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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: apardh_ba

Its great wish something like this happens in the show. lovely update.



Thank you so much. I am sure something similar will happen. Cabir is too attuned to not notice Manik's suffering. He has a hunch, he just needs to gamble on it.

Originally posted by: TheBlueAngel

'The answer was simple; Manik Malhotra was in love with Nandini Murthy.'❤️

God i sooo hpe ki dis happens on da show..
i really wnt Cabir 2 help Manik in dis..
Kip writing mre..🤗



Thanks! I am sure Cabir will help Manik because that's what friends do. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: nyxx

Loveee this InvisivleSmile!

I second Rafz! If the CVs be trolling here, Pay heed to this! Could definitely see something like this happening in the show! Cabir coaxing it out of Manik, and that, ""I thought we were no longer going to hide anything from each other?" ...I want this!



Thank you. I am sure we will get something along similar lines. Cabir and Manik's talk is due. I also have feeling that soon Cabir will convert his intuition into a firm conclusion about his friends erratic heart.

Originally posted by: nits_viratholic

Oh! That's so perfect... *claps*



Thanks 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a lot :)

Originally posted by: fan145

Need more need more need more...awesome dude..just afb hope a scene like this happns..i really want cabir to confront amnik abt nandini..and take manik tomrite place of love..



Thank you. I wish I could write more. I really do. Suddenly I have all these ideas running through my head. But on another note, I am definitely sure that Cabir will be the first from Fab5 to learn about Manik's feeling for Nandini. It's not possible that he does not have a hunch with all the probing he has been doing. 😆😆

Patience is key my dear friend.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Beautiful one shot girl brilliantly written.. 😊👏



Thank you.


Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

awesome OS...wish to see similar scene in show too..



Thanks a lot. I too wish similarly.

Originally posted by: topsy003

very very nicely written. hope we do get something like this on the show.

the way you explained the scene and Manik's emotions, it all felt so real..😊😊

Thanks for the awesome OS.. 👏👏 do keep writing more.



Thank you so much. I am glad you could connect to emotions I tried to lay out...it means a lot to me.
Will try to write more, but no promises.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you.

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Ah, that was beautiful...I really loved the way you write...Hope you will keep writing because I want to read more of your work...Dont stop...😳



Thank you so much :) I will surely try to write more when I get the inspiration + time.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: InvisibleSmile



Kiya, I definitely know where you loyalty lies. I am awed that you read this story for me. Now you should definitely give this show a chance for me also. 😆 I am in love with it especially Monster Manik and his Nandu.




Since it comes greatly recommended. I will give it chance.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Beautiful Os..
You explained Manik's emotion so well.
Hope MaNan will be back together in the show soon..
I hope Cabir does something..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful os❤️
amazingly penned down👏
Manik's feelings wer well described
Cabir i jus loved him in this😊

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