SwaRonFF |Two Strangers Drowned In The Pool Of love|Chapter-1 On PG-3

rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Cong8 bhavi for ur ff

The chapter was very small

I can crib for tat aleast

I loved the way u introduced sharon

She is fighting for so many things

N swayam the guy tat has it all

Still left alone in tis crowd the thought to make

Such a love story is not new but i m

Looking frwd to how u gonna put ur charm

N present the story

Thr jorney as a whole n i m expecting

A longer update from u

Do update soon 🤗

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

loved it bhavi.. do update soon..

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ragini sharma

@-DreamzGirl-

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Hay nice one ...but itna chotu sa update ...

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Tu writer bhi hai? 😲
The edit is so khoobsurat ☺️
I really enjoyed reading the prologue and first chapter and expected it to be long but. Itna chota? -_- Next time i want a long update. -_- Bhavz 🤗

Edited by Muskan_SwaRon - 10 years ago

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bhavika

@BhaviJas

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Thanxx fr the appreciation guys..

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Nightingale..

@Nightingale..

Explorer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Nishi.Kss
This is the first FF of yours I am going to read Bhavz.. :D
Interesting concept and would love to read more..

Thankyou so much nishi..😳

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Nightingale..

@Nightingale..

Explorer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ujwalv
nice concept. continue..

ya will update soon.😊

Originally posted by: cherry_vrushan
the concept seems to be really very interesting 😊 Just waiting for this story to unfold 😃 Update the next part ASAP nd do PM me plzzz 😛

ya will continue soon n will surely pm u