a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15*

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sanchiswaron

@sanchiswaron

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Yayee read it :D

Its getting interesting waiting to read when will Sharon confess :o

Update soon please

Thanks for PM

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

awesome update👏

swaron finally married😃

muskan is so sweet yaar😃

thier 1st night😲

swayam let sharon sleep on bed😃

aww he is so sweet😳

sharon is a perfect bahu😆

loved d whole update😊

update soon😊

n thanx fr d PM😊

n sorry fr late comment

Love

Mansi😊

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Khizar Ali

@Khizar_SWARON

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Awesome update, sorry for late reply

Okay SwaRon are finally married, the way you described Sharon's feeling during all the marriage ceremony's rituals

and the bond of Sharon with muskaan

hahhaha the money demand by muskaan to let Swayam enter his own room :D

Sharon is the perfect bahu and SwaRon's first night well too adorable

apart from all these I like the part of Muskaan and Swayam scene

heheheh it was soo cute and hilarious :D

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Preetirox

@Preetirox

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Finally! They are married! I loved the conversation between swayam and muskaan!
How sweetly she told swayam to take care of sharon! 😊
Sharon and swayam's mom bonding is very adorable! 😃
At least you gave a side hug, I thought there would be no swaron scenes!
Enjoyed reading it, as usual!
Keep up the awesome work!
Update soon! 😃

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

awsm update... 😃 loving der growing relationship... well penned...
update soon plz

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

I loved tis update it was subtlety put

Starting from the begining whr shron waits foe

Swayam n in tat scene u gav sharon's pov

Which was very well penned her nervousness

Her emotions were beautifully penned

Then the scene whr swayam enters n has

A very hilarious convo wit muskan was very nice

Thori si jiju saali nok jkok was seen

The small intimate moment whr swaym

Practically is staring n sharon is nervous

Was very well etched

there are tyms wen u

Need to introduce a characters feelings

Before a scene or in b/w it i hav to say

U hav a knack of writing them very beautifully

It just makes me ecstatic

I also loved responsible sharon

N her bond wit swayam's family members

The small convo whr swayam wants them

To be informal wit each other was nice

i cud picturize

A frn talking to her fr sorting invisible awkwardness

In b/w each other so tat thr be no difficulty in the future

All in all a very pleasing update

Do update soon ani

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: keechu91
aniii😛
i am happy i am the first😆

so sweet of you😊, you give long one this time🤗
so about the part 😉
it was sweet and cute as like you😆

you are so fast,😊 you married them this soon😆

sharon revisiting the marriage and her thoughts about swayam was nice😳.

muskaan is a sweet heart a big hug for her..🤗
muskaan's bond with sharon and swayam was superb.😊

swayam and muskaan's conversation about the nek and sharon was cute, 😃
i love their relationship 😊

next come swaron😳 what to say about them,

haa got it😉😆

the part where swayam helping sharon was super😃,
sharons reaction to swayam's proximity was nicely written😉. do continue this type scene😉

the sudden change from informal to formal then again informal was nice😆
swayam was to excited to save the informality between them😆

swayam's mom is sweet. loved the bond between she and sharon😃
chachi is again cool😆

last but not the least the side hug was a treat🤗

long comment for long part...😆.
if u give a very long part next time then my comment will be also long😆
continue soon...😛
waiting is always torture😆

love ❤️
keechuu🤗🤗

o my god di!!! thanks for the lovely comment...😆

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: athi_vrushan
ani...
such a nice update
you kept your word of giving a quite long update
coming to the update
swaron married
sharon's reaction to swayam's proximity
that moment she cluched her lehanga
wowww
and swayams mom
such acute relation
swayam's dialogue where he says not to keep aformal relation
shows the depth of their friendship
swarons side hug at last was a cherry on yop moment
thnx 4 d pm
thanx 4 updating
agli update jaldi dena
update sooonish