Dil Se for Geet Forum...OS POLL, RESULTS Pg 7

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DIL SE FOR GEET FORUM....OS POLL

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DREAMS DO COME TRUE
HAAL-E-DIL
LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL
MY LAST ORDER
OUR FILMY STORY
THOSE FEW DAYS
THE LAST SHOT
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lakspriya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Welcome to the Dil Se for GF OS poll ...second scene...

Below we are including all the OS entries received...

Thanks to the writers for taking time and effort for us...

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Last date of poll: 14 jan, Wednesday till 10.00am IST

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lakspriya

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Posted: 9 years ago

DREAM DO COME TRUE

Maan and geet standing in front of each other in maan cabin. Maan hold geet left hand and bend on his knees and bring a ring from pocket and said

Maan - geet handa I know tum muje aise apne samane dekhkar surise ho but main ye baat tumse kafi dino se kahna chahta tha. I LOVE U GEET. I LOVE U VERY MUCH. WILL U MARRY ME.

Geet is having tears of joy in her eyes. She doesn't have word to describe her happiness. She nodded her head as a yes and maan slip the ring in her ring finger. Maan stand on his feet and geet came to hug maan and then

THUD!!!

Geet fall from her bed hurting her back. She is again dreaming about maan confessing his felling to her.

Geet - aaj phir wahi sapna. Geet tu janti hai na maan tere boss hai aur tu unnise pyar kar baithi. Koi toh unke gusse ke darawne sapne dekhta hai aur tu unke confesstion ke.chal ab utt ja subah ho gayi.

Geet get up from and saw the time, again she is going to late and then maan will scold her. His favorite timepass is scolding geet for her tiny-miny mistakes.

Geet reach office in time and take a breath of relief. She met with pinky and adi and went to her cabin which is next to maan.She is working in khurana construction as maan secretary from last 1 years. Today she complete her 1 years in KC and it is the new record of maan secretary becoz last secretary give her resignation letter after eight months. No one can stand with maan anger and his work but geet prove it wrong with completing her one year.

Pinky came to geet cabin and said

Pinky - geet aaj toh party banti hai. Aaj tumne record banaya hai.

Geet - sure pinky. Lunch time mein canteen mein meri taraf se sabko party hai aaj.

Sasha - woh toh hum lege hi par hats off tumne MK ke anger ko ek saal tak tolerate kiya hai.

Geet - nai sasha mam aisa nai hai. Maan sir itna bhi gussa nai karte.

Suddenly geet intercom ring and she attend it

Geet - hello khurana construction

Maan - agar tumari kitty party katam ho gayi ho toh mere cabin mein aao.

Geet (nervously) - ji sir. Sorry sir.

Geet - I m dead now. Lagta hai ye mera last day hoga.(and ran out)

Geet knock maan cabin and enter

Geet - good morning sir. Here is the schedule ho today.

Maan (sarcastically ) - maine aapki kitty party ko disturb toh nai kar diya miss handa.

Geet - sorry sir aage se aisa nai hoga. Actually sir sasha mam aur pinky party ke liye bol rahe the kyunki aaj maine pura (cut by maan)

Maan - ek saal pura kiya hai yaha.

Geet (surprisingly) - sir apko yaad hai.

Maan (irritatedly) - ha uss din ko kaise bhul sakta hu jab tum jaisi chalti firti musibat mere office aayi thi.

Geet face become of O shape and start complaining to her babaji.

Geet (selfthought) - dekho babaji apko bhi muje pyar iss saru se hi karwana tha. Meri khushi toh inse dekhi hi nai jati. Ye mere sath pyar se baat kyun nai karte?

Maan(angrily ) - agar upper dekhna ho gaya ho toh meeting ki tayaari karo.

Geet(meekly) - ji sir.

Maan went to meeting and geet start her work. At lunch time adi came to call geet for lunch. After reaching canteen geet order maan lunch and ask peon to send it in his cabin.

While having lunch geet start discussing a project with adi when sasha intercept them.

Sasha - yaar tum dono bhi mk ki tarah workaholic ho gaye ho.

Geet - mam aap sir ko aise saru, workaholic kyun bolte ho.

Adi - geet maan sir ke bare mein agar koi bhi kuch bole toh tum defend kyun karti ho. Kya tume sir se darr nai lagta?

Geet - adi sir aap sab unka gussa dekhte hai par muje gusse ke piche unka akelapan dikhta hai. Unki helping nature dikhta hai.

Sasha - ye toh true hai. Last week muje fever tha aur uss din ek imp. Meeting thi par mk ne meeting cancel karke muje 2 din ki leave di.

Pinky - geet tumne aaj bhi apne prince ka sapna dekha hai na.

Geet (surprisingly) - tume kaise pata.

Sasha - tumari aakhon se aur tumare blushy-blushy face se.

Geet - kya mam aap log muje kyun tang kar rahe hai.

Sasha - geet hum tume 1 saal se jante hai par tumne kabhi uska naam nai bataya? Bus uske sapne dekhti ho.

Geet - mam woh ek aisa sapna hai jo kabhi pura nai ho sakta.

After lunch maan call geet in his cabin and said

Maan - miss handa humare Shimla project mein kuch problem ho gayi hai. Hume aaj hi waha jana hai.

Geet - ji sir main abhi flight ki booking karti hu.

Maan - maine booking ke liye travel agent ko call kiya tha but aaj koi bhi flight nai hai Shimla ke liye.

Geet (innocently) - toh kaise pahucha jayega waha sir?

Maan - by road miss handa. Itni toh common sense honi chahiye tume.

Geet - sorry sir.

Maan - bus ab apna ye sorry band karo aur ghar jakar packing karo.

Geet - ji sir bus aap muje 1 hour dijiye mein yaha wapis aa jati hu.

Maan - uski koi jarurat nai hai main tume tumare ghar se pick kar luga. Bus tum ready rahna.

Geet went home and inform her parents. She immediately pack her bag. After few minutes maan came and blow horn for geet. Geet settle in car and start their journey. At dinner time geet is felling hungry but didn't hav heart to ask maan for dinner. She again strat cribbing to her babaji.

Geet - babaji muje bhuk lagi hai par inne kaise kahu ye toh meri har baat par badak jate hai. Aap toh jante hai ki main bhuki nai rah sakti.

Geet didn't knw she is mummering loudly and maan listen her talks. Few minutes later maan stop his car near a dhaba and turn to geet.

Maan - geet dinner time ho gaya hai. Aage koi restaurant ya dhaba nai hai toh yahi dinner kar lete hai.

Geet - but sir aap yaha kaise khayege? Ye koi hotel nai hai.

Maan - toh kya main bhuka hi rahu geet? Agar option hai toh dhabe ka khana hi kha lu bhuka toh nai rahuga. U r such a stupid girl a ever met.

Geet(pouting)- main toh aapke liye hi bol rahi thi. But aap toh muje hi daant rahe hai.

Maan - ab chalo dinner kar lo hume aage bhi jana hai.

Both eat their dinner in silence and resume their journey. After sometime geet dose off but maan woke her up and said in anger

Maan(angrily) - geet handa main tumara driver nai hu jo main drive karu aur tum apni beauty sleep lo. Tume ye nai pata jab koi raat mein drive kar raha ho toh uske pass nai sona chahiye driver ko bhi aise neend aa jati hai.

Geet - sorry sir muje pata hi nai chala main kab so gayi.

Maan - hmm

Geet is feeling bad becoz she is dreaming about maan and a long drive where she said maan I LOVE U. before maan can reply in dream, this saru maan woke her up.

Dono subah 4 baje Shimla pahuchte hai aur apne hotel mein checkin karte hai. Agle din who site par jate hai prob ko solve karne ke liye but prob itni badi thi ki 3 din lagege work ko flow se start karwane ke liye. Evening mein dono hotel jate hai but hotel mein bhut crowd hai. Maan went to reception and ask for keys of their room.

Receptionist - sir if u don't mind kya aap 10 min wait kar sakte hai. Yaha group checkin ho rahi hai.

Maan - sure.

Maan went to geet and said the same thing. After the checkin of guests, the manager came and gave keys to them.

Manager - I m sorry sir, actually humare hotel mein 2 din baad ek shadi hai toh ladki wale checkin kar rahe hai.

Maan - its ok. Thank u for keys.

Manager - good night sir, good night mam.

Both in unison - good night.

Dono lift ki taraf jate hai tabhi geet ko koi piche se bolta hai aur geet turn karke dekhti hai.

Geet(shout in happiness) - OMG ITS REALLY U.

Man - yup its me dear.

Geet (hug him) - rishab tum muje yaha miloge muje pata nai tha.

Rishab - muje bhi kaha pata tha ki geet handa muje yaha Shimla mein milegi.

Geet tell she came here for some office work and introduced rishab to maan. Rishab get exiced to meet geet after years. He tell them, he and his whole fanily is here for his little sister wedding. Both congratulate him but he said he will accept their wishes when both will come to attend the weddinnd of his sister which is going to place in same hotel. First both decline but after some pleading both agree. Rishab went and both maan geet retured to their rooms.

Agle din evening mein site se aane ke baad maan geet se function mein jane ko bolta hai.

Geet - sir aap nai aayege?

Maan - main waha kisi ko nai janta toh awkward feel hoga.

Geet - tekh hai sir main bhi nai jati.

Maan - why?

Geet - aap akele room mein muje acha nai lagega.

Maan - tum cancel mat karo main tumare sath chalta hu.

Both went to the hall where the function is going. Rishab greet them and ask them to be comfortable. He greet his other guest and after sometime came to them.

Rishab - geet tumne shadi ki ya nai.

Geet - nai.

Rishab - good mera chance hai abhi.

Geet - bilkul nai.

Rishab - par kyon? Maine tume clge mein bhi propose kiya tab bhi tumne mana kar diya yha.

Geet - riahab stop it.

Rishab - nai geet tum muje aaj bata do tume main acha nai lagta?

Geet - tum mere ek ache dost ho bus. Now close this topic.

Maan(angrily) - excuse me muje ke client call karna hai.

Geet - kyon sir muje toh yaad nai ki kisi client ko call karna tha.

Maan (irritatedly) - har baat batani jaruri hai tume?

Geet - nai sir.

Maan - now excuse me I will be right back.

Maan went and after half an hour he came and stood beside geet. Few minutes later, a waiter came and saids to geet

Waiter - mam aapko koi garden mein bhula raha hai.

Geet - muje par kyon main toh kisi ko yaha janti nai?

Waiter - mam aapka naam geet handa hai na.

Geet - ha mera hi naam hai.

Waiter - plz aap jayiye.

Maan - geet jao dekho kyon hai agar 5 min mein tum nai aayi toh main dekhne aa jauga.

Geet - ji sir.

Geet went to garden and saw that there is a table for 2 and a card is placed there. She pick the card read it. In card ask to walk to 10 steps ahead. Geet follow the order and saw a heart is made up of white roses and in it written with red roses I LOVE U MISS HANDA.

Maan appear in front of geet and said

Maan - I know tumne kabi nai socha hoga ki main aise tume propose karuga par kya karu mein tumare bina nai rah sakta.

Geet (selfthought) - geet dekh aaj fir se tu maan sir ke proposal ka dream dekh rahi hai but ye real lag raha hai.

Geet(shocked) - but sir ye kaise?

Maan - kaise kya main tumse pyar karta hu aur agar tum kuch answer do toh main khada ho jao meri knees hurt kar rahi hai.

Geet - aap puach rahe hai ya order de rahe hai.

Maan - ok ok. Miss handa kya tum mere sath saari life spend karne ko tayaar ho kyonki main pichle 2 saal se tumse pyar karta hu par itni himmat nai thi ki tume bata saku.

Geet - phele toh aap khade ho jao aur muje batao 2 saal se kaise main toh Kc mein 1 saal se work kar rahi hu.

Maan - I know tum ye ques puachogi. Maine tume do saal phele ek bus stop par dekha tha jaha tum bache se roses le rahi thi aur fir baad mein uss bache ko apna lunchbox de diya. Ussi time par muje tumse pyar ho gaya. Main har roz tume dekhata tha waha par fir tum mere office mein aa gayi.

Geet(selfthought) - babaji ab muje pura yakin ho gaya ki main sapna dekh rahi hu. Unne meri ye baat kaise pata chali. Koi nai sapne mein toh woh ques kar lu jo unse kabhi puach nai payi.

Geet - par aap toh muje dekhte hi gussa ho jate hai?

Maan - nai main tum par nai balki aapne aap par gussa ho jata tha kyunki main apne emotions ko tumare samne control nai kar pata tha.

Maan - ab agar tumare sarre ques ho gaye ho toh jawab dedo.

Geet (ST) - wah geet aaj toh ye sapna bhut acha hai har baar toh sir ek baar hi I love u bolte the aur tu jawab nai de pati thi but yaha toh ye mujse baar baar jawab maang rahe hai.

Geet - nai ek baki hai. Aaj aapne ye sab karne ki kyon sochi?

Maan - kyonki isske liye hi toh main tume Shimla laya tha. Maine plan kiya tha ye trip.

Geet - sir aapko ek secret batao.

Maan(confused) - hmmm

Geet - ye ek sapna hai aur jaise hi main aapko reply karne ke liye kuch bolugi mere sapna tut jayega.

Maan(get more confused) - kya?

