A Rat's tale- SS (A fun story of Manik and Nandini)-Part 3 updated

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Kshithi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Humzy
lovely update
loved it
continue soon

Thanks Humzy...😊

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Kshithi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Ireena7
wow...really a another nice one dear...👏keep writing
and Happy New year 🤗

Thanks Ireena...😃

And Happy new year... 🤗

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Kshithi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: sauju
Pls continue soon ...
I am loving this rat...
His name and his talks are so cute
😳

HAPPY NEW YEAR ❤️

Thanks Sauju..😃

And Happy new year..

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Kshithi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: apardh_ba
oh god how much I hate rats just tomorrow only me and my mom ws on a mission to bhagao a rat.
And today I m saying that I love rat ok nt d real one bt this one. ur cheesebuster.
so sir monster is nt in a mood to let go of this topic.
so excited to read d nxt part. cont soon.
Thanks for d pm.
Happy New Year.

Ha ha...hope your mission was successful...😃

Thanks for liking the story.. 😊

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Kshithi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: shefni
😆..what a take?..If the series just got loaded with dramas and angst , you bring in the ever delighting rat combo to lighten up(tom and jerry still holds a soft spot in my heart after all these years).
Firstly Happy New year MD!Hope you have a great year ahead and wishing for more analyses and OS to come from your way. Caught up with a great deal of work so making my comment real short. Cheesebuster sounds so cool and a rat with such a name definitely is a star to watch out for. Continue with your work dear.Then and there a little imagination and out of the world concepts can do no harm.Hoping for more rat tales!!

Thanks Shefni..😃

Yes, Tom and Jerry is personal favourite too. Don't you think Manik and Nandini are exactly like Tom and Jerry? Like seriously. They fight all the time, but cannot let go of each other. Always chasing one another.

And Happy new year to you too...and thanks for all your encouragement, It means a lot..😊

It is always nice to be irreverent once in a while!!!

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Kshithi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Parud26
First of all, Happy New Years! 🥳

yet another hilarious and entertaining chapter 👏

can't wait for part 3!

thank you for the PM!🤗

Happy new year to you too... 😊

And thanks for liking the story... 🤗

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Kshithi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: 8seetha
Happy new year first of all
superb update continue soon please

Happy new year to you too...

and thanks for liking my story.😊

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Vini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

I don't usually read MaNan FFs but this one is so different, and amazing. And Fun. And innovative.

Really, great idea.

Continue soon

And do check if Mr. Rat Cheesebuster has all his fingers or not...( HP reference...😉 )

PS love your Username. Me too a big fan of HP Series.❤️

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Kshithi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Fenice
I don't usually read MaNan FFs but this one is so different, and amazing. And Fun. And innovative.
Really, great idea.
Continue soon
And do check if Mr. Rat Cheesebuster has all his fingers or not...( HP reference...😉 )
PS love your Username. Me too a big fan of HP Series.❤️

Thanks a lot Fenice, for breaking your rule and liking my story. 😊

And yes, Mr. Cheesebusters has all the fingers. 😉 this one is no animagus, but just a plain old rat.

I am a huge fan of HP series too... ahhh... I miss those days, when we used to wait for the next book and re-reading everything again and again in between.

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basket_101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Hey Di :D

This is the first update I'm reading in the new year :D

Speaking of which, Happy New Yeaaar 🥳

I hope your party went well.

Even with the jus d'orange, if you know what I mean 😉😆

Coming to the part.

Mohtarma.. Tussi great ho. Taufa qubool karo.

(arrey woh waala nahi, i just mean these taareefein) 😆

warning - hangover ka asar abhi bhi thoda hai 😆

Nuclear weapons definitely sounds cooler 😎 Cheesebuster chahe rat ho, uska coolness factor bahot high lagta hai 😉

Sexy tail 🤣 omg don't kill me

Brb.. need to catch a breath.

I hate rats, I honestly do. But this is like Ratatouille. You can't help adore the little creatures. Even Mr. Cheesebuster. His wit is totally admirable.

And despite being a rat, he seems to understand women better than Monster Manik 😆

Knight-in-shining armour toh duur ki baat, he is making fun of her for her fears.

Bichaari.

Anyway, it was a lovely part. Definitely very entertaining!

It was a pleasure to read :D

Keep writing!!

Lots of loveee

Hinal 😳

- my comment is almost as long as an os 😆