Poem Dedications - SAAZ Nikah

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Poem dedications for SAAZ Nikah. These could have been much better, if I had actual talent at writing beautiful poetry. I would appreciate if someone can suggest better or apt words for the first poem. Thanks for reading. Appreciate feedback.

Poem 1:
Qubool Hai (For Sahir) 😭
Hamari Mohabbat ko Aapki Nafarat
Hamare junoon ko Aapki berukhi
Hamare jazbe ko Aapki murda dili
Hamare wujood ko Aapki Adam mojoodgi
Hamari tanhai ko Aapki khamoshi
Hamari arzoo ko Aapki bekadr beparwahi

Poem 2: (For Sahir)
Tapate huve angaron per woh chale aur pao hamare jale
Unki tamanna thi ki shuruvat pyar se karen, pehle dil se dil mile
Allah ki marzi magar kuch aur thi jo ki unhe hum jaise humsafar mile
Sochte honge woh yeh ki ab umrabhar zhelane pade zindagi ke veerane
Khushiyaan, chaain aur sukun ke baand ho gaye hein saab phauwaren
Uthao sirf ek bar in zuki nazaron ko aur farmao gaur hum per
Janoge ki khade jis toofan mein ho, woh beh raha hai sirf hamare ishq ke dum per
Wada raha hamara ki dooboyenge tumhe hamari mohabbat ki gehari beher mein
Hata kar sab geele shikve, loota denge khud ko bhiab tumhari ulfat ki chaah mein

Poem 3: Things are not so gloomy Arzoo, you get to marry SAC !!!😳
Qubool Hai (For Arzoo)
Ab hamein samzauta in bebas halaton se
Dulhan ke libas mein khade, jaise kafan oodh ke
Thand lag rahe pao tale tapate huve angare aaj
Khokhale se lag rahe hein ab toh sare rasm-o-rivaz
Ishq ki duyina hi ujadi, tooti bharose ki buniyaad
Kyun sun kar unsuni kar di Allah tune meri fariyaad
Tute gharoor ke tukde bikhare laparwah zameen per
Booz gayi Arzoo bhi saath unke reh gayi tanhai ruh per



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jyoti06 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
U wrote them wonderful dear 👏👏 .. straight from heart and all poems r going perfect with the characters and today's episode too ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved Poem 2 most 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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All I say is one word for all the 3 poems dear...

Irshaaad!!! Straight from heart!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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All the three were so awesome and heartfelt...Dil choo liya... 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The depth and emotions u have described ,cv's failed to show it on screen..'.. Beautiful poetry .. Meaningful and heartfelt.. Keep writing more ...subhanallah ...maza as gaya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful poems. Apt for this Nikah!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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MM absolutely Muahhh ❤️ Fabulous poetry, aap to Sahir se bhi acchi poetbaaz nikli 👏You are wonderfully talented, do continue to write, always ! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So nice poems... wonderful... No words to say... they are perfect👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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All are very nice poems dear...👏
I like Poem 2 more...
Subhanalla (for urdoo poem)..👏 ...
Aprateem (assuming you are maharastrian 😊)..👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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MM nice poem dear.
I love that 2nd one .

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