P-Arni 3-S: Go Arjun Go! (Completed)~ 07/11/14

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P- stands for Pure Arjun story, meaning Arjun and Shree 'll be the only characters.

Go Arjun Go!!

"Who the devil are you?"

He knew it would sound stupid, but he could not help himself, but ask.

The caller did not answer his simple question, but started laughing at him as though to say, 'Find out yourself!'

It irritated him further.

Even though he knew it would not be of much use and he could not do the same mistake twice in a row, he whispered, as a sudden weariness engulfed him.

"Where are you?"

To his surprise the caller did not laugh this time, but answered him.

"Find out!" , He stopped a moment, then said, "Find it out, ACP!" he insisted, once again.

For the first time in his life, the mention of his designation annoyed him, badly.


"Your time starts 'NOW!'"

.~.

He thrust himself forward clumsily, as the files on his desk got agitated and fell or tried to come along.

He left everything behind and ran outside toward the computer room, but still felt as though he was just poking along.

He could not tolerate the burden pressing his heart, anymore. If he did not lift it out at least a bit, it threatened him to shatter him into pieces in a moment's time.

He screamed out in fear, "Shree!!.."

There was no reply for his tumult.

He tried to move faster, but the legs- no, the heart would not allow him to go fast.

After an eternity, he heard a voice that sounded like symphony.

"Sir, I'm coming!"

At last he dashed into a figure.

Before he fell down and dried to bone on the unexpected impact I caught him by the shoulders and he had started talking much before I could start understanding the verse.

"Shree!", he clutched my hands as though to confirm that I was real, "Shree, can you help me? Please! Can you?"

He started cringing.

"Sir, Sir! Please calm down!"

"Shree, he called, Shree! He called!"

He thrust his mobile in my hand.

"Wait a minute, NOW!" I raised my voice and told in a hard tone.

That stopped him a moment and gave him a chance to brace himself.

"Can you help me?"

He asked at last.

"You know I'll!"

That calmed him further.

"He said he had kidnapped Roshini!"

He said ever so softly and emotionally.

"Sir, we've to-"

"He talked from her mobile, Shree!"

"It doesn't mean-"

Then he informed me the seriousness of the situation.

"I heard her voice, Shree!"

I moved toward the computer room and was working meticulously with the machines.

Once I settled down in my chair, as the instrument started locating the number, he said, "I called her to inform that I was coming home. I could not reach her. It was engaged and I got her call then."

I turned to face him.

"Roshini called my name and started crying. Then he talked," he was telling numbly. But he was retracing the whole scene, I could see.

I could understand him. And I did not want to give him mere words, but solid things like evidences, whereabouts or even if I could his life back!

I was silent and I knew he did not want anything from me but information!

It seemed the technology was much slow, even to me and I could not imagine his mentation.

After that first burst out, he was composed, I realized. He too was silent.

Whenever I or the system blinked, he looked us on the hope that we might show something out.

At last the best spots appeared on the screen and I got something to give out to him.

"Sir, he or the mobile is in motion. It's moving fast toward the outer city. In minutes it will cross the city borders. My best guess is the mobile is in a vehicle and it must be a four wheeler."

I was continuously giving him nothing but the bad news.

But he seemed calculating something.

He suddenly spoke, "Shree, do one thing. Keep me informed!"

He got to his feet.

"Sir, I-"

"No, I need this simple and quiet. I've to get this stopped, before it can go out of hands."

He started running toward his car and hopped in.

The car came out of the office building and started flying towards the main road. Once got into the main road he had turned into a menace.

The car reached the bridge and crossed it in a flash. But he had to cross yet another bridge to reach the border of the city.

He had almost reached the lone road when he was about to hit into a truck, which came out of a side street to the main road.

He hit the brakes hard as the driver of the truck did.

Once saw the logo on the side of the 'about to hit car', the driver checked himself from a reprimand.

He quickly closed the driver's door as he had changed his mind from descending from the vehicle and waited for the car to move.

Arjun moved the car in even pace. And the incident reminded him something, something most important.

'You can get dead Arjun, but not Roshini! You can lose a part of your body, but not Roshini, who is more important than your own soul! You should be alive for that until you get there, at least.'

After that he was careful and was riding fast enough to keep him alive.

At last he reached the road and drove off as he heard a voice in his ear piece.

"Sir, from there you have to go at least two kilometers to reach the knitting factory and once you reach there, you've to take the side road which will take you to the empty road to the village."

Before I could finish he had covered the two kilometers.

I wondered in this speed if he could reach the village safely.

I did not voice out my doubts.

