Rishbala SS- Lamhe COMPLETED @page 38 - Page 21

Created

Last reply

Replies

225

Views

35k

Users

40

Likes

816

Frequent Posters

Love-Blossoms thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
Firstly let me share my happiness with u all . I have topped in mba first semester 😃just cant believe it . Thankss to all of u who always supported me n prayed for my success thanxx a ton guyss .
n as i m so happy so i m completing this story today . Thanxx to all of u for being a part of this ss . It wldnt have been possible without u guyss . Thanks to all of u .
Those who dnt know abt sujal kashish let me clarify it , they were the leads of ektas show kahin to hoga which aired on star plus in 2003 to 2006 . The couple was extremely popular among masses infact they have won the most jodi awards in tv industry n r still remembered by many ppl .n they will
always remain my first love i m just damm crazy for rajeev aamna as sujal kashish n that is the reason i included them . If someone is offended with me including my fav. pair then i m really sorry
but i cldnt find any other gud luking pair beside rm n i cant include abhiya bcoz vd cant play double role 😆. So hope its fyn with u guys .
PART 11

All turned around shocked to see sultan standing at the door
with a evil smirk. Madhu got scared n holded rks hand tightly
n sujal picked up aayush in his arms as he was scared with
the gun shot. Sultan smirked n luked at natasha n then rk
''must say rk u have one daring sister she slapped me
n then got me locked up but she forgot that i m the don i
can get out of anywhere after ruining my marriage with
before he cld even say with madhu rk shouted '' sultan
dnt u dare take my madhus name with ur dirty mouth
otherwise u cant even imagine wat i can do to u ''
''ohh the superstar got angry , i like it ''n he
started laughing like mad n madhu was reminded of
balraj seeing him .'' but i m not here to harm u
but to kill ur darling sister ''''dnt u dare to
even lay a eyes on my sister '' rk roared
n walked forward n grabbed his throat.
''bhai'' natasha shouted .She came forward
n pulled rk back . she glared at sultan
'' wat do u want u filthy ass '' n sultan grabbed
her hand n pulled her towards him n pointed the
gun at her head . ''sultan leave her '' sujal n rk shouted
at the same time .''ohh my is that ur lover ''
sujal n rk came forward n sultan pointed the gun at them .
madhu was scared n terrified , nothing was making
sense to her it seemed to her as if her happiness
will be ruined forever. her voice was blocked , she
cldnt even speak , it was wen she saw aayush shivering
seeing his mother like that n she immediately picked him up
in her hands n only she cld hear was his sobbing n terrified
voice calling '' mumma mmuma''.

''Leave her sultan watever u want i ll give u but plss leave
her ''rk said n sujal looked at natasha with tears filled in his
eyes. ''PLSS leave her , we will give u our all property''
sujal said hoping he wld leave her now money didnt
mattered to him the only thing that mattered to him at that
moment was her life .'' ahh seems both of u r ready to become
bankrupt for this girl wat a love '' n everyone felt
disgusted with him . ''sultan atleast fear frm god'' padmini said
all of a sudden .''ohh mrs. mallik u r here too so sorry i forgot
to see u ahh u r telling me to fear frm god really keep ur
mouth shut otherwise before her i ll shoot u n my madhu will hate me more''
''she is not ur madhu got that she is mine n only mine ''rk shouted
with rage even in this situation he cldnt bear anyone calling madhu as
theirs .'' stop shouting rishabh kundra otherwise i ll kill u
too bcoz of ur sister my kaka n aryan died in accident
bcoz of her i lose my son so how can i let her live ''
''she didnt do anything it is u who is responsible
for all this sultan'' madhu said disgusted finally having
enough of his ramblings.'' i hate myself that i even befriended
u n saved u i shd have let u die only then this day wldnt have
come u used me n now u r here to spoil my family just go away ''
''ohh the sherni madhubala is speaking i like it
but first i ll kill her n then take u away with me ''
n with this he started to press the trigger n natasha
luked at her bhai n sujal n closed her eyes as she wasnt
even able to speak as sultan was cluthching her throat
with his one hand.'' no '' everyone
shouted .he pressed the trigger n bullet was fired
n everyone was shocked . There heart was in their mouth
but it wasnt natasha who was shot . Feeling his hold
getting lightier she quickly pushed him backwards
n ran in rks arms . Sultan fell down clutching his
leg which was not bleeding n he turned around to
see bittuji standing with the gun .Rk sighed in
relief n gave natasha to sujal as she was
shivering n walked upto sultan with a smirk.
''u ll kill my sister u ass'' he grabbed him by
his collar n started punching him in anger.
punch 1 '' this is for using my madhu''
punch 2 ''this is for calling her urs''
punch3'' this is for touching her''
punch 4''this for hurting my sister''
punch5 '' this is for coming in our lives''
punch6'' n ''this is for even daring to ruin my marriage.''
Sultan was bleeding heavily now so rk pushed him n started to walk off
wen having the chance he took out his knife n was abt to stab rk
wen sujal noticed it n shouted'' rk'' n he jumped in the middle
pushing rk away n getting the knife only stab in his biceps.
''Sujal '' natasha shouted terrified seeing him hurt .
Sujal grabbed sultans throat n pushed him back with the knife falling back
n as the police came wen sultan was abt to stab him again the acp fired him
in his head n he fell down on the ground dead.

