a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update ...d way u explained their kiss was... juz luvd disss update thanks fr d pmmm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
ani...🤗
such a superb update
you never fail to impress ua readers
wid such wonderful chain of words
coming to the update
swaron's first special kiss
did i really read it
or am i dreaming...
loved how sharon said he needn't justify that moment
they watching horror movie
seems even swayam was afraid
loved it how sharon said sharon shekhawat
after correcting sharon rai pakash
hope swayam sooon find wat this ajeeb sa feeling is
the bone crushing hug@last
was much needed
thnx 4 the pm
do update next part soonish


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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely didu!!
I loved the way u described every moment!
haye, finally!!
Awhhh and the starting!!
Lovd it!!
U are tooo gooodd didu
(I know bada comment nahi hai, really sorry.. mood nahi tha)
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Posted: 11 years ago
update plz...& hope more swaron romance is lined up for us...
sanchiswaron thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Did they just kissed :o *_*
But for Swayam they still are just friends :3
Loved how he kept on insusiting on not to watch horror movie knowing Sharon and her fears well ^_^
It was interesting update with quite changed from previous ones :D

Update soon
Sorry for late comment
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Khizar_SWARON

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YAY ME FIRST 😃
Okay coming to the update they are married for few months and are now in their home together alone as elders went for wedding muskaan is out for girls night out
So SwaRon watching horror film and Sharon is scared 😆
Aww can really imagine the half on couch and half on Swayam's lap Sharon scared buried in the crook of his neck
When she got more scared swayam turned the tv off and hugged her tight
a few moments later they kissed 😳 and the feeling Swayam was having it was LOVE when is he gonna realize 😕
and they are back to their normal best friendship with Swayam's justification 😊
Hope to see the next update soon


thanks u
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: keechu91

heyyy😊


aniii😊

i will love u more from now😆😆

u write it for me😃😃😃

im so happy😃

me sad also, i didnt get a chance to cmt first 😭😭😭

A BIG POUT

hmmm

what to say abt this part dear////i dont getting any words👏👏

it was as always

wonderful👏

beautiful👏

lovely👏

romantic😳👏

cute😳😳

sweet 😳

now about the part😆😆😆

hmm it was something i never expected😆

you made them kiss😳😳😳

i was having goosebumps that time😆😆

hmm u r a fast person na? 😆

ur all updates moving so fast😆😆

months passed ///how? i ddnt get to know, me POUT

hmm couple and best friends also,,, thats nice😆😆

when i start the second paragraph, i did get to know that something is

going to happen,😆

and it did happened as i thought😆

i always loved to read a scene like that,u know y?

it is bcoz it will surly bring them close😆😆

and it did happened😆😆😆

swaron watching horror movie,sharon half sitting on swayam lap with

keeping her head in swayam neck,,,ohhh i getting freaking crazzy😆

sharon was continuously trying to prove that she is not getting scared

was cute😳😳

then u give shock😲

it indeed shocked me😲😲

that was an awesome part ...

swayam kissed sharon 😳

the hug part and after that u penned so well,,,👏👏

i loved that part much more in whole update😆😆

i had a wide smile on my face at that time.

sharon played safely to avoid the awkwardness 😆

swayam is still confused about his feeling, and he is giving a friendship

name to that...

plz soon make him realize what sharon is to him...

swayam is a full buddhu,😆😆😆

the last scene was sooo cuteee😳

hmm so aniii ur wait is over dear😆

now me waiting for the next part😆

so update soon😆

and i will give u another long cmt😆

hmm but this part was soo small😆

try to give long ones😆😆

it just finished in 5 min😆😆

so a big thanku 4 updating this part😃

an another thanku 4 dedicating this 4 me😃

an another thanku 4 pm me😃

and fm now no thank fm me,,,,,😆😆😆

me sooo love uuu😉




with lots of love 😉

ur keechu di😆



















tahnks nahi bolungi...but i loved the comment!!!!😆😃...ab isse bara reply kya doon??????????
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ritz15

Oh god dii this was beautiful nd amazing

you r an amazing writer
thanks for d pm nd update soon



thanks lil sissy!!!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aishamathur

Updated finally 😃

Loved it so romantic hope Swayam too would realize his feelings for Sharon soon
Thanks fr PM


thanks...😃😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal

Cute n lovely update...especially that hug!!! Continue soon n thnkzz for PM


thanks..😊😆

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