Arjun noticed the road and took it.

"Sir, you don't have to go into the village. The signal is coming from the outer area around it and you are near it.

It sounded sweet to him.

.~.

"I've entered into a street," he informed.

"Sir, you are within 400 yards from the spot."

Arjun left the vehicle and started moving towards his destiny, drawing the gun in hand.

He crossed a house which had been locked. There was no house on the opposite line to give him light.

He moved in the dark further and found empty plots around.

In the dark, he slowly reached an abandoned house as I said, "Sir, now you are in the spot I think. The mobile is to your left, perhaps within twenty feet."

Arjun lifted his eyes and saw the remains of the old house. Without a sound he reached in and found himself standing between the mutilated parts-hardly one could call it as a room.

"Sir, you are-"

"I can see the mobile Shree." he whispered and cut the call.

"Sir-"

God! I can't call him again now, for it will expose him right away.

I had no choice but to wait.

.~.

'It's Roshini's, all right. Her mobile is here, where is she?'

He moved toward the mobile and as he was going to touch it, the mobile which was on a half wall started ringing.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start
loved it
it was really thrilling
So someone kidnapped Roshni
and Arjun is trying to find her
interesting
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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omg..
its so interesting..
hope arjun rosh ko kisi tarh bach le..
plz continue soon
n do pm me
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Part-2:


He picked the mobile and put it in his ear.

The same voice heard on the line again.

He said, "Well, ACP, You've made it."

"Where is she?"

"Is it your car with the 'ETF' logo on it?", he asked, but without waiting for his answer he said, "Put your mobile there and keep hers. You can see her. See your car first. "

He cut the call.

A perplexed Arjun stood a moment there. He roused himself and ran toward the car the next moment.

He saw that one of the front tires was punctured by a stiletto and a paper was hanging from it.

He wrested the paper and saw an arrow mark with a name on it,

----> Bhagavathi Temple.

He banged the car bonnet angrily.

.~.

As I tried to reach him many times in vain and I got that his mobile's signal was still coming from the same area, I decided to ride there, fast.

Even though he had denied my intrusion in this matter I could not sit before the machines idly and I started following the signal.

.~.

Arjun was running madly now in the street.

The man called him in Roshini's mobile.

"ACP, forgot to tell you the rules of the game, kindly add these, ok? You've to be there in an hour from now. You've to pick up my call at the first ring. If you fail to do so, you lose the game and I think, you know what it'd cost you. If the number is engaged then I won't call you again."

Arjun looked his watch and started running even faster.

./

./

As he saw a man with a bike standing near a closed shop, he approached him.

When he touched the man's shoulder he saw that the man was talking in his mobile.

Arjun was panting while he asked, "Can you tell me where this temple is?"

He showed the paper.

The man excused himself in the phone and turned to him.

"It's roughly 100 kms from here, you've to go straight-"

"Then I need your bike and mobile."

The man looked him dubiously. He was stunned as Arjun put his hand behind and produced a gun.

.~.

Without traffic and nothing, I reached the factory within an hour and took the side road to the village.

The only thing churning my heart was to reach there before it was too late.

.~.

Arjun extended the gun to the man and said, "I'm a police man," he flashed the i-d card before his eyes, "You might know how his gun is important to a police man. Please, give me your bike. I'll get my gun back when I return your bike."

He promised.

The man shook his head and left the bike for Arjun to take it.

"I don't need the gun," the man said extended his mobile.

"Thanks," he took the bike and was gone.

.~.

I saw his car standing alone and stopped my car near it. I got out and searched his car, for any chance of movement inside it. Nothing. I ran toward the old house and saw his mobile on a small wall. I took it with shaking hands. 'Something is wrong!'

I shook my head and started searching the remains of the house as I called, "Sir!"

No reply.

"Sirr!!" I shouted. I took the torch and searched every single corner and curve in vain.

.~.

The empty streets were witnessing his driving skills that night.

He had almost reached the temple, when he heard a buzzing from the borrowed mobile.

He ignored it and reached the temple.

.~.

'He is not here!'- I confirmed.

Where is he? Where is she? Where are they? I had lots of unanswered questions then.

I stood there a moment to think.

'God, it's a trap', the truth dawned on me, 'It's a bloody trap!'

They got him. They got them.

I could not think anything further.

I looked the mobile in hand.

'Where is her mobile?'- a new question crept in my brains.

That urged me to run to my car.

I got that Roshini's mobile was in move. 'I've to nab them!'

As my eyes fell on Arjun's car as I was about to get in mine- I could now see why his car was standing there - its one tire had punctured, wait, had been punctured.

