Hamesha ... Abhigya SS *UPDATE ON PAGE 9 (12/11/14)* - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great story! I love how Abhi found out the truth and that Pragya has amnesia. I can't wait to see how they'll interact. And Abhi will be heartbroken, there will be a lot of angst from his side and I can't wait. Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hai guys ... no don't hate me T_T school is a bit hectic right now so i tried to update here with a short chapter :D and to be quiet honest, i have not seen the show recently but i know what is going on and i do hope Pragya does not forgive abhi easily, neither Tanu nor Aliyah

ps ... where is Purab?? O.o

CHAPTER 5

Kisi shaayar ki ghazal
jo de ruh ko sukoon ke pal,
koi mujh ko yoon mila hai,
jaise banjaare ko ghar.

The ghazal of some poet,
which gives moments of peace to the soul,
I've found someone
as a wanderer finds home..


[By comparing himself to a wanderer, and 'someone' to home, he tries to explain how deeply important the 'someone' is in his life.]

All heads turned towards the door as it opened. There he could see her from the mandap, looking so beautiful in her bridal attire.

naye mausam ki seher
ya sardi mein dopahar
koi mujh ko yoon mila hai,
jaise banjaare ko ghar.

The morning of a new weather,
or an afternoon in the winters,
I've found someone
as a wanderer finds home..

Slowly as she walks in with her family in tow, entering the mandap, taking her seat next to him.


Jaise koi kinaara,
deta ho sahaara
Mujhe wo mila kisi mod par

The way some shore gives support
[to someone who was about to drown]
I found her on some turn..

Slowing as she walks in with her family in tow, entering the mandap, taking her seat next to him.

Koi raat ka taara
karta ho ujaala
waise hi roshan kare wo sheher

(the way) some night-star gives light,
the same way [s]he lightens up the city.

For a second their eyes met and it seemed like the world had stop and there was a slight blush on her face that he thought of was cute.

"Bhai?!" Abhi was called out from his memory and back to reality as he saw purab standing infrot of him looking helpless. "Bhai, don't worry, everything will be fine nah? Look at it this way, maybe you have another change to woo her, make her fall in love with you this time, show her the real you, show her the loving person I know you to be." Purab said as he tried to cheer up Abhi who was down because pragya as absolutely no idea or memory of their marriage.

"But purab, what if she remembers everything? How I treated her? How I broke our marriage? What if she hates me and never wants to see my face again?" Abhi began ranting but was stopped when he felt a hand on his shoulder. He looked over to see Sharla ma sitting there with tears brimming her eyes. She had come to know of everything that went on between her daughter and son in law, she was not pleased at first but when she heard the full truth told by Purab and Bulbul, she realized that her son in law was no less a victim of his love for his sister. "Bas beta, phir rona mat. Sab kuch teek ho jayega. Bhagvan par bharosa rakho.(Stop son, don't cry again, everything will be fine, have faith in god)" Abhi could not contain his tears much longer; he cried his heart out while hugging sharla ma, accepting that she is a mother towards him.

Tu hi ye mujh ko bataa de
Chaahoon main yaa naa
Apne tu dil ka pataa de
Chaahoon main yaa naa

You only tell me,
should I love or not,
Tell me about your heart,
Should I love or not..

Weeks has passed and every day Abhi shows up to the Arora household to woo his lady love, who kicks him out every single time he shows up and troubles her. Pragya does not know what to do with him anymore, everyday he comes to her house claiming he loves her, baring her with gifts of all sorts. While others, especially her sister thinks it very cute of him, she is highly confuse why on earth would the man she has had nothing but quarrels with is in love with her. Yet she can't shake the feelings off that deep down she feels something towards him as well. Every night as she lay on her bed for sleep, she thinks about him and his visits, the way he interacted with her family members, especially her mother, she smiles and closes her eyes to drift off in a sweet slumber.

Itna bata doon tujh ko
Chaahat pe apni mujh ko
Yoon to nahi ikhtiyaar
Phir bhi yeh sochaa dil ne
Ab jo lagaa hoon milne
Poochhoon tujhe ek baar

I'll tell you so much,
On my love,
I don't have so much control,
Still the heart thought once,
Now that I've begun to meet,
I should ask you once..

Edited by Evalina - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
nice update evalina! i like this shaken up and determined abhi. nice moment with sarla too. and intriguing on pragya's end!

lovely use of that song also :)

thanks!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update I wish it was longer aww poor Abhi but it's nice that he has Sarla to help him get through this difficult time, she is starting to fall for him which is good, can't wait to read the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you, evalina!!!! So sad ... and really beautiful ... awww... the emotions... the pathos!!!! Loved Sarla 😛!!!!

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