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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: urvisaini

Nice update

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon


SURE I WILL
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

To be very honest, this has to be the awesomest fiction with the best plot.
You've rendered me speechless and I am already addicted to this particular fiction.
Like the breath of fresh air, this fiction covers a very sensitive issue with utmost care.
I love you for choosing this story-line and penning it down on our beloved couple.
I read the entire story in one go and I must confess that I'm simply amazed. From the beginning of chapter 1 till the ending of chapter 7, you have nailed it..

Depicting Sanyukta's vulnerability, she being downtrodden by her in-laws and her sufferring...everything has be described perfectly and aptly. Her inner turmoils and her suffocation was mind-numbing. I'm glad that she got Parth as a pillar and is courageous enough to stand for herself. This new, strong willed and determined Sanyukta was just the need of the story and you have very well presented it.
I can understand Randhir's tumult as well. Loving someone, rather thinking that you love that person and then actually falling head over heels for someone else is a pretty tough issue to handle. I'm waiting to know how Randhir is going to handle his wife and his gf when he finally comes across his true feeling. I'm already curious as to how he'll make Sanyukta realize his love for her.
The story so far is fantastic and has been penned down with sheer brilliance.
Do update the next part soonish!

Regards
Keya


THANKU SO MUCH...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NRGANATRA

Its awsome dr ...
lovely update
Nccc one
Do continue
update soon
Nd sorry for let reply but my final exam nd than external exam is just over saturday so i hv no time to read it
Nd thank you for p.m me dr


SURE I WILL
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: holysoul

plzzz update de do ...puppy face


I WILL POST BABY BUT TOMORROW PAKKA ALL I WILL UPLOAD...
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Posted: 10 years ago
mast hai yaar
sandhir are friends
hope randhir ko apni felling
jald pata chal jaye
aur woh randhir ko apna le
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyugracy27

mast hai yaar
sandhir are friends
hope randhir ko apni felling
jald pata chal jaye
aur woh randhir ko apna le


THNKU SO MUCH...
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Posted: 10 years ago

LIFE IS UNCERTAIN - PART 8 :


R:haan voh they were very gud thats y(in reality she had mixed salt instead of sugar nd it tasted horrible but he didnt mind)

S:ohk acha ill come ..

R:no no not alone we will do all the work together...

S:re rd I just have to wash utensils and clean the kitchen a bit tumse nahi hoga...

R:no I am helping u and thats final...

They both were laughing joking and playing around with water splashing a big on each other...they were for the first time enjoying each other's company. ...


Finally all the work was done...


S:toh aaj batao kya karna hai aapko..


R:tumhe!!S:haan sorry tumhe...


R:I want to know u..


S:hunh.. u already know me rd..


R:not like that I want to learn about u ur life ur likes dislikes everything...each and every small detail aboit u then ws will watch a movie...ur fav movie nd I will cook today ...yaa thats the plan..

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Sanyu smiled her brightest...Rd started recording her video as she spoke abot her likes and all things about her...Nd den they played ddlj..


S:pata hai mera fav part voh hai jahan pe voh bauji simran ko raj ke paas jane dete hain oh god its magical...

R:sanyukta vaise toh tum humesha itni chup chap dukhyara face bana ke ek kone mein rehti thi I mean aur andar se tum ekdum pagal ho infact tum bacchi hi ho...


S:aur tum tum bhi toh kitne sadu bante ho I mean I never imagined ki tum itne ache aur dil ke saaf hoge sargam is really very lucky...Rd didnt like it that she said that sargam was very lucky and even he couldnt figure out as to y his behaviour was changing towards sanyukta..


After finishing the movie and lunch and alot of gossip it was 7 now and both of them were well aware of the fact that he would have to go now but neither did he want to leave nor she wanted to let him go...


R:okay toh ab late ho raha hai I shud leave..


S:yaa acha take this paper...


R:yeh kya hai


S:tumhari perfe t coffee ki recipe bansi kaka ko dena aur kisi ko nahi..


R:thnq...nd bye...I really enjoyed alot with u today...


S:same here...take care bye nd haan I liked meeting you...the real rd...


He left with a heavy heart while she got back to her old boring lonely life as parth and sargam had gone to uk for 2 weeks for a conference...


Another day or two passed and now he used to keep thinking about her..where would she be what would she be doing and he kept watching that video of hers over and over again...It was wednesday...


rd wrapped up his meeting by afternoon and then left office for the library...


He reached there and went inside...sanyukta was sitting in deep trouble and was still working but now her work load had reduced because one more assistant was hired...Rd went to her..


R:hi sanyukta..


S:hi...


R:kya hua u seemed to be tensed...


S:re voh rd actually humari library ek bookfest organise kar rahi hai and I am the head of it...but humein 500 passes sell karne hain and they are for 500 but mushkil se 20 passes sell hue hain...I dont know what to do...


Rd sat besides her nd took the passes from her hand...


R:dont worry yeh mein sell kar dunga..


S:no no ways tum kyun karoge I'll manage really...


R:meine kaha na I will do it...and vese tum apna samaan le lo aaj hum bahar ja rahe hain...


S:hunh..rd mera kaam??


R:meine tumhare liye aaj leave le li hai...chalo jaldi...


S:acha hum kahan jaa rahe hain..


R:ghar


S:ghar?? Rd tumhe mere ghar se itna fascination kyun hai kabhi ghar nahi dekha kya..


R:im ghar dekha hain sanyukta but mein ek aisi jagah jaana chahta hun where there is no1 to disturb us jahan hum milke kaam karen aur phir thakke tumhare haath ki coffee peeke aaram kare together forever...


S:hello kahan kho gaye(she snapped her fingers in front of him)


R:nahi kuch nahi chalo na plz..They reached her house nd she just jumped on to the couch...


