The week that was - an uprising!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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So I won't do a blow by blow on this week as there have been plenty of excellent write ups, but I do want to talk about what has been fixed, from my perspective.

I must give credit to the makers, that the way this week has panned out, although genre has been changed, they seem to have really taken online feedback onboard and at the end the week, quite frankly, I have no complaints.

1. Rehman deal killed
The last few weeks had been a total train wreck for the makers. The deal was the last loose string which they cut early in the week. Sure, it was a little strange and u r left to wonder why didn't Sahir go bankrupt or what about the video, but it had become a mess and had to end. Tick.

2. Arzoo becoming a business woman killed
This was another train wreck waiting to happen. I'm glad they took action and even after all the hype in the news, plus the awful montage, it seems, very late in the day, they changed direction. Better late than never. Tick.

2. Arzoo characterisation
This week, pretty much every issue I had with Arzoo was addressed. The childish behaviour was gone and we got a week full of mature self talks. Arzoo is shown thinking, observing, reflecting on Sahir, his behaviour, the situation. We, the audience can FINALLY connect to her!!! Furthermore, we got proper conversation between the two. She opens up and tells him about the attack on her. She then follows up with concern for him and he also reciprocates. Hallelujah!
Finally, once she finds out about Zeenat being in a 7 year coma, she is shown as being empathetic enough to start wondering about his pain and wondering what else he is keeping within him. And then when Arzoo stopped his self mutilation? I tell you, I was taken aback. Watching Arzoo this week was like every single piece of feedback on this forum was playing out in front on me. Truly amazing. Thank you CVs.

3. Zaki
Zaki was back and I was happy to see him. Zaki was actually great but as with Arzoo, they ruined his characterisation during the love triangle debacle. His scene with Arzoo was spot on. He was awkward but has accepted the situation and didn't show any signs of love. He was always a good friend to Arzoo and I have no issues with them reverting back to that as long as that's what they remain. Of course he might be in revenge mode, but we will see what happens with that!

4. Sahir
Sahir has luckily always been Sahir but it has been great to see a concerned, protective Sahir. He was very open about his loyalty, care, concern towards Arzoo this week and we got to see some fabulously executed SaAz scenes full of chemistry and brilliant dialogues. The attention expression was also excellent.
He also was shown trusting Arzoo's claims on Zeenat. Even today, although he denied believing her in front of Zeenat, he has been shown thinking all week on what the real deal is. And even when Sahir said he didn't believe Arzoo and accused her of childishness, Arzoo took it on the chin and rather than throwing her toys out of the pram, she promised to get Sahirs trust in this.
The other nice thing has been the playful retorts to Arzoo...ziddi under his breath today or the 'bhau khati hai' under his breath yesterday. He is relaxing with her.
Also the dialogue when KA tries to kick Arzoo out - I think he was saying, we are both stubborn, we fight but we both belong together ( and saying room was just a metaphor) ...this guy has made his commitment and belief in this marriage loud and clear. We see it again with the Nausheen/Sahir scene. I loved the line where he says something like, I'm not sure if I'll make her happy but I will always protect her. That was so sweet.
Finally his feelings (or rather lack of) for Zeenat are made very very clear. He doesn't leave any room for Arzoo to have any misunderstanding on this subject.

The change in plot
The key thing about this plot is that Arzoo is being targeted and Zeenat ( whoever her accomplices may be) is definitely the villain...a really evil villain. Anyone watching her will park their discomforts on Sahir having married twice and just focus on how Arzoo is going to convince everyone Zeenats not in a coma. Very honestly, I do not see Zeenat as Sahirs wife at all. And this is thanks to Sahirs indifference to her plus her portrayal so far. She's a nasty piece of work.
We see a new entry, ACP Rathod. I actually like him. He is shown as being a pretty smart cookie. His dialogues were actually making me laugh today (especially his salim-javed reference) and I liked his exchange with KA.
Finally, everyone's a suspect, from KA to Alvira to Zaki. It's a good suspense.

In summary, the makers have weaved in Saaz's story progression very nicely within the thriller. My dad is thoroughly enjoying it and even my hubby watched the last 2 days. What this tells me is the thriller plot should attract a larger audience but if they continue moving the SaAz relationship along as they have done this week, they won't loose their core audience.

