SwaRon Drabble OS: Don't let 'US' Break..

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Dew..

@Dew..

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

WOW!!
this is so emotional. .
you showed both the characters as their original ones...their pain so well written, i actually feel what they are going through. . .
this is how it should be, the understanding, the love everything is there...
I wish, I wish something like this happens in d3 too..
ps- plz send this os to AD, she should know what SwaRon story is...

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Samaira

@cherry_vrushan

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

hey, it was awesome :-* Loved the way you portrait their emotions :-) Thanxxx for the PM

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anubhutijain

@anubhutijain

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Nysh! I wishd dat dey hadnt shown d breakup in the show...thanks fr d pm

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sonali saraswat

@cutelove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

After a long time os frm ur side n honestly i was elated to know dis fact ...plzzz be regularr!!! :p :)
Well agn one exotic and perfect frm u ...i always expect dis ...very fine writing n i love dat bas...he has to make sure " his girl was fine" ...such a heart touching n amazing line...i really loved it...
Ps -- plzz next os ...jaldi se

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@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

HEY

it was an awesome piece of writing

well written and soo apt..

the pain was well emoted

sharons confusion and swayams calmness

gr8 work done

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

This was so so so beautiful.
Tanvish you took my heart away today. Those feelings those emotions that love.
This is what SwaRon is all about. God after reading this I'm really missing palki ma'am a lot.
Thanks for this OS.
It lifted up my mood.

Sorry for the late feedback. Keep writing.

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

amazing os if something like this happens in the show i would love that thanks for the pm

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Ur write-ups leave me awestruck! *_*
This one too!!

Update ur works soon..!! 😊

Edited by d3fan4eva - 11 years ago

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Great Job here.It was well penned and well emotionally crafted work..The pain and the agony was clearly visible to me ..The way u showed swayam's perspective is perfect n must needed according to ur Concept..
Thanks for the PM
And sorry for this late

Prateek