SwaRonFF |Two Strangers Drowned In The Pool Of love|Chapter-1 On PG-3 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Prologue is interestingg.😃
Waiting to read more n more..

update chap ASAP.😳

Love,
Sakshi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
it looks interesting...
continue soon dear..
love to read more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Interesting start and am really excited to read more of it.
So continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Bhavika meri jaan.
Congratulations. Eagerly waiting for the upcoming chapters.
Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1

BANNER CREDIT - APPY DI

Girl was walking on a road trying to shoe off all her thoughts and was trying hard to be lost in this world when suddenly her eyes travelled to a beautiful beach. She was just lost in the beauty of that beach. Sucha perfect place it is.


She moved towards that beach it was really beautiful . She was standing and was lost in the beauty thinking "such an enchanting place it is, such a silent n calm place".

Girl was wearing this


Girl was lost in the beauty of that beach. Her pov

Why my life is not that beautiful where me n raj can have a peaceful living. Why there is so much tension between us. Why my appointment letter got cancelled just becoz me and raj had a fight n now we are no more in a relationship... Why my life cannot shine like a this beach everytime. Why problems and pain don't leave my way. Why Why Why??

She was sobbing and crying and cursing for each n every problem. She was asking god why her life is not at all perfect like this beach. She was trying to find out the answer for each n every problem which is there in her live.While he was trying to find those answers a voice came from behind"Why are you disturbing god for such silly questions, the answer is really simple its just becoz of U"

Ok guys so how did u find this chapter, will b waiting for your feedback.

Next part will b up after 35 likes and after 5 pages.

Till then sayonara

Edited by -VruShanAddict- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
nice start dear,..
do continue soon...
it was small...😭
next time update long one...😃

with love
keechu
Edited by keechu91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice chappy yr.. loved the starting.. update soon thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Nicely written first chappy.

loved the emotions penned.
❤️
but was too short... plz nxt time update long wala.

awaiting next long chap.

live,
Sakshi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Bhavika very small update. Isha is very sad.
Anyway waiting for the next update.
Beautiful emotions.

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