The CVs are on the right track. They must maintain it though...keep SaAz progressing, maintain the tempo on the thriller track and all will be well...it must be pretty tough for them to come up with the dialogues/screenplay in such little time. Happy to give them Monday off if it means we get better quality episodes!!! 👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Spot on VD927...a very clear lucid share...you clearly are the queen of structure...enjoyed reading it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tarakahini

Spot on VD927...a very clear lucid share...you clearly are the queen of structure...enjoyed reading it



Glad you liked it! thanks! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome VD 🤗 I am glad the creatives of this story have finally pulled people back to our forum with a bang 👏👏👏Lovely analysis ...u spoke many of our minds 👍🏼
And what a roller coaster it has been in this story 👏...to me this definitely is a brave n smart move by the makers n channel👏 well they did realize only dark love story plot is not going to work big time for any of them but having said isnt it a huge challenge for writers to come up with a suspense plot overnight👏 ...BRAVO attempt 👍🏼

I am happy it has been accepted by audience which is why their ratings pushed up fro 0.5 to 0.7 ...the Humsafars team is quite active on social media n I think all of them are good recipients of audience feedback hence have got the pulse with what will attract the huge crazy international cum online viewers at the same time glue viewers from the TRP group as well..👍🏼

I just hope they continue to have the focus and keep working on the momentum ...of this thriller cum romance going on for next few days..

I say we are NOT in any hurry to find out the VILLIAN in this plot 😉as long as he/she keeps bringing Sahir n Aarzoo closer ...😎

Wishing everyone associated with this show a very good run and the very best to keep rocking !!👍🏼 Happy weekend friends 🤗

Also VD may I request in this post - everyone who is interested in this show to PLEASE get their twitter accounts created and keep sharing good feedback to @SonyTV n @gauravs8 handles about Humsafars n keep requesting them for promotions n repeat at 11pm IST ...We never know we might be heard !!!👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome post!! They are back with a bang...and can't explain how happy I am...past few weeks have been quite messy...now all that has been swept under the carpet. Cherry on the top being Harshad Chopda joining Twitter 😊 and his interview.
Coming to the episode...I was happy with all the characters today...ACP is very likeable too..I don't want him to be negative according to some spoilers.
Jo bhejdo thi dua..wo quobool ho gaya...so excited for Tuesday!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bujee09

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Welcome VD🤗I am glad the creatives of this story have finally pulled people back to our forum with a bang👏👏👏Lovely analysis ...u spoke many of our minds👍🏼</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">And what a roller coaster it has been in this story 👏...to me this definitely is a brave n smart move by the makers n channel👏 well they did realize only dark love story plot is not going to work big time for any of them but having said isnt it a huge challenge for writers to come up with a suspense plot overnight👏 ...BRAVO attempt👍🏼</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I am happy it has been accepted by audience which is why their ratings pushed up fro 0.5 to 0.7 ...the Humsafars team is quite active on social media n I think all of them are good recipients of audience feedback hence have got the pulse with what will attract the huge crazy international cum online viewers at the same time glue viewers from the TRP group as well..👍🏼</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I just hope they continue to have the focus and keep working on the momentum ...of this thriller cum romance going on for next few days..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I say we are NOT in any hurry to find out the VILLIAN in this plot 😉as long as he/she keeps bringing Sahir n Aarzoo closer ...😎</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Wishing everyone associated with this show a very good run and the very best to keep rocking !!👍🏼</font>Happy weekend friends🤗

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font size="4" color="#ff0000">Also VD may I request in this post - everyone who is interested in this show to PLEASE get their twitter accounts created and keep sharing good feedback to @SonyTV n @gauravs8 handles about Humsafars n keep requesting them for promotions n repeat at 11pm IST ...We never know we might be heard !!!👍🏼</font>
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Hey Raji - Thx a lot. I think I wrote it somewhere but will say it again, your efforts on Twitter have been amazing...there is a revolution going on out there! Sony went from radio silence to daily tweets! And the number of favourites, retweets etc are amazing...much higher than any other show they tweet about. I will be very surprised if trps don't rise again next week, particularly since this was actually a good week. And feels so good when our feedback is taken on board...it makes the constant requests worth it.
I think all this online activity has encouraged the makers to try again and make the show work. Thumbs up to you again for your efforts!
👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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VD how are u dear N ong u VE summed it up preety well 👏

I think this week the mundane thriller drama was a bit of an issue since they had a genre Change which was effective in full swing but they did manage to pull it off well

I particularly liked the epis of the last two days mainly cos of SaAz 👏

Sahir has not been much issue but yes, arzoo was n now tht is Improving 😃

All in all a decent week

PS VD one doubt , pls don't mind ..shud I refer to u as a he or a she 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VD927