Geet - arre main daily aise sapne dekhti hu jaha aap muje propose karte hai aur mere sapna sapna hi rah jata hai.

Maan come forward and pinch geet hand hard and geet screamed.

Maan - geet ye koi sapna nai hai main sach mein tume propose kar raha hu aur tum isse dream samaj rahi ho. I LOVE U GEET I REALLY LOVE U. WILL U MARRY THE SARU BOSS.

Geet came to reality and shocked becoz she never knew maan will propose her. Her eyes get teary and mouth went dry. She is unable to say anything. She just slam her lips on maan and kiss him hard. Maan also get her answer and respond to her kiss.

Maan broke the kiss and pick geet in his arms and take her to the table where their dinner is already placed which is all geet favorite. She again get surprised with maan. Both done their dinner in between their talks. Maan ask her how she fell in love with him and in return geet tell first she always get angry with maan scolding but after knowing him and his caring nature toward other employes take her heart and she fell in love with him. Both share there lifes where he is alone after his parents death and sacred to love someone but he can't stop his heart when he saw her and that's why never approach her. Geet also share her fear of rejection thats why hide her love in her heart.

Now with maan confession geet understood dream do come true. After returing from Shimla got get married and live ever after.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Haal-e-Dil...

Sorry, sorry...kitna time ho gaya aur maine tumhe dekha bhi nahi! Mujhe maaf kar do! Ab kabhi tumhe nazarandaz nahi karungi. My dairy..oh my baby! Tum toh jaanti ho na ki main apne mann ki saari baatein tumhe batati hoon. Aaj 6 maheene ho gaye aur maine tumhe kuch nahi bataya...meri jindgi mein itna kuch ho gaya ki kya batau? Aur aaj jo hua hai, main samjh hi nahi payi ki yeh mere saath bhi ho sakta hai!!!!

Sach kahu toh mujhe andar hi andar pata tha ke yeh din aayega. Main iss din ka, iss pal ka intezaar bhi kar rahi thi. Par ab jo yeh waqt aa gaya hai, main nahin jaanti main kya kahoon, kaise kahoon jo sab mere dil mein hai. Thodi dhiraj rakho sab batati hoon.

Kal office mein Maan Sir ne mujhe bahut danta, meri toh koi galti bhi nahi thi par woh Sasha ki bachchi mujhe fasa hi deti hai! Maan Sir ko toh kuch pata hi nahi tha...nahi, tum galat samajh rahi ho main Maan Sir ki tarafdari nahi kar rahi hoon!! Tumhe pata hai jab main ghar jaa rahi thi toh Maan Sir ne mujhe rok diya...sab chale gaye the aur main akeli...main Maan Sir ke paas gayi toh unhone bola... "Kal shaam ko tumhe KM aana hai, car tumhe lene aa jayegi, tum 6 baje taiyaar rehna." Maine haan toh bol diya aur Maan Sir se poocha kyu? Maan Sir ne gusse se dekha aur bole... "Miss Handa! Jo kaha jaye woh karo. Main boss hoon toh sawal bhi main karunga tum nahi, samajh mein aa gaya?"

Main toh waha se chupchap nikal gayi par raat bhar sochti rahi ki mujhe KM kyu bulaya woh bhi Sunday ko? Agar kuch kaam hai toh office bulate par ghar kyun? Waise toh Dadima ko bhi kitne dino se nahi mili toh unse milne ka bhi mouka mil jayega...yeh Maan Sir ka kuch nahi keh sakte...kabhi gussa hote hai, kabhi nahi... Mujhe toh bahut dar lag raha hai par jaana toh hoga.

Shaam ko gadi aayi aur main KM jaane ke liye nikli...waha jaa kar dekha toh koi nahi tha aur Nakul ne bataya ki Maan Sir apne kamre mein hai aur mujhe waha jaana hai...mere toh hosh hi ud gaye! MAAN SIR ke kamre mein? Par jaana toh tha... himmat kar ke maine darwaje pe knock kiya toh darwaja khula hi tha aur Maan Sir window ke paas khade the aur bole... "aa gayi! Main tumhara hi intzaar kar raha tha... chalo terrace pe chalte hai" aur woh chalne lage...main unke pichhe pichhe gayi...

Udhar jaa kar dekha toh puri terrace candles se saji hui thi...beech mein ek table aur do chairs the...uss par kuch box jaisa pada hua tha! Sab jagah phool hi phool the! Woh bhi laal aur safed rang ke! Safed rang toh Maan Sir ko pasand hai par laal? Mere liye? Nahi...nahi aisa nahi ho sakta! Main toh hairaan reh gayi! Yeh sab kya hai? Maan Sir ko toh phoolo se nafrat hai toh yeh sab? Maine unki taraf dekha toh pata chala woh toh mujhe hi dekh rahe the! Main kya kahoon kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha...unki nazaro mein aisa kuch tha jo mujhe unki aur khich raha tha par maine apne aap par kabu paya aur Maan Sir ki taraf dekha...

Woh mere paas aaye aur mera haath pakad ke bole...Geet! Aaj main jo tumhe kehne jaa raha hoon who kabhi kisi se nahi kaha...main office mein tumhare liye boss hoon, duniya ke liye MSK hoon par abhi, aaj main Maan ban kar tumse baat karna chahta hoon, tum sunogi meri baat?

Main toh unko dekhti hi reh gayi! Yeh kya bol rahe the meri samajh mein kuch nahi aa raha tha...maine unke haatho se apna haath chhudvaya aur kaha...haan Sir, sunungi par baat kya hai? Aur yeh sab sajawat? Woh meri taraf dekhte huye muskuraaye aur main toh bas unko hi dekhti reh gayi...aaj unki aankho mein ek ajab si chamak thi jo maine aaj se pehle kabhi nahi dekhi...main bhi unn aankho mein kho gayi!

Geet, main jaanta hoon ki mere bhai Dev ne tumhare saath kya kiya aur jis himmat se tumne usska samna kiya aur usko jail bhijwaya mujhe bahut achha laga...gharwalo ka bhi saath nahi tha aur akele hote huve bhi tum ne ladai ki aur jeet gayi! Meri nazro mein aur uppar aa gayi...dhire dhire tumhe jaanta gaya aur tumhare karib aata gaya...tumhari nadaniyaan, tumhari muskuraahat, tumhara bholapan, tumhari sadgi, tumhari sundarta ...sab mujhe achha lagne laga...tumhari moujudgi mujhe tumhari aur khichne lagi thi...maine socha ki tum par gussa kar ke main tumse dur reh paunga par meri woh soch galat thi...jitna jyada main tum par gussa hota tha mera dil utna hi jyaada tadapta tha...tum roti thi toh main bechain ho jata tha...tum pareshaan hoti thi toh main hairaah reh jata tha...tum hansti thi toh mujhe sukoon milta tha...tumhe dekh kar mann ko shanti milti thi...main samajh nahi paa raha tha ki mere saath yeh kya ho raha hai par ek ajib sa ehsaas ho raha tha jo mujhe achha lagne laga tha...tum se dur rehna mere liye namumkin sa ho gaya tha...tum mujhe badal rahi thi Geet!

Main, Maan Singh Khurana jo kisi bhi baat se nahi darta tha woh tumse dur hone ke ehsaas se darne laga...tum paas hoti thi toh main bhi khush rehne laga tha...Geet mujhe batao ki yeh kya hai? Tumhe pata hai ki main jyaada bol nahi paata aur apni feelings samajha nahi pata par pata nahi aaj mujhe tumhe woh sab batana hai jo mere dil mein hai...mann mein hai...Geet, jo main bata raha hoon tum woh samajh rahi ho na?

Main aaj pehli baar yeh batane jaa raha hoon ki main tum se pyaar karta hoon! Apni poori jindgi tumhare saath rehna chahta hoon...kya tum mera saath dogi? Mujh se shaadi karogi? Tumhare bina main nahi ji sakta...mujhe tumhari aadat ho gayi hai. Main tumhe duniya ki saari khushiyaan dene ka wada toh nahi kar sakta par yeh keh sakta hoon ki main tumhe kabhi dukhi hone nahi dunga...mujh par viswaas aur bharosa karo ke tum kabhi nahi pachhtaogi...

I LOVE YOU!

Haan, I LOVE YOU! Geet!

Tumhe pata hai dairy, ki meri kya haalat ho gayi thi? Maan Sir ko itna emotional pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha aur woh jo bol rahe the...mein apne aap ko kaise sambhal pati? Jis ehsaas ko maine apni jindgi se dur kar diya tha aaj Maan Sir uss ehsaas ko jaga rahe the...main unse nazarein bhi nahi mila pa rahi thi ...main kya karu kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha...main aage aa kar unki baaho mein sama gayi! Maan Sir ki baaho mein itna sukun mil raha tha ki jaise muhje meri manzil mil gayi ho! Unhone bhi mujhe pakad rakha tha ...main unse alag hone ki koshish kar rahi thi par woh chhod hi nahi rahe the! Unki aankho mein sharaarat dekh kar mujhe sharam aa rahi thi par unki baaho se dur kaha jaoon? Dhire dhire main alag toh ho gayi par dur rehna mujh se nahi ho raha tha...pata nahi par mujhe kya ho gaya ki maine unke gaal pe ek chota sa kiss kar diya!!! Woh toh meri boldness ko dekhte rahe gaye aur main sharam se pani pani!!! Mujhe nachne ka mann ho raha tha... chilla chilla ke bolna chahti thi ki mera bhi koi hai...main bhi kisi se pyaar kar sakti hoon...

Geet kuch bolo naa...Maan Sir ne kaha...kya mujhe mera jawab nahi milega? Waise toh mujhe pata chal gaya hai ki tum kya kehnewali ho par mujhe tumhari aawaz se sun na hai...Maan Sir ki aawaz sunte hi main jaise hosh mein aa gayi! Yeh main kya kar rahi thi? Kiss kar diya? Unki baaho mein chali gayi? Aisa main kaise kar sakti hoon? Ab main kya boloon?

Woh toh mere jawab ka intzaar karte hue mujhe dekh rahe the par mujhe toh rona aa raha tha...kuch bol hi nahi payi! Woh mujhe dekhkar hairaan ho rahe the aur mujhe chup karane ki koshish kar rahe the...badi muskil se maine unhe bataya ki mujhe thoda waqt chahiye ..pehle toh unhe laga ki main mazak kar rahi hoon par baad mein laga ki main sahi mein thoda waqt mang rahi hoon toh woh mera haath pakad ke waha padi hui chair ke paas le gaye aur mujhe baith ne ko kaha aur woh bhi samnewali chair pe baith gaye.

Thodi der toh who chup rahe par baad mein unhone kaha...Geet, main tumhari uljhan samajh sakta hoon. Dev se dhokha khane ke baad tum kisi pe itna jaldi bharosa nahi kar paogi par mujhe mere pyaar pe bharosa hai aur ummeed hai ki tum inkaar nahi karogi par main tum par koi dabav dalna nahi chahata...tum aazad ho...tum jo chahe faisla le sakti ho...inkaar bhi kar sakti ho...main bura nahi manunga par main chahta hoon ki tum mujhse ek wada karo ki chahe tumhara joh bhi faisla ho, tum mujhe woh faisla bataogi aur KC chhod ke kabhi nahi jaogi...main tumhare saath hoon aur chahe kuch bhi ho jaye main woh saath kabhi nahi chhodunga...

Mere mann mein unke liye pyaar, izzat badh gayi thi par main majboor thi ki unki baato ka jawab nahi de sakti thi... Maine kaha ki... haan, mera faisla main aapko jarur bataungi aur KC chhod kar bhi nahi jaungi par meri jindgi itni uljhi hui hai ki main kuch soch nahi pa rahi hoon... Maan Sir ne mere hotho pe apni ungli rakh kar mujhe chup kar diya aur kaha... Geet, tumhe safai dene ki koi jarurat nahi hai...main tumhare jawab ka aur tumhara intzaar karunga aur yeh lo...unhone table par pade hue box ko uthake mujhe diya...maine le toh liya par meri aankho mein sawal ko dekh kar woh jor se hans ne lage...oohhh! Unki hansi!! Main pehli baar dekh rahi thi!! Aise khul kar woh kabhi hanse hi nahi the! Woh bole ...ghabrao mat...issmein tumhari pasand ki chocolates hai aur kuch nahi! Mujhe laga tha ki hum dono saath mein muh meetha karenge par tumne toh waqt mang kar mujhe hi surprise kar diya! Haan, par ek baat hai tumne mera gaal toh mitha kar diya hai toh main abhi ussi se kaam chala lunga par baad mein tumhari ek nahi sununga...samjhi?

Maan Sir ki aisi baato se main toh hairaan reh gayi mera dil toh joro se dhadak ne laga...office mein toh woh kuch alag the aur yaha? Maine apna sar hilaya aur boli ki ab mujhe jana hai toh unhone kaha ki khana khaye bina Dadima mujhe nahi jaane degi...hum dono ne Dadima ke saath khana khaya aur main wapas aa gayi...par ab?