R:atleast door toh close kardo pagal ladki ...S:nahi mein bohot thak gayi hun ...


2-3 days se overtime kar karke jaan nikal gayi hai...


R:toh kar kyun rahi ho...


S:re nahi rd aisa nahi hai voh parth vese toh mera friend hai but phir bhi mujhe unka loan toh dena hi hoga na...isliye jitna kaam karungi utna jaldi unka loan de paungi...


R:sanyukta! ! Tumhe yeh sab karne ki zaroorat nahi hai. ..mein pay kar deta hun use...

S:plz rd tum aisa nahi karoge aur agar karoge toh what is the diff pehle I had to pay parth then I will have to pay u there is no diff...


There was silence for 5 mins...then rd spoke...


R:acha sanyukta can I ask u for a favour. ..


S:kaisi batein kar rahe ho bolo na??


R:can I please get a hug...


S:rd!! She looked into his pleading eyes...hmm..Rd almost pounced on her...


he hugged her tightly nd closed his eyes to feel her...


sanyukta smiled weakly and wrapped her arms around him...Rd didnt want to leave her at all they stayed like that for around 10 mins and then they finally left eachother. ...


S:acha rd tum mujhe jaldi toh le aaye but kyun karna kya hai...


R:voh toh pata nahi mein toh aisehi tumhe le aaya socha nahi kuch...acha sanyukta tumhe mein kaisa lagta hun I mean tumhe kya lagta hai mein kaisa insaan hun ..haan b honest...


S:pehle mujhe lagta tha ki tum ek bigde hue ameer aur ghatiya kisam ke insaan ho jiske paas koi emotions nahi hain aur jo koi emotions deserve nahi karta ...


not even hatred but abhi kuch dinon se tumhe jaan ke aisa lag ki tum ek ache infact bohot ache insaan ho jise sirf thoda pyaar chahiye jo humesha doosron ki care karta hai unka sochta hai and jiske dil mein bohot sara pyaar hai...


sargam ke liye(she winked) u really love her alot rd tumhari aankhon mein itna pyaar dikhta hai...


R:im.. stupid girl sab dikhta hai ise sab samajhti hai toh phir yeh kyun nahi ki yeh saara pyaar yeh saari care sargam ke liye nahi iske liye hai...y doesnt she understand that I love her...I love her alot...

Sanyu luked at rd...


S:areey.. rd hua kya hai tumhe tum baar baar kya sochne lag jaate ho...


R:haan..nahi kuch nahi tum batao..


S:kya bataun?? Kya bol rahe ho r u okay do u want coffee...


R:haan nahi nothing m ok and wat do u think madam jab mein coffee nahi peeta toh I go mad or what ...
she chuckled..


S:acha rd tum mujhe aaj jaldi yeh timepass karne laye ho...


R:nahi voh...aaj ek imp day hai...


S:aaj ...tumhare liye imp day...aisa kya hai aaj...


R:aaj maa ka bday hai na...


Sanyus eyes widened in disbelief...Of course she remembered that it was her moms bday but he RANDHIR knew and addressed her as mom...


S:mom!!


R:yaa tumhari maa meri maa hi toh huin na (he spoke with hesitation)


Sanyu wiped her tears...


R:sanyukta I am really really very sorry meine kuch jaan buch ke nahi kiya tha...but still I accept that it was mistake...because of me today ur parents are not with you...


I am really sorry mein jaanta hun tum mujhe kabhi completely maaf nahi kar sakti but still I want to apologize...and mein maa ko bhi sorry bolna chahta hun ki meine tumhe itna pain diya...I am sorry maa sorry papa...


Sanyu started crying badly now...


Rd just went nd pulled her in a side hug...


R:shh... plz plz stop crying ...


S:pehle khud hi pareshan karte ho phir aisi senti baatein karte ho and then u say stop crying...


R:but tum rr kyun rahi ho...


S:bus aisehi emotional hogayi thi na dats y. . Nd haan mera toh pata nahi but maa keh rahi hain its ok...koi baat nahi she nd papa have forgiven u...


R:really ...maa papa ko bolo thnq...


S:god bless is what they have replied..


Rd and sanyu kept chatting for hours together...it was 9 now...


R:sanyukta do u mind if I stay here today...


S:umm...yaa its..its ok(she found it wierd and uncomfortable as to y he was spending soo much time with her)


She was making dinner while he was standing near the balcony...and then they heard the door click open...


S:tum hie(she smiled)


Rd turned and gooddd again it was parth as expected. ..rd felt as if he would jump out or throw parth out...


P:hi kaise nahi aata aaj maa ka bday jo hai..


R:bloody hell what did he address her as maa?? She is maa only for sanyu and me bloody ass... dekha maa he is soo irritating...


S:tumhe kaise pata...


He pointed towards a note on the fridge...


S:oh...


P:chalo bahar chalke celebrate karte hain...


S:haan chalo...nahi nahi ...ummm parth I am not alone...


P:matlab..


Rd came inside and parth looked at him in disbelief...


P:rd tum yahan...


R:haan tu toh aate hi yahan tapka kabhi apne iss dost ko bji yaad kar liya kar...


To be continue...😊


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SS : YEH HAI AASHIQUI

SS : TOO GOOD TO SHARE

SS : MISUNDERSTANDG NEVER END

FF : SLIP N FALL

SS : FINALLY ITS OVER

Edited by purnima209 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
are gr8 finally rd admitted ...that he love her...awesome
arrre yrr parth kaha se tapak gya ...
update asap...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb finally rd admitted he love sanyu...yeahhh but sargam aur parth ka kya ???? Feeling bad for them...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update👏
Finally rd accepted that he loves sanyu😊
Update soon

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