SaaYa TS: Manwa Laage.... [COMPLETED] Part 1- Page 1 | Part 2- Page 2

Hi, people!
I am not updating my FF on PreeMann because
my exams are very near. But i couldn't stop
myself from writing this TS on SaYa.
The moment i read about Anita's comeback, an
idea of an TS came instantly in my mind. So
couldn't help but share it with you guys.
I wrote it in a hurry so don't know how is it...
Hope its good.
So, its named "Manwa Laage" and it has two
parts. First part is the introduction and the
next will be based on a song.
Hope you like it...
All critisism are welcome.

Part 1
________
MedLife Hospital & Research Centre

Vivan was about to enter into the OT, Meghna came and stopped him.

Meghna: Ye case Dr. Snigdha handle karegi. Kuch ghanto mei students aane wale hai, tum uss pe concentrate karo.

Vivan didn't give a damn and was about to leave but she again stopped him.

Meghna: Uss taraf kaha jaa rahe ho?

Vivan: Emergency case aya tha na? Wahi jaa raha hu.

Meghna: Ab usski zarurat nehi hai.

Vivan: Kyu? Vo bhag gaye?

Meghna: VERY FUNNY! Maine Dr. Yamini ko bheja hai waha.

Vivan: Dr. Yamini? Who's she?

Meghna: Intern hai. Lekin...bohot hard-working hai. Aur harr case bohot achchhe se handle karti hai. Tum se junior hai lekin tumse kahi zyada responsible hai.

Vivan: Dr. Yamini...lekin maine use kabhi dekha kaise nehi?

Meghna: Tum jab seminar ke liye gaye the tab ussne join kia hai. Aur kuch dino se sick leave pe thi iss liye tum usse mile nehi.

Vivan: Whatever! Mujhe bohot kaam hai. See you later!

-*-*-
All were waiting for a doctor to come.

Rose: Ranbir, kaisa hospital hai! Ek doctor bhi nehi hai yaha pe... Chalo kahi aur chalte hai.

Someone entered their yard.

"Sorry, guys! We are really very sorry. But don't worry. I am here, i will get you guys checked."

It was a very pleasing female voice which made everyone turn to see her.

She was PREET!

The moment Sarthak turned to see her, he started getting some blur images. The same thing happened with Avni.

Ranbir: (mesmerized on seeing her)Wow...

She: (aggresively)"Wow" nehi...Dr. Yamini!

Ranbir: Oh! Okay...

She wore a pink kurta with red long-skirt, over it she had her doctor-coat.

Yamini: Sorry, guys, aaj bohot emergencies aye hai so doctors busy hai.

Rose: Then who are you?

Yamini: (giggled)Mai bhi doctor hu, but Intern. But no worries, mai sabka achchhe se treatment karungi.

Rose: Okay. Pehle aap Sarthak ka treatment kije, vo zyada injured hai.

Yamini: Sarthak?

Sarthak: Mai...mai hu Sarthak.

Till now she didn't look at him but when she looked at him, she also got some blur images and heard a name "Anshuman!" She also couldn't understand why it happened.

Prateek: Doctor, you alright?

Yamini: Ya...ya, i am fine... Nurse, do the arrangements.

-*-*-
Vivan was leaving the hospital but Meghna stopped him.

Meghna: Vivan! Kaha jaa rahe ho?

Vivan: Tume aur koi kaam nehi hai kya? Jab dekho mere pichhe pichhe ghumti rehti ho!

Meghna: I asked, kaha jaa rahe ho?

Vivan: Mujhe urgently ek operation ke liye Delhi bulaya gaya hai. So...i gotta go!

Meghna: To students...

Vivan: Operation ke baad mujhe kuch personal kaam hai aur phir ek seminar ke liye Pune jaana hai. So, do hafte ke liye i won't be here.

Meghna: This is the limit of being irresponsible! Students aanewale hai kuch ghanto mei. Aur tum do hafte ke liye gayab horahe ho!

Vivan: Tumne mujhe puch ke students ki responsibility nehi di thi. Ab tum jano tumhe kya karna hai. Vo...tumne kaha tha na ek Intern... Kya naam tha usska...

Meghna: Yamini?

Vivan: Use kaho do hafto ke liye manage karne ke liye.

Meghna: She's just an Intern, Vivan!

