~VeeBa SS~ Ab Aur Bardasht Nahi Hota (Part 15 on pg.10) - Page 2

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Bansuri shakes Baldev to wake him up. He opens his eyes slowly and feels his head hurting. He tries to sit up but Bansuri stops him from doing so and says "Na Baldev! Lete re puttar.. Tenu bara tez bukhar chada hai. Main teri pattiyan karti hoon.." She straightens up and says "Me pani aur kapra leke aati hoon"

Once she leaves, slowly all the memories from yesterday start flowing into his brain and he feels anger. Not anger at the thought that Veera left him.. she had done that before too.. many times. He had gotten used to that now. What he felt anger on was.. himself! How could he act so vulnerable? What had gotten into him? Him! Pind da sher! Crying like a little baby!?

*Bas!* He thought. *Ab me us Veera ke peche nahi ghoomunga! Kya kaha tha unse pehle..? Me uske layak nai hoon? Ab wo dekhegi.. Me uske kya wo mere layak nahi hai! Iss baar me tujhe maaf nahi karunga Veera.. Kabhi nahi..!*

"Ye le puttar.." Bansuri comes and puts the wet cloth on his forehead. Instantly Baldev is reminded of the time when he put wet cloth on Veera's forehead in Poland. He smiles with nostalgia but then his anger overpowers him. *phir uske baare me sochne lag gaya hoon me!? Ki ho gaya hai menu!?"

"Bas ho gaya na beeji.. Me theek hoon.." He says with his (cute :p) irritated look. "Menu kaam pe jana hai ab"

"Oye nai! Tu araam kar samjha. Lete re..!"

Balwant comes to the door. He sees the room is messy and Veera is no where to be seen but he doesn't know what happened last night.

"O Baldev.. Veera kitthe hai?"

Baldev and Bansuri look at each other and then back at Balwant and Baldev says "Chali gayi"

Balwant is confused. "Chali gayi?"

And then Bansuri jumps up "o haan Balwant ji haan! Chali gayi aapki laadli bahu aapnu chadke! Ise keh ke gayi hai 'tu ghusse me kisi ka bhi khoon kar sakta hai'!"

Balwant gets angry "Kesi gallan kar rai ho aap Bansuri ji!? Veera aisa nahi kar sakti!"

Baldev gets angry. "To aap hi batao PapaJi..! Ek nai naweli dulhan apne sasural nu chad ke inne sawere sawere kitthe jayegi!? Jab ke uske maike waalo ne bhi use thukra dia ho!?"

Balwant is still unconvinced. Baldev continues with clenched teeth "sawere sawere kya, wo to raat ko hi chad ke chali gayi thi.."
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Veera and Amrit are having breakfast.

"Acha Veera ab to bata to yaha kyun ayi?? Lagta hai kisi shaadi se aa rai hai"

"Wo na.. Me.. Apni.. shaadi se.. Aa rai hoon" she says quietly fearing that Amrit is gonna get angry since she never invited her.

"Kya? Congrats! Kab? Kisse? Wait a second! Tune mujhe kyun nahi bulaya! Par mere jeeja ji hai kahan? But still tune mujhe kyun nahi bulaya!?" Amrit heaves a loud sigh since she says all that in one breath. She's VERY happy for Veera but then she gets all serious and says "Par Veera tu yaha kyun ayi agar teri kal shaadi hui hai..?"

Veera gets serious and tells Amrit what happened... or at least what she thinks had happened.

"...aur phir me jab use jail ne milne gayi to usne kaha 'mene Nihal chachu ka qatl nahi kia.. Mujhe unki call ayi thi is liye me gaya' par veerji ne mujhe kaha jo tha ke unho ne Baldev ko khoon karte hue dekha.. Ab veerji galat thodi na ho sakte hai.. To phir mene intezaar kia, Baldev ko zamanat milne ka.. Aur me usse milne gayi, use ye vishwaas dilane ke me us par bharosa karti hoon.. Phir humne mandir me shaadi ki aur uske ghar chali gaye.. Wo to mujhse aise baat kar raha tha jaise usne kuch galat kia hi nahi!.. Aur phir maine usse kaha ke maine usse shaadi is liye ki thi take me usse hamesha hamesha ke liye chod ke chali jaon"

Amrit who hadn't interrupted the whole time was now staring at Veera, her mouth hanging open.

