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Originally posted by: ...Anushka...
đĄwhy was I not told about this story?đĄ
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Flames Of Vengeance Updated P 1 /Pg 1 on 29-3-2026
Originally posted by: ...Anushka...
đĄwhy was I not told about this story?đĄ
I dont y i never commented on this thread but this is just great...
Draupadi's emotions are well written about... đ
Originally posted by: Sanjana_JA
Hi Gayatri,im new heređ...read ur all updates at one go..
The prolouge in Draupadi's POV is a awesome taskđThe first chapter u chose to be the happiest moment ever in her life,that blush,that love she had for her first love is truly incredible and divine..đAnd about the second chapter...yes may be the start of her painfull daysđ...tears were dropping from my eyes,imagining her pain and helplessness at that moment...and what pricks and pains me the most is Arjun's silence,for which i could never find an answer...Why was he so???..is it because he never loved her???...or is it because he loved her so much,may be more than anything-Whatever it is,he was silent..and thats where i got hit!!!Please do continue dear,waiting for more to come from u
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My thoughts were muddled, feelings mixed, I care nothing about what the world thinks, all that bothered me then was about my father. I always thought I knew him, understood him better than my brother but today I was not able to understand how he would react knowing I am to be divided among the five brothers. Will he ever allow such a fate to embrace his daughter? Will he vehemently oppose my decision? If then what? But again my concern was not that may be because I already knew the path which my destiny took. Still my thoughts were pondering over my father's emotions, will this cause him pain like how it caused me? I don't know and I sighed.
Back then I was not aware of my brother following me, but if he did then what he felt on seeing me? He heard of my division? But then why he never came to me? Had I knew this I would have rushed to him? He left me to deal with this alone, but why? Lots of questions plundered my head since then of which I was never given an answer and as they say I shall never find also!
I thought of my brother, I thought of my father, I sat deeply engrossed in my thoughts, I looked out. It's the same way that led me to my destiny, the same path where I laughed and smiled and hoped and wished to never end. I remember dreaming of walking all day with no destination to halt at but Alas! And my thoughts slowly shifted back to the day where it all began...my birth!
And they say that's why all call me Yagyaseni' because I came from the holy fire but NO! There is fire in me which shall burn and burn and burn until the day it roasts down to ashes.
||Author's Note||
am posting it after long time! So I need something sort of a kick start to brush up writing! If its bad please forgive me and if someone finds its more of fiction I can move this to FF forum! I already wrote about Swayamwar part but need honest feedback for this before posting that as am seriously worried over my writing
Originally posted by: Yagyaseni
I would say a nice choice of words as coldness is usually symbolic of numbness so I guess it is a perfect description!!
And they say that's why all call me Yagyaseni' because I came from the holy fire but NO! There is fire in me which shall burn and burn and burn until the day it roasts down to ashes.
Continue soon
Love
~Sam