''Sujal'' rk holded him as he was falling down.
''bittuji call the doctor''natasha shouted
seeing him going unconcious. Seeing his blood
she recalled veers body with blood n her body began going numb.
Everyone rushed to help him n they made him lie down
on the sofa . The doctor came n nursed his wound
as the knife didnt go much inside , the wound
was not deep .Rk noticed natashas state n assured
her that he will be fyn .After an hour or so
sujal gained conciousness n all thanked god
to save him frm some bigger mishap. ''u r also
one drama king now i bet '' rk joked n all started
laughing .''y only u have rights to show ur
heroism '' he said with a hint of humour
n his smile vanished away as he saw natasha
standing quitely . She looked pale n hurt .
Madhu noticed in his direction n told him
''she is scared u shd talk to her ''.
nodding he walks upto her n as soon as he
stood beside her she hugged him all of a sudden
n started crying '' wat was the need to do this
if something wld have happened to u
wat i wld have done ''n that was it
the realization dawn on her n she pushed him all
of a sudden shocking him as well as everyone .
''y did u came here wat do u think if u ll do
all this i ll start loving u , no i wont
just go away i dnt want to see u '' n she ran away
to her room n tears flowed frm his eyes n he luked
at rk who was now breathing anger seeing her again
hurting him .

Rk marched upto her room with madhu following him
calling his name . she knew how angry he was at
present n he wont even spare natasha this time .
He opened her room n saw her holding veers
photo n he became more angry n walked upto
her n grabbed the photo frm her n threw it away.
''Bhai'' she asked shocked seeing his action.
She was abt to go n pick up the photo
wen rk grabbed her n SLAP.

Scroll down for part 12 .
Edited by NehaVdian - 10 years ago
Love-Blossoms thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
PART 12

Rk looked at her with rage n her hands went to her
cheek where he had just slapped . Madhu was equally
shocked with his action , she cldnt even imagine
that rk wld slap the sister he loves the most .
''rk''madhu rushed to him n holded his arms.
''rk calm down plss its not the way to talk''
but both brother n sister were glaring at each
other. After it seems ages nats spoke with pain
in her voice '' how dare u slap me rk ''
'' i dare to slap u natasha kundra bcoz u deserve it
pretty well infact i shd have slapped u yrs ago
wen u first time broked his heart n crushed it
into pieces ''''so now only he matters to u
not me ''''i m surprise to see that u r asking
me this after all these yrs . wat the hell u think of
urself haan who has given u right to hurt him
like this, he doesnt say it doesnt mean u ll keep
on hurting him n rejecting him ''
'' wat do u want me to do betrasy my veer for him ''
''accepting sujal doesnt mean u r betraying veer
get that in ur thick skull, but whom am i even talking
the stubborn natasha kundra , go on n hurt him
n urself n even veers soul i wont even say a word to u
now '' n he started to walk off leaving a stunned madhu
n natasha. He reached the door n turned around n said
in a defeated voice ''i promise dad to always keep u happy
n to make u go on right path always but today i feel i broke
his promise n i m only a looser who cant do anything
neither for his sister nor his best frnd '' n he walked
off with tears in his eyes .