Vivan: So what? Vo parh ke hi Intern bani hai! Do hafto ki hi to baat hai. Aur tumne hi kaha tha vo mujhse zyada responsible hai. So... Bye!

He left without saying any more.

Meghna: Ggrrhh! I just don't get how did he became a doctor!

-*-*-
Dr. Yamini was doing medicals of Sarthak and two nurses were doing Prateek and Ranbir's.

Sarthak: (in pain)Ahh!

Yamini again got some blur images and some talks like "Maine humesha tumse sachcha pyaar kia hai".

Yamini: (controlling)Thora dard hoga lekin phir sab thik hojayega.

This time Sarthak heard some talks, "Tumhe kuch nehi hoga!"

Ranbir: (jealously)Yamini should've been with me! Why she's with that IDIOT?

Prateek: Ranbir, yaar, she's a doc. Sarthak zyada injured hai. He needs more care.

Ranbir: (sarcastically)Ya, right!

-*-*-
Yamini was standing at the reception and thinking about Sarthak, actually why she feels so connected with Sarthak. Meghna came and interrupted in her thoughts.

Meghna: Yamini, tumhe ek bohot bara oppurtunity mil raha hai.

Yamini: What, Ma'am?

Meghna: Tum to janti ho...hospital ko Medical College banaya gaya hai. Aur kal first year ke students aarahe hai. Jo unnhe mentor karne wala tha vo do hafto ke liye bahar gaya hai. So...jabtak vo nehi aata tum students ko basic baaton pe mentor karogi.

Yamini: (elated)Are you serious, Ma'am! Really?

Meghna: Yes. Isi liye to maine kaha tumhare liye bohot bara oppurtunity hai. I doubt, kisi INTERN ko aisi oppurtunity kabhi mila hoga.

Yamini: Thanks a lot, Ma'am! I hope that mai ye responsibility achchhe se pura karpaungi.

Meghna: Best of luck!

-*-*-
The whole gang reached the college after getting dressed and getting prepared for their first day.

Avni: Prateek, tumne pehle kabhi bataya nehi tha ki uncle iss college ke trustee hai.

Prateek: That wasn't important. At least, iss wajah se hum time pe pohoch to gaye.

Avni: Guys, hum already half an hour late hai. Aise hi baatei karte rahenge to humari band bajjayegi college ke pehle din hi.

Ranbir: Let's go!

-*-*-
Whole gang including Seher were sitting in the class.

Avni: Hum to aagaye, humare mentor kaha hai?

Ranbir: Humara mentor to humse bhi zyada late hai.

Yamini entered the class.

Yamini: Hello, everyone!

The gang as well as Yamini was surprised to see each other.

Yamini: Tum...tum sab students ho?

Prateek: Doctor, bohot lambi kahani hai.

Avni: Aap please kisiko matt batana.

Yamini: Okay, forget it! Let's start then.

Sarthak: (hesitantly)Tum...tum to Intern ho na?

Yamini: (uncomfortable)Tumhare mentor kuch din ke liye bahar gaye hai, tab tak mai aya hu.

Ranbir: Great, its superb!

Yamini: (ignoring Ranbir)Sarthak, right? Ab kaisa lag raha hai?

Sarthak: Better...

The class started.

Yamini: Doctor banne ka pehle aur sabse important rule. "Behave like a Doctor"!(indicating to Rose who was busy clicking selfies) Aur next rule... Doctor coat.

An nurse provided them with the coats.

Sarthak couldn't wear it properly because of the bandage.

Yamini: (hesitantly)Let me help you.

Sarthak nodded unsurely.

Yamini came closer to him and made him wear the coat.

Both got some flashbacks where Preet makes Anshuman ready for the wedding.

~~~~~
Ishq ki dhooni roz jalaaye
Uthta dhuaan toh kaise chhupaaye
Ho akhiyaan kare jee hazoori
Maange hai teri manzoori
Kajra siyaahi, din rang jaaye
Teri kastoori rain jagaaye
~~~~~
They were uncomfortable with each other for some UNKNOWN reason but yet felt some kind of strong connection.

nice
so beautifull story !!!
i like
i hop fanaah season 2 me avni or vivan se time nikal ke SaYa par bhi dyan de PH.

