a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 17

Originally posted by: shiningshannu

res

unres

the chp was gud

loved the concerned muskaan

loved the swt bond bw swayam and muskaan

swayams effect on sharon was well penned

swayams mom sound very sweet

all in all a well written

do update soon😊

i know the comment is not long

i promise next tym bada wala comment doongi

shini

Originally posted by: abcdghi

It was cute & sweet os
Loved swayam's mom & sharon bond
Great gng :)
Next part update soon :)

Originally posted by: aishamathur

Hey nice concept :)

Read all four update

PM me when you update

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

di wait karo.. abhi I'll unres... right now working on my update

Unres!😳

Awesome update Ani di!👏🤗Loving this swaron... so caring and loving.. the way he said why are we being so formal? I was all awww😳 and the way Muskaan aka Musky demanded neg from him...😆

Loved Sharon's and Swayam's Mom's bond...very well written👏 Loved it very very much!😳 And and and.. Sharon fed Swayam prasad.. another awww moment! Side hug!!😳 di you're a very good writer... plz plz plz continue soon...😃 plzzz😳

Love you!🤗❤️

Thanks for the pm...

-Anu😉

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

aswom updatee

Originally posted by: anubhutijain

Cute update!! Thankfully apne yeh shaddi jaldi khatam kar di varna typical serials main toh...bhul jao...kher...loved sharonz bonding wid swayam z family members n d ending was sooo cuteeeddeddd

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

Meri pyaari didu!! Kabhi toh aur bada update dedo!! 😛

Acha acha dont frown, it was big enough hehe 😆

Ab back to the update!!

It was soo cutely wriiten!

Muski asking for money and Swayus cute words"

Then the description of the way Shar felt when swayu put the sindoor and all was just perfect!!

The comes the part where Swayu helps Shar remove the maang tikka, Haye mere Swaron

Both sleep on one bed in the end!!😳

Before that Swayam says those words,"NO FORMALITY" Me love them soo much

Awhhh Aunty, Swayams mom and Sharons bond, tooo cute for words

I love all their bonds! 😊

Then the mandir scene.. Sharon feeding Swayu, GODS!!

I can imagine it, haye😳

That's where it ends!!! 😛

Didu, I swear agar aapne abhi accept nahi kiya na ki you re not a better writer than me toh then youre gone!

Your much much much better than me!

I mean the way u described. the way u wrote so flawlessly!!

Oh and me, someone who writes JUST average!! Toh in comparison, u always win samjha!!

-Was a demand!-

I just soo sooo soo loved loved loved this update! 😊

But me love u moreee for updating it this fast!

Love you soo sooo much didu!!

Thank you for updating it!!😊

Ab that doesnt mean ki u can get back to being lazy!

Chalo I want update abhi bhi!!

U know na how restless I am, toh get used to it.

Hehe!!!

Love u!

Me is waitinggg

hence,

Waiting..

Your Restless🤗

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

really nice update anii... loved it. swaron bond is really good.. his Mom. muskan. chachi..everyone is soo sweet.. thanks 4 d pm

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

hey this was a beautiful update
I really like Sharon's bond with swayam's family

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

Yayee read it :D

Its getting interesting waiting to read when will Sharon confess :o

Update soon please

Thanks for PM