Jealous Manik FF - Note updated on page 16 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hope a lot more in maniks way..anyways awesome writing dude ..continue pljjj
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4 :
Nandini was shocked to see Manik.

Manik had a concerned look for Nandini

Nandini to Dhruv : Ye yahaan kya kar raha hai.

Dhruv explains her everything. Nandini doesn't want to create a scene so she lets Manik in.

Manik lie down on the couch . Nandini decides to completely ignore and avoid any eyelock with Manik. She can barely control her tears. She goes to the wash room and washes her face and try to hide her pain.

She thinks - Why this monster manik is not leaving her alone. She is already broken so why is he trying to give her more pain.

Manik also realizes her pain but right now his jealousy is overpowering all his emotions.

Nandini is having a casual conversation with Dhruv. Manik is feeling ignored and irritated .

N: Dhruv lets eat.

Nandini arranges food on the table.

D :Wow Nandini , yeh sab tumne banaya ... wow it smells so good.

All three of them eat . Manik keeps looking at Nandini . Nandini is very quite while eating.

D: Nandini ...donot worry too much. Donot get stressed everything will be fine.

Nandini gives a faint smile.

Manik is getting uncomfortable , he cannot bear the fact that she is ignoring him.

D : Very nice food , kyun manik
Ma : Yaa , very good

Dinner is over , Nandini is cleaning the table , Dhruv went to the washroom. Manik sees Nandini's phone and quickly 'Unblocks' himself.

After this , he goes to Nandini who is busy cleaning . He holds her from her waist and is about to say something nasty to her but stops after seeing tears in Nandini's eyes.

He quicky removes his hands from her and turn back and wipe his own tears.

Dhruv comes and checks with Maanik if he is feeling ok as he is now standing. Manik says yes he is feeling better.

M: Dhruv, lets go its quite late now
D: Haan , lets go.

Dhruv cutely looks at Nandini and says thanku.
Nandini again gives a faint smile .

Both Dhruv and Manik leave.
Manik is very quite. His throat is so full that he can barely speak. He drops Dhruv and is on his way back.

Suddenly phone rings but it is not his ringtone. He realizes that Dhruv has left his phone in his car but he is shocked to see "Nandini's" incoming call on his phone.

He picks up the call and before he could say anything he hears Nandini's voice. She is panicking
"Dhruv please help ! i need ur help! the phone disconnects

Manik panics and drives towards Nandini's house. He tries calling her but no response...

to be continued...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Awesome update..what happened to nandini?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
wow nandu is in a prob and she hd called dhruv now lets see what manik is going to do. Your story is getting more interesting with each update plz cont soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
lovely os already hooked to it plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Oh god what happened to Nandini?? Update it soon sweetie can't control myself:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Love ur update...plsss update quickly...dont be like other writers...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful! Can't wait to see how hard Mnil is going to have to work to earn Nandu back!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow loved reading this, amazing job :
Cant wait for the next update!!
Loved it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
wow...awesome dear ... continue soon !!!

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