Natasha sat down on the floor luking in the direction which
rk went n madhu kneeled down beside her n hugged her to calm
her down . Tears were flowing frm both their eyes as nats
cried her heart out .''Shhh... nats relax , calm down
plsss ''''madhu he hates me my bhai hates me ''she said
with tears flowing .''He doesnt hate u , rk can never
hate u he is just angry at u for being stubborn ,
dnt misunderstand him . He cares for u a grt deal to even hate u
but y r u doing this to urself n to sujal i know u love him too
i can see it in ur eyes then y r u not accepting it ''.
''i dnt love him bhabhi '' she said getting up angrily .
n madhu also got angry now seeing her stubborness.
''really u dnt love him then y were u jealous
seeing that girl waving him , y did ur world stopped wen he
got hit by the knife n y did u told him that if something
wld have happened to him then wat will u do ''madhu said
maker look towards him n she cldnt look in her eyes .

''Y r u not looking in my eyes wen u dnt love him ''
tell me .''i dnt need to justify myself to u ''
''u dam need to justify urself to me natasha kundra
bcoz i m ur bhabhi n above all a woman who had
just got her husband back once again n that is y i
m telling u not to do this to urself , to sujal n
mostly to my rk , i cant see him broken bcoz of
u ''.''i cant betray veer '' she said helplessly.
Madhu made her sit on the bed n got veers pic
n sat beside her '' y do u think u r betraying
him being happy is not betraying him but giving
peace to his soul''.''u dnt believe me na
''close ur eyes n ask ur veer to answer u
today''She did as madhu told her to do n after
a minute she opened her eyes n caressed veers
picture n started crying clutching to her heart .
Madhu smiled seeing her victory .
''U know if only someone wld have explained me n rk
all these things then our ego wldnt have played this
much with us we wld have never been seperated .
rk was stubborn to realise his love n i became
stubborn to give up on him but destiny played its
card well n got us together . u dnt do the
same mistake which we did we all want u happy
n its with sujal ''.

Natasha hugged madhu n cried .''Will he forgive
me i have hurted him so much ''''we hurt those
only whom we love but if it makes u feel better
then he will forgive u n even love u all the more ''
''n wat abt bhai ''madhu smiled n answered
''well u know ur bhai more than me so can he
stay angry with u for long '' she smiled
n nodded no .'' now stop crying n go get ur
love before he goes away forever ''.

''I slapped her''rk finally spoke up
breaking the silence in the hall . Since the time
he came back frm her room he had been quite
n he finally felt like bringing out his
anguish .''rishu u slapped natasha '' radhaji
asked bewildered . Rk has not even let a fly hurt his
sister n today he raised his hand on her .
''i dnt know maa how my hand raised up today ''
rk said helplessly n then he luked at sujal
who was abt to go .''where r u going?''
i m going back rk tell her i m sorry that i came
here n hurted her but i saved u only bcoz u r my best frnd
n i cldnt see u in pain bcoz it brings pain to her
i dnt have any other hidden motive '' he said
controlling his tears .Rk cldnt help but feel
more guilty for doing this to him .
''i know all of this plss dnt go its my wedding
n i need my best frnd with me ''
''plss rk let me go plss she will be hurt with my presence
n i dnt want her hurt anymore ''.