'Why should they puncture his car?'-it was simple- they did not want him to ride in it from there...

God, he is all right and is now- oh, no matter what...

I got in my car and moved toward the new destination of Roshini's mobile, when I saw a man standing in the road and was asking to stop the car.

I throwtled down the car and stopped near him.

He said that one officer had borrowed his bike and mobile, who was going to the Bhagavathi temple and was in big rush. And he thought to share the information when he saw the ETF car as he was waiting for getting a lift.

I thanked him formally and moved the car.

/

/

I was trying to reach him from his own mobile.

I could guess that the kidnapper had assigned a job at the temple if he wanted to rescue Roshini.

I floored the accelerator as gnashing my teeth.

'I shall help him', I thought and was half an hour behind him.

.~.

Arjun saw men were sleeping in the veranda of the temple.

He approached one, who woke up on hearing the bike.

The man informed that the main temple was up in the small hill and it was closed then.

But Arjun was not standing there for him to finish.

He ran toward the main temple through the steps.

When he covered the 200+ steps and reached the top, there was none in view. He waited for the mobile to ring. His eyes searched the place in vain.


Nothing happened.

He rushed down and approached the same man, who was still sitting and waiting for him.

"How did you know I wanted to go to the main temple?"

Arjun asked him as trying to get his breath and looked him dubiously.

"He said so," the man replied.

Arjun could visibly see the effervescent sparks in his brain.

"He?Who?"

"I don't know him."

"Can you identify him?"

"Sure, he came here this evening and paid me. He said that when a man came here in the night, I had to show him the temple. He was about ten years old. He was dumb, too-"

Arjun literally clutched the man's throat at that.

"You said, he talked," he threatened.

"God, no! Leave me. He gave me the paper and the money."

He extended a paper and showed some money from his pocket.

Arjun saw the note and released the man.


He came out as Roshini's mobile rang.

He answered it at the first ring.

"Good," the man appreciated him.

"Where is she?"

"God, ACP, you are asking for the reward even before I announce the results," he complained, "See, you are late by 15 minutes."

"No, I'm not. I came here even before the time you gave me and went to the top-"

Arjun did not know what an argument could do- now-any good to Roshini, if any, but he was doing one. But the man cut him in.

"Went to the top? Why? I said to come to the Bhagavathi temple and wait, right?"

Arjun checked himself then and waited, for him to say more. His nerves were jumping.

"Right, as it seems just a misunderstanding, let me give you another chance in the game," he said as if he was convinced, Arjun saw a ray of hope, but-

"To the Junction Tunnel in an hour. We can finish this, this time. I'll be there and you know, when I said the time started then, I lied," the man chuckled, "Let me tell you now anew, your time really starts now and here Go Arjun Go!"

It was when Arjun decided to call me.

He took the borrowed mobile and saw that a call had come from his own number.

.~.

I got that a call was going through Roshini's mobile, but was cut before covering the first 60 seconds.

Arjun dialed me.

"Sir, in a minute I'll be there.

Then he told me the rules of the games and the man's cunning play.

"If I see him I'll-"

"Sir, please, Don't lose your composure now. We've to do as he says until we get a piece of this puzzle, at least."

I tried to calm him.

./

./

"Sir, you take the car. I'll fill the tank and follow you."

I took the bike. We knew that to reach the tunnel from there one would need 2 hours at least.

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Edited by greensakthi - 10 years ago
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Part-3:

"Arjun, how about this?"

Roshini showed him a sari.

"Hm..hum," he shook his head.

"This one?"

"No."

"Not even this one?"

"Roshini, who'll like the wrapper while the chocolate inside is delicious?"

"Ahaan?"

"Yes, believe me. I really don't need a wrapper now, since I'm hell hungry," he pulled her to him, as she giggled.

./

./

./

"Arjun," she called him.

"Yes, darling!"

"We are supposed to be in a party, now."

She reminded him.

"I'm already in one. Don't disturb me."

His mobile rang.

"Somebody too wants you," she commented with a smile.

He came out of his reverie and answered.

"ACP, Don't you have any idea to see her face again?"

The man asked suddenly.

"What-I?-"

"I told you to put your mobile there, right? Why did your friend take it? See, I need it to be there when I go there in half an hour- NO, don't argue. You have exactly 30 minutes and I don't want to see that specs inside the area again. Let me make this as a final chance for you to see her alive."

Suddenly Roshini's voice came over the phone, "Arjun..Arjun, please-", she could not continue as her sobs interfered.

That made him say, "I'm coming- I'm coming. I'm coming!"

