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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Thank you soo much friends for giving my bad writing some of your precious timinig...and your sweet comments❤️
Will continue today bcuz yesterday my index figer stoped working bcuz i was typing with that on mobile...😒

Will give u updates soon INSHALLAH...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER :2 (PART 3)

Zain:AAAH...OUCH...
(Aliya kick on his leg so hard that he forgot in pain what was he doing.and hold his leg now aliya way is clear she immediately run when he hold her kangan(bangle) by tucking his figer in it.and aliya trys to free her but even his finger grip is so tight.)
(Aliya stops...and turn her head little not turning her whole body. there is distance between them lenghth of their arms)
Aliya:plz leave me(in pleading tone.bcuz she was thinking if her mother will come what will she think???)
Zain:i m not even holding you(in soft tone)
Aliya:you are(little louder)you are holding m...(stops looking at his fonger in her bangle)my bangle...(start again with little anger)
Zain:say sorry first????
Aliya:for what now???
Zain:for laughing at me.
(Aliya give him the murduress look and hissed)
Aliya:mera kangan chorye...main akhri baar keh ri hu.(with threatening look)
Zain:Nope...complete my demand first.(still stubborn)
Aliya:fine...(with fake smile.)
(zain got happy that after all he is succeeded by breaking her ego.zain was looking at her to say those 3 magical words.she turns fully towards him looking straight in his eyes and...TICK!!!!!!!...a small voice came when aliya opens her kangan(lock)...with next second he jercked off and bangle was on ground...(zain surprised).aaliya shook her head and gives victorious smile.
Aliya:lijye rakh lijye...kia h na??apni wife ko gift kijye ga jo
Iss planet ki sab sy bari bechari larki ho gi.jis ka paala aap sy pary ga.(with that she leaves.)
(Zain just smile and pick up her kangan)
Zain:wesy...idea acha h(looking at bangle.and keeps it in his pocket.
ZAIN!!!!!!!(zubair call him)
Zubair:yahan kia kr ra h???kuch chahye tha to ayat sy bol deta.
Zain:nhn mjhy bas pani peena tha(smile)iss lye khud hi chala aya.
Shabana:han han beta apna hi ghar samjho jo chahye ho bila jhijak ly lena.
Zain:shukriya aunty.but mjhy kisi cheez ki zaroorat ni parti.aap log meri hr cheez ka pehly sy hi itna khayal rakhty hn.
Shabana:q na rakhen??tm bhi to mery bety jesy hi ho.main n ny tmhary lye tmhari pasand ka soup bnaya h bilkul arab style light and healthy.
Zain:and absolutly yummy????(raise his eye brow smiling)
Aliya:(to herself while keeping dinner)wo to khany ky baad hi pata chaly ga mr stubborn.(and smile divelishly)
***************DINNER*************
Shbana:ye lo beta tmhara suop.main ny apny hathon s bnaya h.(serving him)
Zubair:kia ammi matlab dosra beta mila to pehly ko bhol gai???mjhy bhi chahye aap ka special suop.
Shbana: acha acha...bas.ab teri khatir to salon sy kr ri hun.woh to kucj din hi h phir pata ni kab ay ga???
(Shabana grab bowl to serve zubair when suddenenly aliya shout)
Aliya:NHN!!!!!
(all of give her a shocked look)
Zubair:kia hua aloo???r u fine???
Aliya:offcorse bhai i m absolutely fine...wo kia h na k... ye soup bht pheeka ...h bilkul arab taste jesa. aap ko bilkul acha ni lagy ga.iss lye bas...bcuz i know k mery bhai ko kaisa khana pasand h.(smile)
Zubair: bilkul tu to hai hi meri angel.
Zain:(to himself)humph angel from hell.(shook his head and take one spoon full of suop full into her mouth thinking...finally something of his taste but what????he suddenely feel like smoke is coming out of his ears and...and...his eyes start raining.suop was hell spicy...as spicy as he never ever taste that much spice in his entire life.but he cuold'nt say any thing bcuz he don't want to hurt her sweet aunt.and then his eyes fell on divelishly smiling aaliya who is showing him thumb up.now he understand the whole story)
*********FLASH BACK************
Aliya:(to herself)red chilli dalun gi to saaf dikhy gi.green chilli...han green chilli paste daal deti hun or kahun gi k corriander h...buttt ammi khushboo s pehchan jaen gi...kia karun???...kia karun...???*(keep thinking taping on her chin and she got what she want.she cut lots of green chillis in small small pieces and pour them in viniger and leave viniger to soak all the spice and then take them off and throw them.and add more ingriedent to hell spicy white viniger.)
***********flash back end*********
(Zain can't say anything but frown and with soo much difficulty he finishes his bowl and storm to his room giving excuse of important buisness call)
(Aliya was smiling but after looking at his horrible red face and teary eyes she felt bad and think she should't have to do that.Aliya also excuses her self while others are busy eating.she took one out ice cream from tub into one bowl and goes towards his room.)

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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Amazing part !!
Very nyc
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
I read all chapters in one go!!
It was amazing dear!!!

Its so interesting story dear!!
Completely loved it!!
Update soon dude!! 😊😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
lol..
this part was damn funny..
bechara zain...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
I read all chapters in one go!!
It was amazing dear!!!

Its so interesting story dear!!
Completely loved it!!
Update soon dude!! 😊😳


Thanks iman_harshika 4 your lovely comments.and thank you soo very much for liking my work.will update tomorrow INSHALLAH.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

lol..
this part was damn funny..
bechara zain...

thnkyou so much 4 your comments and appreciating my work.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: butterfly20

thnkyou so much 4 your comments and appreciating my work.

anytime
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Continue asap..
Waiting :)

thanks dear.will definately update tomorow
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Amazing update
So funny and they r so cute lol
Loved it
Continue soon

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