He was abt to step out of the door wen he heard
her voice saying ''u dnt have to think abt my hurt
u can pretty well stay for ur best friend''. He turned
around to see her n noticed her walking all calmly .
Even rk was surprised to see her n at the back
he noticed madhu coming in slow steps .Rk ignored
her n rushed to madhu n pulled her in his embrace
n she sobbed . Natasha walked upto him n he luked
away ,'' i said u can stay over here ''
''i dnt want to stay with u '' he said
finally standing up for his broken heart .
''then how will u stay with me after marriage
my dear wld be husband''n all luked at her
shocked n rk luked at madhu who smiled
nodding her head in yes .

Sujal luked at her shocked n luked in her eyes
which were now filled with tears .Without even
letting her say anything he pulled her
n hugged her tightly n she hugged him back
this time with all the love she had for him .
They parted n they rested their forehead on
each other n with closed eyes let their tears fall.
''i know i have hurted u a lot but if u can plss
forgive me .i dnt know how, wen n where i started
to feel for u but just u know that i love u a lot
sujal i cant live without u ''''shhh u dnt have to
explain to me neither ask me for my forgiveness
i was never angry at u ''''Wat r u made up off
dnt u ever get hurted dnt u feel the pain
all these yrs i hurted u n u never ever said a word
to me y sujal y by doing this u have
made me ur criminal ''
''dnt say all that if u r hurt then i m hurt
n how can i hurt u wen all i want is to love
u kashish i love u kashish dnt ever leave
me again ''''i love u too n i promise
i wont leave u ever not even wen u say
it ''n both laughed n hugged each other .

Rishbala hugged each other , finally they succeeded
in their mission .''thanku madhu u dnt have idea
how happy i m today u saved her frm doing the mistake
which i did ''''rk i didnt do anything, its ur
love that made me realise how important u were
to me n i just said that to her n made her
realise ,i m glad rk that i came back to u
u gave me everything i love u ''
''i love u too ''n the love birds hugged
each other n there families smiled
in relieve seeing the union of four souls which were
always made for each other.

Scroll down for epilouge .
Edited by NehaVdian - 10 years ago
Love-Blossoms thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
EPILOUGE

Warning - The part in RED is adult content so read it at ur own risk.

The bro n sis united happily after throwing daggers
at each other .Rk was not giving in but after lot of
pesturing frm madhu n sujal he finally forgave his
lil sister making her promise that she wont hurt herself
n sujal anymore n will stay happy forever.Natasha was
worried over something which didnt went unnotice by rk .
She was sitting in her room lost in her thoughts
wen he came in '' u r worried abt aayushs paternity ''
she looked at him stunned '' how did u know it''
''i m ur brother i can read ur face n u dnt have
to wrry abt it , aayush was , is n will remain my
son but now he is even sujals sons n i want his name
to be put with aayushs'' he said surprising her.
''no rk aayush will have ur name always ''
sujal said entering the room .''wat r u saying
dude , how can this be possible ''''y not
surely aayush will be my son but he is going to
put ur name always i havent done enough for him yet
to take ur place n if u r okay with it then only
i lll marry her otherwise ''''fyn u both r two crazy
heads ''n natasha thanked sujal with her eyes .
''bro u shd sleep its ur wedding tomorrow
n i dnt want u having dark cricles ''
''shut up ''n both rk n sujal walked off
wishing her gud night.

The next day was a hectic one as it was the wedding day .
Both rm were excited as they were finally going to be one .
ydays event have left a bitter taste but bittujis
presence of mind saved there wedding . Rk had given bittuji
his gun in the morning as he was feeling something wrong might happen
n as bittuji was out for some work so wen sultan came he had
quickly called the police n they had told him that while shifting
him to other jail he ran off n he even killed bhujang n his men .
police explained to bittuji how to shoot on his leg n taking gods name
he did that saving there day n now no evil was there in their life.