Dev ne jis tarha se mujhe dhokha diya hai ...main toh usse bhula hi nahi pa rahi hoon...kaise bhul jaoon? Kya yeh itna aasan hai? Mana ki maine Dev ko saza dilwa di par mere dil ne toh ussko maaf nahi kiya hai. Dev ne mera maan, sanmaan, swabhimaan sab ko chot pahuchayi hai...kaise usse maaf kar doon? Jab tak Dev ko maaf nahi karti tab tak main apni jindgi mein aage kaise badh paungi? Maan Sir ko kya kahoon? Plz Dairy, meri madad karo!

Maan Sir ne humesha mera saath diya hai...har muskil mein woh mere saath the...meri jindgi pe unka haq hai...aaj toh unhone saaf saaf bata diya ki woh mujhse pyaar karte hai aur mujhse shaadi karna chahte hai...par kya main Maan Sir ko woh khushi de paungi jiske woh haqdar hai? ? Mujh jaisi ladki ko woh itna pasand kaise kar sakte hai? Kya main unke kabil hoon? Kya mujhe haq hai ki main bhi kisiko pasand kar sakoon? Kisi se pyaar kar sakoon?

jab kabhi, main kho jaaun toh, mujhe dhundh loge naa?

jab kabhi, main tanha rahu, mera saath doge naa?

jab kabhi, mushkil ho dagar, tum sang chaloge naa?

jab kabhi, mere behke kadam, tum thaam loge naa?

Maan Sir mujh par kitni aas lagake baithe hai...unhe kaise samjau ki Dev ki nafrat mujhe aage badhne se rokti hai...mera viswaas par se bharosa uth gaya hai...main kisiki nahi ho sakti...Dev ne mujhe apavitr bana diya hai...Dev ne meri duniya hi ujad di hai ab usse dubara basana bahut muskil hai...kya Maan Sir mere inkaar ki wajah samjh payenge? Mujhe samajh payenge?

jab kabhi, de aawaz dil, tum sun loge naa?jab kabhi, toote khwaab toh, tum bun loge naa?jab kabhi, mujhse ho khata, mujhe baqsh doge naa?jab kabhi, meri num ho nazar, mujhe pyar doge naa?

Dairy, tum kyun bol nahi pati? Aaj kitni baatein tumse karni hai ...tumhare alawa main kisi ko apne mann ki baatein nahi bata sakti...ek baat sach sach batau? Mujhe yeh ehsaas ho gaya hai ki main bhi Maan Sir se pyaar karne lagi hoon!! Meri ruh tak woh bas gaye hai...unke bina main ji nahi sakti...aaj se nahi par Hoshiyarpur mein jab unhone mujhe Brij Virji se bachaya tha tab se main unko pasand karne lagi thi par woh main kaise bata sakti hoon...

Dev ko saza dene ke liye Maan Sir ne toh himmat di thi...office mein bhi meri sabhi galtio ko maaf kar dete the aur mujhe sab ka saamna karna sikhane ke liye gussa karte the taki main haar na manu aur taktwar ban ne ki koshish karoon...Maan Sir jaisa jivansathi aasani se nahi milta...itna bada karobaar hai...gadi, bangla sab kuch hai unke paas ...phir bhi unko main pasand aa gayi aur ab main kaise mana karoon?

Mera naseeb kaisa hai? Jise main chahti hoon usse haan nahi kah sakti aur jise nafrat karti hoon usse maaf nahi kar sakti...kyun mere saath hi aisa hua? Yeh bhi sahi hai ki agar Dev mujhe dhokha nahi deta toh Maan Sir mujhe kabhi nahi milte...mujhe yeh baat ke liye Dev ko shukriya kehna chahiye aur usse maaf kar dena chahiye...iss aadmi ne mera atit toh bigada hi hai par kya mera bhawishya bhi woh bigadega? Nahi, ab main Dev ke haatho jyaada barbaad nahi ho sakti...mera uss se koi lena dena nahi hai...meri aage ki jindgi Maan Sir ke naam hogi...haan, yahi sahi hai...

jab kabhi, gham aye sanam, tum baant loge naa?jab kabhi, mere aansu bahen, unhe poch loge naa?jab kabhi, umra dhal jaayegi, mujhe yun hi chahoge naa?lo kasam, kuchh bhi ho sanam, tum durr jaaoge naa?

Par agar kal ko Dev jail se chut kar aayega toh woh Maan Sir ke ghar hi aayega na? Tab? Kya main usska samna kar paungi? Usse Maan Sir ka bhai maan kar devar ki izzat de paungi? Meri wajah se Maan Sir bhi usse ghar se bahar nikal denge...toh yeh toh achha nahi hoga...do bhaiyo ke beech main aa jaugi...Dadima bhi khush nahi reh payegi...meri wajah se main ek parivaar ko nahi tod sakti...main Maan Sir ko haan nahi keh sakti...

Aaj main jindgi ke aise mod pe aa gayi hoon ki pichhe ja nahi sakti aur aage badhne ki himmat nahi hai. Maa babuji koi mere saath nahi hai ...main kis se baat karoon? Aaj main akeli hoon, koi mere saath, mere paas nahi hai...

Kabse main bole jaa rahi hoon aur tum ho ki chupchap sun rahi ho...dairy, aaj mujhe tumhari jarurat hai...mujhe batao ki kal main kya karoon? Subah office jaungi aur Maan Sir ka samna hoga...mujhe dekhte hi unki aankhein mujh se sawal puchegi ...unhone mujhe waqt toh diya hai sochne ke liye par ab main unka samna kaise karoon? Nazrein kaise milaoon? Maan Sir ke liye jo jazbaat mere mann main hai woh bahar aa gaye toh? Main haan kahu ya na? Na bola toh jindgi bhar mujhe unse dur rehna hoga aur haan bola toh jindgi bhar unke saath...yeh kaisi uljhan hai?

Kya karoon? Kaise kahoon? I LOVE YOU MAAN SIR...nahi nahi sir nahi sirf Maan!!

Edited by lakpm - 9 years ago

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lakspriya

@lakspriya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Life is beautiful ...

Today Maan scold geet 1st time in these 2 nd half mnths nd she was very angry now,, he was very late nd not picking his phone too ,, hrs passed ,, Geet called in his office nd his Jr who was on duty that time replied that he had left hrs back ,, his jeep was not there ,, DM nd he became tense ,, it was a hilly area nd weather was not well , it was foggy nd got dark ,, Geet was sitting near DM , Ammy was playing in her lap ,, Geet tried many times but Maan was not responding ,, DM became worried for him ,, she didn't have courage to face any harm for her family ,,her eyes turned teary nd started praying for him ,, seeing her like that Geet became more tense nd pacing in d living hall ,, he came near 10 pm ,, seeing him she started her Qs session nd didn't give him a chance to reply ,, helplessly Maan scold her nd she became angry ,, Geet went back in kitchen with teary eyes then remained there ,, Maan sat near DM nd consoled her ,, told her d reason for becoming late nd his phone was on silent coz he was on patrolling nd cdn't take d call ,, 2 more officers wr with him ,, DM relieved nd went to her room taking sleeping Ammy with her ,, lil Ammy slept sometime with DM nd sometime with Maaneet ,, Maan went in room nd changed ,, his mind was thinking about Geet who was angry with him now ,, she sent his dinner with Nakul nd didn't show her face in bedroom ,, Maan asked about her nd nakul said that she was very upset , he even told him how both d ladies wr worried for him ,, Maan felt bad for Geet nd decided to say sorry .

There Geet too realized her mistake ,, it was true that in her tension she didn't give him any chance to give reasons of his delay nd not replying d calls ,, she felt bad nd decided to say sorry ,, she made coffee for him nd find him in lobby watching out in foggy nyt ,, she forwarded d mug at him ,, he took quietly glancing at her dull face,, Lt Mjr. Maan Singh Khurana a very tough Army officer for outer world but very soft nd caring for his small family,, he cdn't hurt Geet.

Geet: wo ,, I m sorry ,, I really behaved very immature ,,, sorry .

He looked at her lowered head nd held her hand which was twisting d corner of her dupatta ,, sat on d settee nd made her sit near him ... Geet , look at me ,, plzz ,, she looked with wet eyes nd next moment hugged him ,, he placed d mug on side table nd hugged her back ,, pecked her head ..I m sorry too Geet , but u know my duties nd have to give me time to reply na .. Satabdi train ki traha se shuru hui to ruki nahi ,, Geet looked at him with a pout calling her Shatabdi train ,, he smiled at her mouthing sorry again nd then saw that it starting snow fall ,,, this was d 1st fall of d season ,, it was looking so heavenly ,, something clicked in his mind nd he removed his jacket ,, then removed Geet's shawl nd dragged her out in lawn ,, where nature was showering its blessings .

******

These wr beautiful moments of their life ... yes he loves her ,, it is not any compromise nd force but pure love for her ,, she made her place in his heart with her altruistic nd soft nature ,, he was cherishing those most romantic moments of his life when he brought her out in lawn to feel nd enjoy d 1st fall of winter weather ,, she was so elated nd enthralled ,, both wr watching nd feeling d soft feather touch of snow flecks over them ,, she denied that time but now she was enjoying .

Geet was looking like an angel in her white suit nd that snow made d nyt more beautiful nd romantic ,, Maan felt a gush of emotions nd he confessed ... I Love U ,,, I love u Geet .

She was praising d nature nd her words stuck in her mouth listening those magical words from him ... God she was dying to hear this ,, not she every person who loves waited for these words to move forward in their life with their companion ,, Geet was froze at her place ,, Maan smiled seeing her like that nd came behind her ,, glued her with him giving her a back hug nd whispered again in her ear ... yes Geet , I m in love nd love u so much ,, I never though that i'll fall in love but u make this heart to fall for u ,, thanks for coming in my life ,, u brought back happiness in my life ,, in our life Geet.

Geet turned in his arms nd looked deep in his eyes ,, d wetness of her eyes nd blushy smile was showing d happiness of her heart .

Maan: Geet , kya hua ? Kuch kaho na .

She was chocked nd nodded in a no which disheartened him ,, he too wanted to listen those words from her , but her next gesture startled him ,,, Geet placed her hand on his cheek , rose on her toes nd placed a soft peck on his other cheek ,,, Aawww,,, his whole melted in a blink ,, he looked at her awed ,, she blushed nd hide her face in his neck hugging him ... Gosh ! I love it ,, he smiled nd cocooned her in his arms , today he cd say .. She made his life beautiful .

Both came inside ,, she went to DM's room checking her nd Ammy nd he went to his bedroom took a book nd sat in his rocking chair to read ,, he knew that she took some time to finish some work nd then came in d room ,, d warmer was on nd room was cozy ,, his eyes went at their wedding photo frame placed on d pet table along with d pic of Ammy nd Meera ,, he leaned back closing his eyes ,, his thought went back nd flashes of past few months started floating in his mind .. How his happy life turn upside down in few hrs,, not only he but Geet too faced an ugly side of her selfish relatives ,, tough circumstances brought them together ,,she saved his small baby ,, that was a miracle ,, even she took care of DM nd many more ppl who wr badly affected coz of that disaster ... A deadly flood which destroyed everything of millions ppl nd hundreds of ppl lost their lives ,, that was a heart wrenching phase of his life nd he lost Meera in that but Geet came in their life like an angel .

*****

Maan opened his eyes with a jerk when he felt a soft touch near his eyes ,, she was wiping d tears which flew down from d corner of his eyes ,, he looked at her with a weak smile nd she nodded in a no ,, Maan move close to her ,, held her from waist circling his arms around her waist nd hide his face in her tummy ,, Geet caressed his head nd threaded her fingers in his thick hair ,, consoled him .

Geet: kya hua ? ku udaas ho ,, abhi to kitne khush thy .

Maan: promise me , u won't live us alone.

Geet: I won't ,, how cn I ? when my happiness lies in Ammy , u nd DM .

Then her eyes shine with naughtiness ,, she bit her lip nd made a pouted face .

Geet: but what about u ,, u never think about me .

Maan looked at her : when I didn't think ?

Geet galred : today ,, do u have any idea how worried we wr ,, but why sd u think about me ,, u didn't reply nd scold me when I asked u .

Maan: Geet ,, did u give me any chance to open my mouth after coming back ,, u never stop when started to talk like Shatabdi Exp .

Geet looked at him with open mouth : hhww u again called me Shatabdi Exp ,, leave me , I won't talk to u ,, go .(she pushed him a lil nd turned faking anger)

Maan got up nd pulled her to him with a naughty smile ... nahi chodunga to ,, ab bhi gussa ho ,, ab to maine I love u bhi bol diya aur kaise manau ?

Geet blushed recalling those moments nd Maan was enjoying her pink cheeks which turned more dark with her blush ... sshhh ,,, mishty .. u r looking so tempting , I want to eat u alive ... Maan ,, plzz ,,, what plzz ,, permitting me to eat u ... no...

He laughed ... then ..? don't tease me ,, u r so bad ,, really , nd when I showed u my devil side ? Bolo mishty .

Geet looked at him all shy : devil side bhi baki hei abhi ?

Maan: hhuumm,,want to see ? ( he asked her with a killer smile nd pulled her more to him with a jerk which made weak on her knees ,, she was melting in his love , sighed nd hide her face in his chest )

Maan cocooned her ,, pecked her forehead ,, brought her near bed nd sat on d edge having her in his lap ,, he himself was facing a sweet torture in her closeness ,, she always made him hard even her mere smile affected him ,, both wr controlling their desires from last two months ,, On their SR Geet had requested him to move forward in their relation only when he feel love for her , not bounded with any compromise or duty .

