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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

caught up with so many beautiful updates !!!
sorry for being so late vaishu ...i have so much on my plate these days...
so the leap has happened and now asya are going to get married ...good going!
now continue soon...i am dying to read zoya's reaction!

Thanku so much Shrashtu 🤗
Its ok jaan.
Ok i am posting it now.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hii guys.
How are you all?
Finally i am back with an update, firstly i am very sprry for being late.
I was really very busy with life and in future olso i ll be so plz sorry in advance.
So i this update is for those who kept on asking for this update. So as compensation here i am with long update.
Hope you guys like it.

Part 15

All functions were going smoothly all were happy except the bride.
As soon as laibaa, humi, ayaan nd rishabh came to know they came all annoyed to get there answers but haider stopped them and told them about the whole plan and told them to help him in hiding the name of asad from zoya.
In all these functions zoya was like a dead body who didnt have soul no feelings, haider and ol friends were sad but they knew this was the right thing for her.

Finally the day of marriage came, all were happy the hall was decorated like a bride. Everywhere only smoling faces were seen except in zoya's room.
She was getting ready when haider came there and saw her sitting lifeless.

Haider- zoya.
Zoya came out of her trance and said jee Bhaijaan.
Haider cupped her face and said 'see zoya i know you are not happy but trust me this marriage will give you a guaranteed hapiness. In starting you wont accept it with heart but later uh ll be happy.
Zoya was confused and shocked. How do you know Bhaijaan that i am not happy and anyways i cant be happy now.
Haider replied back. Thats not important uh tell me do you trust me? Zoya nodded.
Haider said and i trust Allah he cant do wrong with you.
Zoya just hugged him and thought. Noone can make everything right bhaijaan not even Allah.
The brother sister share some sweet moments and finally they left for the marriage ceremony.

Zoya was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't listen to the name of her would be husband. And finally they both said qubool hai.
All came and congratulated the couplez just than when she saw his face.
She skipped a beat, the person she loved for her life was her husband. How can this be possible. She was very much confused about everything. She needed answers, now every word of haider was making sense. She was feeling betrayed. Noone told her anything.
She was angry but than she cooled her down and for the sake of her parents she kept quiet and went with flow.

Soon it was time for ruksati. All were crying but zoya didnt shed even a single tear.

Firstly asad was mesmerized by her beauty, be was shocked when she said qubool hai easily. But soon he assumed that she didn't listened the name. Because after sometime when she saw him she had many emotions written on his name. Sadness, shocked, confused, anger and betrayal also he guess so.
But during the ruksati time she didn't shed and tears, he was hurt for hurting her to this extent. He was determined that he need to bring her zoya back.

After ruksati they all returned to KV. Zoya was in awe to see such a beautiful house but she didn't showed that.
After a lot of teasing session from najma and his friends he finally entered his room to find the room dark and zoya standing near window looking outside without any expressions. She was still in her bridal dress she was looking breathtaking only one thing was missing. Smile. That angelic dimpled smile was missing.

Asad's pov

I walked to her, she didn't turned towards me as if she didn't acknowledged my presence.
I hesitantly started the conversation. Hii zoya
Silence. No reply from her.
Yaha kya kar rahi ho zoya? I asked. And this time she turned towards me.
Oh. I am sorry i should be at bed waiting for you. After all you are my husband and you would wanting to send night with me. So come lets send the night. While saying all this she was normal no anger nothing. She was saying as a matter of fact she didn't had a single tear in her eye. and other second she unpinned her dupatta which was covering her tummy and front body.
Asad was shocked. Zoya i am sorry.
Zoya asked have you done any mistake?
Asad pleaded plz zoya stop these sarcastic comments its hurting me. I am sorry. Zoya again said. I am really sorry if i sound sarcastic i didnt mean to hurt you.
Asad now shouted. Bas zoya lado mujhse gussa karo chahe toh maro but dont treat me like this.
Zoya said this time honestly. Sorry mr. Khan but gussa ek bahut strong emotion hai and i dont get angry on strangers. I dont even know you. I dont have right to beat you, you did what you felt was right.
Asad was hurt beyond the limits he just said one thing. Zoya maine jo galti ki hai use sudhar ke rahunga. I ll wait for you till my death.
Zoya wanted to shut him up for thinking about death but she controlled herself and said Asad for me marriage is a very pure relation i ll never break this relation, i ll fulfill all duties of a wife let it be the physical one, i ll fulfill all duties of a daughter in law. But dont expect me to love you.
Asad tried to talk further zoya... But zoy didn't listen and went to bathroom to change in night dress. After changing she came out and slept on one side of bed. She slept in a bqby position taking the minimum space.
Asad was hurt would be an understatement, but he cant be weak he need to be strong.

