Jealous Manik FF - Note updated on page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi friends. Since its a weekend , I decided to write OS - Jealous Manan.
This is after FAB5 have won and Manik has broken Nandini's Heart.

Fab5 had lot of fun. They had a big bash. As expected , Nandini was not there. Manik was a part of Fab5 celebration but his heart and mind was somewhere else. He picked up his phone many times to call Nandini but controlled himself from dialing her no.

Nandini was all broken up and in tears last night. Navya kept calling her but she did not take her call. She just send her a message apologizing for her mistake and telling her that she will be ok. Navya also decided to give her some space but she was really worried about her.

Nandini looked at her phone and opened contact list and blocked Manik. She knew that this pain is not a simple pain and will not go easily.

Next day morning , Chachi told Nandu that her good friends daughter is getting married in two days and she is planning to go there. She checked with Nadini if she is interested in going with them but Nandini refused saying that she has some important work in the college but the truth was that Nandini wanted to spend some alone time to get over the pain.She told chachi to take Rishabh along with her. Chacha , Chachi and Rishabh left.

Nandini did not feel like going to college and decided to stay home. I order to kill the pain she decided to cook. Navya called her but she told Navya to leave her alone and she will tell her everything tomorrow.

Manik enters college , Nandini is no where to be seen. His eyes keeps looking for Nandini buut she is no where. He goes to Dhru and checks with him :

M - Nandini nahin dikhayi de rahi aaj
D : Haa Aaj Shayad ayi Nahin hai , she was really stressed yesterday
M: So.. So.. why don't you call her and check if she is fine
D: I thought I should give her some space, kya pata wo apni family ke saath ho
M: Yaar Dhruv, tu sochta bada hai ,,, you shouls definitely call her
D : Haa ur rite , i will call her

Dhruv takes out the phone to call Nandini but suddenly Mukti call Dhruv to talk to her
Dhruv is busy talking to Mukti and Manik is getting impatient.

Now Manik is not able to control and takes out his phone and messages Nandini
He gets a Response " Message delivery failed"
He gets more irritated and call her
" Her phone is coming engaged"
He again calls her " same response"

Suddenly Dhruv comes and tells Manik that he messaged Nandini and she has replied to him that she is fine and she will not come today.

Manik is irritated . He dials Nandini no. again from his phone and its engaged. He asks Dhruv to show his phone, dials nandini no. and Nadini picks up .

N : Dhruv , i messaged you naa, I am fine. I will come to college tomorrow.

Manik disconnects the phone and is very angry . He has figured out that Nandini has "BLOCKED " him🤣

Next Update : coming Soon - Dhruv is going for dinner at Nandini's place 😲

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cont...
Manik is irritated the whole day. He does not know what has hit him. He has never experienced this must pain ever . He wanted to meet Nandu. Hug her , kiss her and was feeling really helpless.

Nandini was feeling little better after cooking so much .

N :O god , I have cooked so much food today, who is going to eat it now.

She thought to calling Navya at her place and sharing things with her. Se realized that she and Navya have not been able to spend time with each other bcoz of Manik's crap.

She called Navya but Navya was with Harshad. Navya checked with Nandini if she is fine and Nandu assured her that she is doing good. Navya told Nandini that Harshad is very very upset and she wants to spend some time with Harshad. Nandu felt guilty and told Navya to stay with Harshad.

Dhruv was also missing Nandini and wanted to check with her if she is fine. He called Nandini.

D: Hi Nandini. Sorry i didnot want to disturb you but I was worried about you. Hope you are feeling better.

N : Yes Dhruv thaks for your support last night I am feeling better.
D : Nandini , can we meet for sometime

Nandini dinot know what to say buy she remembered that how Dhruv came to her last night and helped her.

N : Dhruv tum ek kaam kyun Nahin Karte, Chacha Chachi , Rishabh have gone out , I have prepared lot of food. Lets have dinner together.

Dhruv felled to happy and immediately said yes.

Dhruv eagerly waited for college to get over.

On the other side , Manik was thinking about Nandini and how he hurt her.

College got over . Manik as usual took Dhruv in his car to drop him home.
Dhruv seemed very happy and Manik noticed that .

M: Dhruv , you are looking very happy
D: Yes Manik , woh woh actually , I am going for dinner with Nandini.
Manik was shocked and lost control of the car for few seconds

D: Manik Dhyaan se.
M : Woh Kya (pain in his eyes) , kahaan ja rahe ho tum log
D: Nahin , kahin jaa nahin rahe , I mean I m going to Nandini's house
M: Wo chachi , I mean nandini ki chachi ka food khane jaa rahe ho ( Manik was bit relieved with the thought that they would not be alone)
D: Nahin , Nandini ne cook kiya hai , Chacha Chachi risabh are out of station.
M : What !! ( He was damn angry)

Manik tried to control his anger but it was getting tough.
He put break in his car.
Dhruv house has come.

M : Angry ... kitne baje jaa raha hai uske ghar
D :8 pm

Manik angrily leaves

D : Ise kya hua, yeh bhi naa kabhi kabhi

Dhruv smiles and start thinking what will he wear tonite!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manik 🤣 Nandini,😲 Update soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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jealous Manik 😉 uh.. Dhruni? aw, please no.. i'd want to see Nandini overcoming all of these by herself. Part 3? 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you friends for liking I will update two more parts today 😊
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Part 3 :
Manik was so angry that he wanted to rush to Nandini's house , pick her up and give her a peice of his mind.

M : What nonsense!! dinner!! mujhe to kabhi nahin kaha ! Mein to wait karta rehta tha aur madam niche bhi aane mein itna nakhra karti thi.

Suddenly , he comes back to his senses . Gosh , what am i thinking , i cannot be doing this!! i should go home and take rest.

Manik goes home , try to divert his mind but is not able to do so!! he keeps looking at the watch

6pm , 6:30 pm , 7pm ...

He just gets up angrily...

Dhruv comes out of his house and sees Manik in his car...

D : Manik, what r u doing here...
M: Wo woh...Dhruv I was also going that side , i thought mein tujhe drop kar deta hoon

D: Manik , nahin wo yaar, i donot want to bother you.
M: Bother lis baat kaa just sit yaar...

Dhruv : ok , thanks a lot manik...

Manik gives a wicked smile ( thinks : dinner hmm,,,)

They reached Nandini's house and Dhruv was about to get out of the car .

M : Ouch,,,ahh ahh
D : What happened Manik
M : ?(acting - in pain) ,,,,Dhruv I think I have jerked my back, wo kal performace ke time gir gaya tha naa...oouch
D: Lets go to the doctor...
M: Nahin ,,, yaar ,,,i just want to rest for sometime...
D: Acha ek kaa karte hain, lets go to nandini;s house... you can take rest there
M: Relieved - Haa par I hope she doesnt mind
D: U donot know Nandini , she is a very nice girl , she will understand
M -(Sad) wispers.. haan I know she is a very nice girl...

Dhruv rings bell.

Nandini opens the door ...She is shocked to see Manik with Dhruv...
Manik is relieved to see Nandu!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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you naughty manik I love you so much. Ahh! plz cont d good work. update soon. cant wait to read what manik will do in the next chapter.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hahaha... That's really a very big treat to c a jealous Manik... And yes he is jealous... My God Banda hai Bahut bada chaaloo... I want to c this waala Manik in the show... Plz continue it soon... Really dying to read the next part... Thanks for this pain reliever story:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg wonderful os...loved all parts..plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice os.. please do continue soon.. loved the way Manik self invited himself..🤣

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