****

Now she was in his arms ,, though she didn't say those magical words to him but her soft peck opened d doors ,, she was shyly sitting in his lap hiding her face in his neck ,, he cupped her face ,, kissed her forehead , eyes , cheeks ,, d corner of her lower lip ,, aawww,, she gasped nd tightened her grip digging her fingers in his back ,, he lost his last strand of control nd took those rosy lip in his to quench his long thirst , entered his tongue in d sweet world of her mouth nd started tasting d sweetness ,, both wr cherishing their 1st kiss,, she became breathless , hummed nd try to part to get some air ,, Maan realized that he was becoming hard nd parted a lil , both took a breath nd he gave few more soft feather kisses ,, whispered rubbing his lips on her... Geet cn I plan for us ? she blush hard nd nodded in a yes ... G e e t ,, mishty ,, r u ready to bear my devil side ,,, M a a n ,, he chuckled ,,, a sweet devil my love .

Geet sighed nd hide her face in his crook humming ,, M a a n ,, i love u too ,, ... O J a a n ( he startled nd a chilled wave passed in his body with her confession) ,, take me M a a n ... G e e t ... J a a n ,, i love u ,,, love u so much ,, he moaned contented nd leaned back having her in his arms ,, covered them with soft warm blanket ,, glued her to him nd started adoring & filling her every pour with his love ,, Their life is beautiful now .

Edited by lakpm - 9 years ago

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lakspriya

@lakspriya

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Posted: 9 years ago

MY LAST ORDER

'ye kya hai abhi tak courier nahi aaya... this is height of carelessness, I should sue this website now for late delivery'

she was cursing and mumbling while walking to and fro in her living room near the door...

'geet... ye kya hai, aa jaega na courier, aise me jaldi aaega kya... jao ja k apna kaam karo, time waste karte rehti ho.'

said her mom.

geet: mumma I just received mail of delivery, they must be coming to deliver please aap disturb nahi karo.

her mom left her shaking head on her craziness.

just then the doorbell rung

and geet ran to open the door... it was her first online shopping she was hell excited to receive the product and forgot all about her anger of few minutes ago for late delivery.

courier boy: "miss geet"

geet: yah that's me...

he was staring at her like anything...

geet: excuse me...

she spoke to gain his attention

courier boy: yeah... ma'am pls sign here...

she signed the delivery receipt, collected her parcel and closed the door, hell excited to open

her parcel.

she tore open the pack and tried the product, it was beautiful kurta, she was thrilled now it fit her perfectly, she logged into her account in that site, rated the product five, and then again started surfing something new to order...

'its fun' she mumbled to herself.

A week later...

she was again waiting for her order to be delivered, and they were late again! she had received the mail saying her product will be delivered by 3 pm and it was 5 pm already, this is heights now, she got angry...

just then the doorbell rang, and she rushed to door, to give a good piece of mind to the courier man. she opened the door and attacked him with her words...

geet: ye sab kya hai... you people are so careless... always late in delivering the product, never think about the inconvenience of the customer... do you realise how late you are...?

courier boy: sorry ma'am... due to festive season there is heavy order and hence late, but it will not repeat.

he replied calmly before she could spill more lava on him.

geet: fine...

she calmed a bit, and collected her items...

it was almost 2 months and she couldn't stop her craze for online shopping and fighting with that courier boy if he was 10 minutes late even, she recognised him well now by face and voice; and so did he, she guessed.

one day she was in a movie with her friends...

and there she found him, that courier boy is sitting in the luxury section of theatre in the same movie. she was surprised, shocked...

N told her friend abt that.

friend: geet tu pagal hai kya...

geet made baby face and nodded in no

friend: toh kya samjhu mai... u mean ki jo courier boy tere ghar online orders deliver karne Aata hai, he's sitting here purchasing 600/- ticket?

forget that, you seem to recognise him here in this dimly lit auditorium... pathetic!

chup-chap movie dekh, or let's go.

geet nodded again... but she wasn't satisfied.

Earlier too she found that he use to dress nicely

But multiplex was not expected...

when she reached home, she ordered something...

As she was willing 2 know abt him, and waited anxiously for the delivery...

But for that order another man came for delivery...

She asked 'where is the guy who usually comes'

delivery man: kon? maan baba?

he is on a leave as he went to bengalure for an interview...

She is again surprised and

Curious to know abt Him

she Just asked him 'do u have any idea when he will return'

he just said 'may be never if he gets the job...'

Then she was back to her life

after struggling a lot

Trying hard to forget everything.

a month or so had passed when she again ordered something from the same site.

N this time he was there

and she was happy to see him

But showed nothing...

and then when he was returning after delivery

She couldn't stop herself and just asked

geet: job nai mili

N she was like shit,

kyu pucha maine

He turned n asked

maan: sorry

What job?

I didn't get u...

geet: for which you went bangalure

and he was surprised

to see that coming from her, he Just asked..

maan: How u came to know about all this?

to which She said 'i asked about you'

N all

He replied job toh mili but they were offering very less...'

She asked 'how much'

maan: 6 lacks

N for a mba from symbyosis its not enough

hearing him she is like completely blank.

geet: U mean the man standing here, coming from moths for delivering parcel is an mba?

N she is just smiling

He said 'yes i m'

geet: u r nuts..

why u r doing this job then...?

maan: well thats a different story...

geet: and i Will love 2 know only if u dont have a problem...

maan: may be when i will bring the matching sandals for ur dress

Right now i have 2 go...

They both laughed.

Next meeting she just asked 'you were going to tell me today...?'

He said 'u can join me tommorow at nehru garden..

Morning 6...'

She is blank again As 'why nehru garden...?'

He just smiled n said 'may be u will know better

Or we will get some time 2...'

maan: good bye miss geet...

geet: hey... how u know my name?

He again smiled

maan: this is delivery no 22...

N to that she said

geet: just kidding maan...

they both laughed n he went away

geet was a bit confused now

Whether to go or not...?

As she is curious as well as afraid...

N finally the curiosity wins..

She went there..

and there she was rendered shocked once again..

The guy was surrounded by nearly 60 old aunies n uncles

N there is a silent surrounding

All are doing meditation

She is just smiling standing in the corner...

Suddenly maan noticed the her...

Just waived his hand

towards her and asked 2 wait in sign...

She said 'ok'

Wondering whats kind of guy he is...

Finally the meditation Session is over...

and They met...

maan: Lets walk

She is like k..

No problem

They r walking Together..

Silently..

Finally the silence is broken

Geet: so whats the story

He is like what story...

geet: story of a guy

who is Completely different

Or may be crazy

Named maan...

Smiling both of them...

geet: So whats your full name?

she asked...

'Its maan.. Maan Khurrana...'

Geet: n where r you from...?

maan: Basically from south

he replied

geet: N what u r doing here in Pune...?

apart from visiting my door...

Laughter there was...

maan: I was doing my MBA n now searching for a job...

He said...

'OK...'

Se replied...

Curiously she asked 'n what u use to do here...?'

'Just trying 2 get a diff view of life' he replied...

She was confused

'Different view?'

maan: just like spending time here... N also they enjoy my meditation tips

So it just went like this...

Geet: u really r are an interesting character...

Both smiled...

Then boy asked some common things like about her

Study

Likes etc etc...

geet: So whats the need behind your part time work...

Suddenly she asked...

He explained

maan: There is no need actually

Even my parents don't know about this

Its that i like 2 be independent... N its fun too

geet: Ohh it's 8... Have 2 go... Bye...

she freaked out suddenly and bid bye

N she was leaving the garden

'Geet' he said.. From behind

'What?' she asked turning

maan: Just want 2 know which no. i can contact in case main raasta bhul gaya next order laate waqt...

They laughed together..

then exchanged

their contacts

She went away.

From that it went like this

Online texting...

Sometimes calling more like friends now they are..

Just being connected all the time

Giving normal updates of life...

They were enjoying each others company...

She asked once 'tell me whether i should go for red or green?'

'No matter what i will deliver that on time' he replied

'Will see that' she said...

And it was like a sweet fight...

N he asked 'what if i will deliver in time?'

She thought a little n replied 'coffee...'

and then after delivering

They went out for a coffee...

They had a great time together...

And suddenly maan received a call

he said will talk later to the caller and cut the call.

She asked abt the call

and He ignored

Now she is a bit upset

The coffee cum date is now over...

Then they went away...

She is angry sad

She don't know why

She is feeling bad...

Suddenly her mumma said

mom: U should talk

Baat kar ke we can solve any thing...

She trying 2 be innocent showing as she didn't understand any thing

geet: What u r saying abt?

she asked her mom

Mom: its k... Text him

she smiled n went away

The girl blushed n decided to text

him

'Hey Maan, i don't know why i reacted that way... I know u may be confused... Its just mujhe laga we are close enough so that u can tell anything 2 me... Don't know why but felt bad...

maan is now also feeling sorry

He text back

'i always wanted to tell u all'

She replied 'well i m here 4 u.. U can say it now'

He smiled n said all...

'that he was serious with a girl

She ditched him...

N because of her only he started meditation'

She is now a bit upset

Her behaviour changed

She said 'u should have told this earlier'

He tried to explain a lot

But her feelings were heavy now...

he Tried a lot to convince

She is not ready to listen...

It was all getting irritating now

he shouted Finally

'That was my past y u r getting involved...?'

Now its a bit serious matter...

They both r not talking 2 each other...

'Sorry' maan texted

her

No reply

Now he is guilty

Saying sorry

Again n again..

N again..

Called

Msged

Now she is listening nothing...

After a week

or so...

The calling bell rang of the girls door...

She came outside

There was a boy face covered with a parcel from that same courier company where he worked.

Man: your parcel

geet: i ordered nothing...

maan: I know but this one i ordered for u...

N i request u 2 plz accept it as this is THE LAST ORDER i m delivering 2 u...

His head is down

Not even looking at her...

She took the order singed said nothing... Went inside

She in order to control herself closed door then went running into her room.. Locked the door of room cant wait even a second...

She jumped on the bed

Opened the parcel...

There was a letter

Written in bold 'plz read before opening further...'

"Geet...

Sorry again for my behavior.. Ab maaf bhi kar de yaar..

Look

I have something 4 u..

Hope u will like it..

The thing inside the parcel is with me from a very long duration..

It always cause good luck 4 me..

I m sure u will handle it like i did.

N will accept it...

Maan"

She is now happy n blank

Happy coz of letter

Blank coz of the parcel

She sit quite 4 some time

Then finally opened the parcel

Finally she opened that...

It was a beautiful box

She opened the box...

N after seeing the gift

She just cant stop crying...

There was a small glass heart...

Jiske niche ek paper tha

which read

"Yes i love u..."

she cried silently for sometime, hiding her face in the pillow...

then she sat up suddenly...

'maan... shit'

she mumbled and she rushed to open the door n there he was, standing with open arms, waiting for her, she jumped and hugged him.

he hugged her back.

'I love you geet'

she cried more, he could feel wet due to her tears, she sniffed then once and then he felt a soft brush of her lips on his cheeks... he closed his eyes to savour the moment, it was etched in their minds for eternity.

they broke apart from the eternal hug... he was smiling, and she was sniffing controlling her sobs...

geet: hass kya rahe ho... u r not talking to her anymore...

she threatened him. he nodded and pulled her into his embrace...

Maan: sure... but you my dear, need to stop shopping online... ager tumhe koi aur courier boy pasand aa gaya toh mera kya hoga...

her mouth opened in O shape and she hit him continuously on his chest then hugged him again...

geet: aisa kuchh nahi hoga... it was MY LAST ORDER which you just delivered.

and why were u staring at me when you came to delver the first order...?

Maan: Woh... umm... u know it is like

he mumbled and jumbled, to which she pouted... and their nok-jhok continued throughout their lives.

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OUR FILMY LOVE STORY

Maaneet sat on sofa with lowered head in a spacious hall of lavish mansion . Their parents and siblings were sitting on opposite sofa . Their parents were giving them angry glares while their siblings were glancing at them with teasing looks . Who will believe that two superstars of Bollwood were actually scared of their parents ??

" dare to answer Maan " spoke Mr.Khurana with high tone..

" hmmm dad actually wo " stammered Maan while giving his answer..

" Geet hume aapse yeh umeed nahi thi " complained Mrs.Handa with a sad face and Geet didn't dare to raise her head..

" but mumma maine toh kuch nahi kiya joh kiya woh inhone kiya " meekly said Geet poiting towards Maan and in return got a glare for him..

" acha maine kya kiya tum bhi toh bade maze le rahi thi and now u are accussing me " retaorted back Maan standing up from sofa..

" Maan chup chap baith jaiye " outragely commanded Mr.Khurana and Maan like a obedient child immediately sat down..

" Maan agar aapko I LOVE YOU hi kehna tha toh akele mein bolte..yeh kya shooting ke time propose kar diya Geet aur wo bhi kiss ke saath " annoyingly said Mrs.Khurana..

" haa bhai itni bhi kya desperation thi " teasingly told Vicky winking at him and Maan showed him a punch..

" aur haa jab humne inn sahabzade ko kaha tha Geet ki photo dekhne ke liye rishte ke liye toh inhone staright away maana kar diya yeh bolkar ki dadi I am busy shooting for my new film " exclaimed dadi showing her big eyes to Maan..

