Hamesha ... Abhigya SS *UPDATE ON PAGE 9 (12/11/14)*

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hello everyone! i am a silent reader of this forum and my best friend gave me this idea to write. i do hope you enjoy it ...
it is very short, and will be in two parts
PART 1

-based on yesterday's precap-


Purab pulls Bulbul into the mandir where he makes her stand in front of Lord. "Bulbul please don't leave, I love you bulbul, please don't make me do this again, don't push me away please bulbul, I love you and only you!" Bulbul watches him with tear-filled eyes, trying to control her posture, to make herself determine to send him back to Aliyah. "Bulbul please, you don't know how much our sacrifice would worth if I actually marry her, please, hear me out." Bulbul tries to pull her hands away but Purab wasn't letting go.

"Purab, let my hands go please, if Di comes and she sees this she would not like it, please purab, understand what I am trying to say, you have to do this to save Di's marriage. Please Purab!!!" Purab couldn't stand it anymore, "HER MARRIAGE WONT LAST IF I MARRY ALIYAH!"

"PURAB!" Both heads turn towards the voice they heard, and it was none other than Pragya. "Bulbul, please leave from here, go home, please, go to ma, I will handle purab." Pragya looked at her sister, hurting her heart that she is making her sister do this, but she also knew of the greater effects that would happen post marriage, her divorce with Abhi, her mother's health was at stake, Daddi's health as well, she tried her best to keep her emotions in tact before she damned it all and got bulbul married to purab herself because she knew of the outcome.

"But Di..." ... "Bulbul, please, leave now!" pragya cried. Bulbul had no other choice than to listen to her Di. Pragya turn towards Purab and held him by his shoulders as he hung his head in shame for what he had done. "Purab, why did you do this?! Did you not think of the consequences of what would happen after you left?" she continued crying. "Di, what would have been your position after we got married huh? You would have to leave Bhai and then answer to all of Daadi's and Ma's questions and bear yet another broken marriage? I am sorry that I left the satiation to what it has turned out to be, but I am not sorry that I was thinking about you while I did it."

After that, praya's control broke, she began crying hysterically, after months of bearing the insults, the faade in which she played, the perfect bahu, the perfect wife, all the lies to her mother and Abhi's daadi, she broke, and she clung on to him, and purab beging her only source of comfort placed his arm around her. But the sibling duo was oblivious to another visitor, who just stared at them in their embrace, anger and heat building that something snapped inside of him and he began clapping. Pragya and Purab broke from their embrace as they say Abhi walking in, clapping. Fear filled pragya as she now did not know what would happen as abhi saw purab embracing her, what would she do, but before she can say anything, abhi began.

"Wow chashmish! Wow! ... standing ovation goes to you! You played us all so well!, you know for a moment I thought that just maybe you weren't the person who I thought you to be, but look! You proved it yourself! And Purab, have you no shame? Ruining my sister's life for this middle class chashmish! You betrayed our friendship for this girl?" Purab was confused, he was sure that Abhi would have gotten the letter and know the truth of this entire fiasco, but as he watched the hatred in Abhi's eyes as he looked at pragya and him, he knew he had to tell him the truth then and there, for once, he needed to stand up.

"Bhai, what are you saying? You ..." he was cut off by pragya who held his hand and told him no, as she moved towards abhi. "Abhi, listen to me please, it's not what you ..." SLAP! His hand stung, but her faced had redden, tears flow from her eyes again, she could feel her face burning as the salty tears tried to sooth the pain, while purab stood there in shock at what Abhi had just done. At this point, Abhi was gone, he didn't know whom he had turn into but he was not going to let her go.

"Shut up! Just shut it! I have had enough your lies Pragya so just shut up!' he grabbed her mangalsutra and held it infront of them, " I don't understand why you wear this if you keep running after your lover boy, but then again, you had to play perfect bhau no? you had to pretend to be my ... MY WIFE. I actually thpught that you cared, that you had actually give into this marriage and was trying to make it work and I was stupid to think of you as different but no, you showed your true colours Pragya Arora" and with that final statement, he burst the mangalsutra.

