Arshi FF:- Cruel Fate - Chapter 16 (PG 135) Updated Mar 7-16 - Page 56

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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey I am from a.p.your ff is so nice.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sahi_sai

Hey I am from a.p.your ff is so nice.


Thank you sai. :)
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I am in Chapter 5 I write a lot so I can not read alot but I love your story ❤️very great imagination I can only encourage you to continue I like the way in which arnav found khushi I still cry when I read each chapter❤️
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I read chapter 6 and 7 beautiful,👍🏼 I liked how arnav was sandwiched between his family,😆👏 I have a question !! it means Gudiya❓
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Originally posted by: fattiwriter

I read chapter 6 and 7 beautiful,👍🏼 I liked how arnav was sandwiched between his family,😆👏 I have a question !! it means Gudiya❓


what question do you have?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pinky.Raizada


what question do you have?

why khushi call her daughter gudiya
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Originally posted by: fattiwriter

why khushi call her daughter gudiya


That is the pet name that Khushi gave to her daughter. But our Jr. ASR doesn't like that name.😆
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Hello Darlings, Here is teaser for Chapter 12. Will try to post the full update today night or tomorrow (US time).

Chapter 12 teaser

Arnav kissed his kids and went to his room. He heard the shower running and his mind started with gutter thoughts. He went to the knob to open, but Khushi locked the door. Arnav cursed his luck and his devil mind tried another way to punish his wife. Just then he heard the shower turning off and set his plan in action. He quickly locked the door and poolside door to stop unwanted Raizada interruption. He also put his phone on silent. He then saw Khushi's phone and put it on silent too. Then Khushi opened the door with just blouse and petticoat. She was about to grab sari to wear it, she saw Arnav with his hand on his back.

"Ouch, My back"

"What happened Arnav?" asked a worried Khushi.

"This is all because of your punishment. My back's hurting for sleeping on the floor"

Khushi got panicked and touched his sore back and Arnav fake hissed his pain.

"Arnav let me massage you"

"It is not necessary Khushi. It is a punishment right, let me bear it"

"Arnav, your punishment was to sleep outside not bear back pain. Now stop arguing and lie on bed and let me massage." Ordered Mrs. ASR.

"OK, Mrs. ASR." Arnav went and sat on the bed. "Khushi, I can't lift my shirt, will you help me." Asked Arnav will little pout.

Khushi's heart melted and went towards Arnav. "OK, baby. Let me help you."

I hope you liked the teaser 😳

For PM's buddy Pinky.PM

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Edited by Pinky.Raizada - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome teaser...
asr wil never chng...

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