he immediately bent down nd picked her up
R:kya kya kar rahi ho sanyukta ...yeh sab tumhe mere pairon mei girne ki kya zaroorat. ..


But she kept on crying nd talking...
S:plz chod do plz unhe mat marna olz plz ...
Rd shaked her he too had tears in his eyes
R:sanyuktaa!!
She still kept on taking nd crying nd now he did not have any other option he slapped her hard. ...
She stopped crying nd held her cheek wich was red nd had his fingerprint. ...
He cupped her face


R:kya bol rahi ho sanyukta I know ki u think ki mein ek gira hua insaan hu sorry murderer hun but luk into my eyes kya tumhe sachme lagta hai ki yeh meine kiya hai...
She luked into his eyes nd shaked her head in a no ...
He was very hurt bt wat had happened nd wat she had done begging him...he cud not believe how low she thought of him but he had to help her as he cud not see her in dis condition...

R:apni aunty ki pic hai tumhare paas..
S:h..haan hotel room mein hai
R:chalo unhe dundhte hain ..
Dey both left office nd went to the hotel dey evn informed the police nd were simultaneously luking for her...
R:sanyukta u stay with her kya lagta hai tumhe kisi pe shak...
S:shit rd yeh mere dimag mein pehle kyun nahi aaya dilip ...dilip kamra...
Inka chota beta voh vohi hai usi ne kiya hoga...but rd agar use slight idea bhi lag gaya ki police involved hai toh voh unhe maar dega...(she was crying)


R:kuch nahi hoga chalo hum unhe layenge ...
Sanyu knew where aunty cud be nd rd too accompanied her dey were going in his car... it was a long journey...
Dey had been travelling since 3 hrs...
S:r...rand..hir...(reluctantly)
R:hmmm...
S:tumhe bhook bhook nahi lagi subah se kuch khaya nahi hai ...
R:m f9 tumhe kuch chahiye...
S:nahi m f9
After dat dere was an awkward silence for another hour wen suddenly the car broke down...


S:ab ise kya hua
R:tum betho mein dekhta hun...
After a few moments...
R:sanyukta gaadi kharab hogayi hai meine driver ko phone kar diya hai voh kuch ghanton meon aajayega yahan aas paas sirf jungle hai mechanic nahi milega... gaadi .ein hi wait karte hain...
S:ok I hope aunty theek ho...


Dey both were sitting in the car now more uncomfortable than ever...
S:r..rand...hir...
R:bolo
S:m... m voh ..umm... m
R:its ok sanyukta jane do
S:nahi.. voh see rd voh...
R:I said its ok(faint forced smile)
After sumtime he dozed off she noticed dat nd with her hand she caressed his forehead. ...nd smiled slightly. ...

Rd woke up after sometime only to see dat sanyus dupatta was over him nd she was lying on the seat like a child nd was feeling cold...
He removed the dupatta nd put it on her...
R:stupid pehle apne aap ko toh thand se bacha lo phir meri help karna...
It had been 2 hrs now...
Sanyu had also woken up nd again silence. .. sanyu decided that it was now time to break ot as she cud not tolerate it any more...
S:rd
R:haan
S:rd m very sorry
R:kitni baar bolu its ok sanyukta its f9 really...


S: no rd meine itna kuch kaha itna kuch kiya its not okay plz m really sorry sacchi vala sorry dil se plz aur phir bhi tum mere liye itna kar rahe ho...
R:kaise nahi karun I love u no dats y...nd its ok humare relationship mein humesha decision tum hi toh leti ho... shaadi karna chaha kar li ghar chodna chaha cjod diya...misunderstand karna chaha kar liya kuch right toh mera bho hai na...
S:dekho rd...


R:luk sanyu I know ki tum mere bare mein kya sochti ho but plz I beg of u chahe jo ho jaye nd I mean it kuch bhi tum plz kabhi bhi voh mat karna jo aaj kiya tumhe mere paon padhne ki koi zaroorat na thi aur na hogi pata hai jab tum e apna sar mere shoes par rakha toh mujhe kaisi feeling hui...aisi ki kaash bhagwan mujhe utha le I wished I wud die that very moment sanyukta. ...