Pragya and Purab were in shock, but pragya only focused on the falling beads. She remembered her wedding, the insults, the fights, their nok jok, the dances, and something hazed where she was happily snuggled with Abhi on the terrace, all of their moments now seemed like a dream to her and she looked to abhi in disbelief, she began backing away from him ... out the mandir, as the images of her sick mother, and daadi crossed her mind, her sister sacrifice for her, purabs sacrifice for her, she could hear nothing, her body became numb, all she knew what that she was moving away from Abhi and Purab, oblivious to everything around her until she could see no more ...

Abhi had looked away from pragya retreating form and to Pruab, he was about to speak but the sudden blasts of Horns and shouting made them changed their direction. As Purab looked out at pragya, he just saw the last of her form and he shouted out "DI!!!" as he ran towards her leaving Abhi rooted on his spot, in shock of what he heard. Purab reached to pragya only to see her covered in her own blood, her sindoor smudged off, and what was left of her mangalsutra hanging around her neck ...


Part 2: http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4153778&TPN=2

Part 3: http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4153778&TPN=5

Part 4: http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4153778&TPN=6

Part 5: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4153778&TPN=9


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Whoaaa!!! The abhi entrance might actually happen like this in the show
But oh no pragya!!

Cant wait for the next!!
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Wow. Such a great start! Can't wait to see what's next.
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Evalina ... thank you!!! It was just too good ... absolutely loved it! Please continue !!!!


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This is really good can't wait to read the part
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Ohh!! Amazing update!! Loved it.. I hope Abhi gets to know the truth now
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Kick ass start ..
Keep writing ..
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wow that was amazing hun👏
dramatic n intense👏
loved it😃
do continue soon
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aiyoo hw i hate suspensee and love hw u write xD cnt soon *wink*
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I have taken some material from desitvbox.com and Bollymeaning.com; no copyright intended. Annddd ... I have decided I'll make this into a three part :3 hope you all do enjoy ^^

PART 2

Manzilein ruswa hain
Khoyaa hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye
Itni si iltijaa
Ye meri zamaanat hai
Tu meri amaanat hai..
Haan..

[(my) destinations are not cared for..
the path is lost..
(Someone, you actually) comes n takes me away
only this is my small wish..
This is my surety,
you're mine..]

Apne karam ki kar ataayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun rahaa hai naa tu
Ro rahaa hoon main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hoon main

[Bless me with your grace..
Look this way too..

You're listening, right?
I am crying here..
You're listening to me right..
Why I am crying here.. ]

-Flashback -

Abhi gets up and tries to bring the moon down. They wonder why moon is so black. He jumps to get the moon down and Pragya cheers for him. He says it's not coming. Pragya says she will try, but she fails too. He says they should sleep now. She says she can't sleep in dark, she wants moon. He says it's black moon, what's the point then? She says when it comes closer, it won't be dark. He asks her to sit on her, they will go on ride and get it. She says she has an idea. He says he doesn't want it. Aaliya gives him ideas which always fail and then he has to suffer. She tells him not to take tension and asks him to lift her. He says no, he doesn't want to throw her now because she's nice. She smiles and tells him he's nice too and asks to lift her. He lifts her. She asks the moon to come down, and says she got it in her fist. He tells her not to open it and takes her backward. He loses balance and they fall on each other on a sofa. He says she said his song is bad and asks her to listen now. He sings it and then asks what's wrong in it? She says this is good, teach me. They both sing together and eventually fall asleep hugging each other. "Love Love Happy love ... love ... lo .."

"DI, WAKE UP PLEASE! DI!" Purab is calling out to pragya, but he gets no response. He effortlessly lifts her up in his arms and carries her towards his car to go to the hospital while Abhi is rooted to his spot, playing the scene over, and over in his head, until the voice of Bulbul shook him out of his daze, and hurried him to get to the hospital. Nothing has been registered in his head yet, all he knows is that he is on his way to the hospital with Bulbul, wait, bulbul? when did she come? More important, how did she know where we were?' he thought to himself and he was about to ask her but they arrived at the hospital and he decided to worry about that later as there was more important matter to address. They both rushed inside to see pragya's body wheeled away into the operation room. Abhi still does not know what to do, he had everything planned out, find Purab and pragya and drag them both back to the house and expose their truth to everyone, but this is not what he expected.

