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Posted: 10 years ago

I AM BACK 😆

Recap: (Rey's POV)

I caress her cheek with my thumb softly "can we get pass through this and start it all new for good?"

My eyes begged as I waited with my breath caught in my throat. She broke the eye contact and looked down not meeting my gaze. Sh*t I cussed mentally. I guess she won't let this thing go that easily. I sighed defeated that's when she looked back up at me. Our eyes met and her lips part. This was the moment. This is the moment where she would tell me her verdict. She finally spoke breaking the tension, silence... and maybe my heart too?

Chapter 16 (last chap)

||~Taani's POV~||

He caressed my cheek with his thumb softly as he asked the most important question "can we get pass through this and start it all new for good?" His little action was creating havoc inside me and it was hard to pay attention to reality and above all to answer his question. His sigh brought me back to reality as I look up at me and our eyes met holding me hostage. This is it Taani time to give your verdict I thought as I opened my mouth "yes" I breath out and he looked at me confused. "Yes we can get pass through this and start fresh" I said more clearly shaking my head at him smiling.

He stood their shocked. His expression was hilarious but somehow I managed not to laugh. His mouth parted opening and closing no words coming out. He looked like a fish deprived of water. Then finally a smile graced his face and he instantly hugged me tight, knocking my oxygen off. "SHE SAID YES SHARON" the loud happy screech made us broke the hug. "She said yes to that idiot hallelujah" Swayam screamed rushing down the stairs to Sharon I guess as she giggled later. He must be twirling her around or something as her giggles were coming out in short breaks. "She said yes, yes, yes" I laughed at his words and Rey soon joined me.

"He is happy as if Sharon said yes to marry him" he said grumpily pouting at me. I smiled and pecked his lips then I pinched his cheeks slightly pulling them as I cooed "you are cuttteee." He mocked glared at me removing my hands as he said "what did I tell you I am anything but cute, beautiful." I stick my tongue at him as she shook his head at me pulling me to him by waist out of nowhere. I gasped at the sudden pull as I hold on to his shoulders to straighten myself.

"So what were you saying?" he asked me in low tone with his eyes challenging. I blushed but still maintained eye lock "you are cu.." my words got caught in my throat as he crashed his hard yet soft lips on my delicate ones and started kissing me passionately. I smiled into the kiss as I started kissing him with same passion. We pulled away breathing hard. "It's getting late" he said reluctantly and I nodded in agreement as I pull away.

I turn to leave but he caught my wrist making me turn and look at him. I raise my eye brow questioningly and he sighed. "Stay with me tonight" he said in hopeful tone and I couldn't say no. He gave me his loose shirt which I wore and kept my shorts on and slide beside his shirtless self. Thank to the lord, he was wearing trousers. He kissed my hair as he put my head on his chest caressing my hair with one hand and with another holding my waist protectively. "Good night, beautiful" he whispered. I smiled and replied "good night, hottie." He chuckled and soon we both drifted to sleep.

"I AM COMING IN HOPE EVERYONE IS DECENT" someone yelled making someone beside me groan and waking me up. I rubbed my eyes and sat up and saw Rey sleeping beside me reminding me about last night's events. A smile broke out on my face as I watched him scrunching his face in annoyance still sleeping. Then I remembered the words that woke me up and heard the same voice again "I am coming." I smirked evilly and yelled as I saw knob moving right when I rushed to the door "oh wait let Rey wear his pants at least." I put a hand on my mouth muffling my laugh as Rey bolted up looking at me shocked no trace of sleep on his face. I winked at him and opened the door to find shocked Swayam. I wink at him and Sharon blushed giggling understanding my joke. "What? Only you can joke around" I ask pouting then broke into fits of laughter.

Both boys were red making us girls laugh. Sharon took my hand and pulled me out of his bedroom "let's go make breakfast" she said as I waved at the boys. We chitchatted and soon boys came with a smirking Swayam. "I like you. You are good for him" he nodded at Rey and smiled at me warmly. I smiled back and kissed sulking Rey's cheek making him smile too. We all ate talking and teasing around. "Go on a date with me" Rey asked out of the blue making me choke on my juice. "Niceee" Swayam said sarcastically as Sharon rubbed my back. "Ok" I said as I smiled at Rey after calming myself. "Umm ok as in you are ok now from choking or ok as in ok you will go with me on a date tonight?" he asked nervously. "Ok I will go on a date with you" I say grinning. "Yaaay" Rey said smiling as he pecked my nose which made me blush. I left soon after breakfast and cleaning up to be ready by 8.

*few hours later ~ just before 8*

(pic credit goes to red)

I looked myself in the mirror one last time as I walked down slowly with my wavy hairs falling freely on my bare back. The bell rang and I opened my door to find hottie looking beyond hot.

(pic credit goes to me)

He checked me out openly and I did the same and when I finally got to his face he was smirking at me making me blush. "Gorgeous" he breath out making me more red as he bent down and kiss the tip of my nose. "Shall we?" he asked offering me his arm and I took it nodding as my voice was lost somewhere. We drove to a 5 star restaurant and walked into a private section of it. It had dimmed lights with red curtains that covered each booth giving it a private touch.

(pic credit goes to me)

He helped me sit first and that sat across me gazing at me lovingly. I looked away shyly as he took my hand in his. "I know we have been to dates before but this is our first with no secrets and no lies so I wanted to make it special hope you like it" he says softly as he kissed my knuckles. I smiled at him and squeezed his hand not knowing what to say. We talked about us and us only, no past but future. After our dinner we went for a walk in the garden and it was so peaceful. We walked hand in hand as I placed my head on his shoulder with him rubbing his thumb over my hand. "I enjoyed our first date" I finally said breaking the peaceful silence. He stopped walking and turned me to face him. He cupped my face in his palms. "I am glad you did" he said smiling softly as his thumb graze my lower lip, making it quiver. His eyes left mine as he looked at my lips and I bit my lower lip shyly.

