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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#451

Rituuu 🤗🤗

firstly i am sorry re. i don't know when i am commenting & when i am not commenting. U know the reason. i am yet to make some adjustment with my schedule... & this will continue upto December. & I promise i will be regular after that. ok 😊

now coming to this chapter...

It was so sooo sooo good ❤️

my all time favourite flashback scenes... with Maai, Acp Arjun & Butterfly, the silver bindi, the beach... It was beautiful ❤️

Time for Arjun to meet his parents... he still has a promise to fulfil. will wait for that part.

very nice & spacial & sweet chapter it was 👍🏼

& yes !! Happy Diwali 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#452

Awesome update Ritu. Happy Diwali. Thanks for such a beautiful update

Beach scene was superb. Sakshi was shy in front of Arjun. Arjun enjoys teasing her & seeing her shying away in front of him.

Flashback scenes always take me to their childhood. Bachpan hi aisa hota haina? Sirf khushiyan hi khushiyan no tension

Arjun is going to face his father only for the sake of Sakshi. Arjun kitni lucky hain Sakshi jisse tum jaise pyaar karnewaala mila jo tumhaare khaatir sab bhulaane ko tayyar hain

Lovely update Ritu👏👏👏

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#453

oh wow beautiful update
love it

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#454

Awesome update Ritu...

FB parts were really beautiful...loved it...

Thanks for the pms dear...

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#455

Originally posted by: ugababe
What a lovely gift for us on Dhanteras Ritu!!

Loved every single scene and the brightness that shines in Arjun and Sakshi's relationship. It's so important to be best friends with the person you'll spend your life with.

Thanks again for a wonderful update!

Happy Dhanteras!

Khushi

Thanks sooo much Khushi🤗

Yes I completely agreee.. I don't know what's gonna happen with me😆

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome update
Loved it
What a beautiful gift for Diwali Ritu
Loved the beach part
and the FB was lovely
each and every scene was nice
just loved it
specially the end
So Arjun to face his parents
interesting
waiting for the next part
continue soon

HAPPY DIWALI!!!!!!!!

Thank youu Shravaniii.. glad I could make your Diwali special hehe😳

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it very much
Arakshi moments were Sooo Lovely...
Flashbacks were Supperbbb...
So Arjun is gonna face his parents...
Amazing Update..
Waiting for next part
Cont Sooon
Thanks for PM

Thanks sooo much Nikii😳

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58
res/unres...

Always awsome ritu di👏 👏!!!!!Its so so so beautifulll nd lovely...m in arakshi land !!!!Really loved it alots❤️ ❤️ ❤️!!!!!!First beach scene was superrbb!!!!nd ur FBs always rockkksss!!!!!Finally he is going to meet his dad!!!!Please Please Please this time update soon!!!!'

Happy Diwali di!!!!!

Awww... glad to send you there😉

Phir se late ho gayiii.. sigh! Anyway, thanks a lot Gausii🤗

Originally posted by: NainaSM
Superb update
Arakshi on beach lovely
Flashback awesome
Diwali cafe yellow glow
Arjun and sakshi friendship love
Lots of memory
Happy diwali
Continue soon

Thanks a lottt Naina🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: anu91
Ritu!!Happy diwali!!!!!!
am in a dream...Arakshi moments were so lovely...
as always Flashback with maai was so beautiful...
so ACP Arjun is going to face his parents...
waiting for next...

Thanks soo much Anuu😳

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Awesome update
flashbacks are always rocking
loved their cute nok-jhok
so arjun is going to his house
waiting for next part

Thanks a lottt Anita😳

Originally posted by: jia03
Awesome update! 👏
Loved the flashbacks...
Maai is really sweet❤️

THanks soo much JIaa🤗

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Happy Diwali...🤗🤗🤗
Awesome update...
Firstly I love this song...😃😃😃
Beach scenes were awesome...😃😃😃
School se beach pe...😆😆😆
Maai didn't put bindi bcoz that @#%*&...
The promise which Arjun didn't fulfill that time...will fulfill it this time...😃😃😃
Arjun-Sakshi fight for lighting the diya...😆😆😆
Sakshi will go with Arjun...😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Snehaaa🤗

Thanks sooo much for the comment!

Originally posted by: Swara85
Firstly wish you a very Happy Diwali...😃
Sorry I missed this story..
It is an awesome story..one of my favourites..
Loved Maai's character..👍🏼
Arakshi moments..Arjun blaming himself..the cafe scenes..then he coming back..fbs..the four friends..their special moments with Maai..and then the twist about the cafe..loved everything..
Mujhe mere Best friend ki yaad aa gai..
Read all the chapters in one go..and so now I'm confused as what to say and what not..silly me..🤪😳
sorry about the small comment..