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"Veera ye tune kya kar dia!? Tujhe andaaza bhi hai tu kise thukra ke ayi hai!? Baldev ko!! Wo Baldev jo tujhse beintehaa pyaar karta hai! Wo Baldev jo teri khatir tere saath Poland gaya! Take tujhe agar kuch ho to tera khyaal rakhne wala koi ho! Wo Baldev jiska do baar teri waja se dil toota par phir bhi usne tujhpe bepana pyaar lutaya! Veera kya tujhe thodi si bhi fiqr nahi hai uski!?"

Veera gave her a mixed look of anger and disbelief. "Amrit kya mene use kaha tha mujhse pyaar kare? Kya mene use kaha tha mere saath Poland jaye? Kya mene use kaha tha ke mere do baar thukrane ke bawajood mujhe pane ki koshish kare? Nahi na!?"

Amrit shook Veera by her shoulders "Veera kya ho gaya hai tujhe!?! Tu bhi to usse pyaar karti thi!!"

Veera removes Amrit's hands off her shoulder and says in a calm voice "Dekh Amrit. Me tere paas ayi iska ye matlab nai ke tu mujhe baate sunae. Agar tu mujhe isi tara interrogate karti rai to me chali jaongi yaha se"

"Interrogate? Veera me tujhe ye samjhane ki koshish kar rai hoon ke jo tu kar rahi hai wo galat hai!! Tujhe Baldev ke paas wapas jana ho ga! Usse maafi maangni ho gi!!"

"Kyun Amrit? Tune bhi Baldev ka ghussa dekha hai na? Kya tujhe nahi lagta ke wo ghusse me kisi ka bhi khoon kar sakta hai?"

"Par Veera tere Veerji jo bhi kahen zaroori nahi-ek mint! Tere Veerji ko teri shaadi ke baare me pata hai? Unhe kya ye pata hai ke tu yaha hai?"

"Haan.. Unhe pata hai Meri shaadi ke baare me.. Unho ne mujhse sare rishte tod diye"

"Kya? To phir tune Baldev ko kyun chota jabke tere Veerji hi tere nahi hai"

"Oho Amrit! Mere Veerji naraz hai par maan jayenge"

"Veera tere Veerji is shaadi ke liye raazi nahi the!! Wo tujhe kese maaf karenge? Tu abhi unhe call kar-"

Veera's voice rises "Aur kya kahoon? 'Mene Baldev ko chod dia ab aap mujhe apna lo?'"

"Ye to tujhe yaha aane se pehle soch a chahiye tha"

"Mene yaha aane se pehle ye socha tha ke tu meri side pe ho gi Aur aage ke baare me sochne me meri help karegi..!"

"Ok. Meri baat sune gi? Theek hai. First of all apne Veerji ko call kar aur unhe sab sach bata! Keh unse ke tune Baldev ko choda kyunke tujhe wo galat laga. Tune unki khatir apne pati ko choda."

"Par Amrit abhi to tu keh rahi thi ke"

"Haan pata hai. Le rai thi me Baldev ki side. Aur ab bhi mujhe lagta hai ke jo tune kia wo galat hai par ek galati ko chupane ke liye me jhoot ka sahara nahi lena chahti.. Is liye phone utha aur call kar unhe"

"Par wo mera phone nahi uthayenge."

"To theek hai.. Me call karti hoon apne number se aur teri baat karwati hoon"


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Edited by veeba4eva - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice! You write very well! Please continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shweta2728

Very nice! You write very well! Please continue soon!

Thanks. Ok will continue soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So nice update it was
pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome updates!! Love that baldev has decided not to forgive veera and also show that who is not laayak of whom also i just love amrit 👍🏼
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GUYS IF YOU WANT A PM THEN PLZ BUDDY ME AND LIKE THIS POST 😃
Like this post so its easy for me to find all the people that I have to PM 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice updates,

Veera is such a selfish cow, she doesn't really understand what she has done and how it affects people.

luv amrit, at least she is talking sense.
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Hey guys, if you want a pm then plz like this post -> Want a PM?
And you may have noticed that I've changed it to an SS from an OS cuz I think continue this a long way.. but if you feel like it isn't good and I should stop then don't hesitate to tell me 😉 ok enough of me.. now read and loathe Veera😆 (it's gonna be less negative soon dw🥱)
Ok now read..😆
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Part 5

~VeeBa SS~ Ab Aur Bardasht Nahi Hota (5)

Amrit dials Ranvi's number. Ranvi picks it up since he doesn't know who it is.