Hey dear, verry nice, i love the story, its verry interesting!! I also hope they concentrate on Avni Vivaan but SaYa too!! And not sides characters as Rose, Prateek, Ranbir, Seher!!

nice story & best of luck

SS acha hai but i dont think ye log SaYa ko itna screenspace denge

God! This is awesome 👍🏼
The chnaged track isnt that much interesting but Yuvraj and anita? Anita vl come back? Seriously?
Your story always give me realted vibes to shws n I cud relate more!
This is wonderful!
Continue Soon.

Part 2
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First day of college ended.

Yamini: Hopefully maine tumlogoko zyada tang nehi kia.

Ranbir: (flirtingly)No, not at all. You can never irritate me...i mean us.

Avni: Guys, chalo celebrate karte hai.

Prateek: Avni, college sirf start hi hua. Aaj first day tha, last day nehi.

Avni: Haan, haan, wahi to! Humara first day LAST ne bana yehi to celebrate karna hai.

Rose: I think that's a great idea.

Yamini: So... You guys carry on, i'll...i'll get going.

Seher: Aap bhi chaliye na huamre saath?

Ranbir: Now this is a GREAT idea!

Yamini: Mai? Tumlogoke bich mei mai kya karungi...

Rose: Oh, come on! You're not that older than us that you'll get bored.

Prateek: Haan. And only because of you our first day didn't become our LAST day.

Avni: Please, please come na! Hum zyada door nehi jayenge. Yehi hospital ke opposite mei hi ek pani-puri stall hai. Wahi jayenge. Chaliye na, please!

Yamini: Achchha, thik hai, thik hai. Chalo.

-*-*-*-*-*-
All are crossing the road. Yamini didn't notice that a car was rushing, Sarthak comes to her rescue and pulls her on his side and she falls on him. An eye-lock...

~~~~~
Manwa laage.. o manwa laage
Laage re sanware
Laage re sanware
Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re
~~~~~
Others' voice breaks their eye-lock and they get up. But some kind of feeling rose inside them which crept a smile on their faces.

-*-*-*-*-*-
All are enjoying pani-puri. Sarthak starts panting because of too much spice and searches for water. Others start laughing. He drinks water and saw Yamini also laughing and smiles.

~~~~~
Manwa laage.. o manwa laage
Laage re sanware
Laage re sanware
Le khela maine jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka hai daav re
~~~~~

-*-*-*-*-*-
SaYa are walking in the corridor. There was pin-drop-silence between them.

~~~~~
Musafir hoon hai door ka
Deewana hoon mai dhoop ka
Mujhe na bhaye, na bhaye, na bhaye
Ye chaanv re...
~~~~~

-*-*-*-*-*-
The whole gang and Yamini are sitting in the cafetaria, gossiping. A waiter comes and serves all of them coffee except for Yamini. Waiter apologizes and says that it will take time to make again. Sarthak then passes his coffee to her.

~~~~~
Manwa laage.. o manwa laage
Laage re sanware
Laage re sanware
Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re
~~~~~

-*-*-*-*-*-
A kid got on a cupboard and Yamini is requesting her to come down, but she doesn't. Thus, with no other choice left, Yamini tries to climb up with a help of a high stool. But she couldn't reach the height and gets disbalanced. She is about to fall when Sarthak, who was going from there with his gang, comes running and catches her. Another eye-lock...

~~~~~
hey hey...**

Aisi kaisi boli tere naino ne boli
Jaane kyon main doli
Aisa lage teri ho li main, tu mera..

mm.. Tune baat kholi kacche dhaago me piro li
Baaton ki rangoli se na khelun aise holi main naa tera..
~~~~~
Nurses, ward-boys, doctorand the children claps and their eye-lock broke. They get back to their respective works.

-*-*-*-*-*-
Yamini came to the reception but there was no one. She noticed a gift box and took it.
"Happy birthday..."
She wondered who might've left it and understood it was from Sarthak. She smiled and opened it. It had a beautiful anklet.

~~~~~
O.. kisi ka toh hoga hi tu
Kyun na tujhe main hi jeetun
Khule khabon me jeete hain, jeete hain baawre
~~~~~

-*-*-*-*-*-
All were in the class, chatting. They heard some kind of noise, noise of an anklet. Then Yamini entered and everyone wishes her. Sarthak noticed her ankle and saw she was wearing the anklet, he felt happy. Their eyes meet and smiled at each other.

~~~~~
Mann ke dhaage, o mann ke dhaage
Dhaage pe saanwre
Dhaage pe saanwre
Hai likha maine tera hi, tera hi, tera hi to naam re
~~~~~

-*-*-*-*-*-
Yamini was in children's ward. The kids refused to eat their medicines until they saw her dancing. She had no other option except dancing.

~~~~~
Ras bundiya nayan piya raas rache
Dil dhad dhad dhadke shor mache
Yun dekh sek sa lag jaaye
Main jal jaaun bas pyaar bache
~~~~~

Sarthak was passing from there and stopped to watch her. He kept smiling seeing her.

