ZAYA FF*unfrtunatly i found my frtune*chp 29&30*pg88*8thjan*cmplte - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 2
***********ALIYA's room*********

Aliya:(thinking 2 herself)uss mr whatever ny meri biryani...meri cooking ki...aliya ghulam haider ki cooking ki insult ki h.this is too much (clutching her fists in anger.suddenely an idea struck in his mind)haaan to mr saudia sy ay hn mirchi khany ki aadat to bilkul ni hogi mr ko...to q na iss bat ka faida uthaya jay...(with huge smile on her face ly down on bed and making plan for dinner)both of them starts working on their plans...
*************KITCHEN**********
Aliya:ammi kia bana ri hen(settling her self on kitchen counter)
Shabana:wo zain saudia sy aaya h na to usy hmara spicy khana khany ki aadat ni h to uss k lye soup bana ri hun.thora light and healthy...(pouring chicken in bowl)
Aliya:acha hmmm khusboo to kamaal ki h or soup ka texture bhi aik dam perfect h.(making circle with her index finger and thumb) but...
Shabana:but kia????
Aliya:ammi soup ky sath sauce bhi to hota h wo kahan h???
Shbana:sauce???konsa sauce???
Aliya:ammi aap to bas purany zamany ki recipes follow kr ri hn.thehrain main bana deti hun.kal hi recipe dekhi h main ny.
Sbana:acha thek h bana dy.abhi dinner m half hour h tab tak main chat sy kapry ly ati hun.
Aliya:offcourse offcourse(aliya happiness on peak)
Aliya:finally mr whatever k lye specially kuch bnany ka moqa mil gya...(smirk)

***************HALL**********
Zain coming downstairs after taking rest and after changing his black suit which was white when he wore that...ayat was sittning in hall playing candy crush(too busy bcuz when she has candy crush she did'nt even pay attention to any one)
Zain:hey doll...(no answer)
Zain:doll...(little louder)...ayat...(more loud)
Ayat:oo...oo...bhayya(eyes still fixing in her mobile)...ooh yesss yess yess i got 3 stars.(jumping with happiness)
Ayat:(looking at zain before starting new level)g bhayya kuch chahye tha???
Zain:nhn wo zubair kahan h???
Zubair:bhai to kaam sy bahar gy hn unhn koi site visit krni thi but thori dair m aty hi hun gy.ap bethen na.aap chay pyen gy???main appi ko bol deti hun wo kitchen main hi hn.(continously talking bcuz she had no time bcuz her new level is just loaded)
Zain:(listening the word appi he thought something and then smirk)it's ok ayat main khud hi bol deta hun.mjhy kitni sugar chahye wo sab bhi khud hi bata dun ga.
(what more ayat needed.she happily nodded and again lost in the world of total time waste)

*********kitchen again*****
(Aliya completed her task which she gave to herself and smiling happily when her smile turn fade)

Zain:i want water...can u plzzz(before he could complete her sentence aliya already grab a glass from stand and walk towards fridge)
Zain just watching her said nothing
Aliya:(*gasped*...when she closed the fridge door he was standing so close to her she suddenly took one step forward.)pani...(handing him the glass but bubbling in anger)

sorry friends mom is calling will update soon next part will be more amazing with some light moments...
thanks for liking my blabbering...





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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
lol..it was superb update..
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice part !!
Continue fast ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

CHAPTER:2 (part 2)



Aliya:(*gasped*...when she closed the fridge door he was standing so close to her she suddenly took one step forward.)pani...(handing him the glass but bubbling in anger)

