a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 18

Originally posted by: Mansi98

awesome update👏

swaron finally married😃

muskan is so sweet yaar😃

thier 1st night😲

swayam let sharon sleep on bed😃

aww he is so sweet😳

sharon is a perfect bahu😆

loved d whole update😊

update soon😊

n thanx fr d PM😊

n sorry fr late comment

Love

Mansi😊

Originally posted by: Khizar_SWARON

Awesome update, sorry for late reply

Okay SwaRon are finally married, the way you described Sharon's feeling during all the marriage ceremony's rituals

and the bond of Sharon with muskaan

hahhaha the money demand by muskaan to let Swayam enter his own room :D

Sharon is the perfect bahu and SwaRon's first night well too adorable

apart from all these I like the part of Muskaan and Swayam scene

heheheh it was soo cute and hilarious :D

Originally posted by: Preetirox

Finally! They are married! I loved the conversation between swayam and muskaan!
How sweetly she told swayam to take care of sharon! 😊
Sharon and swayam's mom bonding is very adorable! 😃
At least you gave a side hug, I thought there would be no swaron scenes!
Enjoyed reading it, as usual!
Keep up the awesome work!
Update soon! 😃

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

awsm update... 😃 loving der growing relationship... well penned...
update soon plz

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

I loved tis update it was subtlety put

Starting from the begining whr shron waits foe

Swayam n in tat scene u gav sharon's pov

Which was very well penned her nervousness

Her emotions were beautifully penned

Then the scene whr swayam enters n has

A very hilarious convo wit muskan was very nice

Thori si jiju saali nok jkok was seen

The small intimate moment whr swaym

Practically is staring n sharon is nervous

Was very well etched

there are tyms wen u

Need to introduce a characters feelings

Before a scene or in b/w it i hav to say

U hav a knack of writing them very beautifully

It just makes me ecstatic

I also loved responsible sharon

N her bond wit swayam's family members

The small convo whr swayam wants them

To be informal wit each other was nice

i cud picturize

A frn talking to her fr sorting invisible awkwardness

In b/w each other so tat thr be no difficulty in the future

All in all a very pleasing update

Do update soon ani

PART 5

Swayam and sharon were married for a couple of months now... A lot of things have changed... now they are used to being called a couple... But in their personal space nothing has changed...they were still the swayam and Sharon who were best friends with many cute little fights...they had adjusted themselves pretty well in their new life and were contented with whatever happened to them...

It was just a normal day but the elders in the house had gone out to attend a wedding... Muskaan was staying at her friend's place for a girl's night out and swayam and Sharon were alone at home...they decided to spend time together alone...

They sat down with a bucket of popcorn on the couch beside each other and started watching the shutter' ... It was a horror movie which was really horrifying... Sharon was getting scared but obviously not showing that to swayam while swayam kept laughing seeing and understanding her condition...

"cookie...we don't have to watch this if you are scared..." he said

"WHO THE HELL said that I am scared... Sharon rai prakash...sorry Sharon shekhawat is not scared of anyone or anything..." she retorted...

As minuted passed and the film became more horrifying she snuggled close to swayam as he put his arms protectively around her waist...

" cookie... I think we should stop watching this...lets do something else...lets play PSP..." swayam suggested again...

"nahi bola na...I am fine..." Sharon's head was almost in the crook of swayam's neck as she was half sitting on the couch and half sitting on his lap...suddenly there was a shocking noise in the movie as a scarry looking girl's face was zoomed on the screen... Sharon flinched and hugged swayam tightly...

Swayam immediately switched off the tv and hugged her back...they didn't say anything but stayed like that...the light was dimmed and they slowly broke the hug ...Sharon was still in swayam's arms as they looked at each other... For the first time swayam felt something while looking at her...he studied every details of her face as their breath mingled with the closeness...a weird silence filled the ambience as they didn't feel the need of words ... They didn't know what the silence meant...they didn't need to decode the silence... Something strange was in the air...they didn't know who minimized the distance but as if in a trance in a moment of bliss they were kissing...

One heart carefully surrendering herself to the other's touch and another heart unware of the reason of his surrender...

Swayam pulled Sharon closer with his left hand by her waist and cupped sharon's cheeks while Sharon moved her hands in his hairs... they kept making the moment special... Swayam touched the entire length of her arms and entwined her hands with his...sharon felt heart thudding in her chest as swayam touched her with the desired look in his eyes...

As they broke the kiss they hugged each other tightly with passion and love overflowing in the ambience ... Suddenly the air changed and they realized their position...they broke the hug slowly n looked at each other ... another silence filled the room... It was not an uncomfortable silence...

"umm...cookie..wo..." swayam stammered...

"umm... chal lets have dinner..." Sharon quickly said to clear the awkwardness and to save swayam from giving a justification because she clearly didn't need one...

Swayam followed Sharon to the dining table thinking and re thinking about the new feeling peeping in his heart...

Throughout the dinner swayam kept stealing glances at Sharon but she was only concentrating on the plate...after dinner Sharon put the plates in the dish washer and cleaned the table... Swayam was in th room standing by the window when Sharon entered the room and closed the door...swayam immediately turned around and spoke...

"cookie..."

"haa bol..." Sharon said as she moved to the cupboard to take the night clothes out...

"niche jo bhi hua..." Sharon immediately turned and held swayam's hand indicating him to stop...

"nahi cookie..mujhe bolna hai yaar..." Swayam nagged... " warna tu mujhe galat samjhegi..."

"tu pagal hai swayam?? Mein kabhi tujhe galat nahi samjh sakti...aur job hi hua...use ab to explain karega??pagal hai tu?? Its okay... Mujhe tujse koi explanation nahi chahiye..." She smiled slightly...

Swayam immediately pulled her into a hug forgetting all the awkwardness...

"cookie sach mein...you are the best friend in the entire world..aur tujhse better koi to mujhe kabhi nahi mil sakta..." swayam pulled her tightly into the hug...

"I know I know..i am THE best..." She hugged him back tightly

thanks for your support guys...pls hit like n comment

ps:this update is for keechu di...belated happy birthday...

love , ani