SwaRon TS:your wish is my command sharon (related to current track)

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hiii guys...this a combined work of me (payal) and anindya..most of the part is written by anindya😛we hope you all like it :D.so here you all go.

:SwaRon TS:
Your wish is my command my love!



"you know what swayam shekhawat lets breakup...yess...mujhe apni self respect chahiye ...main aise ghut ghut ke nahi jee sakti aur insult nahi seh sakti.i beg u..."and she broke down.swayam was watching her..he felt guilty.seeing her love crying this way ...a tear escaped from his eyes..with all his courage he stammered
"ok... okay... sharon aagar tum...tumhe yehi chahiye toh main... toh tumhe nahi rokunga..u are free to go..tumhari khooshi is my first priority sharon.. your wish is my command sharon...i have nothing to say more now..bas...i love you Sharon and take care my love"he said..he wanted to hug her for the last time but Sharon turned her back to swayam in anger..swayam gave a fake smile and he walked out from her house with tears on his face which were unstoppable..


sharon then looks at the engagement ring on her hand and the memories of the beautiful proposal comes to her mind..she was crying...her eyes were turned red.she kissed the ring and look at the sky helplessly and her never ending tears looking like a fountain in moonlit night.she heard a voice calling her name..she quickly rubbed her tears by the sweatshirt she was wearing.
"hey Sharon wassup..."sara asked."what aree...are you doing here sara"Sharon asked picking up the pillow which she threw in anger..sara comes near and her tear strained face gives sara heart wrenching feeling.
"what happened sharon?..did swayam scold at you"she asked worrying..there was asilence for 2 minutes but Sharon broke the ice and started crying"sab kuch khatam ho gya sara." she completely broke down
"sharon shh..kya hua?"she hugged her to make her feel comfortable.
"maine swayam se breakup kar liya...sab kuch khatam ...main uski family ko aur nahi seh sakti na ki swayam ki ignorance ko my self respect..i feel its good for both of us ..we...w... we were never meant to be"Sharon blurted out
"what?are u serious sharon?isme swayam ki kya galti that was entirely his familys fault...?"sara broke the hug and said in disbelief."he was quiet when his family insulted..my ego.. my respect ...my reputation..i can never forgive him"she said angrily.
"ok sharon ...relax...take rest.i guess you want to be alone..i am leaving..if you need something.i will be there" she hugs Sharon and leaves the home.sharon tries to sleep but the pain was unbearable..she closed her eyes and started thinking the precious memories she spent with swayam.
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on the otherside swayam was completely broken.he was crying madly.the words which Sharon said were haunting him.he decided to go to rey's house.he rang the bell.as soon as rey opened the door swayam huged him tightly.rey was surprised.."heyy..buddy..what happened?..."he tried to separate the hug but he was not letting him go..after few moment he left him and started weeping "sharon ne mere saath breakup kar liya rey...sab kuch khatam yaar...main uske bina nahi jee sakta yaar...and main usse khoosh bhi dekhna chahta hu...i am happy she took the decision for her happiness...bass woh humesha khush rahe ... i love you Sharon" he screamsss loud in pain with tears in his eyes.
"swayam...calm down"rey said patting his back.
"nahi rey tu mujhe promise kar ...meri sharon ki humesha protection karega like a best friend as a big brother usse kabhi bhi hurt nahi hone dega..pls promise kar rey"swayam pleaded.
"swayam...i promise but tu yeh kya kahe raha hai tu kaha jaa raha hai.."rey asked confused.
"rey mujhe usse door jaana hoga nahi to woh kabhi bhi khush nahi ho payegi main usse sirf pain deta hu...uska har problem ka kaaran main hu..isliye main lonavala mein ja raha hu waha ek dance school hai main waha bachho ke bich rehna chahta hu kuch din"swayam answered his question.."what...are you mad... kab jaa raha hai?he asked.
"parso" and he gives a letter in name of sharon and asks him to give that to sharon after he is gone...rey was about to say something but swayam left his house.rey prayed to god for swayam and Sharon.