Finally it was evening , the time for grand wedding of the superstar
n his lady love . Rishbala were sitting in the mandap stealing
glances at each other .Rk was wearing a golden designer sherwani n madhu
was wearing matching red colour lehenga , both were luking like
some royal king n queen . It was time to take pheras n they stood
up n holding there hands they started going around the holy fire
promising each other to support n love each other forever .
After the pheras rk filled madhus maang with sindoor n tied
the nupital chain around her neck finally making her
officially madhubala rishabh kundra . The whole hall
applauded for the newly weds n both rm shared a eyelock
with tears in there eyes .Everyone came n blessed the couple
on the stage n sujal , natasha n aayush came together n
rk picked up aayush in his arms n gave a kiss n he too kissed
on their cheeks making madhu blush all the more .
''congratsss ''both sujal n nats wished them n
hugged them .''here its ur wedding gift frm both of us ''
sujal said giving a envelope to rk .rk opened it
n was surprised to see honeymoon package to paris for 10 days .
''but how can we go for honeymoon now wat abt ur wedding ''
''ohh my sacrificial brother u go n njoy ur honeymoon
we will get married after 10 days in london . we r taking everyone
to london with us tomorrow n u ppl come directly frm paris n no
more ifs n buts plsss ''madhu blushed to beet root red hearing abt her honeymoon.

The music started n natasha luked at sujal n he winked at her
n both dragged rm to the dance floor .Both the couples
got lost into each others eyes n started swaying along
with the romantic music .

thodasa pyar hua hai, thoda hai baki
thodasa pyar hua hai, thoda hai baki
thodasa pyar hua hai, thoda hai baki
thodasa pyar hua hai, thoda hai baki
ham toh dil de hi chuke
o ham toh dil de hi chuke, bas teri han hai baki
thoda sa pyar hua hai, thoda hai baki
thoda sa pyar hua hai, thoda hai baki

kaun sa mod aaya, zindgi ke safar me
bas gaya tu hi tu, ab to meri nazar me
dil ki har ek dhadkan, tujhko pehchanti hai
meri chahat hai ab kya, tu nahi janti hai
mai tuhje jan gayi, tujhko pehchan gai
phir bhi teri ha hai baki
thoda sa pyar hua hai, thoda hai baki
thoda sa pyar hua hai, thoda hai baki

aaj ye kya hua hai, dil nahi mera bas me
is liye sochti hu, tod du sari rasme
umrr bhar ke liye, tu aa mera sath de de
tera ho jaunga mai, haatho me hath de de
hatho me hath sahi, tu mere sath sahi
phir bhi teri ha hai baki
thoda sa pyar hua hai, thoda hai baki
thoda sa pyar hua hai, thoda hai baki
thoda sa pyar hua hai, thoda hai baki.

The song ended n both madhu n natasha hugged
their better halfs who were still lost in their
angels beauties n magnificent eyes .After the dinner
madhus bidaayi was done n they left for rk mansion to begin
there new life .

After all the rituals were taken care off , rishbala left for paris
as they had flight in sometime much to rks amusement that they have
got them immediate honeymoon. They reached paris after a long tiresome
journey n as soon as they were led to their honeymoon suite
they were surprised to see the room decorated for there
suhaagraat.Madhu blushed making rk chuckle n he immediately
scooped her in his arms making her squeal in laughter.
''wat r u doing put me down rk '''' biwi wat couples do
on their suhaagraat ''n he placed her gently on the bed n came over her .

For 18+ only
Madhu luked at him with passion filled eyes matching his own
n rk captured her lips finally .the kiss was slow n passionate
at first but soon it turned into wild as there desires increased for each
other . Madhu wrapped her arms around his neck n kissed him back with
equal vigour n passion .Rk squeezed her tiny waist with one hand
n cupped her face with other planting soft feathery kisses
on her face n neck . Finally not able to control himself
he started removing her dress n she started removing his shirt .
finally they both were naked n wen their naked bodies came in contact
a burning sensation was caused in them . Rk started kissing her passionately
on her every inch making her moan in pleasure . He sucked her
nipples n bited them making her nipples red n then he planted soft kisses
all along her chest area . Madhu grabbed handfull of his hairs in her hand
n pulled him towards her lips n they again got involved in sensous kiss.
They rolled over n over again n madhu kissed his chest n neck n
caressed his abs making him groan .She bited him on his neck
which increased his desires n he rolled over again n started
kissing n biting her neck .Finally wen he cldnt take it anymore
he entwined there hands n entered her n tears flowed frm her eyes
before she cld scream he took her lips in his n kissed her making her
forget the pain. Wen he was sure she was ok he thrusted in her
more again n again n started moving in her making her moan in
pleasure .They climaxed in ach others arms n rk rolled to his side
taking madhu with him n she put her head on his chest n both
of them drifted to sleep .

