Draupadi: ||~A Happy Tale Lost In Oblivion~|| IMP NOTE pg 32 (8/7/16)

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megha sharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

short and amazing update gayatri.

draupadi's disappointment on seeing how her brother left her & division amongst the pandavas were written well .

she is in a state where she doesn't know what life holds for her and she is so worried her father regarding how he gonna accpet this.

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Beautiful and penned with right mix of emotions and anxiety of Draupadi regarding her decision of marrying the five Pandavas and how her father will take this decision.

Continue Soon 😊

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Dr Sweety Shinde

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Hello,

Good initiative.

A suggestion - Could you add page number of each update on first page ? That way, a IF newbie (like me) can directly read the updates in sequence.

Thumbs up!

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Gayatri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady
Res!
Unres
Okay first of all , I m first ! 😆
Now the update was brilliantly written di , loved every bit of it . U poured out Draupadi 's emotions so well , love it from the core . Awesome one 👏
Her confusion such as why din Dhrist act or fought for her while dividing among five . Draupadi had imagined a wonderful life with her new husband until she was divided into five and compelled to choose the path she din want to .

Love these lines di ,
And they say that's why all call me Yagyaseni' because I came from the holy fire but NO! There is fire in me which shall burn and burn and burn until the day it roasts down to ashes.
Continue soon
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~Sam

Thank u sam!! 😳 @bold: that is something I always feel when I think about her! I prefer to call her fire rather than born from fire!

This division is most painful part for me in MB! heart breaking painful, somewhere wrong is done to you and you feel helpless from escaping from it! this is something for which I can never ever forgive Kunti, no matter what!

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Gayatri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE
nice

thank u! 😊

Edited by FeistyQueen - 10 years ago

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Gayatri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
welcome back dear...😃

thanks 😳

Edited by FeistyQueen - 10 years ago

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Gayatri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: vaikartana
So happy to read it after such a long interval.I so loved your portrayal of Draupadi.I feel every girl could connect with her emotions portrayed in this particular part.Mostly girls will be more close to their fathers.I loved how she first thought of her father when she faced a problem.And her question why Dhri left the problem for her to deal it alone.Yes as she says that will be left unanswered.And underneath I felt her pain or rather numbness on seeing her little shell of dreams shatter.How her life which she wished to be simple and beautiful took an entirely different turn.And ofcourse she came out as a majestic winner.
PS:wonderful interpretation of the name Yajnaseni👏

Thank you so much!!! Yess this part literally breaks me!!

thanks a lot once again 😳

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Gayatri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Such beautiful lines Di !! I could feel Draupadi's dejection to find out that her brother left her alone to deal with the great shock !

Thanks a lot proti ❤️

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Gayatri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream
a short but beautifully written update!!
You show her attachment to her father and brother so subtly here...
She is in a difficult position and her first thoughts are what would her father and brother think...they are her support system and it is natural she think of their support first and have written about it so well
Please continue...

Thank you so so much! 😳 yes the situation is highly painful! 💔

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Gayatri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
short and amazing update gayatri.
draupadi's disappointment on seeing how her brother left her & division amongst the pandavas were written well .

she is in a state where she doesn't know what life holds for her and she is so worried her father regarding how he gonna accpet this.

thank you so much!!

when my grandma used to tell MB stories, all she says is how Dhri follows n finds its pandavas! so i often wonder how he must have felt then!