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Posted: 11 years ago
nice
aur mani ki to
i loved it
love raman & ruhi
thanks
waiting fr nxt
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...tht awesom update...
fake phne convo...tht evn cant imagine...
nd subah subah romance...wow...loved it...
ruhi ki punishmnt 100 kises tht so roamntic...
waitng fr nxt...
count my like...as like button is nt wrkng...
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohh god i feel lyk kiling dis shani idiottt... couldnt just imagine d way 1 yr she spent... wen sm unknown scolded her... wen ishu cried n d way raman n ruhi consoled her was soo emotional n heart touching... n d punishment was sooo hilarious... haha... update d nxt part soon yaar... very interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesumm!! looks like mani is the main villain! lol
cont soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Omg this mani..
Hate him
Waiting 4 next partt
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Posted: 11 years ago
yaar sach mein aisa lagta hai yhm ke new writer koi tumhe bana de
show se jada aache tumhare os ss hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 13

Scene starts with Raman dropping Ruhi in school and Ishita was along with him.He is looking angry and deppressed over himself.Ishita understood his anger but she don't know reason.Raman then takes his car back home.Ishita din't utter a word she wan't Raman to open up himself she just followed him.

Thye went back home and Raman looking at Ishita's phone remembers the scolding she got from parson who spoke in Raman's voice.He could feel how much it would have hurt Ishita.

Raman hugged Ishita tightly with tears flowing in his eyes.Ishita don't know what to do she can never see him like that.

Even though Raman was teasing Ishita in regular manner but he just thought about how much he was hurt being away from Ishita but he never though what might Ishita would be going all along with no one along with her.

Ishita "Raman kyaa huan .Raman bathayiyen naa mujhey."

Raman has tears in her eyes he was cold.Even though he behave as stone hearted his heart is so delicate and tender.Just the though of what might have Ishita gone through all along hurt him most.

Raman "I am sorry Ishita.I am very sorry.Mujhey aaj patha chal rahan hain kee tumharey liyen kita mushkil thaa."

Raman "Tum kasiey sehan kar payee Ishita jho galathee tumney kiya nahen usskey liyen saza kyon bugat rahen thee."

Raman "Main bhee tumhaarey saath bahuth nainsaafe kiyan.Mujhey tumsey usssey samay bharosa karna chahiyen thaa.Lekin mainey tumhey aur Shagun ko ek samjha."

Raman "Ek saal sey tum mujhsey milney key liyen har koshish karthee rahen.Jab kee tumhey kabhee sahe jawaab nahen mila.Fir bhee tum .."

Raman "Kyon Ishita kyon itnaa pyaar karthe hon mujhey mainey kyaa kiyan tumhey bass dukh diyan.Koi khushi nahen thee hummare shaadi sey."

Raman was literally broken down knowing what Ishita has been going through all along.

Raman "Main tumsey naaraz thaa mujhey chodkey jaaney key liyen.Par merey pass Ruhi thee merey liyen sahaara bankar.But tum poorey saal umed mey jee rahen thee."

Raman "How could I ?Main tumsey zitnaa pyaar karpaath jitna tum mujhsey karthee thee tho main tumhey dhoondh letha .But nahen."

Ishita "Raman suniyen.Issmey aapka kyaa galathee.Hum kissey key jaal mey fassey they."

Ishita "Raman mujhye kabhee wo dard mehasso nahen huan jho dard mujhye laga yeh sochkar kee aapka jaan merey wajaha sey jaa sakthee thee."

Raman is still crying like a baby over Ishita's shoulder.

Ishita "Raman main aapsey pyaar karthee hun aap aur Ruhi merey zindage hain.Main aapsey milkney kee koshish kaisey rokh sakthee."

Ishita "Kabhee nahen.Raman aap bhee mujhsey utaa hee pyar karthe hain Raman nahen tho aap mujhpey kabhee vishwaas nahen karthey."

Ishita "Raman rona bandh keejiyen.Raman main sab kuch bhool chukee hun.Aaaj main aapkey saath hun.Mera pariwaaar fir sey poora ho chuka hain.Now it is all what matters."

Ishita "Please Raman aap math royiyen naa.Main aaoko aisa nahen dekh sakthee.Aap merey Ravan Kumar ko waapas de dejiyen." Kissiing away his tears .

Ishita was almost in tears but she was able to make Raman smile again.

Raman "Main uss mani ko nahen chodunga.Usskey wajaha sey tum..."

Ishita "Raman math chodiyen ussey apnaa poora gussa bhee nikal lejiyenBut abhee aapko office jaana hain naa."

Raman was not over the fact how much Ishita was hurt during this whole year Ishita may forget that but not Raman.It hurt him more than Ishita.