Rms days at paris were grt , they got to know each other
better n there nights were pleasurable in there love
making . Finally there honeymoon ended in they took
fight to london to get the the other two love birds married.

3 years later.

''wat r u seeing like that biwi ''rk asked to
madhu in the mirror wen he noticed her starinng at him .
''everyday u look at me n today i m looking at u ''
she replied cheekily .''so wat new did u found in
me today biwi''''rk seriously it has been 5 yrs
since we met n today i m seeing that superstar
rk even puts cold cream'' n she burst out laughing .
''huh y only u girls have right to put cream
not we guys n i m putting this cold cream bcoz of cold
not for fairness''.''keep on laughing like mad
n see even u r getting wrinkles ''
''give me cream ''''let me put biwi''
n he applied it on her nose n then cheeks n
then bringing his cheeks close to her he rubbed his cheeks
with hers making her smile n both started caressing each others face
with cream happily laughing at there antics .

''mumma , papa where r u ?''said the kids while entering the house .
After a yr of marriage rishbala were blessed with triplets
whom they named ''vibha, maya n arjun''.
n later on a new member joined them too , the symbol of
sujal n his kashishs love who was named(ritisha)by rk
n madhu .Aayush being the elder brother adored all
his three sisters n brother , but still aayush was
the fav. child of sujal n rk n they always loved him more
making the rest four fight for there attention.

Sujal n nats had made there lovely world in london
n rm stayed in mumbai along with there families .
n in every vacations rk brings everyone to london
to have fun time n it was such time wen they all were
in london n now there kids must have definately done something .

Both the parents came out n got shocked to see there kids
filled with mud .'' wat did u all do ''both rk n sujal
asked at the same time .''aayush wat happened ''
sujal asked checking him out concernly .
''ohh my look at the fathers love ur son looks
as if he had beaten someone n u r only seeing him ''
nats said faking shocking gaining a glare frm her hubby .
rk also joined him n started checking everyone out .
''rk u dnt have to check our brats , do they even luk
that someone can hurt them '' n nats gave her a high5.

''Papa , dad we all r fyn ''aayush spoke finally.
''then y r u all covered in mud ''sujal asked raising his brow
at aayush .''dad come in na i ll tell u , not here
otherwise mumma is going to kill me '' he said getting scared
frm his mother .rk chuckled gaining a glare frm madhu n nats .

''papa aayush bhaiya won the cycle race but that nikhils
bhaiyya cheated n he pushed aayush bhaiiya n then all of us
n then we all fought with him''vibha, maya n arjun said
cutely n ritisha just on her mothers lap .''aww my babies ''
rk said cutely n hugged them making madhu roll her eyes .
''who is nikhil now ?''sujal asked irritatedly .
''dad he lives nearby''aayush replied n sujal luked
at nats asking ''y dont i know abt this n that ass
he pushed my son how dare he '' sujal asked getting
angry n was abt to go out to break his bones
wen nats stopped him '' wat r u going to do''
''break his bones''yeah come even i want to break his bones
now how dare he hurt my kids ''n all the five kids
smirked at each other finally getting the support
of there fathers .
''yes lets go''sujal said to rk n they were abt to
step out wen both the wives spoke in unison
''patidev stop now otherwise u two r sleeping on couch
today''n both the mens stopped n luked at each other
n the girls shared a gud laugh n walked inside
taking the kids with them .
''till now they manage to make us run around them in circles ''
both spoke in unison n burst out laughing.