next day:

sharon was in D3 acedemy dancing in skates on tujhe bhula diya every memories of their love flashing on her mind..the words of the songs were literally describing her present scenario.now the moments are gone.. the colours which swayam filled in her life is suddenly gone. swayam is not more in her life..she felt her whole life is meaningless.she was all heartbroken.her eyes were swollen due to crying and sleepless nights..
"Sharon you have to be strong..this is for the better"she said to herself.she stopped when she heard d3 gang coming.all knew that swaron had broke off. gang tried to cheer up sharon..but she is not controllable.
then swayam comes there everyone tries to light the air by cracking jokes but none of them were successfull
swayam ask everyone that he have something to discuss so everyone to join him
"ok guys i am leaving for somework i cant be part of musical now.."he said looking in sharon's eyes..he could felt the pain she was feeling rightnow .he was feeling guilty that he cant do anything to cheer her up.
"kyun shaadi karne jaa rahe woh so called bua ki ladki se? Sharon asked in a sarcastic way.
"sharon please thik se baat karo"swayam warned her.
"nahi kiya toh kya karoge haan im ur boss im the incharge of this acedemy so better talk to me in a lower tone"Sharon said mocking at him.he just smiled a bit sadly to her reaction.he knew this was happening just because of him.
"and guys pata hai mr swayam shekhawat ki family kya hai? downmarket cheap jo ek girl ki respect nahi kar sakte unki family ki bete se aur kya expect kar sakte hai"she insulted him.by saying this she was hurting herself more and more but she controlled and thought "sorry swayam this is just for the better..so you can move on.."
"sharon i am sorry "swayam said in a low tone.


"no mr. swayam shekhawat i am sorry to believe in you and to give you chance ...you are a looser and always will be ...i am ashamed of myself to made you a part of my life ...i am really ashamed"she said in a sarcastic way.
swayam just can take it more he left from there.he was hurt.finally she breaks down completely after hurting swayam that bad and gang tries to control her but she was uncontrollable.
Here every words of sharon just stabbed swayams heart..."i am ashamed of myself for made u my life"this words wer playing in his my in a loop.he started removing her clothes from cupboard and then his eyes falls on sharon's corner which Sharon renamed "swaRon's corner".all the pictures were making his condition worst."Sharon i cant love anyone..you are my life and always will be."he said touching sharon's picture.he closed the door and left for lonavla in night.
sharon and gang were preparing for musical...sharon was trying hard to suppress her pain through work.their cs-acs days together were haunting in her mind...her falling in love with swayam..falling for his simple nature.their love moments and all precious moments their engagement all flash to her mind.she wrenched in painrey dint gave swayam's letter to sharon as he thought first sharon to be normal then will give but he dint know what a mistake he have done.sharon was getting worst day by day.next day he gives the letter to Sharon.sharon quickly opens it and started reading it.rey left sharon's home because Sharon told she need privacy.

my love sharon,

i know i cant take your name as my love now ..cause i dont want you to feel any kinda pain..but i m taking your name as my love last time.bear karlo...mujhe ek last bar tumhari naam lene do mujhe zindagi bhar khushi rahegi..anyway sharon i know i have hurt you a lot.my family tried to ruin ur selfrespect...i know sharon im not the right one for u cause ur too good for me..im a weakling jiska ek wish tha ki tumhare saath ek dance ka saku...pata nahi kab soch liya tha main tumhe paa bhi sakta hu. phir hum saath aye mere zindagi ke precious moments tumhare saath bitaya...tumhari love ne mujhe stregth di main ek strong dancer bana...tumhari love paake mujhe meri zindagi mil gayi...kabhi na socha tha li yeh sapna mera sach ho ga.. swayam and sharon swaron ban gye ...hum saath mein live in kiye ...engagement ki ...maine socha tha life mein mujhe sab kuch mil gya...maine socha tha. anyway leave it ...i never thought we will break once again kabhi nahi sharon not even i my worst nightmares..leave it tumne mujhe jo diya woh main kabhi nahi bhul sakta tumhara saath bitaya hua har ek moment mere liye zindagi hai
but main nahi chahta tum mere liye koi bhi problem face karo...tum mujhe bhul chahti thi naa sayad mere samne rehne se tumhe aur pain hoga isliye main jaa raha hu sharon sabkuch chod ke...ek promise karogi sharon?
humesha khush rahogi mere liye? tumhari joh smile jo hai naa bohot precious hai usse kabhi mat khona...all the best for acedemy and ur future life ...and sorry for ruining ur life ...but i love you morethan my life.bye meri jaan bye my love bye sharon take care...have a great future siren Sharon.
-forever your swayam. :)

