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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 6 : Here we go...
Its a fresh day. Fab 5 except Manik has reached the college. Manik is running late because he came back home in the morning.

He and Nandini reach college at the same time. He looks at Nandini but Nandini is lost in her own thoughts.

Nandini (Thinking) - What should I do. They want paa's pen . Whom should I approach. I cant just give that pen to anyone . I think I should talk to dadi to check if paa told her something about that pen.

Manik keeps staring at her and is irritated as she is not looking at him. He goes near her and say nandini. Nandini completely ignores him and walks away from there.

This gesture of her makes him very very angry. He is about to follow her when Cabir Spots him and calls him for something.

Navya meets Nandini and checks if everyting is ok. Nandini breaks down and tells her what Manik did to her.
Navya is Shocked!

Navya : Nandini, tu pagaal hai kya , tujhe Maine bataya to tha naa Manik, aur Dhruv Ka...I mean woh GAY Hai. Hamein to lagta hai ki pura FAB5 hi gay hai , Cabir , Dhruv, Manik... aur pata nahin kaun kaun 🤣🤣

Nandini looks at her

Navya : Acha...tu unko chod . Mein tere saath hoon, Us Maanik to mein tere paas bhi nahin aane doongi. I will not let him hurt you.

Nandini takes a promise from Nayva that she is not going to tell her about this to anyone.

They both Hug

Manik is just not able to concentrate on anything and with Dhruv confessing to the group that he is in love with Nandini things are not easier and all of them keep teasing Dhruv about Nandini which is killing Manik from Inside. On the other hand Nandini is just not letting him close to her.

Manik is irritated and walks out of the conversation . He meets Navya on the hallway. She confronts him but he ignores her. While he is walking away , he heards shahid asking from Naya " where is Nandini , Navya tells him that she has gone to the store room to bring some music instrument. She will be back in 10 minutes.
They both leave.

Manik rushes to the store room. He sees Nandini looking for something. He locks the door!. Nandini turns back as she hears the noise and she is shocked to see him.

N : Manik, what the hell are u doing here?
M: So u told Navya about us
N: There is no us

Nandini tries to leave but manik hold her and pushes her against the wall.

He is irritated and angry with Nandu's rude behavior

M; Whats ur problem
N:Are u mad? whats my problem? whats ur problem? you got what you wanted . You took ur revenge and u won musicana then why r u troubling me. Just leave me alone.

Nandini was in pain and so was Manik but this time Maniks anger and irritation were overpowering his emotions.

M: Listen,,,,u cant..u cant...what d hell do u think about urself.
N: Manik I think u have gone mad. let me go.

Manik :;yaa ... i will let u go but what about a goodbye kiss...he bends to kiss her...

Nandini this time uses her full power pushes him back and slaps him tight across his face...

Manik comes back to his senses...

Nandini rushes out of the store. She is crying ...in the hallway she comes across Dhruv and hugs her tight. Dhruv smiles.


Manik in the store-----What d hell just happened. Why I am not being able to control my self...oh shit shit...he barges out of the store


To be cont,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,hope u guys like it😛
Edited by backwithabang - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Aww Nandini slapped Manik... Not fair:(
But enjoyed the part :) next part plz... Kya karo Dil maange more;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Hahaha...I would love to see the slap thing in the show as well...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
nice poor boy got a slap. I hope this mu get over soon. So manik will help nandu or sm1 else is cmng? waiting for the nxt part. Nice piece of work.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Awww poor nandi hahhaa think he needed that slap from her
Great update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
i just love yr SS🤣 😉
and plz put up yr all link of this SS at the !st page


Edited by Piya_Malik - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Omg nw Manik will see dem hugging...😈
lukin 4wrd 2 ur nxt update..😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Awesome update...Manik deserves the slap. He wanted to sacrifice now bear the consequences, why keep bothering her ?! He always wants things his way, Nandini is not an object that he can use whichever way he wants and when he's finished throw her in someone else's lap.
Hope he sees DhruNi hug 😈

Plsss update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Awesome parts
i love it vry much
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
poor manik...
he is loosing nandini becoz of his anger...

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