She was crying...
Nd hugged him tightly...
He didnt hig her back...
S:m sorrt rd m very sorry I shud hv trusted u I shud have nd m sorry for hurting u soo muvh m sorry I liv u I luv u alott rd...
R:sanyu mein abhi aata hun
S:kahan jaa rahe ho
R:abhi aaya...
He went out of the car nd dialed a no.
R:set her free job iz done ...
He cut the call nd smirked...luki g at sanyu through the window...

Rd's pov
M sorry sanyukta I know ki mein jo kar raha hun galat hai aur mein humesha galat karta hun but I love you m madly in love with u aur tumhare liye mein kuch bhi kar sakta hun...ur love iz too precious for me to share it with any1...but I cant see tears in ur eyes never nd I will never let u leave me...never...
He entered the car
R:sanyukta aunty mil gayi (he exclaimed with utmost joy)


S:kya kahan hain voh how iz she iz she ok who did this batao rd...
R:voh theek hain kisine paise ke liye kiya tha aur abhi voh vahan pohonch gayi hain jahan unhe hona chahiye...kanpur...
S:kanpur?? Voh mujhe chodkar bina mujhse mile kaise jaa sakti haon nahi dere iz sumthing wrong...


R:voh sab I dont know she iz home iz safe u can talk to her yeh lo
Sanyu had a long conversation with aunty...
R:ab tumhe hotel drop karun yaa ghar chalogi...
After 30 mins car came ...
Sanyu went home with rd...
At night ...
Sanyu changed into her salwar kameez nd came to the room...rd was just staring at her he was seeing her after such a long time...
He signalled her to come towards him...
She went nd sat in his lap
R:kya lagta hai tumhe tum koi bachi ho kya jab bhi bulata hun u cum nd sit in mt lap ...itni bhi halki nahi ho...


S:acha theek hai(she got up but he pulled her back)
R:I love u sanyu I missed u alot nd I wish ki tum humesha aisehi meri lap mein betho...


Sanyu turned towards his side nd held his hair nd pulled him in a passionate kiss with all dere love care emotions...
Det kissed for a long time till rd luked into her eyes..he saw a strange spark in dem...
He picked her up nd took her to the bed nd placed her dere while he adjusted himself on top of her...


He gently kissed her plump lips again nd den all over her face proceeding to her nevk nd collarbone. .he started giving love bites while he continued liking nd kissing...
Down he went unzipping her kurti nd soon all dere apparels were lying on the floor while dey were busy in dere own world...a world full of love nd pleasure...
After a while rd lay besides her...


R:thanq sanyukta thanq for giving me soo much love nd for forgiving me...
Sanyu was quiet...
He made her face him...
R:whats wrong sanyukta
S:I hv hidden sumthing from u rd
R:kya bolo naa
She had tears in her eyes...
R:bolo sanyu kya hua aur tum darr kyun rahi ho...
S:m ...m pregnant rd(she blurted out while rd froze)

R:kya bol rahi ho sanyukta wat the hell do u hv ant idea of wat ur saying how come we never..
S:it's not ur child rd...
He luked at her with utmost amazement as if he iz hearing a ghost ...
He got up immediately followed by her...
Dey both freshened up ...
He needed 2 mins to think..
R:listn sanyu I hope u understand dat this iz not funny...
S:rd I know(she spome with a straight face) nd m nt joking...voh 2 months pehle hi
R:kiske sath


S:v...voh
R:speak up dammit whose child iz dis(he screamed with red eyes nd she shuddered)
S:parth
R:wat!!
S:haan voh mujhe sorrt bolne aaya tha aur(she was crying badly)
R:nd u slept with him
S:rd plz hear me out once...
She moved towards him but the very next second she was on the floor with blood oozing out of he forehead she had been slapped really hard by him...
His love was gone now he cud only see her as a possession of his wich was stolen by sum1 else...nd whenever sum1 touched somethi g that belonged to him either he killed that person or the thing wud be broken ...
Nd right now sanyukta was the thing...


He held her hair nd pulled her up though she winced in pain...
He slapped her hard again nd den picked up his belt wich was lying on the table...
Ahe was begging him pleading him but in vain...
After 10 mins on thrashing he threw the belt nd turned around...


