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Hi friend i m writing first time in my life just bcuz of zaya characters are same but story is lil different...so plz read and tell me how is it???
Unfortunately...i Found my ...FORTUNE.
Characters:
ALIYA GHULAM HAIDER:22 years lives in bhopal medical student ginal year.nice, calm ,and obviously beautifulbut little stubborn ,religious avoid guys not bcuz of attitude but her religious nature.ZAIN USMAN ABDULLAH:elder son of late buisness men usman ABDULLAH.and now the owner of barkat group.very intellegent,decent,passiont,very serious about his buisness not bcuz of money but bcuz of struggle which his father did years ago for giving his buisness a strenghth.lives in saudia arabia.
AYAT GHULAM HAIDER:aliya's younger sister.bubbly cute and little fool childish bcuz of soo much pampering of her parents.
BARKAT USMAN ABDULLAH:zain's younger sister as similar to ayat.BA student.
SHABANA AND GHULAM HAIDER:aliya's parents.
SURAYYA USMAN ABDULLAH:zain's mother so kind,gracefull,caring loves her children alot and finding perfect match for her so which is the duty of every mother.
ZUBAIR HAIDER:aliya's elder brother loving,risponseble,caring specially loves and cares 4 aliya.
CHAPTER:ONE...
Aaliyaa...aaa.aaa...Aliyaaa her mother is calling her but she was busy running behind her lil sister with black colour(form of powder) in her fis6t to throw at her for spoiling her new dress which aayat spoil with that very same colour...
CHAPTER 20:PG 44 AND 45.
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Aliya:ammi ayeee...
with that she goes to her mother
Aliya:g ammi(breathing heavily due to running alot)
Shbana:Tujhy btaya tha na aaj zubair ka dost aa ra h saudia sy apny buisness ky silsily m.
Aliya:han to...sari tayyari ho gi h ammi khana bana dia h or guest room bhi saaf kr dia h ab mera kaam khatam...to ab main jaun mjhy bht zaruri kaam h(thinking about her revenge 4rm ayat)
Shabana:han ja...lekin sun(aliya stop) wo yahan ky mahool ka aadi ni h iss lye uss k samny bhaag dor or apni sharaten na hi karo to acha h.(give her a stern look)
Aliya: ohoo ammi ab kisi k aany sy main apni aadaten badal lun???aata h to ay...jaisy ay ga wesy chala bhi jay ga.or bhai hai na uss ki khatir tawaazu k lye so plz ammi mjhy in sab m maaf rakhye ga.
with that she turn and again start working on her plan
***************GARDEN(besides ENTRANCE )************
Aliya:Ayat ruk(keep running behind her)aayat m keh ri hun ruk ja or sorry bol dy warna sach m pheenk dun gi...ayat...ayaaat.
(ayat was standing right in front of main gate to run outside)
SPLAASHHH...(The whole black powder smoke covered in front of Aliya...
when she turn ayat was staning infront of her...(aliya surprize)
ALliya:tu yahan h to...
slowly dust removing and one tall but unfortunately black creature standinh there with his eyes shut...
firstly aaliya scared but soon realised that he is scary bcuz of her attempt...
(Suddeenly a voice came from behind)
Zubair: Ayat darwaza kholo mera dost puhanch gya h...
aliya is hell shocked
Aliya:YA ALLAH...ye main n kia kr dia ammi ko pata chala to...ammi k aany sy pehly kuch krna pary ga...(aliya comes toward that black ghost...and try to say sorry he was standing still with anger...aliya just raise her head and take a clear look of him and...
Aliya: HAHAHAHAHA...AM(try to control her laugh but could't)and again start laughing bcuz he was looking just like a ghost and all she could see is blinking eyes...like twinkling stars at night...
I will continue tomorrow...
CHAPTER 1:UP &BELOW
CHAPTER 2:PG 2 , PG 4 & PG 5
CHAPTER 3:PG 6
CHAPTER 4:PG 7 & 8
CHAPTER 5:PG 8
CHAPTER 6:PG 10 & 12
CHAPTER 7:PG 13
CHAPTER 8:PG 14 &15
CHAPTER 9:PG 16CHAPTER 20:PG 44 AND 45.
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