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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Poooja


😆

aaj mil jaega.. thoda wait karo..

maine itna saara type kiya parr its only 1000 words.. mai depress ho gai dekh k🤢

isme depress hone wali kya baat hai.
type karne mein bahut mehnat lagti hai.😛
cheer up
aj to naya saal hai enjoy😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wishing all my friends...
a very happy new year 2015





Edited by Pooooooooooooja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
NOTE


finally an update... that too after long, really sorry for delay...

i will be giving other stories too soon, just little stuck..
next is CL... then paathshala, probably!

thank you for ur patience and support, do let me know if this one came out well, little too nervous here

those who want to recieve pms pls add me as buddy here


PS: pls check updated character sketch in pg1😊




Edited by Pooooooooooooja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

bhago bhago

20 min khata
m ho gaye
doto nahi na I am your mommy
ok come to update
👏👏👏👏
beautiful update a subject remarriage very sensitive for girl than boy
its my thinking , may be I wrong but its hard to first pyyar ko bhool jao
same happening with geet she is so much
lost away from all going all around
lost in her dev her first husband
this marriage is just compromise for her
feel very bad for geet koi
bhi ladki aisa na face kare apne life main
love that cuti pie dear ansh so he love
his new papa ,his new papa is best msk
but angry it means in this ff also maan
have to wait wait wait wait 🤢
maan ki bhi entry kara deti to humare
toote hui dil ko thodsa chai mil jata
Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update senior👏
so mehandhi is going on...par geet lost in thoughts
ansh sooo cute...the little soul excited about his new papa😃
nisha 😲 seeing ansh
divya...very caring!!😃
so MSK ki naam geet ki haath mai😳
u wrote geet ki point of view mai song...
my hindi not soo good...
(in my POV did maan love before itself or geet loved maan??😕)
dev...sad for geet!!thank god dev did a good job!!asked her to move on in her life😃
when is Maan entry??me eagerly waaiting for it😃😳
lovely part!!😳
beautifully written senior👏 👏
eagerly waiting fo the nxt part😈



Edited by disha31 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really nice dear.. dnt be nervous. This will also turn out great as ur other ffs...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update pooja dear kaha gayab hogai thi par koi nai nice yaar par geet is sad maan loves ansh now so geet is proud of her choice does maan has kids anyways do update soon plzz dear gayab mat hojana
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks 4 the pm
seem very interesting
soo geet is doing all this just 4 her son
but y maan is marrying a widow der must be a reason behind this
and for divya i would suggest drashti's real sister in law
she would be much better
hope u will like my choice

Edited by angel.princess - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update👏...i really like the starting😃... waiting for maan... this is maan's first marriage?😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update..Loved it
continue soon
thanks for pm
happy new year u too

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