Purab looked at abhi and then to bulbul. He was beyond shocked and angry. He didn't know what happened to him that he stalked over and gave abhi one hard slap across his face. To say it was a wakeup call to abhi would be an understatement. It was a wakeup call to Purab himself. How can he be so stupid, so blind, so much of an ass!?' Purab thought to himself as he watched abhi still holding on to his cheek staring at him. "Purab ... What the hell?!" but before Purab could answer, Abhi received yet another slap, this time form Bulbul. "Don't you dare say anything! This is all your fault! No one elses by yours! If you had not been so blind by your sister's love and that so call girlfriend of yours, maybe, just maybe you would have seen my di pure soul. But no, you were too stupid and stuck up to notice anything!! Just leave from here! She's not your wife anymore! You broke her mangalsutra nah ... SO PLEASE LEAVE!!!" bulbul began crying hysterically as Purab tried his best to control her.

Abhi had turn numb, but rigid. How dare they slap him! ... Rockstar Abhi! just wait chashmish, when you wake up, I will deal with all of this!' Abhi left the waiting area and went to clear his mind. He felt tired after all the drama that has happen in the last 24hours. He found himself by the bridge, the very same one where he had saved pragya's life. He sat on the bank and began to think about everything, from their first meeting till a couple minutes ago. Bulbul words rang in his ears, he had been blind, of course I was blind ... it was my sister I was fighting for!!' a few moments passed as abhi continued to think he remembered what he saw in the mandir and what had happened after and suddenly the one thing that he completely passed was the emotional embrace that Purab and Bulbul shared. He began to wonder, he noticed the embrace was different than when he had seen Purab and Pragya, how can the same man hug two women differently ... he hug pragya as if she was his long lost sister and then on the other hand bulbul as if she was his ...' abhi stoped in his thoughts to register the realization which he had came to. He got up and headed back to the hospital.

He arrived a couple minutes later, just before he turned the corner towards the waiting room, he overheard bulbul and purab speaking as if they were arguing. So he decided to listen before he confronted them. "Purab, why did you do this? Di asked you to marry Aliyah no? so why did you ran away?! Why did you leave her in the mess that you did?" "Bulbul, try and understand me, listen to what I am saying ... her marriage was not going to last even if I married Aliyah! Bhai and Aliyah was going to throw her out the morning after the marriage! How can I let that happen? Huh? Tell me!" Both Bulbul and Abhi was shocked to hear what purab had just said. Abhi wondered to himself how did Purab know of this? "Bulbul, ever since I knew that Aliyah had plan the engagement ring drama with Di I couldn't let them do anymore to her, I even warned Aliyah that if she played anymore games with Pragya that I would leave her and that is exactly what I did. Did you know that Aliyah also tried to sabotage your uncles catering? I found her and stop her again. Bulbul, I honestly tried, I tried to move on but I kept thinking of everything, our sacrifice, Di's sacrifice and it's all worth nothing Bulbul. I love you and only you." Bulbul had nothing to say but she just cried in his arms.

Meanwhile abhi just stood there, taking in everything he heard. Purab and Bulbul knew about everything, How?' he wondered to himself but more importantly, he was shocked to know that Bulbul and Purab loved each other. Pragya's doctor then came out and all three went up to meet him. "Doctor, how is my di? Is she okay? Tell me what happened?" Bulbul spilled questions after questions out until purab had told her to keep calm. "Listen, your sister has lost a lot of blood due to the accident, she had a concusion and needs rest right now, but your sister is safe. But there is one problem, the concusion may have caused some trauma to the brain so I advise when she wakes up you all need to take it easy.

Finally the torment of pragya's accident took over abhi, he began worrying now. Then he started bombarding the doctor with many questions only to be told to pray to God and everything will be fine. Abhi walked over to the seats and sat as he silently said, "Oh God, what have I done?"


O re khuda,
ye tune kya kiya,
gham de diya
gham de diya..

( O god,
what did you do,
you gave me sorrow,
gave me sorrow.. )


ps you guys are making me blush with all these comments xD thank you :* next part tmr :D 😳 ❤️ 😃

Edited by Evalina - 10 years ago

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