"Hello?"

"Hello Veerji. Me Amrit bol rai hoon. Veera ki dost."

"Amrit Veera ghar pe nai hai.. Phir kabhi call karna. By-"

"Rukiye! Phone mat kaatna please. Ek mint mujhe aapko kuch batana hai.. Aur aapko meri kasam, phone mat kaatna"

Ranvi is confused but doesn't cut the call.

Amrit puts the phone on loudspeaker and Veera talks. "Veerji?" Ranvi is shocked to hear Veera's voice. His motherly side speaks up "Veera? Tu- tu kitthe hai? Amrit to Delhi me hoti hai na? Tu utthe ki kar rai hai??"

"Veerji aapko Amrit ki to kasam hai par ab aapko meri bhi kasam.. Jab tak aap meri puri baat na suno tab tak phone mat kaatna.." Ranvi doesn't respond but he doesn't cut the call either so Veera hesitantly continues "Veerji me Amrit ke paas Delhi me hoon.. Mene Baldev ko chod dia.. Aapki khatir.. Kyunke aapne kaha tha wo khooni hai.. Mene usse vyah is liye kia kyunke me use is tarha hamesha ke liye chod dena chahti thi.."

Ranvi still doesn't respond. "Veerji? Veerji aap ho na utthe?"

And when Ranvi speaks, his voice is dry and emotionless.. "Me ki karan?"

Veera's eyes widen in shock but she consoles herself and says patiently "Veerji aap please mujhe apna lijiye. Mene sach me ini khyaalon se Baldev se vyah kia tha. Menu aapki kasam."

Ranvi knows his Veera would never lie to him so he says, "Ghar aa ja Veera" with silent tears running down his cheeks. He continues "is ghar.. Apne ghar"

Veera is smiling broadly and but then straightens her face and says "Nahi Veerji. Please. Me abhi nahi aana chahti. Abhi Baldev buhot ghusse me ho ga aur mujhse badla lene ki koshish kare ga. Me zaroor aungi par abhi nahi. Me yaha pe apna kuch kaam karna chahti hoon. Thoda sa us zindagi, us mahol se alag hona chahti hoon" Ranvi doesn't respond again. "Please Veerji. Aap samjhiye na.."

"Theek hai. Tu jitni der marzi wahan reh sakti hai. Par mujhse raabta zaroor rakhi."

"Okay Veerji by-"

"Ruk Veera! Ek mint.. Is shaadi ka kya?"

"Me is shaadi ko nahi maanti Veerji.. Mere liye iski koi ehmiyat nahi... Aur pind me bhi zyada logo ko iske bare me nahi pata, to please kisi ko mat kehna ke meri aur Baldev ki shaadi hui thi. Jinko pata hai wo apni ankhon ka dhoka samajh ke bhool jayenge phir kuch dino mein.. Please Veerji"

Amrit stares in disbelief again.

Ranvi takes a moment but then replies "Theek hai Veera. Apna khyaal rakhin"

"Ok Veerji. Bye"

Amrit looks at Veera once the phone is cut. "Veera tu to kabhi aisi nahi thi.. Tujhe to in rishton, in rasmon aur rawajon ki buhot fiqr hoti thi... Ab kya ho gaya hai tujhe...?"

"Itna pareshan mat ho Amrit. Me ab badal gayi hoon.." Veera tries to lighten the mood. "Par hamari dosti kabhi nahi badlegi" she turns to leave but Amrit stops her.

She looks very serious. "Veera, kya tu Baldev se pyaar karti hai?"

Veera nervously laughs and says "Ye tu kaun si baaten pakar ke baith gai? Chal chalte hai" she grabs Amrit's wrist to pull her along but Amrit pulls back.

"Mujhe jawab chahiye Veera.. Kya tum ab bhi Baldev se pyaar karti ho?.. Ya nahi?"

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Edited by veeba4eva - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki36

Nice updates,

Veera is such a selfish cow, she doesn't really understand what she has done and how it affects people.

luv amrit, at least she is talking sense.

I know what u mean par Veera ke actions ke peeche ek waja hai... And I know I love Amrit too haha...there had to be a peacekeeper somewhere warna baat aur bigad jaati 😲

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