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Posted: 10 years ago
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i can't see part 5!!
plz someone help me out
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: polo94

i can't see part 5!!
plz someone help me out


Its on Page 5
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waiting for part 7...wen are u going to update??? Plzz update na waiting from a long time to read it...thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shravz6

Waiting for part 7...wen are u going to update??? Plzz update na waiting from a long time to read it...thanks


Today in few hours 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 7

Manik walks out of the store Room and to his horror sees Nandu hugging Dhruv. He just gets mad and walks towards them really fast to break that Hug but Navya comes before he reaches them and takes Nandini along with her.

Dhruv is happy and smiles. Manik just leaves that place.

Manik is very angry at himself. Never in his life, he has felt so strong emotions . He decides to go home and leaves college.

Navya : Are Nandini tujhe pata hai , hamare paas tera mood theek karne ka bahut hi acha Idea Hai.

Nandini : Whats that ?

Navya : We are going to a party tonite.

Nandini : Navya tu kya bol rahi hai . She remembers the last time they went to a party , it was a mess. Navya , I donot feel like going anywhere.

Navya : Nandini , we have to go . I want to do this for both you and Harshadji. Tum dono mere bahut kareeb ho and I know both of you are sad. Maine Harshadji ko convince kar liya hai .

Nandini again feels guilty that they lost Musicana bcoz of them so she decides to go. Plus chacha chachi are also not there so she can easily manage.

Navya : Aur tujhe pata hai mein hum dono ke liye ek hot si dress bhi pasand kar li hai

Nandini : Navya mein koi hot dress nahin daal rahi. Lets go like this only.

Navya : Nandini , dress to tujhe daalni hi padegi...

Nandini gives in

Nandini : Acha kahaan hai party .
Navya : Ek bahut bade club mein hai. Bada Maza aayega . We three will have fun

Nandini : What about Shahid.
Navya : Woh nahin Aa payega. He is out of town


On the other side Mukti and Alya also discuss about this party and their plans to go there.

In d evening Mukti calls Manik to come to this party and Manik out rightly refuses to go. Cabir and dhruv are also not interested and want to hang out at Manik's place.

Cabir and Dhruv are at Manik's place and three of them are having drinks. Manik is very distracted and trying to hide his pain.

At the party Nandini and Navya arrive looking really hot. Nandini is looking very pretty and lot of guys are eyeing her.

Mukti and Alya also arrive at the party looking hot as usual . However Nandini is standing out in her short off shoulder black dress with her Hair nicely done.

All four look at each other and plan to ignore each other. Alya is little jealous .

Nandini : Navya , yeh tu mujhe itni choti dress pehnake ka kahaan le aayi hai. And where is Harshad?

Navya : I just called him. He is coming.

Precap : Harshad tries to get cozy with Mukti in the club. Navya hears their conversation and is heartbroken. Nandini goes misiing.😃


Edited by backwithabang - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
I will post Part 8 in few hours 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
nice waiting for the nxt part. cont soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
continue soon
can't wait for manan
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lai Nandini gayab in next part... Hmm kaun le ke giya usko!!!!! Update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 8 : Here we go

Harshad enters the party and Navya is happy. Harshad doesnt seem to pleased with Nandini and barely talks to her. Nandini also decides to stay away from him.

Harshad and Mukti look at each other and Mukti leaves towards the washroom. Harshad follows her. He grabs her and tries to get close to her.

Harshad : You know naa that I love you...

He starts his crap and Navya who is following harshadji hears everything. She is heartbroken. Harshad notices that Navya has heard everything and he goes behind her.

Navya leaves the party with harshad behind her . Mukti also leaves with Alya behind her.

Nandini is left alone in the party. She goes looking for Navya but couldn't find her. She is feeling very uncomfortable in her short dress and with men staring at her. She tries calling Navya but she does not pick up the phone. Navya is completely shattered . She goes back to her hostel.