She stopped and then only the kids took their medicines. She turned to the side where he was standing and felt embarrassed seeing him. She turned but smiled blushingly.

~~~~~
Aise dore daale kaala jaadu naina kaale
Tere main hawaale hua seene se laga le
Aa.. main tera...
~~~~~

-*-*-*-*-*-
SaYa were walking in the corridor. They were walking together but there was silence between them. Unkowingly their hands touched and they looked away, embarrassed but smiled.

~~~~~
O.. dono dheeme dheeme jalein
Aaja dono aise milein
Zameen pe laage, na tere, na mere paanv re
~~~~~

-*-*-*-*-*-
Yamini came in the class. Her eyes were looking for Sarthak but he wasn't in the class.

The next day also he didn't come. She enquired about him and found that he was sick and won't be attending the class.

Others made plan to visit Sarthak and insisted Yamini to come along. She actually wanted to come along, thus agreed.

~~~~~
Manva laage.. manva laage
Laage re sanware
Laage re sanware
Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re
~~~~~

-*-*-*-*-*-
Sarthak opens the door and gets surprised by seeing his gang. He gets HAPPIEST when he found Yamini among them.

~~~~~
Manwa laage.. o manwa laage
Laage re sanware
Laage re sanware
Le khela maine jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka hai daav re
~~~~~

-*-*-*-*-*-
All are sitting in Sarthak's room and he was half-sitting on his bed.

Avni: Bohot raat hogaya hai. Hume chalna chahiye.

Ranbir: Ya, let's go.

Prateek: Take care, Bro!

Seher: Get well soon.

All are leaving and Yamini is the last to leave. She is about to leave when Sarthak holds her hand, surprising her. She turns.

Sarthak: Matt jao na...

She get surprised and turns to fae him.

~~~~~
Rahoon main tere naino ki, naino ki, naino ki hi chaanv re...
Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re
Rahoon main tere naino ki, naino ki,
naino ki hi chaanv re...
~~~~~

-*-*-*-*-*-
Sarthak is present today. Yamini enters the class and gives them to do some work. But Sarthak instead of doing the work keeps staring Yamini. She notices that and leaves the class. He also got up and went behind her. She knew he is following her.

She enters the locker room, he follows her. She's about to leave when he pulls her towards her.

Yamini: Sarthak, kya kar rahe ho! Ye locker room hai, yaha pe koi bhi kabhi bhi aasakta hai. Tum class mei jao.

Sarthak: Tum jaha mai waha...

Yamini: Ye hospital hai!

Sarthak: Okay, fine! Chhor diya, jao tum.

Now he's about to leave when she hugs him from behind.

Yamini: I love you...

Sarthak: (turns and hugs her)I love you too!

~~~~~
Ras bundiya nayan piya raas rache
Dil dhad dhad dhadke shor mache
Yun dekh sek sa lag jaaye
Main jal jaaun bas pyaar bache
~~~~~

Yamini: Sarthak...ek baat puchhu?

Sarthak: Puchho.

Yamini: Tum kaun ho?

Sarthak: Matlab?

Yamini: I mean... Hum ek dusre ko sirf do hafto se jante hai. Lekin...lekin jab bhi tum aas-paas hote ho... Aisa lagta hai...

Sarthak: (completing her sentence)Aisa lagta hai jaise hum ek dusre ko sadiyon se jante hai. Right?

Yamini: Haan... Aisa kyu hota hai?

Sarthak: Pata nehi... Mujhe bhi samajh mei nehi aata. Aur actually, mujhe samajhna bhi nehi hai! Leave it. Mujhe to bas itna pata hai ki...i love you!

They hug and smile.

~~~~~
Rahoon main tere naino ki, naino ki, naino ki hi chaanv re...
Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re
Rahoon main tere naino ki, naino ki,
naino ki hi chaanv re...
~~~~~

Nice part
Thanks for the pm and continue soon!!