SS: Phir mohabat karne chala (Part 10 - page 24) Completed - Page 18

Originally posted by: samudbest

Congratulations Jess for writing such an amazing SS and I really liked each and every part of it. You deserve all our admiration for being a beautiful writer.

And about the last and final part of this OS, I must say it couldn't have got the better ending than this. Everything was sorted out very easily and without any faults. Kusum got the treatment for her wrongdoings but was forgiven by kumud as kumud always believed in forgiving. Aryan completely deserved what he got for whatever bad he had done with others.
Personally speaking I didn't expect such a hot lovemaking scene between samud even during SC times. But it is beautifully written by you. Our samud were happy in the end as they were two bodies and one soul now. Really a nice Happy Diwali ending for samud and all of us (samud lovers).

Wishing you good luck to write many more SS's like this in future.

u must have noticed.Earlier they were planning to pair Danny Kumari n they showed cute scenes on them.But when Kusum fell 4 Saras inorder 2 get rid of her suddenly Danny kumara scenes stopped n danny fell 4 Kusum.U won't believe.There were lots of Danny Kumari fans that time n I was one among them.V all were frustrated.They encouraged me 2 write a ss on Danny Kumari n Sunny KUsum.So I wrote a SS on Samud,Danny Kumari n Sunny Kusum.

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

u must have noticed.Earlier they were planning to pair Danny Kumari n they showed cute scenes on them.But when Kusum fell 4 Saras inorder 2 get rid of her suddenly Danny kumara scenes stopped n danny fell 4 Kusum.U won't believe.There were lots of Danny Kumari fans that time n I was one among them.V all were frustrated.They encouraged me 2 write a ss on Danny Kumari n Sunny KUsum.So I wrote a SS on Samud,Danny Kumari n Sunny Kusum.

Hae 2 wait 4 more days 4 Raaz?U r very slow at updating Raaz😭

Originally posted by: Edna_Philip

Nice update.

Thanks

Thumbs up .. ... perfect ending
Kumud n Saras together
kusum realizing her mistake after being dumped n making amends
and ayaan being alone and dumped
thanks for pm plz keep em coming my way
Sorry for late comment but promise trying to catch up after being away

Originally posted by: YaSha0512

Thumbs up .. ... perfect ending
Kumud n Saras together
kusum realizing her mistake after being dumped n making amends
and ayaan being alone and dumped
thanks for pm plz keep em coming my way
Sorry for late comment but promise trying to catch up after being away