Next morning sun rays hit asad's face he got up to see zoya nowhere. Than he heard voices from washroom
After 5 minutes zoya came out wearing red anarkali suit drying her hair with towel, as soin as asad saw her his beat skipped she was luking ethereal.
Zoya looked at him but didnt reacted. She sat in front of mirror to get ready.
She dried her hair with blow drier applied a little compaq on face and kohl in eyes.
all this while asad staring at her like love struck teenager.
Zoya without giving any importance she left the room to prepare breakfast.
Asad was like shocked to how much extent he has changed her zoya but he was determined to bring her back.
He too got up took bath and got ready in casuals. He prayed to God.
Allah plz mujhe himat dena ki main apni zoya ko vapis la saku. Main janta hu maine galti ki hai par ek doosra mauka toh har koi deserve karta hai. Allah hum sab par apni reham banaye rakhna.
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Zoya straight away went to kitchen where dilshadd was preparing breakfast and najma was helping her.
Zoya- i am sorry main bahut late ho gayi kya?
Dilshaad- nahi beta. Hum abhi aaye hai.
Najma- hi bhabhi.
Zoya said biting her tongue i am so sorry i forgot to wosh you. Gud morning ammi and gud morninf najma.
Both chuckled at her innocence and said its ok.
Zoya asked excited so what are we making?
Dilshadd replied Aaloo ke parathe asad loves it. But he ll not eat it.
Zoya asked why? Najma replied bevause Bhaijaan is health conscious.
Zoya thought to herself. Tabhi itne fit hai.
Zoya than said acha Ammi can i make it?
Dilshaad said but you dont need to. Zoya replied but i want to ammi.
Dilshaad replied ok as you wish. Najma said excitedly i will help.
Zlha said strictly no you both go and rest i ll do it myself.
Dilshaad started but. ,zoya cut her in between plz ammi i make good food.
Dilshaad said i am sure. They both left and sat in living Area.
Zoya first boiled potatoes while doing that she burned her hand a lil but didn't tell to anyone.

After sometime all came at breakfast table. Zoya greeted rashid and they all started with breakfast.
Dilshaad- aaj khana zoya ne banaya hai.
Rashid- acha ji. Chalo khake dekhte hai.
As soon as asad listened he stopped her ammi who was making sandwich for him. Ammi today i am in a mood of eating parathe.
All had their faces opened in shock. Najma came to him and checked his forehead. Bhaijaqn aap thik toh hai na?
Asad replied ha kyu? Dilshaad sad because you are eating parathe.
Asad blushed nothing like that ammi.
Dilshaad than said oh tumhari biwi ne banaye isliye.
With this statement zoya blushed a little but hid it but asad saw this and was happy knowing that she still have some hopes.
They all had there breakfast, after completing the work zoya went in room. Zoya and family was getting shock on shock. Firstly asad having aaloo paratha than he took off from office. Zoya came to know that asad is a workaholic so she was alsp shocked.

She was applying ointment on burned area when asad came in he saw and panicked.
Asad came to her zoya kya hua? Tell na.
Zoya was touched seeing his concern but replied coldly. Nothing choti si chot hai isse badi badi chote di hai life ne. Saying so she went from there.
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After sometime they both were sitting in room, zoya on bed doing something on mobile and asad on couch doing nothing but showing as if working on laptop.
Asad was now getting jealous of that phone because from last 30 minutes she doing something on it.
Finally to her luck najma called her and she in hurry forgot to lock the screen
As soon as she left he saw what she was doing.
DIARY like seriously this girl was writing diary. Chalo lets read whats in it.

Dear diary.
Hii. Usually i dont write diaries but now i have so much to share but cant share witg anyone. So thought of writing it, i am using mobile's application because i dont have any personal space where i can keep my diary.
So yesterday i got married with the person whom i loved whole life but still i was not fully happy not fully sad. I felt cheated because neither my friends nor my brother told me about asad i just wanted to run away from there but because of my parents happiness i didn't go. I entered the house it was just beautiful but i was not happy.
Than i was sent to asad's room, he ane and asked me many things said sorry but he can't be forgiven so easily i cant trust him. He made me so strong that mujhe aansu tak nahi aaye main bilkul heartless ho gayi hu itnq ki he was staring at me and i just ignored it well he deserve this punishment.
He still cares for me, i dont want to know the reason because than i wont be able to hide my feelings. I dont want yo love him he deserves my hatred.
Chalo bye he is staring me for so long. Bye.

Asad read it and he ont kniw he should be happy that he still has some chance or he should be sad for breaking her.

So this is it. How was it?
I hope you guys like it.
Bye gudnyt tc sd
Love Vish ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyy...Vish.. 😊
Well i have read this story a while back...and i have read your previous story also...ABBU UR ONLY MINE AND AMMI'S...and i really liked this story...also but commenting here for the first time...😳
I really liked this update...
Asad is going to have a tough time manofying Zoya... 😆
Waiting eagerly for the next part...
Continue soon.. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you for the pm

res

Kya likhoon???

Happy that they got married Sad that they are both hurting

Hopeful that all will be well


Edited by Chahanya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was really good!

Just loved it!

I'm happy that they are married...

Feeling sorry for both Asad and Zoya... 😔

I hope they sort out their issues soon...

Continue soon and thanks for the PM...



- Sushma
Edited by -Sushma- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
unres
oya-hoye meri Cheethye FABULOUS UPDATE
through this Update: it seems Zoya still have some feelings for Asad(let it be love or be it hate)but she does have&as we all know Love&Hate are two side of same coin.

And,Dhani I don't want Zoya to give in easily,not this time
So,Make Asad suffer

also I love it❤️ yar
Try to Update Soon
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part. Finally they r married. I know asad will win her all over again.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow
finally they got married...Zoya said yes without listening anything.
finally she is at her home in KV
happy that they got married...but sad that Zoya is very upset...
tuff road ahead asad...
but you said earlier that Zoya is in Bhopal and Asad was in Mumbai...
so this two gonna stay in Bombay or staying with the family in Bhopal
thanks for the update, continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Both feeling in one update
Happy & sad. Hope he will show her soon that what she means to him. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

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