He then turned back to witness the sight for wich he wished he jad died before seeing that his heart had broken into a 1000 pieces his mind not functioning properly. ..his hands were shaking nd he was weak on his knees...tears rolled down his eyes...


He saw sanyu lying on the floor bleeding very badly nd red marks all over her body...
He ran to her nd now no logic or anything was going to overpower his love for herhe ran to her nd luked into her eyes he lifted her up ...
Rd was crying very badly now for the first time in his life was he guilty for something...


He patted her cheeks ...
R:sa...sanyukta m ...m sorry(he kept crying ) pata nahi mujhe kya hovaya tha plz sa yukta m sorry mein kabhi tumpe hath nahi uthaunga plz tum jo chahe kar lo mujhe maro peeto pur plz m sorry...
Her face was expressionless her eyes wide open her body was becoming cold...
R:sanyukta ...his voice was more of a plead...sanyukta!!
Dere she lay still in his arms...


He was shocked no not shocked he was worried no not evn worried his heart was mourning since he realised that he had lost his most treasured posession...
R:sanyuktaa!! Sanyu plz utho utho bohot hogaya natak I said naa I am sorry plz sanyu suno toh sanyu sanyukta!!! Dekho tum naho uthi naa toh meo tumhe zor ka chata marunga utho naa plz... but no response. ..she was gone forever. ..

Rd picked her up in his arms nd ran to the hospital...
Sanyu was checked by the doctors...her pulse rate was decreasing every second nd she was put on ventilators...
Rd was sitting outside like a corpse...


He took his car nd left it was almost midnight nd he remembered all the pol whom he had hurt for sanyu her parents her bf her bestie shiksha nd aunty...
He could imagine them laughing at him...he wished he could get everything back to normal he wished all of this would have never happened...he was just crying he went nd hit his hands on the tree nd he kept punching until his hands were bleeding profusely...


R:plz god give me just one chance to rectify my mistake just one I promise I will never hurt anyone I promise I will never lie to sanyu I promise plz use kuch mat karna plz aaj pehli baar mein dil se aapse kuch mang raha hun plx get sanyu back...
He suddenly got a call from the hospital. ...
He rushed back...


D:sorry mr shekhawat she has only a few mins left nd wishes to see you. .
Rd ran inside nd caught her feet he was crying very badly. ..
R:plz sanyukta bus ek chance dedo plz mat jao plx I beg of u plx mat jao plz mein mar jaunga sanyukta...


Sanyu signalled him to come closer...he sat nd held her hand...
S:r...ran...hirrr promise me...ki me..re jaane ke baad...u wont trouble urself. ...aur genuinely tum ek ache insaan banoge(she spoke with gr8 diff) he was crying soo badly nd was constantly kissing her palm...


R:nahi I wont plz sanyu I I promise tum bas yeh aakhri chance dedo I promise .einkabhi tumhe yaa iss baby ko hurt nahi karunga he will be our child...
S:wich child rd m not pregnant(his heartbeat stopped )yaa m not meine yeh khud kiya hai I hv suicided mujhe pata chal gaya tha ki aunty ko tum e kidnap karwaya hai nd marwa bhi diya...mein tumse voh cheenna chahti thi jo tumhe sabse pyaara ho nd that iz me ...yaad hai tumne ek baar kaha tha ki tum mijhe kisi ke saath share nahi kar sakte toh ab dekho tumhe mujhe share nahi karna pada...I I love u ...(nd her eyes closed while the monitors started beeping)


Docs rushed to her side nd took charge of the situation while rd sat dere her hand in his nd his face filled with an ecpression of guilt nd shock
He had lost her due to his own deeds he knew that this had to be his suffering...but he cud not lose her .
R:sanyuktaa!! (He screamed)

Edited by purnima209 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
you literally make me cry this morning

omg so emotional tragic update

story ki tragic ending nahi chayea
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: coolishparul

you literally make me cry this morning

omg so emotional tragic update

story ki tragic ending nahi chayea


u will come to know soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for pm
It was very emotional update😭
Hoping that you will give a happy ending
Update soon

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