OS| His achilles' heel - Page 2

Beautiful one shot girl brilliantly written.. 😊👏

very very nicely written. hope we do get something like this on the show.

Ah, that was beautiful...I really loved the way you write...Hope you will keep writing because I want to read more of your work...Dont stop...😳

Wonderful.👏 I know this is a OS but i hope you continue this idea in a longer SS because you've relaly got a knack for breaking this issue down!😃

Originally posted by: autumn.03

I'll take this if it means I get to read what you write. Yes, I mean it. Seriously everytime you write you simply weave magic and I assure I do not say this to please you. You already know where my loyalty lies and it's with writing. I don't have any idea about this show but I am reading this piece for you and your writing.

I could feel Manik's emotions and everytime he thought about her he repented...she is truly his achille's heel. He is not complete without her maybe he has not drawn that realization yet. But when he does I am sure he would stop at nothing to get her back.
Cabir's silent prodding and his hints..were a sign of a true friend. He understands Manik and he knows that his friend is miserable. The end was perfect with a nice bow on top.

Well done.

PS: I should really check out this show!

Kiya, I definitely know where you loyalty lies. I am awed that you read this story for me. Now you should definitely give this show a chance for me also. 😆 I am in love with it especially Monster Manik and his Nandu.

Shiza, you are full of surprises woman. You are a complete package, you edit videos and write. I never knew you wrote. However now that I do...I wish for you to continue this little expriment. I loved it.

You have a beautiful way of explaining small things which may have not seemed important back then, but within this story they become a crux of sorts. Manik's feelings were splatters on a canvas. I always knew Cabir would be the first of Fab5 to figure out about Manik and Nandini. His intuition led him to the right place, dare I say.
You can't just leave it as it is, you must continue.

By the way if not continue this OS, please continue to wrote on KY2. We need more writers like you.

Its an amazing OS...👏👏👏

Love the way this was written! 👏

Originally posted by: OneThatGotAway

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" color="#000099">This sounds like something that could actually happen in the show.👍🏼</font>

That is such a sweet compliment. Thank you.