Aliya:(in her mind)how dare he came so close to me...dil to chah ra h aik seedha sadha slap dy dun jis ki goonj iss k kanon m hamesha goonjti rahy ta ky ainda aesi harkat na kary...but kia karun mehman h or mehman ka ikraam krna chahye...koi bat ni beta aaj pehla din h isslye chor deti hun.(looking into his eyes angrily.she just about to turn when he start saying)
Zain:kia hua mjhy dekh kr hansi ni aa ri ab tmhn????
(Aliya just silent.she was now looking away.folding her arms on her chest when suddenly he move forward aliya just surprised but immediately she took step forward and they keep moving until aliya's back hit the pillar.her eyes widened and now she got little scared bcuz no one ever came that closed to her.her anger tunred into scare.she don't know what to do bcuz he is continously looking at her like her gaze glued at her.so she collect her whole courage and say.
Aliya:i...i ...already said so...sorry 4 th...that.
Zain:but i did'nt accept(staring at her with a smirk)
Aliya:(aliya got her sense back)that's not my problem.
Zain:but it will become problem 4 u...(smirk again)
Aliya:w...what???
Zain:han bachban sy hmen ye hi sikhaya gya h k ghalti kr k maafi mangni chahye or samny waly ko manany ki har mumkin koshish krni chahye but...lagta h tm apni values ko importance ni dy ri.
Aliya:excuse me!!!!!!manaya unhn jata h jin k naraz hony ka dar ho.and i don't think k mjhy kisi stranger ko manana chahye.strangers k bary m mjhy koi values nhn di gain...got that???
Zain:ooh stranger...ok then i am...
Aliya:not intresed(aliya shot immediately cutting him off)
Zain:(shocked)what????
Aliya:i said i am not intrested in your name...(with fake smile).
Zain:(now he is enjoyning teasing her)ooky then miss...(waiting 4 her to say something but she kept quite)MISS VEGETABLE(and start laughing)hahahaha
Aliya:w..what???how dare you call me that??(too much angry)
Zain:i did'nt...you brother did...go and ask him.
Aliya:bhai jaan???
Zain:han kia bulata h wo tmhn ALOO...hahaha.
Aliya:(gritting her teeth)he did'nt mean that...ok.why i m talking to you???...now plz take a side.i don't wanna argue with u(start going when he block her between her arms)
Aliya:huuhh...ALLAH...ye..ye ap kia kr ry hn???aap ka dimagh to khrab ni h????
Zain:bilkul nhn aap apny rules follow kr ri hn to main bhi apny rules follow kr ra hun.
Aliya:m...matlab????(looking nervously here and there)
Zain:matlab ye k mera bhi aik rule h...
Aliya:konsa rule???(her temper is i creasing)
Zain:ghee seedhi ungli sy na nikly to ungli teerhi krni parti h.
Aliya:dekhen aap mery ghussy ko chalenge mat karen.(pointing finger at him)aap ko chahye tha aap ko mil gya now let me go.
Zain:mjhy jo chahye wo mjhy nhn mila(looking into her eyes)
Aliya:k...kia...ch..chahye aa...p ko??(little scared)
Zain:(leaning in .aliya's breth hitch in her throught.and then he stop near her ear and whisper)REVENGE...
Aliya:(eyes widened)re ...revenge???
Zain:(goes back) han tum ny mujh pr colour phenka ...or sorry bolny sy ziada intrest mera mazaaq banany m lia...and now when i m stranger to you so main kis wajah sy tmhn maaf karon badla to main lun ga...
(With that he hand going towards spices and he stop at red chilli powder box.)
Aliya:(aliya hell shocked)la...laal...mirch???aa..ap mujh pr laal mirch phenken gy???
Zain:(just enjoying the fun and smiling)toh...tm ny mujh sy puch kr mujh pr colour phenka tha????
Aliya:lekin...lekin uss sy koi nuqsan ni tha just aap bhot hi toh lag ry thy...(she spit her words without thinking)
Zain:(raise his eye brow)bhoot han???
Aliya:nan...nai...wo..han(realised that he will know i m scaring)han bhoot hain to bhoot hi lagen gy na...wo kehty hn na true colour...that was suiting you soo much...hahaha.
Zain:so...you are complementi g me(smirk)
Aliya:never ever...not after death.(she shot)
Zain: ok then...(he start moving his hand).
(Aliya closed her eyes tighly that her eyes wont hurt.he move his hand in right direction and open turmeric jar and take it in his fist.aliya open her eyes and she saw haldi in his hand)
Aliya:(to herself)thank god it's haldi...but why he is not throwing at me.. wait he want to apply on my cheeks...it means he will touch me???nooo...no one can touch me...specially that mr revenge...how to stop him???( his hand moving closer closer and just inches away from her cheeks and he shouts.)
Zain:AAAH...OUCH...
(Aliya kick on his leg so hard that he forgot in pain what was he doing.and hold his leg now aliya way is clear she immediately run when he hold her kangan by tucking his figer in it.and aliya trys to free her but even his finger grip is so tight.)


butterfly20 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thnks again friends for liking my work which i just don't know how to do...now will continue tomorrow INSHALLAH.
Hope you will like that also...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing part ..
Aliya cals zain bhoot n hits him ...:p
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome Superb superb Beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Read all parts in one go nd tell u what its amazing ..
Do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
it was really nice
continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Very nice ff so far
I love the fact that u are updating very fast
Continue soon
Loving this story

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