He groaned and lean down to free my lip from my teeth with his as he gently tucked on it making me moan softly. He smiled and kissed me long and hard pouring every emotion in it, the prominent one were love and passion. I kissed him back hard matching his emotions with mine. Soon we pulled away as I felt out of breath but he didn't stop. He kisses my jaws and throat, then neck, collar bone and then shoulders. He nibbles my shoulder as he pulls down the dress from one shoulder leaving love bites as his fingers graced my bare back oh so softly. I was a moaning mess as I hold on to him by his hair as he kissed and nibbled me. "Hotttiiieee" I moaned out as he sucked me on my shoulder leaving another love bite. He pulled away breathless as he placed his forehead on mine fixing my dress again. "I love you, beautiful" he confessed for the first time. I pulled away shocked that he finally said what I wanted to hear since God knows when. I smiled and breathed out "I love you too, hottie." He let out a breath at my reply and pulls me in for another hot kiss. Damn him and his breathtaking kisses I thought as I kissed him back pulling him down to me from his hair. He groaned in the kiss but didn't pull away instead kissed me even harder. We pulled away after he gives me one last peck and smiling we walked to his car then to our houses.

"Stay with me again" he asked as we stood in front of our houses. I shook my head saying "no" making his face fell. Awww I cooed mentally. I smiled at him "but you can stay at mine as I need proper clothes to wear in order to sleep" I added knowing I am not wearing shorts and his won't fit me. He looked up at me with big eyes and smile. "That will do" he says happily as we walk into my house as I shake my head at him.

I changed into my hello kitty pjs. "This is the pjs you wore when I first saw you" a very shirtless Rey said as I walk out of the closet. I blushed and went to him as he took me and made me sit on his lap. He kissed my nose as I straddled him blushing. He chuckled at my blush making me hide my face in his neck. His hands went down to my hips giving it a squeeze making me gasp. I looked at him and he gave me an innocent look. I glared at him and he smirked falling on my bed taking me with him. Now I was on top of him laying there. His hands started moving on my back going inside my shirt feeling me up as he started showering kisses all over my face.

He soon flipped us over as he started kissing my throat and neck and shoulder all over again this time more intimately. I kept moaning and blushing as his hands and kisses set fire everywhere. His hands went to the hem of my shirt as he pulled away asking permission through his eyes. I nodded shyly knowing this is it. He pulled the shirt off of me and eyed me intently making me blush. I looked away shyly as I heard him mutter "beautiful." He bends down covering me with his body as he kissed me softly. His kisses started going down at a slow and gentle pace. He kissed everywhere at my exposed skin making me squirm under him. He came back up his lips not leaving my skin for a second. He kissed my lips again and then nose then forehead muttering "good night" as he flip us over with me on him halfway and my head on his chest. He pulled my blanket over us as I laid there shocked.

"Ummm hottie?" I called out. "Mmm" he hummed in a reply. I doodled on his bare chest nervously "are we...umm... not... doing it?" I stutter. "Doing what?" he asked in a confused tone. "Umm you know that" I emphasized on the word that. He turned a little so he could move up on his elbow and looked at me weirdly "what is that?" he asks looking lost. "Umm... making love" I say shyly as I hid my face in his chest. He didn't move or say anything making me self-conscious I pulled away looking at him "what?" I ask. "You are so naughty" he teases after recovering from his initial shock making me blush. He laughed throwing his head back and flopping on bed again completely pulling me again same way as before. "And to answer your question. No, we are not. When we will it will be special" he said and I could hear his smile in his voice. I smiled pecking his chest making him shudder which made me giggle. I closed my eyes whispering "good night" as I closed my eyes and fall asleep snuggling into him.

*Chapter 16 Ends (last chapter)*

||~Author's Note~||

I am sure this is the last chap and followed by epilogue. As you guys know it was supposed to end and there is nothing left to drag the story so I am ending it before it loses its charm. I hope you guys understand.

Hope you guys liked the update.

Hit like button and comment please.

Love

TaSha

PMs after I update all 4 updates I prepared

Edited by --Ta_Sha--PMs - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res :'( last prt
Nahiii
Awe this was indeed awsm prt finally
Taani said yes yuppie hahahaha 😆 swayam
Was standing out & listen he is too cute Luv it
Taarey kiss was swt aww thr sleep together lol
Swayam In morning 😆 I Luv him in ur stry he
Is masala in ur stry taani also joking around taarey
Went date all pics were superb Luv taarey romance
Was grt 😳 taarey didn't so THAT aww but I want
THAT in epilogue please thanks for PM & waiting for epilogue
Edited by raddhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res/unres
Tasha you amazing dear.
Whole story was lovely.
I loved Taani's punch ;) and POV of Rey and Taani.
Ofcourse Swayam, his character role too good :)
loved it <3
pls continue your good work :)
Edited by Jasmine_ash - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!!! I so wish I could hv my own Rey...nywaz loved d chapter...hmmm no wonder every story has 2 end so here it is...waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome + Cute Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Update Epilouge Soon...😃
Edited by Shubh007 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update..!!!
Thanx for the pm..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Unres.

Awsum update...
Taani said yes...n their kiss was too good...
Swayam was more happy than rey 😃
taani stay with him was nice...n morning scene was hilerious...
their date was beautiful...
Last scene was amazing...
Update soon...
Edited by TR_lovebirds - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i am feeling sad as this ff is ending..
and the same time feeling happy reading this beautifulff..
it was so cute update with some naughtiness of taarey specially taani..
love it dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update
loved it so so much
was waiting for this pm
also waiting for aashiqui

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