The change in plot
The key thing about this plot is that Arzoo is being targeted and Zeenat ( whoever her accomplices may be) is definitely the villain...a really evil villain. Anyone watching her will park their discomforts on Sahir having married twice and just focus on how Arzoo is going to convince everyone Zeenats not in a coma. Very honestly, I do not see Zeenat as Sahirs wife at all. And this is thanks to Sahirs indifference to her plus her portrayal so far. She's a nasty piece of work.
We see a new entry, ACP Rathod. I actually like him. He is shown as being a pretty smart cookie. His dialogues were actually making me laugh today (especially his salim-javed reference) and I liked his exchange with KA.
Finally, everyone's a suspect, from KA to Alvira to Zaki. It's a good suspense.

In summary, the makers have weaved in Saaz's story progression very nicely within the thriller. My dad is thoroughly enjoying it and even my hubby watched the last 2 days. What this tells me is the thriller plot should attract a larger audience but if they continue moving the SaAz relationship along as they have done this week, they won't loose their core audience.

The CVs are on the right track. They must maintain it though...keep SaAz progressing, maintain the tempo on the thriller track and all will be well...it must be pretty tough for them to come up with the dialogues/screenplay in such little time. Happy to give them Monday off if it means we get better quality episodes!!! 👏


VD 👏 happy to see your weekly post as always and agree with you completely !
The ACP, I'll be honest here, I did not like him in the first episode at all , actually I think his entry and dialogues on that day were kind of awkward as the genre change was also happening, but now I am actually beginning to like him(specially because he suspects KA 😉), the whole show is actually picking up pace and this character has been woven well into it.

Another thing was , although Sahir did believe what Aarzoo is saying, he is not admitting that to her, proving once again that he is a rational person and goes by facts and not what someone says. We have seen this time and again (Anam stole designs & KA once blamed Aarzoo of being in Zaki's room) but over the last 2 weeks Sahir was not this person at all ... I am so glad they are bringing back the characters we love and not butchering them further.

The way Sahir explained that it was medically impossible for Zeenath to move and compared the childish talk to KA's was very real and for once I think they actually had a proper conversation, not ending in an argument or a fight or even a romantic scene. I really felt I was looking at a married couple who are in a "normal" conversation .

I do remember your thread where you said you are looking forward to this week and you have been proved right !👍🏼



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ecrivain




VD how are u dear N ong u VE summed it up preety well👏

I think this week the mundane thriller drama was a bit of an issue since they had a genre Change which was effective in full swing but they did manage to pull it off well

I particularly liked the epis of the last two days mainly cos of SaAz👏

Sahir has not been much issue but yes, arzoo was n now tht is Improving😃

All in all a decent week

PS VD one doubt , pls don't mind ..shud I refer to u as a he or a she😛



I am most definitely a 'she' and you can call me Vish! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pearly14



<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">VD👏happy to see your weekly post as always and agree with you completely !</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">The ACP, I'll be honest here, I did not like him in the first episode at all , actually I think his entry and dialogues on that day were kind of awkward as the genre change was also happening, but now I am actually beginning to like him(specially because he suspects KA 😉), the whole show is actually picking up pace and this character has been woven well into it.</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">Another thing was , although Sahir did believe what Aarzoo is saying, he is not admitting that to her, proving once again that he is a rational person and goes by facts and not what someone says. We have seen this time and again (Anam stole designs & KA once blamed Aarzoo of being in Zaki's room) but over the last 2 weeks Sahir was not this person at all ... I am so glad they are bringing back the characters we love and not butchering them further.</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">The way Sahir explained that it was medically impossible for Zeenath to move and compared the childish talk to KA's was very real and for once I think they actually had a proper conversation, not ending in an argument or a fight or even a romantic scene. I really felt I was looking at a married couple who are in a "normal" conversation .</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">I do remember your thread where you said you are looking forward to this week and you have been proved right !👍🏼</font>






Haha...yes! I was reading my unbelievably positive post from last week! And am glad the cvs ne meri izzat rakh li 👏 ...

And yes, that is a really good point that Sahir is not believing Arzoo blindly, he us basing it all on facts. Usually Arzoo does as well, hence he gives the KA example to get. was so nice to see Arzoo take maturely...as you say it was like a married couples conversation!

Next week will be interesting with Sahir putting his life on theine for Arzoo...I am just a teeny weeny bit worried that they don't show Arzoo falling head over heels suddenly and vice versa...they should take it slowly, building up the understanding...consumation (which I can't wait to see!) should be after a while feel...

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