A helpless Arjun saw me through the rear view mirror and stopped the car. He got out fast and as I reached him.

"Shree," he said hastily.

"No, sir. I'm not coming. You go. I'll tell you the short cuts."

Now we were connected through network and I heard every word of the man clearly.

'So he knew that I was there,'

I noted that he was talking from the same phone.

.~.


I thought of the kidnapper's cunningness. Even when he knew that I'd taken the mobile from that house, he did not utter a word till now. And now, when we had covered this much distance toward the tunnel, he was demanding to return back to the starting point of the game, in 30 minutes.

It seemed he was sitting in a place and ordering Arjun to go to various places. I cursed him, silently.

I was guiding Arjun with my 'GPS' as he was riding in the bike.

The bike was going through the small streets of the village.

It was dark in most of the streets; the problem was there was no neat road with proper light. It was the street where the light was half lit, in which the bike was going now.

"Take a right near the telephone booth. Can you see a shop next to the theatre there take a right-"

I heard a screeching sound then.

.~.


He crossed the booth and turned near the shop, but saw a newly made pit at the side of the way. Had not he clutched the brakes at the last moment, the bike would have ended into it. The boars of caution came to view the next moment.

The bike skidded, but made it through the mistake.

He saw to his left.

.~.


"Oh, I couldn't see clearly in the dark-"

"Forget it. Tell me," he urged me.

"Take the left and..."

.~.


"Sir, a narrow way is coming, go slow, I think you've to-"

"Shree, I've crossed it just now, tell me which way,"

./

./

./

The bike almost reached the street where his car was parked. In the tension, he fussed with the bike at that point. He could not take it anymore. He lost his control.

He left the bike and started running toward the house.

The man called up.


Arjun could not hear the man, clearly.

"Hello,"

"----"

"I'm here,"

"Hello-Hellow, I'm here,"

"-----"

He shouted as running, "I've come..."

The man said something, but was not understandable.

The man cut the call and dialed again.


I was waiting for the call and touched some buttons in the screen that said wavelength and frequency as Arjun took the call.


The machine was tracing him from the moment he switched on his mobile.


After five seconds the call came in again and Arjun attended it at the first ring.

The machine showed, ''35 seconds,'

.~.


Arjun was standing before the house now.

"I-I'm, I'm ere...Hah-Takke a-the mobaile... Leave er,"

Arjun was panting heavily and he could not utter the words clearly.


15 seconds more!


"...Hah, how dearly you are loving your wife, ACP!"

The man wondered.

"And don't forget, how dare you play with me," he reminded him.

The man laughed.


8 seconds-


"We'll deal this later, ACP."

"We'll," he asserted him at once.

'Come on,' I waited.


5 seconds-


"Where is she?"

"Here, with me," he said casually.

'Now,'- I cursed.


2 seconds-


"See, as you said I've done everything. Now-"

"Sure, Sure. I..."

I said, "Sir, the call is coming from the same area. I think, at this much closeness you can see him."


Arjun pressed the ear piece in his left ear and closed his eyes to concentrate as I talked.

He opened his eyes slowly and saw the night clearly.

Everything seemed different now. His mind said the street looked familiar, now.

His eyes sifted the night, leaving nothing.

In the dull moon light, he could see buildings now. The dark house on his left, one there then the next- wait!

His eyes stopped at the three floor building as he asked in his right ear piece that," Why are you doing this to me?"

He saw light in a room and a shadow of a man with a mobile moving.

"Since, she is your wife,"

The reply came the next moment.

Arjun started rising in the steps without a noise.

"Meaning?" he asked.

"You know, once she was my neighbor,"

The caller said and started laughing.

Arjun reached the second floor landing.

The caller cut the call as he was still laughing.

One minute was ending as to him then.

.~.

Arjun saw her sitting in a chair with binds.

She was looking something before her with frightened eyes.

He stood at the door way and saw the kidnapper was sitting opposite her.

His eyes fell on the gun, pointed toward her.

He took a step forward and unfortunately the man turned toward him.

The man's face changed at once and triggered the gun.

"No, No.. No!!!..."

Arjun screamed as he thrust himself toward her.

The light went off suddenly.

The room was in the dark now. He groped in the dark for her.

He realized that he was sitting on his bed.

He blinked once and tried to see in the dark.

He was drenched all over in sweating.

-The End-

Epilogue:

He switched on the lamp and shook his head.

He thought, 'It was a dream-'

'No, a nightmare,' he corrected himself.

-The final end-

Thanks,

~K-..

Edited by greensakthi - 10 years ago
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omg..it was all the nightmare..
thanks 4 pm

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