" kya ?? wo photo Geet ki thi " shockingly asked Maan..

" ji haa beta " replied dadi..

" maa Geet ne bhi same reason diya tha jab humne unko Maan ki photo di thi " told Mrs.Handa..

Both families were known producers of film industry and were friends . Maaneet were also childhood friends but got seperated when Maan was 11 yrs old and Geet 7 yrs old bcoz of Maan studies . Khurana's have decided to send him to abroad for his studies . After Maan's arrival to India , both didn't get time to meet each other . They both wanted to become actors but never took their parent's help . They set their foot in the industry by their own will and hardwork and soon become superstars bcoz of their breathtaking looks and phenomenol acting but never got to chance to work together whereas families were planning for their marriage..

" ab kya kare hum..saare media mein inke proposal ke baat spread hu chuki hai " tensed Mr.Handa spoke breaking silence..

" shaadi karni hai aur kya " said dadi shrugging her shoulders shocking Maaneet..

" but dadi thodi din toh hume boyfriend-girlfriend ki zindagi toh jeene do " whinned Maan while Geet nodded her head making a puppy face as if agreeing to him..

" aap logo ne jo karna tha wo kar liya ab humari baari hai " told Mr.Khurana with authorative tone and Maaneet made a baby face..

So everyone decided to marry them after a week and got busy in their marriage talks except for bride and groom who were sitting with face in between their hands and giving each other looks..

" chaliye bhai ab hume apni FILMY LOVE STORY bataiye aur sabse important shooting mein kiss ka chakar " excitedly said Annie while Vicky and Rajji ( Geet's sis ) too forced them to reveal their love story..

" oye Annie..FILMY LOVE STORY kaise " asked Geet confusingly..

" kaise kya..aap dono ki love story film set par shuru huyi isliye FILMY LOVE STORY " replied Annie with a wide smile..

" accha thik hai..here u go " said Geet and started telling about their FILMY LOVE STORY..

Both Maaneet got offer for a film from same producer and both instantly said yes for the film as the script was really good and secondly their character's name in film were Maan and Geet only. As usually their first meeting was totally wierd.. Geet entered set and started talking to everyone bcoz of her chirpy nature . She asked about Maan and director told her about his location..

" hii..myself Geet Handa..ur co-actor" introduced Geet herself to Maan standing beside him..

Maan was sitting on chair playing on his I-pad . He looked towards her on hearing her voice and then spoke rudely " hii "..

" itna sukha hii " Geet made a cute frowning face..

" aur kaise hii bolte hai Ms.Geet Handa " said Maan totally engrosed in his game..

" well forget it..I am not in a mood to fight " said Geet and walked towards director..

Director made them understand their scene and gave them dialogues to read . After 30 mins , both come back in their desired dresses and started shooting for their first ever scene . It was a normal scene of their first meeting in film..

Days were going on shooting with each other . Maan was attracted to Geet from their first meeting and Geet was as usually ignorant to all these things . Their romantic scenes made them to fall for each other but both were not ready to confess their feelings and Maan was going insane bcoz of his love towards her and that dreams of her which didn't let him sleep peacefully . Their cute fights added more fun to their love story.. Finally after 3 months of shooting , Maan decided to confess his love for her . He thought to ask her for a date after shooting last scene of their film . He was so excited . He was jumping in joy from morning and everyone was giving him wierd looks..

Maan entered set and roamed his eyes all over to look for Geet and found her standing with director . She was dressed in white suit with blue border on her dupatta as per the scene . She was looking breathtaking in that attire making Maan's heart skipped a beat.. He walked towards them smilingly and gave his charming smile to her . Director told them the scene and they started shooting..

Lights Camera Action !!!!!

Geet was sitting on swing cribbing to babaji " plz babaji let it snow..even 2-3 kg will be enough otherwise he will not say ILU to me " and it started snowing . Geet happily ran to call MSK..

She finds him in the alley and pulls him outside and says " I won so now tell me those magical words "..

" u think I don't wanna say those words to u " said Maan..

" but u troubled me so much for these magical words so I thought u didn't wanna say " told Geet making a baby face..

Geet was blabbering and suddenly Maan says " I LOVE U GEET " and shukran allah starts..

Maan comes closer to Geet and with serious tone confessed his love " I LOVE U GEET really..in real life "..

Geet shockingly looks at him with teary eyes . These words she wanted to hear from so many days from his mouth . All cast and crew were shocked this line was included in the scenes . The scene was to end with Maan saying saying ILU but from where this twist came..

Geet kissed him on his right cheek emotionally but Maan had other plans . He grabbed her face and without thinking about anything smacked his lips on her kissing her passionately..

The media which was there to capture some behind scenes got superb news for their channels and it just took a minute for video to go viral and their parents got shock of their life after seeing news and immediately call them to Handa Mansion..

" rest u know " said Geet sighing . All gave Maaneet a teasing a look..

And finally after one week both got married in a grand way grabbing whole India's attention..

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Those Few Days ...

We reside in a country, where it is believed that soulmates meet each other via their parents,i.e., Arrange Marriage. Same

was the condition with Maan and Geet; their parents had already selected their respective partners and were looking forward

to the alliance. Poor Maan and Geet had no say in this. They couldn't say that they didn't want to get married to their

parents' choice and if by mistake they voiced their opinion they would have to listen to their parents'never ending BIG BIG

lectures on "me and your mom had an arrange marriage and we are so happily married". So not taking a lot of tension I

simply,can u imagine, me, Maan Singh Khurana, was ready to meet the girl with no terms and condition.

So, next day we were all set to move Shimla, because my dad's chosen girl is a resident of Shimla. I certainly had a very low

feeling that the girl I am gonna be tied is simply arrange marriage. I know nothing about her and I will be engaged to her in

coming few weeks.

But my family was very happy and they were looking forward to this winter vacation especially my siblings. How mean of them

!! My life-long suffering week will be one of their enjoyable vacations. :'(

We were going by car,so we had to start a little early but there was a lot of fog so our visit was delayed but trust me those

two days journey was spectacular; the snow cladded mountain, the foggy weather, those cold breezes and those beautiful

greenery covered in snow as if wrapped up in white fluffy sheets. Oh my god! That natural beauty took my heart. It was the

glory of nature which astounded me which I can never describe in words.

And here I entered a very beautiful mansion situated on a hill top covered with nature's beauty full of greenery and

colourful flowers with an open sitting lounge where I could spend my memorable morning and evening coffee with your partner.

(Maan hushed himself as to what he was thinking. This marriage thing is really making me mad.) We moved inside to see a very

warm and welcoming interiors which gave me a feel of home and there was dad's friend welcoming our family "mr.mohinder singh

handa,a retired brigadieur.

Mr. handa - "Oh welcome ji ,welcome", and hugs my father and speaks "are rajveer inna late kitthe ho gaya ,yaara. main aur

teri bhabhi toh kabse teri rah dekh rahe hai." And then his eyes moved to my grand mom and bent to take blessing and said: Maaji! You took a long time to come to your son's

house. I am very angry.

Savitri, my grandmom smiled and replied, "Yes, my son, it has been really long, but now that I have come, I have made sure of

a long visit."

Hearing the voices, Rano came outside and saw the Khuranas standing in their hall so she told her husband, "Arre. Let them

enter inside." And bent down to take Savitri's blessings.

And seated them and they started their conversations and here I was just getting bored so I walked and looked around the hall

and there I saw a lot of pictures hung on the other side of the hall. The pictures were of a girl and do I need to say I was

clean bowled. She was an epitome of beauty. And I was drooling over her pictures and embedding all her expressions in the

diary of my heart. I was just wishing to meet her and when I turned the same girl crashed into me.

The same girl who made a permanent place in my heart was standing their with an irritated pout. Oh I just wished to take

those pouty lips and suck all the nectar she contained. And then I recalled my wordings and I chided myself. What are you

speaking. Control yourself.

That girl who was trying to wear her earring just dashded in a man or you say her guest and got irritated as he was drooling

over her from the last 5 minutes.

Girl, "Sorry. I didn't see you."

Maan, "I'm Sorry. Even I was in my own world."

Girl smiled on his humbleness and thanked him but when she was going to move Maan said, "Remember, whichever way you choose

it will always end on me."

Girl gave an irritated look and moved to the hall and said, "Namaste dadi."

Savitri : Arre Geet. God bless you. Come here my dear and sit near me.

Geet blushes and moves to sit with them, talking normally with them.

Rano said, "Please you all freshen up for lunch." And then asked Ramesh (their servant) to show them all their rooms. Dadi

and rajvir and teena khurana on the ground floor and all the bachha party on the first floor.

They all had lunch and then retired to their respective rooms for some rest. But maan wanted to have his coffee so he told

Ramesh and went to the garden to sit there and have his coffee. When he went there, he saw geet sitting there and enjoying

her coffee. He went near her and said in a gentleman's voice, "Can I sit here?"

Geet got perplexed with his presence but said: "Yeah sure. Please have a seat."

Maan - "Geet, I will not beat around the bush, you know why I am here."

Geet just nods her head.

Maan : I want to know you more Geet.

Geet smiles and blushes on his direct approach.

And soon they started talking. They got well acquainted with each other.

Then they both went inside happy to spend some quality time with each other.

In the evening, all were sitting together, and made a programme of exploring Shimla, and Geet was to be their guide. Her

father told her that she had to take Annie and Maan to all the best places of town. And geet nodded with a blush.

After a while, Geet was flipping the tv channels and lost in recalling a day before yesterday ,when she was so annoyed on the

news of her marriage. She was so irritated to know that tomorrow some Maan Singh Khurana, her daddy's best friend's son is

coming to meet her and they will possibly be tied in a knot soon. Very soon. Whole two days she was very agitated with this

news and was cursing Maan under her breath. She was lost in those thoughts when a song broke her reverie.

"Ek nazar mein bhi pyar hota hai , maine suna hai Do baton mein iqrar hota hai ,maine suna hai , Sama rangeen sa ,lagne lagta hai , Jahan haseen sa , lagne lagta hai , Koi dil par cha jaye to , aisa hota hai , Maine suna hai ..."

And she was recalling the first collision with Maan, their first coffee together after lunch. And here, Maan was passing

through the hall when he heard this song and stopped at his track and his legs on its own accord took him to the hall where

Geet was sitting alone and watching the song. He smiled thinking that it is a perfect song to describe his condition.

Geet saw maan and stood and said, "You here? Do you need anything?"

Maan who was in a trance said,"You."

Geet - "Ji?"

Maan - "Oh, I just came to drink water. Do you mind if I accompany you in watching tv?"

Geet nodded and smiled.

Oblivious to them, many eyes were following them and their movement and they were happy that their kids were actually

respecting their decision and were taking a step forward.

Next day,

Geet, Maan and Annie were ready to go for their exploration of Shimla and they started for the famous jakhoo temple, an

ancient temple of Hanumana, which provides a beautiful location shivalik range. It is located on jakhoo hill and they started

for it. They didn't take the driver with them as they wanted to spent some quality time with each other and didn't want

interruption and above all, all three of them knew driving and they thought they will take rounds in driving. Maan was

driving the car and Geet took the passenger seat and Annie had to sit at the back . So they started their journey towards

the jakhoo hill and in about half an hour they were standing in front of the temple and Annie jumped out of the car and said

excitedly, "Can't control my curiosity to see the natural beauty." In order to get some privacy, Maan and Geet didn't budge her more. They both came out of the car and Maan went away to take

pooja items and after closing the car door Geet turned to go only to find her dupatta stuck in the door. She could not move.

She tried to unlock the door but she was not able to do so.

Here Maan turned only to find Geet missing and feeling very restless with the thought of where could Geet go.

He started looking for her and found her crying near the car. When he moved closer he saw Geet's dupatta stuck in the door.

Maan didn't know why but those tears really pained him.

He immediately unlocked the door and took out her dupatta and instead of giving it to her covered her head with the dupatta

and gently wiped away her tears and took her in a side hug and then they went to the temple.

Geet was awed with this small gesture of his and felt a deep contentment of protection around her. She instantly drew towards

him and her eyes were following his each gesture and expression which told her that now both of them are in an unseen bond of

love.

Seeing them together Annie commented teasingly, "Bhai , Shimla is very beautiful na?"

Maan looked at Geet and said, "Indeed. It's very beautiful."

Geet blushed on his comment.

Annie - "And the weather is also so nice na." In a teasing tone

Maan said : Yes. A very soothing one.

Annie : Yes, it is like love in the air in a naughty tone

Maan who was lost in geet answered, "Absolutely, Annie."

Geet blushed scarlet listening to the duo.

Annie - "Bhabhi, don't be shy."

This "bhabhi" word gave both maan and geet a jittery feeling and they both blushed on it and Maan said with fake anger,

"Annie"

Annie - "Bhai, now don't Annie me. (with a teasing tone)

Then they did the pooja rituals and later went to 'honey hut' to have their breakfast.

Geet asked Annie, "What will you have for breakfast?"

Annie - "Anything bhabhi but not too spicy and full of chesse. Yummy!"

Geet and Maan smiled on her childish answer.

Geet looked at Maan and Maan replied, "Anything you order."

Annie looked teasingly at Maan, but maan ignored her. But geet blushed red.

Geet ordered the breakfast.

Annie seeing all so quiet said, "Bhabhi, where will we go after this?"

