SwaRonFF |Two Strangers Drowned In The Pool Of love|Chapter-1 On PG-3 - Page 4

Originally posted by: keechu91

nice start dear,..

do continue soon...

it was small...😭

next time update long one...😃

with love

keechu

sorry xams were going on so jitna likha tha utna update kiya well i sure u nxt update will b big😳

Originally posted by: Khizar_SWARON

res

i hope yeh unres jaldi ho jaye

Originally posted by: nature2

nice start dear,..

thanxx bhai😳

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

nice chappy yr.. loved the starting.. update soon thanks 4 d pm

Originally posted by: Mansi98

nice start

continue soon

Originally posted by: nehageet

amazing

thanxx😳

Originally posted by: sakshibshah

Nicely written first chappy.

loved the emotions penned.
❤️
but was too short... plz nxt time update long wala.

awaiting next long chap.

live,
Sakshi

thank you so much sakshi n m sorry xam ka time tha u knw na isliye chota update nxt time it will b big😉

Originally posted by: SanskritiS

Nice start

but very small

well xams were going on thts y nxt chappy will b big enough😛

Originally posted by: -spongy-

Bhavika very small update. Isha is very sad.
Anyway waiting for the next update.
Beautiful emotions.

ishu dnt b sad atleast me tere jese tho nai hu jo ek bar update deke 3 months tak gayab😡
n rahi baat small chappy ki xams the so chill nxt update will b big😳

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

Cong8 bhavi for ur ff

The chapter was very small

I can crib for tat aleast

I loved the way u introduced sharon

She is fighting for so many things

N swayam the guy tat has it all

Still left alone in tis crowd the thought to make

Such a love story is not new but i m

Looking frwd to how u gonna put ur charm

N present the story

Thr jorney as a whole n i m expecting

A longer update from u

Do update soon 🤗

thanxx rosy di fr such a heart touching comment means a lot😳
nd ya nxt update will b long enough😃

Originally posted by: ujwalv

Nice start.

thanxx

Originally posted by: piyu_swaron

loved it bhavi.. do update soon..

thanxx piyu😃

Originally posted by: -DreamzGirl-

Hay nice one ...but itna chotu sa update ...

ya vo xams ke vajah se nxt update will b big😳

Originally posted by: Muskan_SwaRon

Tu writer bhi hai? 😲
The edit is so khoobsurat ☺️
I really enjoyed reading the prologue and first chapter and expected it to be long but. Itna chota? -_- Next time i want a long update. -_- Bhavz 🤗

thanxx its made by appy di😳
xams they yr nxt update will b big musku so chill😛

superb concept

Originally posted by: athi_vrushan

superb concept

the banner is so superb

pls do continue

the storyline seems awesomely promising

the first chappy was nic

but short

want longer updates

waiting 4 next update

thnx 4 d pm

cani get a pm 4 the coming updates too?

ya u wil get pm fr cming updates also...
n nxt chapter will b big...

Originally posted by: HSFA

Beautiful chapter.

Waiting for more!!

nxt part will b up as soon as demand will b completed...

Nice chapter Bhavz.. :D

Nice Update...
Plsss, Reveal their identity soon...
Nd ye to pakka h they r Swayam nd Sharon...
Ab mulakat ho hi gya h to pyaar v ho hi jaega...
Plsss pm me also...I only got pm fr prologue...

this is the first time im reading any of ur work...
i liked the concept of the story, its interesting...
but the update was so short..
anyways do continue soon & pm me...