Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Arjun's father helped them n what are they hidding from him...??
Continue Sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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Areesha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#472

wow ritu

amazing part

mr rawte is amazing, how easily he handled everything

finally maai's cafe is safe *khushi ke aansu*

oh maai..you again made me cry by reminding her
beautiful and brave lady who thought many souls to live, let live and enjoy it

hope arjun's parents doesn't creat any scene and let arakshi be together

thanks for pm dear

and sorry for being the last one to read and comment

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misha26

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Posted: 10 years ago

#473

aisa lag raha hai they will ask him to leave sakshi
nhi yar itna bara twist nhi itne years ki seperation k bad to bilkul nhi😕😭

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Ritu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: Asyalover
nice

Thanks a lot!😳

Originally posted by: ugababe
Maai is the essence of this story so she will always be loved in any chapter you decide to keep her in.

The suspense is driving me nuts. I hope Sakshi can help Arjun and his parents unite and they can be a family with Sakshi included.

Was so happy to see this update. Can't wait for more!

Cheers!
Khushi

Khushii🤗

Thank soo much for the comment.. yep, she's my favourite😳

Find out in the next chapter😃

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
Why do your Maai makes me cry everytime?
Not that I m complaining but Kyu Kyu Kyu***TV serial bahu style**😆😆
On a serious note,Thanku for the chotu sa part on her.You know how much I adorn her.This is for Maai not you becoz u killed her so no hug for u
Mera bass chale to tumse sirf Arjun-Maai k scenes hi likhwau.I know I know,I m greedy

Human mind is truely unpredictable.Just as Arjun was prepared to have a fight/argument when meeting with his parents, they surprised him by not only accepting to help him for getting back the cafe but also was very much civil with Saakshi.His father's condition to get him back to his parent's house seems to have sumthing serious with his mom I guess. I am Sherlock's fan u know
**minus the sigar***😆😆

Awww.. next wala thoda senti hoga. And it won't be a flashback😳

Na na.. Kekta ki aatma nahi aayi mere andar (you wish😆😆)

LOL... Sherlock😆 Of course I know that.. and yeah, you might be right😉

Thanks for the comment😳

Originally posted by: Nethravathi
Arjun was reluctant to go to his house but for Sakshi's sake he went there

I expected something & waha kuch aur hi hogaya.😆😆😆

I thought Arjun ke papa Arjun pe badkenge. Par unhone toh Sakshi ko bhi andar bulaaliya aur Arjun ki mom baar baar uske papa ko sambhaal rahi thi. Mr. Rawte wants Arjun to come back home & he is ready to give money to Sakshi

Arjun ne Sakshi ke haath se ice cream cheen liya. Aalsi Arjun😆😆😆

Mr. Rawte got the papers which tells tht property belongs to Sakshi. Yippee

hahahaa.. I surprised u didn't I?😛 Ek aur surprise on the way😛

Thanks sooo much for the comment!

Originally posted by: NainaSM
ye kyaaa Mr rawte ne tooo magic kar diya
ik minute me case solve
sakshi ko uska cafe mil gaya
arjun ki mom ?
mr rawte kahi arakshi ko alag naa kar de
continue soon

Hehehe kya socha aur kya hua, right?😛

Hmm read to find out the unexpected😉 Thanks a lot Naina.. means heaps and heaps🤗

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Ritu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: anu91
awesome ritu!!!
is arjun dad and mom doesnt sakshi to be in arjun like...
wt is they hiding plz...cont soon...

Thank you anuu!! You'll find out in the next😳

Originally posted by: SeharishFatima
Awsum update

Thanks a lot!😳

Originally posted by: kunchu
Mai returns!!!!!!
yuhoo
Rawte meet was absolutely opposite to what I expected
I thought thoda raise voice, dhua. and all u know
par yaha tho in logone emotional kara diya
every unsaid words too cried out something deep
Mummy Rawte ko kuch hua hai kya??
jaldi jaldi bolo
aur papa Rawte se bolona ke sirf Junior Rawte nahi balke bahu Rawte ko lane keliye
Loved that Mai part a looot

Yeshhh!😳

Hahahahaa seee i surprised u.. 😃 Aur thoda sa karungi😛

You maybe right.. find out in the next part!

LOL LOL shayad kuch aisa hi ho😉

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome update...
What has happened to Arjun's parents??😕😕😕
Why they behaved so different??😕😕😕
Why his father agreed to give money so easily??😕😕😕
How did Mr Rawte got those papers???😕😕😕
FB's were nice...especially Maai & Arjun wala...😃😃😃
Arjun snatched ice cream of Sakshi...😆😆😆

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Thanks soo much Sneha!🤗

Ab itne saare questions ke answers next update mein milenge😛

Hope u like the next one and hope ur exams are going well yeah?😃

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58
Awsome updt!!!!!!
Really loved it...
pllz plllzzz con.sooonnn!!!!!

P.S. sorry for late & short comment...

Thanks soo much Gausiya.. it means a lot that you comment.. so it's okay😳

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Ritu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome update
Loved it
Arjun's mom???????what happened to her?????
Arjun's dad solved the problem😲😊
hope he doesn't separate Arakshi
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Hahaha.. next wale mein pata chalega😳

Thanks a lottt Shravani🤗

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
nice update
so arjun came back home and found his parents to be changed specially his mom but why
what is wrong is it what sakshi said that they plainly missed him so much or is there some other
reasons
they want him to stay with them and even ready to accept sakshi well what ever the reasons it is good
thing for all
really arjun didn't even wanted to peel the wrapper of his ice cream 😊
thanks for pm

Thanks a lot Shefali!😳

There is some other reason beside that one..😉

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
Awesome update didu..
Loved it very very much..
Superbly written..
Why Rawtes changed so much?
**thinking mode**
Pliisshhh coon soonz..

Eshuu🤗

Thanks sooo much! Why they changed, you'll know in the next chapter😉

Love yaaa❤️

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Nice update
finally arjun met his parents
is there any problem with his mother?
Waiting for next

Thanks a lot!!😳 You'll find out when u read on hehe.

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Arjun's father helped them n what are they hidding from him...??
Continue Sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

Thanks soo much Niki.. you'll find out in the next😉

Originally posted by: Areesha566
wow ritu

amazing part

mr rawte is amazing, how easily he handled everything

finally maai's cafe is safe *khushi ke aansu*

oh maai..you again made me cry by reminding her
beautiful and brave lady who thought many souls to live, let live and enjoy it

hope arjun's parents doesn't creat any scene and let arakshi be together

thanks for pm dear

and sorry for being the last one to read and comment

Thanks sooo much Areesha!🤗

Yeshh the cafe is safe now.. and Maai is close to my heart😳

That's okaay.. i understand. It means a lot that u commented😳

Originally posted by: misha26
aisa lag raha hai they will ask him to leave sakshi
nhi yar itna bara twist nhi itne years ki seperation k bad to bilkul nhi😕😭

Arrey negative kyun?😛

You'll find out in the next.. thanks for the comment😳

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#477

Heyloo!🤗

I know I am superrr late with this one. I was a little bit stuck and also working on the other fics.. Anywaaay am back now with the next part! Hope you'll like it 😳

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For those who thought Mr. Rawte was gonna separate those two - did I surprise you?😛

About the last bit.. for me it was the most close-to-my-heart part to write. I didn't want a flashback this time...😳 I hope you didn't find the last bit too impossible...

Do let me know how you found it😃

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago