~VeeBa SS~ Ab Aur Bardasht Nahi Hota (Part 15 on pg.10) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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not gonna comment on veera... nice update though at least amrit is sane and tries to voice some sanity 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice.
Though I hate Veera after the way she talked about Ballu to Veerji but still have a doubt that she is not what is trying to show...Kuch toh gadbad hain 😈
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry guys I haven't been updating for a while. Actually I had exams.. but now they're all over
ok here you go..
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Part 6

~VeeBa SS~ Ab Aur Bardasht Nahi Hota (6)

Veera is about to respond but just then Sunny comes and says

"Hey Amrit! Wo mujhe tera- whoa Veera! Tu kab ayi!?"

Veera is glad for the topic change but Amrit looks highly pissed.

Veera replies "Hey Sunny! kesa hai tu? Aa na idhar!"

But Amrit says "Nahi Sunny.. Wahin ruk! Hum abhi baat kar rahe hain.. Bus do mint de.." She tries to pull Veera aside but Veera holds back and says "are hamari baatein to hoti rahengi but abhi mujhe Sunny se baatein karni hai.. It's been forever yaar!!"

Veera walks over to Sunny and they start having a conversation but Amrit doesn't join. *Kuch to garbad hai.. Mujhe kehti hai Baldev galat hai, apne Veerji ko kehti hai Baldev galat hai par agar 'usse pyaar karti hai ya nahi' ye pucho to topic change.. Pyaar karti to use yun chod ke na aati... What are your feelings Veera jo pehli baar me bhi nahi par pa rahi..*
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Ranvi smiles as the call ends but turns around to see Gunjan standing there.

He runs over to her and picks her in his arms and twirls her around and says "GUNJAAAN GUNJAAAN GUNJAAAN!!!" Gunjan who feels dizzy by the motion says "Ranvi! Thalle utar na!! Fir gal karin.."

Ranvi lets her down and holds her by the shoulder and says "Gunjan meri Veera ne menu dhoka nahi dia!! Nahi dia dhoka!!" He's smiling broadly. Gunjan is initially happy but then her smile falters but Ranvi doesn't notice it because he's too happy. Gunjan slowly pieces things together *Agar Veera ne apne Veerji ko dhoka nahi dia to phir... Usne mere Veerji ko dhoka dia hai? Nahi nahi, Veera to unse buhot pyaar karti hai wo unhe dhoka nahi de sakti..*

Gunjan puts on a fake smile to talk to Ranvi. "Acha Ranvi bata na hua kya hai!!" Ranvi tells Gunjan everything Veera said over the phone and Gunjan is shocked. Ranvi doesn't notice her expression and says "acha ab menu ek kaam jana hai me abhi aata hoon" and leaves.

Gunjan leaves the house soon after he leaves and rushes over to Balwant's house. She goes to the hall and yells "Veerji! Beeji! Papaji! Kaha ho aap sab??" Balwant rushes over to the railing and says "o ki hoya puttar? Inna chilla kyun rai hai?"

"Acha tu aap sab upar ho.." Gunjan goes up the stairs and to Baldev's room.

"Veerji! Aapne menu dassa kyun nahi ke Veera aapnu chad ke chali gayi!?"

Baldev who was still sitting in his bed says "Tenu das ke ki faida? Tu bhi to unhi ke ghar ki hai.." And looks away.

Gunjans eyes widen in shock and her voice quietens "Veerji.. Kya aap bhool gaye ke jab aap Veera de naal mere sasural aaye the tab mene aapke paas aana chaha par Ranvi mujhe waha se le gaya tha?"

Baldev realizes he shouldn't have said that and tells Gunjan to come to him. She goes and sits on the side of his bed and he asks "Acha sari (sorry) par ab das tu kyun ayi thi?"


Gunjan tells Baldev everything Ranvi told her.. well not everything. She doesn't tell him that Veera went to Delhi.. she didn't want him to go after her. Even if her Veerji loved Veera, she didn't want him to get his heart broken again. If she learnt anything about Veera, it's the fact that this girl can't be trusted with anyones love except her own brother's. Veera only cared whether her Veerji was angry or happy with her or not, no one else mattered to her. Gunjan tells Baldev that Veera went to her friend's house.. not even her friend's name. But surprisingly to her, Baldev doesn't ask for details about her whereabouts.


Baldev faces Balwant and says "Dekha aapne Papaji.. chali gayi wo chad ke.. aur jese wo nahi chahti ke kisi ko hamari shaadi ke bari me pata chale me bhi nahi chahta. Ab meri zindagi me uski koi jaga nahi bachi."


Balwant stands with his head down and doesn't argue this time since all these things prove that Veera has changed... big time.


Gunjan stands up "Acha me ab nikalti hoon, mene ghar pe kisi ko nahi bataya ke me yaha aayi hoon"


Balwant replies "Theek hai puttar dehan se jaayi" She leaves.


"Beeji aap mere liye naashta bana do zara me tayyar ho kar aata hoon phir menu bhi nikalna hai"

Baldev says this and gets up to leave.

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After doing breakfast he leaves to meet his friends at the chai dhaba. Neither of them know about his wedding and he doesn't tell either.


"Acha ab menu ye pata karna hai ki menu kisne phasaya hai.. oye tum dono ko to yaqeen hai na ke mene koi khoon woon nahi kiya."


"o haan paaji" Jaggi and Billa reply in sync.


Jaggi speaks up "O paaji, tussi esa karo ke us jaga jao jaha Nihaal chachu ka qatl hua tha.. shayad wahan koi saboot mil jaye.."


"Haan paaji ae sahi ke ra hai" Billa adds.


"O baat to tum dono sahi kar rahe ho par agar menu waha kisi ne dekh liya na to boht bara masla ho jana hai.. khaas kar ke agar us Rajveer ne dekh liya to, wo phir koi ulti seethi baat kar ke menu bura bana de ga.. ek kaam karo, tum dono ja kar dekho aur phir mujhe batao jo kuch bhi pata chale.."


"Theek hai Paaji" they say and leave.


Next Part

Edited by veeba4eva - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys plz give comments and/or likes or I'll start to think that u don't like the story and I'll stop it 😭... but then you'll regret it cuz I its gonna get better... and I'm serious, seeing that my work is appreciated and looking at comments and likes makes me want to write more... so now it depends on you...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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what's veera hiding... btw thanks for the pm... nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for the PM..
It was short and crisp...kuch toh hain jo Veera chupa rahin hain.

Woh kuch aisa bann ne ki koshish kar rahin hain, jo woh nahin hain...update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update yaar! 👍🏼 Balbaggi down to jasoosi giri 😎 and veera is definitely very fishy🤔 can't wait for the next part, update soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zainabawoon

Awesome update yaar!👍🏼Balbaggi down to jasoosi giri😎 and veera is definitely very fishy🤔 can't wait for the next part, update soon😃

Ok will update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update😊
Can't wait 4 the nxt part
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sachhi!!! it is awesome. in my language,"valare nannayitund". bahut exciting ho raha hai story.
tum ne toh kamaal kar diya yaar.please pm me the next update when u update it.
i really loved the gunjan baldev scene.keep up the good work😊😃

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