Nandini realizes that her phone battery is dead. She is still looking for Navya but cannot find her. Meanwhile a group of guys have their eyes fixed on her and are watching her in a notorious way . They have realized that she is all alone

Mukti and aliya reach Manik house. Mukti is irritated and starts drinking. Cabir checks with her whats wrong with Mukti. She tells him about the party and harshad.

Manik and Dhruv gets to know that Nandini was also there is the party. Dhruv is disappointed that he did not go the the party so is Manik but is not expressing. They drink for a while and everyone disperse.

In the club

The guys try to get close to nandini . They drag her out of the club and try to take her towards their car. She is crying for help but without any success...

3hrs have gone by and its 3pm. Manik suddenly receives a call from unknown no. He does not pick-up the phone once/twice but finally picks up. Its Nandini's chachi.

Chachi: Manik, i m nandini's chachi speaking. She s panicking. I m sorry manik I m calling you so late but I cannot reach Nandini. I spoke to her arond 8pm . She said she is going to the party and she will call me once she is back but her phone is switched off. I was checked with the society guards and she has not reached home. I am very scared. I tried calling navya but she is also not picking up the phone. She is not so careless. I m really scared. May be she is with Navya. Can you please help Manik please.

Manik is now completely awake and worried. He doesn't think for a second and rushes out of his house. He goes to Navya's hostel. The security guard tries to stop him but he pushes him away and starts shouting Navya. Navya who is crying, looks out of the window and is shocked to see Manik. She comes down. Manik tells her that Nandini's chachi called. Where is Nandini.

Navya comes back to her senses . And she is shocked to realize that she left Nandini alone in the party. She is scared and shivering.

N: Manik, oh my god...I left Nandini alone the the party at the club...
M: What...what the hell...

Manik is very scared . He knows that this club is not a very good place to be and sometime the crowd is really bad...Manik panicks...and shouts at Navya...

"Are u mad. Do you have brains or what...?
N: Manik, hamein us club mein jaake check karna chahiye...
M: You just shut up...shut up...Ok. I m going to the club. you stay in the hostel. Its too late..I will keep u informed. Donot tell about this to anyone ok...

Manik sits is the car. He is worried and he is crying. He is trying to keep the horrible thoughts aways from his mind but he cannot...

He reaches the club which is closed now. He looks around...ad breaks down on the road and shouts Nandini.

Suddenly he hears the bonnet of the car openning and nandini coming out of the car. She runs and Hugs Manik. She is shivering and can barely speak...

Flashback...: When the guys were trying to push her in the car. She used her pepper spray and ran away. She hid in the bonnet of the car. She was too scared to come out of the bonnet.
After hearing Manik's voice only she coulld come.

Manik asks nandini what happened? Nandini who is still hugging manik tells her everything.

Manik looses his cool...

M: Are u mad...u stupid fool...he pushes her and tells and what the hell are u wearing...do u have any sense left in u...You are ur stupid friend Navya...Tumhe andaza bhi hai ki tumhare saath kya ho sakta tha aaaj...

Manik suddenly realizes that Nandini is shaking and crying. Poor girl is too scared. He again brings her close to him. Take out his jacket and wraps around her. He picks her up and make her sit in his front seat of car.

Nandini is stilll shaken and too shocked...

Manik calls Navya and chachi and lie to both of them that Nandini is at home and the security guard got confused.

Chachi is upset and she wants to speak to Nandini. Manik tells her that Nandini's phone got broken so she could not call and the landline had network issues.
She is fine and she will call her tomorrow.

Chachi trusts Manik and is relieved.

Nandini and Manik reach Nandini's house. Manik doesnot want to leave Nandini alone. He knows she is very scared after the incident.

He takes her inside. Nandini removes the Jacket and gives back to him.
M: Kuch ho jata tumhe to
N: To tumhe Kya
M: W*F...He drags her to the wall...Nandini donot you dare...

their eyes meet and for a second Nandini's heart melt...😉
Edited by backwithabang - 10 years ago

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