THE END
The song used is frm the film MAINE DIL TUJHKO DIYA .you can find video on utube .if isnt allowing me to post the video god knows y .
I m not at all happy with this ending n i dnt know how far i have justified the title with the story
but as LAMHE MEANS MEMORIES OR MOMENTS so i guess the story is all abt rishbala creating beautiful memories for themselves forgetting their old bitter ones n trying to create
one beautiful memory every second of their life . Feel free to criticize if u r not happy with this story . n with this i end my writing career too .Thanksss to all of u for supporting n reading my works . love u all guysss .god bless u all .



Edited by NehaVdian - 10 years ago
madhurish thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
firstly my hearty congrats for u neha baby for getting topper in ur MBA 1st sem..good job..keep the good work up..god bless u.😳

Part - 11.
superb update👏
i knew u would bring ullu sullu back as his chapter was unfinished..well, u alread had send him to jail but thats not enough for us right neha?😉 So bring him back & Do a head shot operation lol..😆 I was surprised when i came to know it was bittuji who shot him on knees lol...😆but still it was rks instinct that something was gonna be wrg & He gave a pistol which served its purpose rightly.😛
i thought sujal will save nats but u made him save rk thats different & It justifies too that he did that for his best friend & Not to impress nats lol..😆
nats is really nuts lol..
her life stopped when he got stabbed but still she hurt him...i was shocked & Surprised when rk slapped nats. But she needs that wake up call..😡
this part almost tied all d loose ends & Lead way to a perfect ending. I loved it!!😃
now over too part 12 Comment which will be in below post lol..😆
Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
madhurish thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
Part - 12
wonderful update.
finally it got into nats thick skull that she loves sujal lol
i like that guy yaar. He is so sweet, caring & Loving. He always sees her happiness & I m glad that rk sided for his friend & Not for his sister.
hmm..yet again madhu became mahaam bala lol..but that piece of advice really changed a lot in nats heart. Finally she realised that loving someone will not be a betrayal to her husband..
she not only gavr a new life to herself but also to sujal & For aayush too..
awe..finally rishbaka got married, sujal & Nats r gonna get married...honey moon for rishbala is paris..thats fine but only ten days? Thats too bad. Nats & Sujal could have waited for at least a month & Let rishbala enjoy a lot lol..
loved this part too..its so nice to read two part & Epilogue together..thanks for giving that dear.

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
madhurish thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
I skipped d red parts completely bcos u know i m a baby & Those matured stuffs will spoil me...🤣
Lol..i was scrolling everything before i start reading to check why u ve resed 3 Posts bcos i also resed three next to urs & I wanted to make sure whether my 3 Posts r of use or not & I read ur notes first lol & When i saw d note abt red part i straight away jumped to read it leaving d remaining to read later lol.. Liked that part..u didnt go beyond a limit..thats really good so that ur readers wont get unconfortable while reading lol..excluding me lol..
lovely epilogue.
i was very cute. I already mentioned abt d honeymoon part in previous comment lol..
omg! Triplets for rishbala? Poor madhu lol..
so their dream of having 3 Cutie pies came true.
rk & Sujal r too much they want to break d bones of other kid lol..but they couldnt dare to go head lol..if they step d border line then couch is waiting for them lol..
this was one cute, beautiful & Perfect ending to this story. I loved it. I will miss this story but it will be in my memories (lamhe) Forever.

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
Crazy_Arshi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
First of all congrats neha for your succes
Cmg to the updt
Part 11
Rishbala were so happy but that sultan has to come to ruin every thing
Ah but finally devil got his end
Bittuji came on perfect timing
Sujal n kashish were my fav too
Natasha was quite stubborn but rk to put some brains on his
sister had to raise his hand.
Well written
Edited by Crazy_Arshi - 10 years ago
Crazy_Arshi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Part 12
Awsome update
Rk though slap natasha but was feeling bad himself dat he raise his hands on his sister whom he loved the most
Finally both the couples are together
Loved it
Edited by Crazy_Arshi - 10 years ago
Crazy_Arshi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update with superb epilogue
Loved it
Keep writing
Edited by Crazy_Arshi - 10 years ago
bokul thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Master Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
wow good news
congo to u dear
may u always get success

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".