after reading this letter she just completely broke down...she just kissed the engagement ring and left from there
sharon in her room weeping badly sara called rey..rey comes there.
"Rey swayam ne tumhe mana kiya hai naa woh kaha hai woh na bolne keliye?sharon asked rey crying.
"Sharon stop crying...tumhe kaise pata?he rubs the tears which were falling from her eyes.
"itna toh usse main janti hi hu rey..rey tumhe meri kasam pls tell me swayam kaha hai..main usse ekbar dekhke wapas aa jaungi rey please told me...kahi usne apne sath kuch kar toh nahi liya naa rey pls rey kuch bolo speak up damn it...mera swayam zinda hai naa rey??rey speak up speak up rey?"she blurted out.she haven't seen him from last 3 weeks.she was worried.hell worried.
"sara rey ko bolo pls bole mera swayam kaha hai usse bolo mera patience khatam ho raha hai pls"she pleaded.
"sharon pls i m sorry i cant say swayam ne swear di hai"rey said apologising.
"just speak up rey ..he is my life ..and i m his life so i m taking his swear pls bol rey nahi to mera mara hua muh dekhoge"she warned him.
"sharon yehsab kya bol rahe ho ..ok swayam lonavala keliye nikla tha but uske baad uski koi news nahi hai"rey said disappointed. "what?tumne mujhe abhitak nahi bataya?tum mere best friend ho?tum swayam ke best friend ho?how could u do this?and tumne dhoondne ki koshish nahi ki.. mera swayam zinda hai ki nahi how dare u rey"Sharon grabbed his collar..sara calmed her down.
"you really thing mein itna careless hounga..Sharon calm down maine sari jagah pe search kiya..lonevala mein bhi gaya kuch bhi nahi mila "rey said seeing down.

"rey pls kahi se bhi mere swayam ko wapas lao...main nahi jee sakti uske bina."...she again broke down
"sharon cool pls...hum milke usse wapas layenge...tumhara pyaar bohot strong hai sharon usse kuch nahi ho sakta"rey hugged her.
"nahi rey...mujhe akela dhondna hoga mere swayam ko...yeh mera pyaar ka test hai..if i ever loved swayam from heart mujhe woh zaroor milega.."Sharon said.

next update will be soon..thanks for reading 😃

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vrushiiii thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome 😊
pls update next part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow..nice strt...👍đŸŧ
the first part made me cry😭
hope swayam is safe and sharon finds him soon...
update soon plzđŸ˜ŗ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start Payal and Anindya.. :)
So emotional :'(
Update soon abhi..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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emotional kar diya yr

loved it
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg payal...tune yeh likha h...i was nt aware tu itna aacha likh sakti h...romantic ka pata tha bt itna strong emotion b portray kar sakti h..
i m speechless...

Anindya god mujhe nahi pata tha tht u write also...ab to mujhe tere ss or os padhne h mujhe link de dena
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh God, this update made me cry. . .so emotional...loved it
plz plz update soon
& good job Payal nd Anindya, keep it up
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It was soo emotional!!loved it..
great work..
pls update soon and please do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum update...
Update next part soon!!!
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PART 2

tollerate spell mistakes and gramatical errors please😆


Pehle College Phir Dance Mania aur ab kriya ka yeh dream
Maine aur Sharon ne bohot kuch ek saath dekha hai
Par dar lagta hai kabhi kabhi complication humare beech na aa jaye
Aaj hum dono ek saath hain
We love each other
Lekin love ki bhi kya guarantee
Kriya bhi toh Rey se love karti thi
Kisi din agar Sharon ne mujhe love karna band kar diya toh
Lekin World mein kuch bhi ho jaye
Main Sharon ko nahi kho sakta


Mere kahi hui har baat hi sach ho gyi last sentence chod ke meri sharon meri siren sharon..opps sorry abto woh meri nahi hai..sharon rai prakash my first and sabse precious dream...


my love my inspiration sabkuch maine jitni bhi kausis ki usse apne paas rakhne ki har baar failed raha...maine socha tha main abb use kabhi nahi khoyunga..par destiny ko kaun challange kar sakta hai

i just hope woh humesha khus rahe meri zindagi mein jitna bhi acchi kaam kiya hai uska wishes sharon ko mile...bass uski happiness chahiye mujhe...love you sharon ..love you morethan myself..
swayam dint reached lonavela he take shelter in a villege of hills of lonavela outskirts
on the otherside sharon is restless to find swayam everywhere...

"Tum mere liye bohot precious ho main koi bhi taklif tumtak ane nahi dunga i promise"

"Tumhe khone se daarta hoon sharon"


"yeh hai humara ghar...iha ek sofa set hoga ...aur jab guest nahi honge toh tum sofe pe baithna main tumhari godh mein sar rakhke so jaunga...iha hoga humara dance studio..hum iha dance karenge and jab humari beech fight hogi tab bhi hum iha ake dance karenge...and yeh kya hai yeh yeh iha kuch bhi karne keliye hum girlfriend nd boyfriend nahi rahe sakte yeh hai bedroom..."

