Jealous Manik FF - Note updated on page 16 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Thanks. Will update soon 😛
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Part 5
Manik reaches Nandini's home . He sees few people dressed in black clothes leave her house. He tries to stop them but they push him and leave...

M: Nandini ( he rushes inside her house)

The house is in mess. He goes up and looks for Nandini, she is not there .

He panics and start shouting Nandini Nandini. Suddenly he hears some noise from the cupboard behind him . he quickly opens it. Nandini is lying unconscious. He quicky picks her up and put her in the bed.

He check if she is hurt.

M : What the hell is happening , who were these people???

He kisses Nandini on her cheek. She is still unconscious.

Manik looks around and sees a note . The note reads -

"This was just a trailor, you have 1 week to give us want we want. We will call you and let u know where you have to come."

Nandini wakes up and snatches that note from Manik and reads.
She is really scared .
Manik goes near her and cups her face.

M: Nandini whats the matter , who were these people??

Nandini pushes Manik away

N: Donot touch me. How dare you come to my house.

Manik gets upset and pushes her to the wall

M: YOU...whats the matter with u. I want to now who were these people
N: Just get out of my house now and dont try to touch me ever again
Manik is shocked and taken aback by so much Hatred.

He realizes that its not a good time to talk to her. He is very scared for Nandini. He decides to stay in his car parked outside her house.

After Manik leaves, Nandini looks around the whole house is in mess. Suddenly Nandini takes out his father's pen from her pocket and says -
" So this is no ordinary pen"

Manik on the other hand is thinking about what just happened. He thinks :" I have to quickly figure out whats happening . Nandini is in danger and she is not going to tell me anything but I need to know"

Nandini is lying on her bed and thinking what kind of turn her life has taken?

Next Update : Nandini tells about Manik to Navya , Manik tries to kiss Nandini , Nandini hugs Dhruv...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
wow nice twist. update soon. precap looks interesting. keep writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Super awesome!!!!!!
Update soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
I just love your story...awesome
Plsss update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Another great update
loving this :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Hi All
Will post the next 2 parts tomorrow 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Good1 (especially part3)

Waiting for updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
GREAT! She is really making him suffer- hopefully he will declare himself soon. 😊 And the precap has me wanting an update ASAP!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part1-Part3 parke i coulnt stop laughin bt jaise hi i read Part4 meri saari hasi nikal gayi..
n nw Part5..U knw i always thought dat da pen is nt ordinary bt i dunno if dey r gna show it in da show..am glad ki atleast we'll get 2 read abt it in ur OS

'Next Update : Nandini tells about Manik to Navya , Manik tries to kiss Nandini , Nandini hugs Dhruv...' God yeh ladka kabhi nahi sudrega..jab dekho he tries 2 kiss her 😆

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