Geet - "Summer hill"

Annie - "Ohh then?"

Geet smiled at her curiosity and thought she is such a cute kid.

Geet - "Mall road"

Annie - "Yahoo! Shopping"

Geet and Maan smiled seeing Annie's excitement.

Geet - "Yes dear."

Annie - "Then, bhabhi?"

Geet - "Naldehra, dear."

Annie - "Naldehra?"

Geet - Yes. mama, papa, uncle, aunty already have reached there. We have our cottage there.

Annie - "Wow! Cottage"

Geet - "Yes. It's a beautiful place about 23kms from here. A complete natural bliss."

Maan saw the shine in Geet's eyes when she was talking about Naldehra. He was really looking forward to Naldhera visit.

Till then Maan's order came.

Grill sandwich, club sandwich ,honey spicy potatoes, and her favourite walnut pastry for her,black forest for Annie and

cappuchino for Maan as she was not sure whether he will have pastry or not.

Maan was eating his sandwich when Annie suddenly asked Maan to open his mouth and fed him some of her yummy potatoes. On the

other hand geet was enjoying her pastry and Maan after tasting so much spice started coughing and his eyes started watering.

Annie panicked seeing this and got scared that now her brother was going to shout at her, geet not knowing what to do brought

her pastry spoon infront of his mouth.

Maan, without a second thought, took a bite from her spoon and the tingling sensation was soon better.

Maan took another bite eyeing geet and enjoyed her pastry and geet blushed thinking that Maan was eating from her jhuta spoon

and enjoying her jhuti pastry.

And then seeing Annie very quiet and sad, Geet eyed Maan to console Annie.

Maan smiled seeing Geet's care towards Annie. Maan lovingly ruffled Annie's hairs and Annie was happy to see that her brother

was no longer angry at her.

They enjoyed rest of the journey knowing each other. Geet took the turn to drive till Naldehra.

Annie slept while going to Naldehra as she was very tired.

The same time Maan tuned the radio to listen to some songs. Then only a song popped making Geet and Maan to see each other

and they smiled on the wordings of the song which were depicting their feelings in it.

"dil ne kaha chupke se ,ye kya hua chupke se, Kyun naye lag rahe hain yeh dharti gagan, Meine pucha to boli yeh pagli pawan, Pyar hua chupke se. Yeh kya hua chupke ..."

Both were listening to the song and enjoying the evening together and moving towards their beautiful destination, Naldehra.

Both reached Naldehra around 8 p.m. and Annie excitedly start telling her whole day journey to everybody while Maan and Geet

just smiled at her over enthusiasm. And their night was very peaceful in the lap of natural beauty.

Early morning, Maan woke up and went for a walk near the area. When he came out he was surprised to see Geet early in the

morning, roaming in the garden and enjoying the cool breeze. He was lost in her and coughed to gain her attention. She looked

at him and he wished her, "Good morning"

Geet smiled and replied, "Good morning"

Maan - "Can I join you?" Geet smiled and nodded. But suddenly the temperature was dipping and it started to snow.

Geet was about to go inside when maan caught her hands and said, "Geet, I never believed in love. But it's strange for me to

admit that the first time I saw you I fell in love with you. Your looks took my breathe away. Your eyes captivated me and

whenever you are with me gives me a soothing feel. My heart beats whenever I see you. I get restless with the thought that I

have to return back to Delhi without you. I'm awed by the care and fondness you have for my family. I don't feel shy in

admitting that this is love at the first sight for me. I LOVE YOU Geet.

Geet blushed hearing his confession and looked down feeling shy to look at him. Maan gently cupped her chin and raised her

face to look her in the eyes.

Maan - "There is no hurry geet, I know maybe you don't think in the same way..."

Geet interrupted him by putting her hand on his mouth and said, "Maan, I never thought I will not be myself after meeting

you. After knowing you in these few days, I knew you are the only with whom I want to be, with whom I want to spend my whole

life. I love you Maan. I love you so much."

Listening to this confession of hers, Maan pulled Geet towards himself and hugged her tightly in his arms, promising himself

to never let her go.

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The Last shot

The cool air brought with it snow flakes drifting first like tiny stars from the heavens above then picking up pace.

The serene mountainside vista in Mussoorie resembled a winterscape on a Christmas card.

As he tipped the bottle to gulp another shot, all he heard were the words, "I love you Geet".

The scene had played over a million times on Youtube. The fans were mad for it.

The well built handsome star with his steel grey eyes and flatter than flat abs and bulging muscles was the reason for the mad crowd of female fans.

The male crowd was equally mad for her delicate beauty, deeper than deep eyes and her fabulous figure.

The scene had led to the culmination of their relationship.

A secret love for her, perhaps a fleeting affair for him; never spoken of, nor admitted to. Neither could afford to divulge anything in those days.

Stardom was not a thing to trifle with. It is a pre planned journey and he had planned all his steps perfectly.

Hours were spent on hair, make up, PR; all of it to give the audience that 20 minutes of perfection.

Both of them had struggled enough and they knew the facts of popularity in Tellytown.

Linking up with someone could change their image in front of the audience. If this show ended, it would be difficult to find other work.

"There would be no personal commitments. Not until he was established", he had pronounced to the media in his forceful voice, "No steady relation, definitely no marriage or children. He had a goal and he would achieve it".

He wanted to be a star first and foremost.

Their relationship if he could call it that, except for that fateful night, had held onto the norms of propriety.

They had been strangers at first, cool and reserved.

The script had changed that. As the characters got closer, unwillingly, so did they. He started to notice her amber eyes and their magical qualities as he stared more and more into them.

Months of working together led to an awareness of each other. Each like, each dislike, each smile, each worry was seeping into the subconscious.

The scenes had gotten bolder. A catch, a fall, a hug here and there. It had begun to affect them and they had turned away from the feelings.

Hiding in their respective vans refusing to socialize with the cast and crew.

She had nervously skittered away knowing him and his goals.

Suppressed desires had a tendency to make a man irrational. He had fought with his feelings, inciting and provoking her every chance he got.

She had been too innocent to understand him and after some weeks of this treatment had turned silent and avoided him.

The producer had taken advantage of Geet's silence and thrust in his average looking daughter, Samira to replace her.

All her hard work, all the sacrifice had been in vain.

The script had been modified. An accident on the hills after the confession brought a new face to the show. Maan's memory was shown as lost. The new track separated them forever.

The introduction of Samira as the new lead opposite Maan tanked the show.

The audience rejected her. They wanted Geet and Maan back together.

It was never to be. Geet had gone away and no one knew where she was. It seemed that the earth had opened up and swallowed her.

Even Maan had not known where she was.

Later after a few weeks of struggling to find her, Samira had enlightened him that Geet had left the country with a rich businessman. He had added two and two and made five.

The swirling liquid in the bottle was dwindling as Maan took another gulp.

No matter how potent the liquor, it could not drown out his memories.

It could not drown out the feeling that something had gone wrong.

It could not drive away the anger that a tiny girl from some village in Punjab, a struggler, had somehow beat Maan Singh Khurana.

Only when he was drunk did he admit to himself that he wanted the things he had abhorred before.

He wanted her innocence and chatter, he wanted to declare before the world that she was his, he wanted to leave it all for her.

The shining crown of stardom was nothing in front of the shine of her eyes and her unconditional surrender and love.

Love, yes, he was now sure she had loved him then.

Yet his mammoth ego stood in the way of this want. He was Maan Singh Khurana. No one could leave him and get away with it. Truth be told, he hated the fact that she had given up on him. She had not trusted him to make it big someday. Surely that was not love.

"What rubbish Maan", he told himself, " Love, really? She left you. Sure you were an ass back then but was that how strong her so called love was? You are better off without her. You are still a star! Where is she? Lost in the darkness of obscurity".

"I hate you", he shouted when he could not convince himself, " .. I hate you!"

The beloved steel grey eyes of the super star were filled with tears of regret.

The bottle was empty so he tossed it from the edge of the mountain where he was staggering.

...

"I am sorry Geet", Dev said running his hands over his tired eyes. He had reviewed the documents before him for the nth time.

"There is no loop hole. The contract is water-tight. The channel can force you to go back for one show. 21 minutes to be exact. If you refuse, they can drag you to court in a public trial otherwise", he pronounced wearily.

She trembled with the words.

A public trial?

The media would be relentless.

Her past would be dug out. She could not afford that.

"Tum jao. Finish the show and come back in the next earliest flight possible. I will take care of the rest here", he said, standing up and patting Geet's shoulder.

Geet gulped and shook her head.

The obligation from Dev, her childhood friend from Hoshiarpur, had been enormous. She would not have been able to survive without him.

The job from Dev was one she could easily do without leaving the outhouse of his mansion.

His Daadima and wife had helped her with everything else.

"Mumbai mein mera ghar hai. I will tell the staff to keep things ready for you. Meera ko apne saath le jao. Wo tumhari help karegi. I'll make the arrangements".

Seeing the whitened face of Geet he put his arm around her. Anxious eyes met his.

"Geet! It is okay to be scared but remember one thing. Fear should not show on your face. If it does, people see you as weak. And the world gobbles up the weak. You are a damn good actress. You have chosen this life now and protecting it is upto you, right?"

"Thanks Devji. You always know the right thing to say", she smiled at him, " .. and you are right. I am a damn good actress. Main kaam finish kar ke aati hu".

"That's the spirit. Hum sab tumhara intezaar karege", Dev said giving her a high five.

...

The cheap production house had decided to splurge on its final shot. Not because they wanted to or because the audience demanded it.

The reason was simple. Money.

The show had made millions of rupees for the producer but he was very greedy and he had received an offer. If he sold the show on DVDs there were more millions to come.

The only catch was that Maan and Geet had to be together for the last scene. The audience would forgive all else if they got to see their favorite ending.

The producer was overjoyed and was going to use all the profits from the show to launch his daughter Samira in her first movie.

To heck with Maan and Geet. He had milked their popularity for all it was worth. He was done with them.

Since there were more pressing trailers to shoot for his upcoming movie, the staff for the last shot was minimal.

The small group would shoot the famous I love you scene in Mussoorie this time.

Maan would be seen roaming the wilderness of the mountains, asking for Babaji's help in finding his love. Geet would emerge out of the snow.

A slow run into each other's arms would ensue. I love you's would be said. A few orange blobs would be arranged to simulate a kiss and they would be done.

The message that the foolish audience loved "Dreams do come true .." would be the last shot.

The audience would lap it up and he would be a millionaire all over again.

...

A very hesitant girl dressed in a white salwar suit with a purple border stepped out for the scene.

Her hair was combed neatly into a choti with a few tendrils surrounding her face. A simple character for the show, she wore the barest traces of make up. A little liner to enhance the amber beauty of her eyes and some lip gloss to highlight the plump lips. Her natural beauty did not need much more than that.

The director explained the scene to her.

"They are wrapping up the shot with Maan searching for you and he'll be here shortly. We are losing light already and the snow will turn to rain soon, so this should be done in one take, alright", he explained.

At Geet's quiet nod, he pointed to a spot on one side, "You start from your mark there and run in slow motion towards Maan. The shot will pan in to your face. I want to see love in your eyes. Love after finding the man of your dreams at last. Overflowing love, understood?"

Geet was lost in thought. Love? Overflowing love? How will it be to finally bring it to her eyes and face? How will it be to walk away after expressing what she had hidden for so long?

"Geet! Geet? Are you listening Geet?", the sharp words brought her back to reality.

A sharp screech of brakes on his black BMW announced the arrival of the hero. Clad in all black with dark Raybans covering his eyes, Maan Singh Khurana walked over with his confident stride.

While the director and unit fawned over him, he hid his thoughts and emotions from everyone.

Geet nervously clutched her dupatta and then remembering Dev's words she straightened her spine.

She glanced his way from the veil of her lowered lashes. Over the months she had worked with him, she had learned to observe him quietly.

From the clenched jaw and the pulse throbbing in his neck, she could now make out that he was not as unaffected as he pretended to be.

Just then lightning streaked through the skies with a boom. The Gods must not be on her side, she thought as the clouds burst down on them causing them to rush into the ramshackle lodge.

"Darn it! Pack up!" bellowed the director and the unit started to salvage their materials into the van they had all come in.

Geet wondered what to do. She had come in with the unit. She ran out of the lodge, away from the man who was standing by the fireplace with his back to her.

"Rukiye", she shouted after them but the noise of the pouring rain and thunder drowned her words out.

She raced down the slope after them, slipping in her hurry.

She got up just in time to see the van leaving.

Tears of frustration welled in her eyes but she bit down over her lower lip to stop them.

Blinking rapidly she composed herself. It was foolish to wait out here in the pouring rain. Steeling her spine she walked slowly towards the hut where she had to face her past.

...

Thank God she had gone. With shaky hands, Maan reached into his coat inside pocket and reached for the silver flask tipping the contents down his throat.

Damn his luck! He was stuck in this place for another day. He had to face her one more time.

Hopefully the new director knew what he was doing and the scene would be done in one shot.

Ego taller than the Empire state building and arrogance of a man who knew his own worth defined Maan Singh Khurana today.

"She is a nobody Maan and you are the best actor on earth. Get a grip on yourself .. ", he told himself.

He tipped the flask again swallowing a large gulp of drink as he warmed himself by the fire.

