Rishbala SS- Lamhe COMPLETED @page 38

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noiseygirl

@noiseygirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#221

mindblowing ending
I always wanted this kind of ending in our show
thanks for such writing
But n really upset ...u r going to terminate ur writings
goona miss u
best of luck 4 ur future
be in touch
God bless u

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

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Posted: 10 years ago

#222

hey Neha...sorry dear..I read ur story but You know I wasn't able to give you any comment ot congratulate you then..

but Babe...awesoem you are...topper in first sem...woww...keep coimng to MB forum which makes you happy and everything goes well then..

coming to the update...Oh MY...this story has ended ..

I so loved this...the update is a mix of emotion, love..

Sullu ullu gone..godd for him..I can't tolerate him and then Natasha...ufff seriously she is LADY RK>...

RK slapped her..oops...mistake is a mistake for him...hayee hayee...angry young man,,,

Madhu...as usual...helped Natasha to understand his love and did that for RK...awww...so cute..

Honeymoon and hot passionate update...ooh lala...such a treat...😳

and then epilogue...ohh triplets..woww...so many things in one update...loved it...👏

hopign to get a new story from you...party toh banta hai yaar...u topped in MBA sem...yayayayayyaya

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manna43

@manna43

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Posted: 10 years ago

#223

First of all congratulations being topper. Now about updates great how beautifully u ended the story .Why r u quit writing. U r a very good writer .I want to read more stories from u .Please don't stop writing. Use ur talent n entertain us.