A Rat's tale- SS (A fun story of Manik and Nandini)-Part 3 updated

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Humairaa

@Humzy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

lovely update

loved it

very nicely written

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Kshithi

@Muggle_Diaries

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: apardh_ba
No sir cheesebuster I cn never make fun of u. u r d one who is so civilized and these two who only pretends they r d ones I m laughing at r8 nw.
"Where is the cheese popcorn
when I need them."
trust me I m also thinking d sm only.
I m sad what a tragic end u hv given to sir cheesebuster's tail. He lost his love too. Ah! I really feel bad for u sir. All d best for ur nxt session with d couns.
And I'l always remember this tale of a rats oops sir cheesebuster's tail.
And monster and his mini monster u guys seriously kahin bhi shuru ho jate ho. u guys didnt even realize dat u were standing in sm1 else house. Bt I forgive u and yeah so cutely manik kissed om her nose. I want a scene like this in d show.

Yeah right? Poor Cheesebuster..no cheese popcorn. no ratess and no tail too...

But his tail had to go for this tale to end... Kya kare...but he is in good place now. Who knows he might get to meet another ratess???

Thanks a lot for this comment. 🤗

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Kshithi

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: aavani
awsome👏
thanks for the pm...😊
it was really amazing...loved it...😊

Thanks Aavani... 😃

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Kshithi

@Muggle_Diaries

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Humzy
lovely update
loved it
very nicely written

Thanks Humzy... 😊

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8seetha

@8seetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Awesome ending
U are good writer
Hope u will start a new story
Anyway very good 🤗

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Kshithi

@Muggle_Diaries

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: 8seetha
Awesome ending
U are good writer
Hope u will start a new story
Anyway very good 🤗

Thanks Seetha... 🤗

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Mr. Cheesebuster's tail...Hmm, sorry, tale was very funny...🤣 I have laugh so much while reading this...Mr. Cheesebuste ke saath kia tragedy hui hai...Bechara...He lost half of his SeXy tail...Poor guy...

Oh, why, oh why Monster Manik and his lady love did this to him...Their not-so-Love story has cost him his own love life...Ahh, Mr. Cheesebuster... lol

I didn't know you were a writer, aur woh bhi a Phanny writer...But that was AwEsOmE...Thanks for the PM...🤗

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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Reserveeed (:

-Unres

Hey Di :D

Finally back to comment 😆

A little sad when I found out it's the last part, but it's okay. An end is inevitable :P

Handsome, sexy rat.

I was imagining this everytime Mr. Cheesebuster talks btw. Just thought you should visualize it from my pov too ;) hahaa

Smart rat though. Padhaaku 🤓😆 The descriptions you have given are so epic.

Honestly I loved reading the first bit so much for that reason

It was hilarious!!

Coming to Manik-Nandini; un dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta *facepalms*

Definitely doesn't get "juicer" than this, to quote Mr. Cheesebuster 😉

Awwh, can't believe seeing them like this made him tear up. so cuuutee 😆

But he should know our Monster Manik and Mini-Monster Nandini aren't the normal couple

lmao

Bichaara xD

Behosh ho gaya, and bichaare ki zindagi kharaab ho gayi

Khair, at least he didn't die

That would have actually been sad

SUCH a cuteee part 😆

So hilarious!

Loved it <3

Manan ki fights mein bhi maza aaya. Although iss baar someone else suffered cause of the fights 🤣

Anyway, can't wait till you write something else

Will be waiting

Lots of love,

Hinal 🤗

Edited by basket_101 - 10 years ago

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Kshithi

@Muggle_Diaries

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal
Mr. Cheesebuster's tail...Hmm, sorry, tale was very funny...🤣 I have laugh so much while reading this...Mr. Cheesebuste ke saath kia tragedy hui hai...Bechara...He lost half of his SeXy tail...Poor guy...
Oh, why, oh why Monster Manik and his lady love did this to him...Their not-so-Love story has cost him his own love life...Ahh, Mr. Cheesebuster... lol

I didn't know you were a writer, aur woh bhi a Phanny writer...But that was AwEsOmE...Thanks for the PM...🤗

Thanks sweety...🤗

Because that is what they do, Monster and mini-monster! They forget the world when they are together, tho rat kya cheese hai!!! 😆 Poor Mr. Cheesebuster...

I usually write serious stuff. But this was change of pace for me.

Glad you enjoyed it...

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