The sound of the door screeching slowly as it was opened had him whipping his head to that direction.

No! He had not yet got over her and she was back. He did not need this!

Months of anger at her could not be controlled anymore so it spilled out of him like lava.

"Well well! Miss Geet Handa has finally showed up? Or is it Mrs now?", he taunted her as he walked to the door.

Her face flushed with his words. Did he know, she wondered? Geet, you have done no wrong. Don't let his words get to you. Just ignore him, she told herself.

She walked over to the fireplace to warm her hands and dry herself. Her hair was a complete mess, so she untangled her choti and spread her hair around her shoulders to dry it.

Her silence was not going down well with Maan.

He came close to her, towering over her as she bent in front of the fireplace and warmed her hands.

"If you think I am going to rescue you and take care of you Geet, you are wrong .. ", he said harshly, " .. mere paas itna waqt nahi hai. I have a lot going on. I have to meet some producers who want to sign me up for their films. Suna hoga tum ne, I am the newest star in Bollywood. Line lagi hai logo ki to sign me up".

She closed her eyes and kept on doing what she was doing answering him mentally but not uttering a word. There is no need to rescue me. My Babaji is there. He will take care of me here as he has so far in life.

He hadn't changed from the way he used to be.

Me Me Me. It was always about him.

My goals, my ambition, my stardom.

She had changed. Always a quiet and complacent soul she had learned from the lessons life had taught her.

She had thrown the rose colored glasses away.

Always taking the back seat to his wishes was what she did best in the past.

She thought that was love.

That was what the world had taught her.

Love is sacrifice. Love is helping your partner. But for her, love was one sided.

Still being the sensible one of the two, she had come to terms with it. You don't always get what you want in life. The key is to accept what comes your way and make the most of it.

The key is to come out stronger.

She had come out stronger. At least she believed so.

She knew what love was. She had a love in her life, an unconditional love.

Aman.

For his love, she would face Maan Singh Khurana this last time and forever bury her feelings for him.

"Kya hua? .. ", he badgered her, " .. itni tameez nahi hai tum mein that you will Congratulate me? Or are you so jealous ki mooh se words nahi nikal rahe hai? Koi baat nahi. Main tumhari tarah khudgarz nahi hu Geet. Tum chaho toh main tumhe apni film mein koi side role dila sakta hu."

She looked up then. Once they were stars together. A lot of success of this show had been due to her also, whether he chose to believe it or not.

While his only goal in life was his ambition, it was a job to her. Not that she was bad at it or lazy, it was work.

Life was not simply a job to her. People mattered, their happiness mattered.

He had mattered.

"Congratulations", she said sincerely.

He watched her looking at him. The amber eyes still had the power to look through him. Innocence still radiated out of her.

Without words she had effectively portrayed that she had given up on him. She had moved on.

It was a slap on the face without her raising her hand.

His arrogance, his ego would not allow it.

He grasped her hand and pulled her forward till she slammed into him. The touch of her soft body touching him again inflamed his passion inspite of his anger.

She struggled to leave him but he held onto her.

"Kya hua Geet? Aaj nahi kahogi, Maan, oh yes Maan, more Maan?" he taunted her making her face color to a bright red. Memories of their night together flashed in front of their eyes. His uncontrollable passion had led to her innocent surrender.

"Do you do that for your husband too Geet? Does he make your body shudder with multiple or****ms the way I did Geet? Tumhe wo raat yaad toh hai na Geet?", he muttered hoarsely even as their bodies were plastered to each other.

"Chodiye mujhe!", she started to remove his fingers from her hands.

"Kya kehti ho Geet? I happen to be free due to the weather. Once more for old times sake? I mean if you can cheat on me with him, then I should also get a chance to cheat", he said insolently rubbing his hands over her body.

There was a limit to what she could take from him. Loving someone does not mean that you will bear their insults. They had always been him and her, never an "us". So where did the cheating accusation come from?

She struggled violently in his steely hold even as he lowered his head and caught her lips aggressively with his.

Months of pent up frustration poured out into the kiss. All his confusion, all his anger at the way things had turned out between them came gushing out.

His rage that he could not move past her even though he had the world at his feet came out.

Once again he got swept away in the feel that only she could give him. She was the only one who could make him forget himself, his goals, his ambition, his stardom. Only with her could he simply be Maan.

His hold slackened a bit to savor her properly. His hand possesively gripped her chest while he sucked on her lower lip not realising that her hand had become free.

Slap!

The sting burned his cheek as she ran out of the room into the rain.

While shame made an appearance, ego won the battle. How dare she!

He raged, throwing things around the small room.

Thunder boomed in the sky. The weather outside was as violent as his temper.

Unbidden a thought came to him.

Would she be safe out there?

"Tujhe kya hua hai Maan? Thappad kha ke bhi dil nahi bhara tera?", he screamed at himself yet his feet made their way to the door.

A ringing tone made him turn towards the mantel. It must be Geet's phone, he realized. Another sound and then yet another again probably indicated messages.

Reluctantly he made his way to the fireplace and picked up the phone.

Steel grey eyes just like his looked back at him, staggering him.

He sat down on the floor with a thump.

The baby was giggling. His mouth just like Geet's as was the color of his hair.

"Jaldi aa jao Geetdi! Aman apni mumma ko miss kar raha hai", the message popped up.

His world froze, stopping its movement along its axis.

The baby must be about 2 months old. There was no need to calculate. As sure as night was night and day was day, he knew the child was his. Realization hit him painfully.

She had not left him. She had gone away so he could have his stardom, his fame.

She had given up on her dream so that he could fulfill his.

He called the number back.

...

Tara answered the phone in Khanna mansion in Dubai, "Haan bol Meera. Kaisse ho tum sab?"

"Bhabhi, Dev bhai hai kya?" Meera asked in a frantic voice.

"Kya hua. Wait I'll put you on speaker", Tara signalled Dev to come urgently.

"Bhabhi, he is here. Aman's Dad", Meera whispered loudly.

"Kya? Maan Singh Khurana is there? Geet kaha hai? Wo theek toh hai na?" Dev asked urgently.

"Aap ko pata tha who the baby's father is?" Tara and Meera asked together.

"I had guessed but when the baby was born, I was certain", Dev answered, "Meera, Geet kaha hai".

"Pata nahi. He came to return the phone she had left on the set he said", Meera spoke just as the key turned in the front door.

"Di aa gayi. She is waving to someone saying thank you to them", Meera continued rambling.

"Has she seen Maan?" Tara inquired.

"Oh my! She grabbed Aman from Maan's hands and now she is showing him the door. Wait he is walking to the door. Oh no, he is not leaving. He just locked the outside door", Meera did a play by play commentary.

"Meera before he hurts her call the police" Dev warned.

"Oh no!", Meera's throat clogged up with tears.

"Kya hua?", Dev bellowed.

"He is on his knees. He is crying and begging forgiveness. Oh that is so sad", Meera softly said.

"He should. Geet kya kar rahi hai?", Tara asked.

"Wo bhi ro rahi hai. He is telling her he loves her. He was wrong. He is holding his ears. Geet nahi maan rahi hai bas roye ja rahi hai. She put the baby in the cot in her room. He followed her", Meera said peering into the room.

"Kya ho raha hai?" Tara asked after some moments of silence.

"He is holding her face in his hands and looking at her. OMG! This is so intense, the way they are looking at each other. Geetdi is hitting his chest and he is kissing her hands. Now he is pulling her into his arms".

"Aww! Now they are by the baby's cot. Maan is holding the baby in one hand and Geet in the other. Wait, he is leaning towards Geetdi .."

"Meera, kya hua?" Tara shrieked not able to hold her excitement.

"Orange blobs everywhere", Meera's muffled voice came out, "I am hiding in my blanket bhabhi. I can't describe any more. I am only 15 and Devbhai has told me not see this stuff", she complained.

...

Since the evening was without snow, a snow blower was installed.

Roll!

Sound!

Action!

Maan turned in his search for his Geet.

Seeing the man of her dreams in front of her Geet ran in slow motion to his arms.

Love. Overflowing love poured out of their eyes.

She was in his arms at last.

"I love you Geet", his words echoed around the mountains.

His head tipped down towards her.

"Cut", the director announced, " .. that's a wrap".

The crew clapped.

Dreams do come true! flashed on the screen.

It was the highest TRP of any show on TV.

Their names were written in gold in TV history.

Maan and Geet.

You were flawless.

Take a bow!

Edited by lakpm - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

WOH TEEN LABZ...

Maan sat in his room and was waiting for Geet.. he remembered their encounter a couple of days before... he smiled remembering Geets expressions on his challenge... and after that neither she came nor called him once though he know what she is doing through Annie...

Geet is pacing in the room angry as well as pouting expression... mujhe.. Geet Handa ko challenge kiya uss KHURANA ne... kya samajhta hain apne aap ko... dekhlungi main... agar ussi ke muh se woh teen shabh nahi kehelwaya toh mera naam bhi Geet ... Geet promised herself... she will prove that she is no less match to that High headed KHURANA... kya kaha... abhi mood nahi hain... oh.. toh pyaar jatane ke liye bhi ab mood chahiye... aapne galat insane se panga liya hain .. so be ready... Mr. KHURANA...

Geet was called to KHURANA mansion... Savitri Devi has called the best jewellers in the country... she wants to select jewels for geet.. their to be daughter in law...

Geet reached with her cousin Rajjo and bhabhi Annie ... all the ladies sat in the hall and we're seeing the latest designs... Geet although present in between them.. her thoughts were some where else... actually wondering around him...

MAAN is the only grandson of Amarnath Khurana and Savitri Devi... he is only son of late Rajveer and Simran Khurana... Maan has three sisters... two elder sisters...eldest is Naina ... married to Dev Mehra... second one is Meera .. married to Yash Khanna and the third sister is Anwesha ... Younger to maan and is married to Arjun Rathod recently...

Maan's marriage is always an issue and had become a headache for the elders... the Mehras, khannas and Rathords came forward with proposals for maan ...

All the three daughters ( Maan's sisters ) wanted maan to marry the girl from their house... but is it possible for maan to marry all the three... so Mr. Khurana came with the idea of going to picnic with the girls to their farm house... he thought in this way they can observe the girls and maan will have a chance to interact with the three girls...

MR & MRS Khurana .. Maan... his sisters and brother in laws along with their sisters went to their farm house to spend the week end..

Nandini Mehra, Pari Khanna and Geet Handa .. we're the prospective girls for Maan... while Nandini and pari are his juju's sisters... Geet is cousin of Arjun Rathod... Geet is the only daughter of Late Mohinder Handa and Rano Handa ... Geet lost her parents when she was ten and her maasi... Jasmeet Rathod took care of her from then... as she has only one son.. i.e., Arjun .. and craved to have a daughter... Mr Rathod also loved Geet as his own daughter...

Maan had known Geet from her collage days as Geet and Annie are friends... but Nandini and pari are strangers to him as he never interacted with them... he just saw them in his sisters marriage ...

Mr and Mrs Khurana found Nandini, who is of Maan's age, too quiet and pari too loud... and also has seen Maan's interaction with them... Maan is a man of few words and Nandini is also quiet... and if they got married.. there will be no words in between them... Savitri Devi feared that their mansion will become a library with silence boards everywhere and don't know how they will be ... so they dropped the idea of Nandini... and maan was not at all comfortable with pari... she was too interfering and was all over maan... she always has this dreamy look on her face... Maan was irritated... and only Geet was left.. if not her they have to look for girls again...

but to their surprise maan was comfortable with Geet... Maan met Geet a few times when she was with Annie... it was just hi and hello .. nothing more than that...

Savitri Devi felt.. that may be Geet will be suitable for maan... later they declined Nandini and pari's proposals and they approved Geet's... Maan was ok with that as he found Geet quite different yet same as Annie... as both are friends...

as the time flew... both came close and as their interactions increased... they went on dates.. they went on picnics and Geet even dragged him to watch a film also...and one fine day when Maan did something Geet never expected... she was overwhelmed and hugged him and those three magical words to him... Maan was first shocked but later gave in and hugged her back... but he didn't say those words... and it struck to her after a couple of days... she then tried to know his thoughts but he never let her know what is going on in his mind... she tried giving hints but he took none... naa... he pretended he didn't get what was Geet trying to say... and one day Geet asked him directly...

&@&@&@&@&@&@&@@&@&@&@&@&@&@&@&

Two days back...

Geet - Maan main seedhe seedhe pooch rahi hoon... aap kahenge ya nahi...

Maan - kya Geet... mai kuch samjha nahi...

Geet - aap bano mat... mujhe pata hai ki aapko pata hain ki main kya pooch rahi hoon...

Maan - kya kya... main kuch samjha nahi...

Geet - shouted Maan...

Maan - dheere se Geet... main behra nahi hoon... theek se bolo kya chahiye...

Geet looked up and complained to her babaji... kya babaji aap ko bhi isse acha koi nahi mila mere liye...

Maan knew what Geet wanted but he was playing a little... she is always behind him... and he loved it... her expectation and his delay is making her mad and he loved to see her face.. with so many emotions playing at the same time... he moved as he have to reach his office... Geet saw and ran behind him... she followed him to the office also... he entered the lift and she followed him inside.. as the lift was about to close .. Maan's client pindi queen entered the lift talking on her phone... she didn't notice Geet... she greeted Maan and continued to talk on the phone... and lastly said ...