They leave to office.Ishita goes to caf to meet Mani .She is more adamant to punish Mani sseing Raman in that condition for his no mistake.Raman blemed himself for what happened to Ishita but the person who has to be punished is roaming royally.

Then Ishita and Mani goes to telecom office to find address based on number but the number prooved to be taken on address of Delhi.

Then Ishita leaves Mani telling her a important work in clinic.Mani don't know any of the things which is happening behind him.

Then evening Ishita decides to pickup Ruhi from school and goes there.

Then she waits there for Ruhi .

Ruhi comes there and starts behaving strangely.She starts crying and comes running and hugs Ishita.Ishita was shocked seeing this she can understand the hug but not the crying.

Ishita "Kyaa huan beta tum kyon ro rahen hon."

Ruhi hinting her something starts cryying again "Ishima please aap waapas aajaon.Aap mujhye chodkey math jaon naa.Aap please waapas aon.I love you.Aaap papa sey gussa hon naa tho hum papa sey baath nahen karengey.Main bhee papa sey kathee ho jaongi.Main apap sey zidd karoongi aapko sorry bolney ley liyen aap please waapas aajaon."

Ishita then notices Mani behind her in rear view mirror of some car,

Ruhi "Aap Ruhi ko chodkar kaisey jaa sakthee hon.Ruhi aapko bahuth mis kar rahen thee."

Ishita understood "Nahen beta Ishima aapko chodkey kabhee nahen jaayegi.I love you so much."

Same time she feels some one dragging Ruhi away from her it is Raman.

Raman "Kitney jhoot bologee ladkey sey.Ek saal thak yaad anehn aayen aaaj achaanak apnee beti yaad aaagayan."

Ishita "Raman aa merey baath sunon .Raman main aapsey baath karney kee har koshish kee Raman .Please mujhye ek mauka tho deejiyen."

Raman "Kyon pichley baar jho kiyya kam padgayan thaa.abh kyaa karnaa hain."

Raman tells her this and takes Ruhi to his car and drives away.

Ishita turns bac to see Mani "Mani tum yahan.time pey aayen hon.Humey uss gaadi ka apeecha karnaa hain."

Mani does as asked he follows to some distance and then his car stops suddenly and is not moving.

Mani "I am sorry Ishita aaj meri gaadi key wajaha sey hum Raman ko follow anhen kar sakey."

Ishita "Merey kismath mey kkhushiyan nahen likha hain bhagawaan ney.Isskey liyen tum kyaa kar sakthe hon.Tumney merey madad karney kee koshish tho kee."

Ishita leaves from there and takes auto and goes to her house.

In her house both Raman and Ruhi are waiting there angrily.

Ishita "Kyaa huan?"

Raman "Rule no 101"

Ruhi "Broken"

Ishita "Mainey kyaa kiyan."

Raman "Kissney kahan tumhey Ruhi ko pickup karney jaaney key liyen abh dekho humey plan badalna pad rahan hain."

Raman "Ruhi ney bachalee nahen tho uss shani ko sab kuch patha chaltha.Tumharey pass Ruhi sey bhee kam dimak hain."

Ishita "Raman main kyaa karon.Delhi mey main hee hummesha Ruhi ko pickup karthee thee.Mujhye laga Ruhi mujhye wahan dekhkar kush ho jayegee.Issliyen..."

Raman "Khush tho hogee but iss samay .Tum mujhey timing kee lecture dethee hon aaj tumney."

Ruhi "Papa daantney sey kyaa hoga."

Ishita "Aap Ruhi sey seekhiyen ."

Ruhi "Punishment dethey hain."

Ishita "Kyaa dinner bhee karvaaney hain kyaa mujhey."

Ruhi "Who tho hoga hee but extra."

Ruhi "Papa hum extra kyaa karwaayengey,"

Ishita was puzzled what Ruhi's crazy mind will give this time.

Ruhi then slowly goes to Ishita and tells something in her ears.Ishita smiles .Raman puzzled.

Ishita "Theek hain.Tumakey ready ho jaon .Hum dinner key liyen jaayengey."

Ruhi signs in direction of Raman.

Ishita "Papa aayengeey hee .Tum fikar math karon.Papa hum donon ko kabhee mana karthey hainkyaa."

Ishita winking at Raman.


cont.

30 likes for next update.sorry for condition but jut a target.

even if it happens or not there will be update tommorow morning.

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
smart ruhi...
i felt really bad fr ishra...w
wen vl u end dis mani drama...
any ishra relatn is going good...
ishra123 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
smart ruhi aur uske liye kya baat kya baat kya baat!!!!
i loved it
really feel bad for ishita
extra punishment kya ho sakti hai
thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kha stop keya yar ????????
Nice update dear ur story is much much better than this current track
Waiting for the next pary

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