"main tumhara boyfriend se kuch zyaada banna chahta hu ...tumhari haath pakarke puri duniya se kehna chahta hu tum bass meri hi ho sirf meri...kya tum meri girlfriend se kuch zyaada banogi...will you marry me sharon?"


swayams each and every words haunting sharons mind like someone piercing her heart with knife...


sharon:kabhi nahi socha humari woh predictable life itni unpredictable ho jayegi ki hum ekdoosre se itna door ho jayenge..life mein spice up hone ke chakkar mein puri life barbaad ho gyi hai...

swayam and sharon two poles connected by eteral love phir bhi why we are separated ..why god?humne kisi ka bura nahi chaha nahi kiya?sabka bhala chaha hai maine aur swayam ne...yeh justice hai bhagwan?


kaha ho tum swayam...kya ekbar bhi dekhna nahi chahte tumhari sharon zinda hai ki nahi..kaha ho ...kyun meri test le rahe ho...ekbar mil jao i promise i swear on my dance kabhi tumhe apne se door nahi jane dungi...

she cried her heart out walking in roads of lonavela in nights...suddenly she saw a hoarding "SwaRon World" its a hoarding of a cottage...its a small cottage but its looking similar like swayam promised her during proposal


the way he described everything is there ...she tried to look inside she saw someone drenched in swaet dancing his heart out...its like he has lost his last reason to live


yes its swayam...he is dancing his heart out...and he is venting his all pain through dance...his hand is wounded bandage there... sharon couldnt see properly his face she came to inside



Dard Mein Bhi Yeh Lab Muskura Jaate Hai
Beete Lamhein Hamein Jab Bhi Yaad Aate Hai
Beete Lamhein...



Chand Lamhaaat Ke Waaste Hi Sahi
Muskuraakar Mili Thi Mujhe Jindagi
Teri Aaghosh Mein Din The Mere Kate
Teri Baahon Mein Thi Meri Raate Kati
Aaj Bhi Jab Woh Pal Mujhko Yaad Aate Hai
Dil Se Saare Gamon Ko Bhula Jaate Hai
( Dard Mein Bhi Yeh Lab Muskura Jaate Hai
Beete Lamhein Hamein Jab Bhi Yaad Aate Hai )... (2)
Beete Lamhein...



his reflex is too painfull to watch for sharon


their first kiss , confesssion, shower romance flashes on their minds


Mere Kaandhe Pe Sir Ko Jhukaana Tera
Mere Sine Mein Khud Ko Chhupaana Tera
Aake Meri Panaahon Mein Shaamo Sehar
Kaanch Ki Tarah Woh Toot Jaana Tera
Aaj Bhi Jab Woh Manjar Nazar Aate Hai
Dil Ki Viraaniyo Ko Mita Jaate Hai
( Dard Mein Bhi Yeh Lab Muskura Jaate Hai
Beete Lamhein Hamein Jab Bhi Yaad Aate Hai
Dard Mein... Beete Lamhein...

their memories in each others embrace flashes on their minds...sharon breakdown there completely seeing swayam in devasted state...sharon faal down on floor swayam
is shocked to see her in this state ..he rushed to her.


sharon sharon are u ok..kya hua hai...she opened her eyes and see her love of life staring at her with full love and concern..fresh blood are flowing from swayams wounds

sharon:apne saath yeh kya kar rahe ho swayam?yeh kya halat ki hai tumne?tears are flowing constantly from her eyes

swayam:calm down sharon shh

sharon:kaise calm down karu tell me how swayam jab main jisse iss duniya mein sabse zyada pyaar karta hu woh mere samne aise hala mein ho...and woh bhi mere wajah se


swayam:isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai sharon..its me the reason of everything...

sharon:shut up...how dare you? tum apne saath aisa kaise kar sakte ho..dont u know how much i love you?tumhe ekbar bhi aisa nahi laga tumhe aise dekhkar mujhpar kya beetega?tumhe naa dekhkar main kaise jeeyungi?breakup ka matlab kya pyaar bhi khatam ho gya?pyaar kya itni fake cheez hai joh ek word se khata,m ho jata hai swayam?


swayam:main tumhe aur taklif nahi dena chahta sharon..bohot hurt kiya hai tumhe aur nahi...

sharon stops himand pressed her lips on his lips...swayam first was shocked and then his too joined..their lips moulded into one..they were engrossed in deep kissing ..they were trying to supress the pain of separation hurt through this kiss...

sharon:mera answer mila?she asked with a little smile..


swayam:but sharon

sharon:no but swayam...hum ekdoosre ke bina nahi jee sakte jitna bhi kausis kare...main aur try nahi kar sakta..i cant live without you..and i can see and very well understand u too cant live without me.

so stop all this...

swayam:he just pulled her in a tight hug ...and she just engrossed herself more to him...tears are flowing from both their eyes constantly these tears sybolizes twwo eternal lovers unio once again after lots of sorrow,pain,separation,moon gives them his blessing to two madly in love souls...

swayam:your wish is my command my love😊

happy reading 😊



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Edited by anindo_vrushan - 11 years ago

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