PQ - I love u.. I love u ... I love you baby... ummmah... she gave a kiss and cut the call...

now Geet was more determined to hear those words from Maan... she cleared her throat... PQ then saw Geet and wished her...

Geet smiled and asked - yeh... aap kisse baat karr rahi hain... aapke pati se...

PQ laughed and said... nahi... hubby nahi.. yeh mera kutta hain... jo mere I love you sune Bina khana nahi khata... she said and laughed...

Maan couldn't stop his laugh but controlled as PQ is his client but Geet looked at Maan with a pout expression...

The lift door opened and PQ went out quickly... Maan also moved to his cabin with Geet behind him and enter his cabin...

Geet looked up and said... kya kis at hai Babaji meri... ek Kutte ko Roz I love you sunne ko milte hain... aur main Yaha ek baar sunne ke liye taras rahi hoon... kya babaji... kuch karo...

Maan laughed ... Geet ab jao... mujhe Kaam hain...

Geet - nahi... aaj nahi... main woh sunne bina nahi jaaoongi..

Maan - toh theek hain... yehi baithi raho... mujhe Kaam hain...

Geet sat with a pout... she took a magazine and started flipping pages looking at Maan... Maan tried to concentrate on his work... but he knew it's impossible now as his mishty is sitting in front of him making faces.. Maan wondered how in a short span of time Geet has become a huge part of his life... if asked before few days... he would have denied that he would ever love some one to this extent ... but after Geet came into his life... he is a changed man... he loved her confidence first.. and she doesn't really change herself for anyone .. she maintains her individuality in crowd also... Maan was thinking about Geet and Geet is looking at him intently... A small smile is playing on his lips and Geet got more curious...

She got up and went to his table and cleared her throat.. Maan didn't move... she made a small sound of her payals... Maan is clearly some where else... he didn't respond.. she took a pen and dropped... but no use... she picked up the pen stand and dropped it making a loud nice... Maan came out of his trance...

Geet - Maan ... I am waiting here.. and you r somewhere else...

Maan - Geet I have work.. so you better leave...

Geet - I want to hear those words... till u tell them .. I will not leave... she replied stubbornly...

Maan - kya hai Geet yeh... I believe in action than in words... don't you feel what I feel for you.. is it necessary to say those words...

Geet - I know.. I have seen and felt it.. but I want to hear those words... can't you do this for me.. she pouted...

but Maan was Maan.. so he said... Geet ... just go.. I am not in a mood to say or argue... I have lots of work.. and he engrossed in his file.. or pretended so...

he then looked up and said... Geet... if u want to hear those words...MAKE ME SAY those words... he said in a challenging tone...

Geet look at him open mouthed and thought of retarding.. but kept quiet... and walked in a huff from there...

&@&@&@&@&@&@&@&@&@&@&@&@&@&@&

SD - Geet beta... kaha hogayi aap... humne aapke liye hi yeh sab arrange kiya hain... aap ko jo pasand aaye aap lelijiyega...

Geet started looking at the designs and Maan came down talking with Rajjo... He is talking happily with her and laughing... Geet got annoyed...

Geet - Dadi... aap hi kuch select kariya...

Dadi - kya hua Geet.. kuch pares hain hain...

Geet - nahi dadi... koi pares hain nahi hain... bas MOOD nahi hai yeh sab dekhne ka... waise bhi aapko selection to THE BEST hain... she said showing Dadaji and winked at her...

Dadi laughed and said... badmash... hum aapki Dadi-saas banane hai, aur aap hum se aisi baatein karenge kya...

Geet - Dadi-saas toh app ab Banarahi hain.. lekin usse pehle aap meri pyaari si dadi hain...

Dadi patted her cheek lovingly and said.. theek hain.. hum kuch select karte hain.. agar aapko kuch acha laga toh batadijiye... hum baad mein lelenge...

Geet hugged her and said Thank you dadi...

Geet sat quietly... Annie and Rajjo came to her and asked her something... she replied MOOD nahi hain...

Annie - toh theek hain.. chalo... kuch Khate hain...

Geet - nahi Annie... Abhi mera MOOD nahi hai ...

Rajjo - didi... toh chalo kuch khelti hain...

Geet - nahi Rajjo...MOOD nahi hai ...

Annie was fed up with MOOD NAHI HAI... and she was irritated with Geets continued chanting Geet .. chalo Yaha se.. terrace pe chalte hai ... mausam bohut acha hain... waha tumhara mood theek hojayega... chalo... and pulled Geet with her...

Maan who was hearing eventing understood that she is telling all those thing to him and reminding him of his words... he wanted to see how far Geet would go to hear those words from him... so he followed them and stood there silently waiting them...

Annie and Rajjo talked but Geet was silent.. she is thinking of ways to make Maan confesses...

Annie was saying some incident of her childhood and Geet saw Maan behind the door... she smirked and she suddenly knew what to do... agar ghee seedhe ungli se nahi nikal to hai. toh ungli tedhi karni padti hain... Dekhke hain Mr. khurana ab kaise nahi kehte woh teen labz...

Geet interrupted and said..Annie... mujhe bhi kuch yaad aya...aisa hi ek incident...

Annie - acha batao... interesting hain kya...

Geet - haa.. bohut...

Annie - wow.. toh pehle kyun nahi bataya...

Geet - mujhe yaad nahi tha... jab tumne baarish ki baat ki toh yaad aaya...

Annie - toh batao...

Geet - ha suno... uss din main ghar mein akeli thi... Arjun veerji... maasi aur Mausaji of ... koi bhi nahi tha ghar mein.. main akeli thi... main hall mein baith ke tv mein koi movie dekh rahi thi... sham waqt tha... servants bhi dinner banake sab chalegaye...Itne mein baarish hone lagi... bohut Zor se... Bijili bhi Kadak rahi thi... main darr gayi... aur unte mein power bhi chali gayi... main kampne lagi... tumhe pata haina mujhe andhere se darr lagta hain...

Annie nodded and said ... aage kya hua...

Geet - Ghar mein poora andhere tha.. mujhe kuch nahi dikh raha tha... main Himmat jutake Deere se uthi aur candle dhondhne lagi... pata nahi kitna waqt hua .. par candle mili hi nahi... mujhe rona aaraha tha... aur ... Geet started narrating as if she is narrating a horror story...

Annie - aur kya hua... asked Annie biting her nails...

Geet - kuch nahi ... power aagayi... Geet giggled...

Annie slapped her forehead and Rajjo also laughed... Geet.. tu bhi na...

Geet - acha aage ki suno... kya hua... power aagayi... toh mai candle aur lighter apne paas rakh ke tv dekhne baith gayi... aur itne mein bell Baja... main ek dum se uthke darwaza khol ne chali... aur darwaza khol ke dekha toh...

Annie - kya hua... kaun aaya ... nahi rehne de.. tu kahegi... maa.. ya Arjun aaye honge...

Geet - nahi... veerji... ya masi nahi aaye... but koi aur tha...

Annie - kaun hain... tumhe pata hain kaun hai woh...

Geet - nahi... maine unhe pehle baar dekha tab...

Annie - kaisa tha woh...

Geet with a dreamy look said... haaye... kitna handsome the... 6 foot ka honge.. with wheatish complextion... he was in a suit and was completely drenched... he asked me whether he could use the phone... mujhe darr lagraha tha par maine unhe andar aane diya... unhone kisi ko call kiya .. maine unhe baithne ko kaha aur unhe towel diya...

he sat after wiping himself... main chup chap khadi thi... unhone poocha ... ghar mein koi hain... Maine kaha nahi... tab unhone mujhe apne paas bulaya aur Geet stopped to look at them and maan.. he was standing at the door and listening their words...

Annie - kya .. paas bulaya... par kyun... kya kaha usne...

Geet - unhone mujhe apne paas bulaya aur kaha ki main unhe ek kiss Doon...

Annie - kya.. kiss... my god... kya hua phir...

Geet got up from her seat and stood facing the other side... main Dar gayi aur bhagne lagi.. Phir woh bhi mujhe pakadne ke liye mere peeche bhage... I was running here and there... but I was too small in front of his strength and he caught me... I was struggling but he held me tightly and kissed my cheeks... he even bit me on my cheeks... Geet turned to face Annie ...

Annie - oh god... phir...

Geet - phir... kuch nahi... maasi aur veerji aagaye... toh woh chalegaye...

Annie - thank gog Arjun aagaye... tumne usne kuch nahi kaha...

Geet - nahi... main kaise kehti ki unhone mujhe kiss kiya zabardasti...

Annie - yeh bhi sahi hain...

Geet - waise ek baat bataoon Annie... inke jaise handsome ladka maine kabhi nahi dekha...

Annie - Maan veerji bhai nahi...

Geet - nahi... Maan bhi nahi she said... smirking inwardly seeing Maan's reaction...his jaws were tightened and his fingers turned into a fist... Geet laughed inwardly and the desired effect came...

Geet turned other side and continued telling but Maan couldn't hear that and went to Annie and silently signalled her to take Rajjo and go...

Geet who knew that Annie and Rajjo left and only Maan is there continued...

Geet - you know Annie... woh kitne handsome the.. maine u ke jaise kisi aur ko nahi dekha... unke saamne yeh sare Bollywood heroes peekhe padha jayenge... inke saamne Salman.. shah rukh... Hrithik... kuch bhi nahi hain...kya height hain.. kya personality hain... aur unki aankhen ... my god... aisi aankhen toh kisi ki bhi nahi hain...

Maan was unable to hear her praising someone else.. he folded his hand and cleared his throat...

Geet pretended to be shocked...

Geet - maan... aap.. aap kab aaye... aur yeh Annie aur Rajjo kaha Gaye.. and she looked behind him... she patted herself mentally.. good acting Geet... but don't let him know...

Maan - mujhe kuch kehna hai Geet...

Geet - mujhse... kya baat karni hain...

Maan - main jaanta hoon Geet ki tumhe woh teen labz Sunna hain mujhse... lekin mujhe kuch aur kehna hain...

Geet - haa.. pata hain ... aapko mood nahi hai abhi.. aur aage se main bhi zid nahi karungi... toh kya kehna hain aapko ...

Maan - main chahta hoon ki tum mujhe jaano Geet... main unlogin mein se nahi hoon... jo Roz Roz pyaar ka izhaar Kare aur aur pyaar na Kare... main apne pyaar apni harkaton se izhaar karta hoon... jaise... dadi ko har hafte mandir lejake... dadaji ke saath walk pe jaake... Naina di, Meera di aur Annie ka Khayala rakhke... woh log mujhse samajhta hain.. isliye nahi pooch te...

Geet - main yeh sab jaanta hoon Maan... main bhi pyaar jatane se zyada nibhane mein yakeen rakhti hoon ...mujhe aap mere liye jo bhi karte hai... usme mujhe aapko pyaar dikhta hain ... lekin kya ek baar mujhe aapse I LOVE YOU sunne ka ummed rakhna bhi galat hain...

Maan stared at Geet... he understood... Geet just needs a little more assurance .. may be..may be not... this is the first time she asking something and he is simply playing...

Geet getting no response from him... she continued... pata hain mujhe.. aapka abhi MOOD nahi ahi aur main ... but Maan didn't let her complete .. she said... I LOVE YOU GEET...

Geet stopped the moment she heard Maan confessing ... she had tears in her eyes... she stared at him... Maan again said... I REALLY DO... and he spread his hands inviting her ... she took quick steps and hugged him tightly... Maan again said... I LOVE YOU GEET...

Geet stayed in his embrace for few minutes... she same out of the hug and kept her hand on his cheek and said... I LOVE YOU TOO MAAN...

they stood like that few min and Maan remembered about the person Geet was going gaga over and said... Geet you are such a bad actor... you were trying to make me jealous... but you horribly failed... and laughed...

Geet smiled and said... I didn't try to make you jealous Maan... but I won.. as you just said those words...

Maan - aah.. now don't pretend... I know aisa kuch bhi nahi hua hain... warna Arjun mujhse nahi chupata...

Geet - you are mistaken Maan... yeh baat toh veerji ko bhi nahi pata hain.. Sirf mujhe aur masi ko pata hain...

Maan - matlab yeh sach mein hua...

Geet - haa... maine soch liya tha ki agar aap I love you nahi kehte .. main unse baat karoongi aur apni mann ki baat bata doongi...

Maan - kya...

Geet - haa... kya hua agar woh shadi Shuda hain aur apni wife se bohut pyaar karte hain... try Karne mein kya jaata hain... and said with a mischievous smile...

Maan - shadi shuda,.. Geet tum pagal hogayi ho... waise kaun hai yeh jisne tu pe jaadu kardiya hain...

Geet left him and moved back - nahi bataoongi...

Maan - ab Bol bhi do Geet... main tumhe waise bhi nahi chodne wala hoon... he took quick steps and caught her before she can run away...

Geet gave him a naughty smile and said... you know him Maan... you know him very well...

Maan - don't test my patience Geet... and spill it...

Geet - woh... aapke... DADAJI hain Maan... aur main tab 10 saal ki thi... and laughed as she saw Maan's face... which is shocked...

Maan also laughed after few seconds and said... tumhein is ki saza zaroor milegi... and pulled her close and kissed her on her lips...

Edited by lakpm - 9 years ago

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