Sagarika's Soliloquy !

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Sagarika's Soliloquy !

Bunty ...the charming presence of yours nearer to me ...is dissolving our mutual defenses...as if you are standing like a swaying tree on the bank of an overflowing rough river !

Was it not fate ...on this chilly winter night , that bade me pause before that Adam &Eve's garden -gate...

You filled up all of my senses with a single touch,the taste of your lips and your deep black-eyed stare...stirring my heart at core ...to breath the fragrance of those shimmering roses, my foot steps fluttered ...shivered , that hateful world all slept there ... left only you and me...Oh heaven...why my heart beats in coupling those two worlds ...

I paused ---I looked ,and in an instant ,all things disappeared ...only you and me ,the pearly lustre of the moon spreading it's magic all over ...the swaying flowers and the staggering trees, the very roses' fragrances ...all excited ,seeing the coral dust that is slowly spreading in your eyes ,that red prism is reflecting on my cheeks ...slowly lifted my eyes ...lol ...you lost yourself ...but want to see your budding desires in my heart beats ...don't let the moon go down without witnessing our love combats my dear romantic warrior ..let those celestial spheres encircle us , how beautiful this hope is ...still some moon light is left there ...still flowers are spreading their fragrances ... you are yet to become my man ...how silently the serene sea of my pride ...touching your deep age old beliefs ?!

My heart ,in your presence, races...yet stops with a single look into your eyes. ..I witness there ...a thousand moonlit skies !!!

Then I cover the distance between our faces and our lips find perfect coexistence !!! From the other side ...your eyes are guiding me ...lighting my lonely pathway ...they follow me ..lead me to take a lead , to illuminate your romantic role ... be bold Bunty ..be bold ..before we turn old !

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Posted: 11 years ago
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A good lyrical description of a shy lady's longing for her husbands love .
Amma is stone hearted and Bunty is tongue tied son, you have written the inner feelings of a young girl. Again ,love your way of writing .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Absolutely loved your poetic expressions of yearnings and love, so beautifully depicted. The ending was the best, also humorous, very heart-rending and sincere soliloquy!
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Thank you Avyakta for liking my writing ! 😊
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Seetha,Love recognizes no barriers. It jumps hurdles, leaps fences, penetrates walls to arrive at its destination full of hope.
Maya Angelou
What better way can anyone describe,the words you use mesmerize and I am enthralled the way you write.I am lost in my thoughts.
Let's hope Bunty will reach the destiny with the help of his love,jumps hurdles created by Ammaji,leaps fences,penetrates walls reaches Saagarika to become Sagun .
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Originally posted by: vibraj

Absolutely loved your poetic expressions of yearnings and love, so beautifully depicted. The ending was the best, also humorous, very heart-rending and sincere soliloquy!

Vibha ...once a grass blade said ...a kernel is hidden in me ...a spark , a thought , I am a speck in this mountain of eternal love ...I was made to form and reveal the eternal love in my smallest special detail !
The sea always filled herself with longing ,though for what ...she was never sure ! A woman's heart is always longing for something which she never knows. ...a quest throughout her life !


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Posted: 11 years ago
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fantastic piece Seetha.. 😃 every word perfect ⭐️ just love it dear... ❤️
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Originally posted by: Tulasi14

Seetha,Love recognizes no barriers. It jumps hurdles, leaps fences, penetrates walls to arrive at its destination full of hope.

Maya Angelou
What better way can anyone describe,the words you use mesmerize and I am enthralled the way you write.I am lost in my thoughts.
Let's hope Bunty will reach the destiny with the help of his love,jumps hurdles created by Ammaji,leaps fences,penetrates walls reaches Saagarika to become Sagun .

. Tulasi ...thank you for good words ! Beautiful quote from Maya Angelou...She is my favorite author and poetess .a great feminist and human being ! A much needed crusader for women's rights ...recently left this wretched world .
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Originally posted by: LiliWorld

fantastic piece Seetha.. 😃 every word perfect ⭐️ just love it dear... ❤️

Thank you Lils ...while. trying to seduce Bunty ...how she convinces herself ...to proceed further , that thought is the inspiration to these expressions ! Thanks again dear !😊
Edited by seetha74 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LiliWorld

fantastic piece Seetha.. 😃 every word perfect ⭐️ just love it dear... ❤️


Agree Lili, this is my favourite writing of Seetha, she is at her inspirational best👏👏👏

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