Aww thanks soo much Swara😳 It's okaay.. I guess I have been a little irregular in updating this one too

hehehe it's okaay that happens to me too.. it means a lot that you commented! Thank youu🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: life93
hi ritu🤗

beautiful beach scene☺️❤️

and diwali arjun sakshi were way to cute😆

and 1 big hus for mai🤗

she is loving n caring and the promise she asked from arjun will only bring him closer to his parents😃

update soon 😃

Neeruuu🤗

Aww thanks sooo much! It means a lot😳

Yeshh.. now see if he does get closer😉

Originally posted by: kunchu
Aww I forgot to comment on this
Moi backkk

Mai Maai...
I can't get enough of her always...
More I read more I get greedy
Those 2 lovely flashbacks!! hayeee
BTW kabhi jo badal barse now in BG
hihi
Its actually time for the son meet his dad
But i am scared to hear that she will be there too
I dont wish her to hear if dad say something bad about mai and Arjun
anyway moi waiting
jaldi jaldi likhooo

KK🤗

Hehehe I am glad you like her soo much😳

Yeshh I love that song too! Now I am tempted to listen to it again! hehehe

Hope u'll like the next part😉

Originally posted by: shreya09
Rituuu 🤗🤗
firstly i am sorry re. i don't know when i am commenting & when i am not commenting. U know the reason. i am yet to make some adjustment with my schedule... & this will continue upto December. & I promise i will be regular after that. ok 😊

now coming to this chapter...
It was so sooo sooo good ❤️
my all time favourite flashback scenes... with Maai, Acp Arjun & Butterfly, the silver bindi, the beach... It was beautiful ❤️
Time for Arjun to meet his parents... he still has a promise to fulfil. will wait for that part.
very nice & spacial & sweet chapter it was 👍🏼

& yes !! Happy Diwali 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

Shreyaaa!! I miss you indeed But it's okaay.. I totally understand.. hope your job is going good though! Hope u like the next chapterrr.. and thanks a lottt for leaving a comment.. it means a lot!🤗

Originally posted by: Nethravathi
Awesome update Ritu. Happy Diwali. Thanks for such a beautiful update

Beach scene was superb. Sakshi was shy in front of Arjun. Arjun enjoys teasing her & seeing her shying away in front of him.

Flashback scenes always take me to their childhood. Bachpan hi aisa hota haina? Sirf khushiyan hi khushiyan no tension

Arjun is going to face his father only for the sake of Sakshi. Arjun kitni lucky hain Sakshi jisse tum jaise pyaar karnewaala mila jo tumhaare khaatir sab bhulaane ko tayyar hain

Lovely update Ritu👏👏👏

Ahh I know.. childhood was bliss. Koi tension nahi thi.. except exams😆😆

Thanks soo much!😳

Originally posted by: Areesha566
oh wow beautiful update
love it

Thanks so much!😳

Originally posted by: Anjali.Mital
Awesome update Ritu...

FB parts were really beautiful...loved it...

Thanks for the pms dear...

Thank you soo much Anjali!😳

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#458

Heyloo!🤗

I knoww I am super duper late with this one.. took me a while to figure out the next bit and soo here I am! Meet the Rawtes😉

I won't say much coz I don't have much to say😛 Sorry again for the delay!

Next time jaldi jaldi karungi😊

Hope you like this one!

DELETED.

That Maai wala flashback wasn't really needed, but I couldn't leave her out of an update for some reason😳 Soo what did you think?

Thanks for reading🤗

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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Khushi

@ugababe

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#459

Maai is the essence of this story so she will always be loved in any chapter you decide to keep her in.

The suspense is driving me nuts. I hope Sakshi can help Arjun and his parents unite and they can be a family with Sakshi included.

Was so happy to see this update. Can't wait for more!

Cheers!
Khushi

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#460

Why do your Maai makes me cry everytime?

Not that I m complaining but Kyu Kyu Kyu***TV serial bahu style**😆😆

On a serious note,Thanku for the chotu sa part on her.You know how much I adorn her.This is for Maai not you becoz u killed her so no hug for u

Mera bass chale to tumse sirf Arjun-Maai k scenes hi likhwau.I know I know,I m greedy

Human mind is truely unpredictable.Just as Arjun was prepared to have a fight/argument when meeting with his parents, they surprised him by not only accepting to help him for getting back the cafe but also was very much civil with Saakshi.His father's condition to get him back to his parent's house seems to have sumthing serious with his mom I guess. I am Sherlock's fan u know

**minus the sigar***😆😆