Draupadi: ||~A Happy Tale Lost In Oblivion~|| IMP NOTE pg 32 (8/7/16)

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Gayatri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...
😡why was I not told about this story?😡

soorrry sorrry dear... next time onwards I shall inform u wenever I write 😃 aaj ke liye maafi do 😭

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Gayatri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: amritat
I dont y i never commented on this thread but this is just great...

Draupadi's emotions are well written about... 👏

thanks a lot amrita! 😃

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Gayatri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: Sanjana_JA
Hi Gayatri,im new here😊...read ur all updates at one go..
The prolouge in Draupadi's POV is a awesome task😃
The first chapter u chose to be the happiest moment ever in her life,that blush,that love she had for her first love is truly incredible and divine..😛

And about the second chapter...yes may be the start of her painfull days😕...tears were dropping from my eyes,imagining her pain and helplessness at that moment...and what pricks and pains me the most is Arjun's silence,for which i could never find an answer...

Why was he so???..is it because he never loved her???...or is it because he loved her so much,may be more than anything-Whatever it is,he was silent..and thats where i got hit!!!

Please do continue dear,waiting for more to come from u

sanjana! thank you so much for this lovely comment! yess!!! the silence hurts me and that incident pains me the most! that moment of pain which she had! breaks my heart! Thanks a lot! for the comment again! 😊

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Gayatri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

~PART 3~

What shapes our destiny, the pre-written fate or our choice? I don't know but all I know now is that, my choice, my decision has already reshaped my destiny

Random Musings!

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My thoughts were muddled, feelings mixed, I care nothing about what the world thinks, all that bothered me then was about my father. I always thought I knew him, understood him better than my brother but today I was not able to understand how he would react knowing I am to be divided among the five brothers. Will he ever allow such a fate to embrace his daughter? Will he vehemently oppose my decision? If then what? But again my concern was not that may be because I already knew the path which my destiny took. Still my thoughts were pondering over my father's emotions, will this cause him pain like how it caused me? I don't know and I sighed.

Back then I was not aware of my brother following me, but if he did then what he felt on seeing me? He heard of my division? But then why he never came to me? Had I knew this I would have rushed to him? He left me to deal with this alone, but why? Lots of questions plundered my head since then of which I was never given an answer and as they say I shall never find also!

I thought of my brother, I thought of my father, I sat deeply engrossed in my thoughts, I looked out. It's the same way that led me to my destiny, the same path where I laughed and smiled and hoped and wished to never end. I remember dreaming of walking all day with no destination to halt at but Alas! And my thoughts slowly shifted back to the day where it all began...my birth!

And they say that's why all call me Yagyaseni' because I came from the holy fire but NO! There is fire in me which shall burn and burn and burn until the day it roasts down to ashes.

||Author's Note||

am posting it after long time! So I need something sort of a kick start to brush up writing! If its bad please forgive me and if someone finds its more of fiction I can move this to FF forum! I already wrote about Swayamwar part but need honest feedback for this before posting that as am seriously worried over my writing

Edited by FeistyQueen - 11 years ago

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Gayatri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

I would say a nice choice of words as coldness is usually symbolic of numbness so I guess it is a perfect description!!

i didnt see this!! yes yagya.. u perfectly understood it! 😃 😳

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MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Res!

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Okay first of all , I m first ! 😆

Now the update was brilliantly written di , loved every bit of it . U poured out Draupadi 's emotions so well , love it from the core . Awesome one 👏

Her confusion such as why din Dhrist act or fought for her while dividing among five . Draupadi had imagined a wonderful life with her new husband until she was divided into five and compelled to choose the path she din want to .

Love these lines di ,

And they say that's why all call me Yagyaseni' because I came from the holy fire but NO! There is fire in me which shall burn and burn and burn until the day it roasts down to ashes.

Continue soon

Love

~Sam

Edited by Texie-Shady - 11 years ago

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@old_charm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

welcome back dear...😃

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.Vaikartana.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

So happy to read it after such a long interval.I so loved your portrayal of Draupadi.I feel every girl could connect with her emotions portrayed in this particular part.Mostly girls will be more close to their fathers.I loved how she first thought of her father when she faced a problem.And her question why Dhri left the problem for her to deal it alone.Yes as she says that will be left unanswered.And underneath I felt her pain or rather numbness on seeing her little shell of dreams shatter.How her life which she wished to be simple and beautiful took an entirely different turn.And ofcourse she came out as a majestic winner.

PS:wonderful interpretation of the name Yajnaseni👏

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wayward

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Such beautiful lines Di !! I could feel Draupadi's dejection to find out that her brother left her alone to deal with the great shock !

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LiveYourDream

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

a short but beautifully written update!!
You show her attachment to her father and brother so subtly here...
She is in a difficult position and her first thoughts are what would her father and brother think...they are her support system and it is natural she think of their support first and have written about it so well
Please continue...

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